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Update chota tha but sounds interesting

Kamal update

Update acha tha but veer na investment bhi to Jana di ha suhana ki so dekhte ha kya karta ha.
400 skill is quite good and as food acha hoga then badiya growth bhi ayegi dekhte ha buisness ka kya hota ha aur ya Karan kya Kya karta ha.
Keep posting story just keep getting interesting update by update

Veer or suman jab rang raliya mana rehe thai tow room k baher ko khada tha or suman n aisa kia or samjha ki woh veer boli ki kal use ek tohfa milega
Suhana n ek baar fir veer ko samjhne m galti kerdi aveer dikhayega ki food tarak ka business kaise kia jata h
Ab ye kaera ka bhai kia kahani sunane jaa raha h kaera ki veer ko
Dekhte h aage kia hota
As always shaandaar update bhai

Superb update food business ab mujhe v karna hai

Superb Update

Awesome update bhai keep posting

Nice one

Nice update bro

स्टार्ट अप के लिए फ़ूड ट्रक बहुत अच्छा आईडीआ है
अच्छा स्किल चुना है वीर ने
सुहाना को और एक सबक मिलेगा
अब दृश्य पटल पर नया चरित्र करण
और लगता है अल्फा मैल के लिए एक सील पैक की जुगाड़ करेगी सुमन
चलो देखते हैं
आगे आगे होता क्या है

bhai people are interested in long story....
i personally like long and longest stories but story theme can't be change...
i have told earlier that story is incest and harem type and its nature should not be change....
by the way writer has great sense of humor amd he knows well how to handle the situation....
and how to entertain his readers....
these are god gifted symbols of few people and this man is one of them...
story should he long much long i am with you my writer....

Nice update bhai
Veer k pss sala bhi h

Haar baar ki trah is baar bhi writerrrrrrr suspense suspense mat khela karo yarrr.

Everyone has different likes brother...some like long story... some like short story, but I like both... just their plot should be good... Me bs yhi chahta hu ki story me kuch romantic part include ho bs esse jyada meri koi farmaish nhi hai .. vaise bhi me na ke barabar stories padta hu or filhaal es forum par 1-2 stories hi read kar rha hu ...

Very good update.

Suhana ki eisi ki teisi....

subah subah sex ka maja liya veer ne suman ke saath par aisa lagta hai aabha ne aawaj sun li hogi aur chut me ungali bhi ki hogi jiska pata chal gaya suman ko aur wo veer ko surprise gift ke taur pe aabha ko le aayegi .

suhana ne veer ka food truck wale business ko madad karne se mana kar diya par ab veer ke paas chef ki skill hai wo bhi best wali to veer ko apne upar full confident hoga hi .
par sochna ye hai ki veer paise kaha se layega .

kaera ka bhai karan hai jo veer se milne aa gaya aur lagta hai wo kuch secret batanewala hai kaera ke baare me .

Mast update tha bhai maza hi gaya lagta hai suman apne baad apni bahu 70% nahi to apni beti 40% chances hai neeche litane ki firaq Mai hai kahi aisa na ho ki unki jagah ragni hi neeche aa jaye veer ke
Aur ek baar firse suhana ko usi feeling se awgat krate hue humare veer babu unka ghamanad Or unki chote Or bhade kaam ke prati nazariye ko badlne ya bole to todne ka intezam kr rhe hai
Aur akhir kar lagta hai veer ko karan ke moonh se sunne ko milegi kaera ki sad life story ki esa kya hua past mai jo kaera esa behave krti hai ja esi ho gayi hai jis se use hint bhi milega or apni intelligence use krke kaera ke Akelepan ko door bhi karega


Dekhne Mai Maza ayega ab ki karan ko suman ke pass esa kya hai jo veer ko jindagi jeene or samjane ke naye tarike seekayega

Super update

Nice update

Uttam Lekhni ka Prayog Werewolf bhai...Waiting for Next Update...

Nicel

Mast update bhai lagta hai veer ki business partner karan banega.... Veer bhi haveli se koi rishta rakhta hai kaera bhi haveli gaya hai koi rishta to hai dekhte hai aage kya hota hai

Nice

Nice update

Awsome update bro

Awesome Superb update Bhai

Nice update...

★ Fabulous Mind Blowing Updated...

★ Karan New frnd Sound good Koi To Aaya usko dost banne me as a boy...

★ Aise kya raaz hai keara ki life ke jo aj uska bhai usko sab bata rha hai ki wo aisi Q hai..

★ Veer karan ki puri madad kar payega..

★ suhana ne to koi help nhi ki veer ki but veer ye sab krega kese business suru krne me kya wo karan ki help lega..

★ kya Veer apne business me kamyab ho payega but isme to usko kafi samaye bhi lag jyega..

★ Suman ke sath aisa kya krne wala hai lekin ek tarah se uski puri gulam ban chuki hai but Q ab bhi wo veer ki kuch chupa rhi hai ( jab wo bolti hai ki me haveli me kaam krti thi bol kar chup ho jati hai)

★ Ye suman ki beti to nhi ho skti Qki usko pata tha ki uski maa veer ke sath raat rangin krti hai..

★ Aur ye kon ta jo Veer ke room ke bhar tha jab wo ch*dai kar rhe the aur veer ko aisa q bola ki kal ek surprise hai tumare liye..

★ Kya wo abha hai Qki jab wo dekhne aai thi bhar to koi nhi tha aur zmeen par kuch tha shyad usko kaam ras jo aur Suman ko kese pata chala wo aise ki jab wo raat ko aai thi tab uske room ka gate khula tha jab wo check krne gyi to gate band iska mtlb saap hai ki wo hi thi room ke bhar..

★ Aur suman ka rhena ki tumhare ki kal surprise to wo abhi bahu ko veer ke liye tyar kregi qki wo bhi to ab apne pati ke sath nhi rhti to uski bhi kuch jrurte hai jo ab veer puri krne wala hai..


★ Sawal to bhut se hai but Dekhte hai aage kya- kya hota...


★ Waiting for next update...

Super update hai Bhai

Nice updates

Nice update

Awesome update

Nice update bro

Jabardastt Updateee

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Werewolf bhai....
Nice and awesome update....

Nice update...

Nice update dost

Awesome update bhai waiting for next update

Awesome update bhai waiting for next update

Awesome Fabolous mind-blowing update

Behtareen update bhai

Wahh nice

Mind-blowing update

Super wonderful awesome update

waiting for suman's gift...

Lovely update bhai.....

Now waiting for suman's gift aur kaise veer aapna food truck chala kar ek kamyab business men banta hai....

Awesome update once again
Waiting for your next update

The story line is getting better and better ... keeps drawing me back ... par ek baat ajeeb hai ... shayad auron ne bhi notice ki hogi ... ab tak kahani me jitni females aayi hain ... un sab ki kuch kuch to personality darshayi gayi hai ... each emerges with different characteristics ... except 3 ... Sonali, Abha aur ... Sonia ... Sonali aur Abha ka to samajh aata hai ... abhi tak unka koi khaas role nahi hai ... but Sonia has got so much story-space par abhi tak uski personality ubhar kar nahi aayi ... she is just sweet ... and nothing else ... she seems an important character ... par hai kya ... uski behan Suhana ki personality itni acchi ubhari hai ki uska har scene mazadaar hota hai ... but Sonia ... hope she emerges soon from her current doormat status ... abhi tak ki teen most interesting characters ... Suhana, Nidhi aur Ragini ... with Keara and Aarohi in close competition ...

WOnderfull update brother maza AAA gaya ab veer food ka business start karega aur dekhte hai ab ye veer aur karan ki dosti kya kya rang dikhati hai

agreed to writer...
but you can never, ever vanish your enemies completely, as man gain heights in world of business and familiarities, number of enemies are also grow, being a business man i know business rivals very well, some time they become enemies of your life and they will try to take your life, they try to lure you in woman and false fame and try to make your scandals, i swear, its my personal experience. You know some and some are hidden in your own rows. being a business man not a business man a successful business man its very bitter and hard life, every time you are surrounding by people including your partners, employees and e.t.c, combination of your friends and foes as well as agents of your foes who play major role in your business development but when they see right time they will convert themselves in rattle snakes...
being a successful business man your eyes should have skills to identify between friend and foe, and you are able to play double game with your enemies, gain benefit with them and remove them like dust at right time, when you not need of them more.
dushman bhi us ky hoty hain jo sab sy oncha hota ha jo sab ko nazar ata ha zammen par chalny walon ko to koi daikh bhi nahi skata vo aese hi rondy jaty hain...
i hope writer will under stand...

Brilliant update bro maza aa gaya

Shandar lajawab speechless superbbbb update.........
keep posting bhai...........
waiting for next update............

Bechara veer, suhana ne to uske plan par paani fer diya hai. Ab dekhte hai ki Karan Kaera ke baare mein kya baat karta hai. Let see uska food truck ka plan kahan tak jaata hai.

Behtreen lazwaab update bro

Sorry but waiting 4 nxt 1 with depth of heart. A lovely update

Jabrdast mindblowing superbbb speechless update.......
waiting for next update......

Zabardast update

उचित है मित्र.....

अगर आपको भड़मानस से ऐतराज है तो मै Werewolf ही पुकारा करूँगा आपको !

पर ये जो "भड़मानस" नाम है इसमे भेड़िया के साथ मानव का जो समीकरण बैठ रहा है न......
पक्का Werewolf वाली feeling लगती है अपने को !

"भड़मानस " - ये शिर्फ एक नाम नही है मित्र, emotion है

पर क्या कर सकते है

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वैसे एक और नाम है...
"भेड़ियामानव" कैसा रहेगा

suman ne veer ke liye shayad aabha ko taiyar karne ki planing ki hai...
Matlb threesome
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Khair ... Yar ab apna hero veer mahashay to bawarchi banne ki koshish karne laga hai.
Aur system se absolute chef bhi to unlock kar liya hai...
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Ab ye kaera ka bhai karan kon si khichdi pakane laga hai .

Waise Werewolf bhai...... Ye veer ki ma aur bahan ki (singham returns) entry kab karane wale ho...

Yar incest ki tadka lagao thoda
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Baaki hamesha ki hi tarah ek aur dhamakedar update tha ye... Superb

Amazing update bro maza a gya thanks for the update

Amazing

Awesome update bari bekaar jagah khatam hua update pata nhi kya sunayega kaira ka bhai veer ko

Nice update bhai

Brilliant update Brother ...

Now the fun has begun ...

Waiting for next update....

Super se upar

Waiting

Amazing update...

Nice update bhai

हमेशा की तरह बेहतरीन अपडेट

वीर ने नया बिजनेस शुरू करने का फैसला कर ही लिया, अभी भी समस्या पैसों की है,

करण की जानकारी कियारा के अतीत को समझने मे सहायक होगी,
इसी से शायद वीर कियारा को फिर से वैसा ही बना सके जैसी वो पहले थी, जो सोनिया भी चाहती है।

Pari ke ayse behaviour ke peeche koi raaj hai kya aur veer ka sochna bilkul sahi hai ki roti kapda aur makan aur food truck ka idea v bahot achha hai but usko kaise execute karta hai veer ye dekhna hai aur idhar karan kaun si baat batana chah raha hai veer ko agle update ka beshabri se intazar rahega

Kahani to ekdam super ja rahi hai lekin veer ki ma or uski behen ko ek side kar diya hai lag raha hai hese koi side cherectar ho yar bhai wo veer yani hero ki asli ma hai ese to side me na karo mast dhasu sa update dekar dono ko milao hero or uski ma ko

VEER KI MAA KO TBHI LANA JB VEER AMEER BN JAYE...

Brother waiting for Amazing update

Waiting

Bhai update ay gi aj?

SUPERB AWESOME EXCELLENT AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI

Update kab aayega??

MIND BLOWING JABARDUST EXCELLENT AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI

Kabhi kabhi ham sabko surprise gift bhi dedo jaldi update deke..

Waiting

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting for Next

Aaj update ka din hai kya ?....
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Kab tak dene wale ho update Werewolf bhai?

SHAANDAAR FANTASTIC AWESOME MARVELLOUS AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI

Waiting for the next update

Update please

Fantastic Update
Waiting for next update

I'm Back ...

Update 53...

Basically Slogan naam ke toofaan ke beech Veer naamak kashti ko sukoon dene waala Update tha ye... Nidhi, Suman aur Ragini teeno ke saath hi kuchh waqt bitaya Veer ne...

Ragini ki chinta Veer ko lekar poori tarah jayaz thi... Aakhir jhooth bolkar hi to nikla tha Veer ghar se aur fir yun Chotil awastha mein Hospital Bed par Veer ka hona... Ab Ragini maatra Veer ki Bhabhi nahi rahi... They are friends officially but unofficially she has started developing feelings for Veer... Gaalon par yun baar baar laali chhaa jaana, yun baar baar sharmana... Ye Prem roopi maayajal mein fansne ke shuruaati lakshan hain... Abhi tak Veer ne Suman aur Kaera ke saath Relation banaya hai aur kisi ke saath nahi... But agar dekha jaaye to ek saath Parallel mein kayi ladkiyan/aurten uske nazdeek aa rahi hain... Nidhi ka matter of course complicated hai, par Ragini aur Shreya seedhe seedhe uski taraf jhuk rahi hain... Aabha bhu mujhe zyada door nahi lagti... Arthat aane waale samay mein poore maze hone waale hain Veer ke...

Secondly, Suman Veer se milne aayi aur Veer ussi prakaar uspar hakk jama raha hai jaisa ki Suman ko pasand hai... Aur ab wo Ragini se bhi kaafi kuchh seekh rahi hai... Don't know why Veer wants her to learn all these things par ek broader prospect mein ye kaafi important ho sakta hai...


Kya matlab Men Will Be Men...

After both of them entered the room Nidhi... Nidhi ka case sabse zyada dilchasp hai... She has already started developing sone sort of different feelings for Veer... For a moment she realises this thing but then she just don't want to accept... I'm waiting for the day when she'll accept what she feels for Veer... But jiss prakaar wo Veer ki chinta karti hai aur uske liye, uske future ke liye tensed rehti hai uss kaaran Veer ka bhi Nidhi ke liye alag tarah feel karna swabhaavik sa hi hai... Ab dekhna hai ke inke beech huyi iss mulaakat ke baad Nidhi ke thoughts kya hote hain...


Haan bhai, Pari bhi Stupid, Kaera bhi Stupid & Idiot & now Nidhi bhi stupid... Bas ek ye Veer naamak chutiya hi intelligent hai...


Sounded like... Beware Of Dogs

In the end Veer ko Mission Successful hone ke chalte 400 points ka reward mila... I think this time he might go for a gold tier skill... So, overall ek emotional kinda update tha ye joki kaafi achha laga Slogan ki problem ke beech mein... Updates like these play the role of bridges in The thrill atmosphere of a story ...

Update 54–55...

Veer hospital se discharge hokar ghar pahunch gaya... Iss beech notable baat ye rahi ke Shreya, Juhi, and especially Sonia – Suhana bhi uss se milne hospital pahunch gayi thi... But another point is that ke Kaera wahaan uss se milne tak naa aayi... Aur Update ke aakhir mein shayad iska jawaab tha, Kaera maybe apne Pitaji maane Father ki wajah se nahi aayi hogi... He might not have granted her permission for this... Khair, jo bhi ho dekhna hai ke Veer aur Kaera ki agli mulaakat kab hoti hai...


Btw. Pari be Like – Gazab Beizzati hai ...

Veer kitne hi waqt baad apne asli ghar joki shayad ab uska raha hi nahi wahaan pahuncha... Manorath ki khushi Veer ko wahaan paakar dekhte hi Banti thi... Ab ye to spasht hi tha ke Veer ko ghar se nikaalne ke waqt wo haalaat ke maare the anyatha Veer se Pyaar to wo bahut karte hain... Wahin Aarohi aur Veer ke beech bhi sab normal ho chuka hai... And Aarohi will start to Love her Brother more very soon...

Idhar Kavya dobara se Veer ke saamne ek cute si bachi ban gayi... She's my favourite character in this story after Juhi... Wahin Pranjal urf Chhota Kameena apne Bastardism ka tokra fir se lekar pahunch gaya wahaan... Veer par itna Prem barsa raha hai jaise sach mein duniya ka bestam best brother ho... Par uss bewakoof ko ye nahi pata ke ab Veer ki Intelligence 80 par pahunch chuki hai... Pranjal aur Vivek to kya unke farishte bhi Veer ka chutiya nahi kaat sakte ab... Khair, Aarohi ko bhi Pranjal ki activities par doubt to ho hi raha hai, dekhte hain ke Kameene Brothers ka sach kab tak saamne aayega...

Wahin Shweta ke to kya kehne... Saala hoti kaun hai ye poochhne waali ke Veer, tum yahaan kya karne aaye ho... Kasam se Werewolf dada agar iss aurat ko Veer aasani se maaf kar diya naa to Ju soch bhi naa sakte apun Veer ko story khatam hone tak kitna roast karega ...


By the way Bahu logis apne Sasur ko Dada Ji kabse bulane lagi ...

Bhumika, joki pehle hi Hotel mein Veer se huyi mulaakat ke baad se hi Glaani ke saagar ke saahil tak pahunch gayi thi... Ab iss mulaakat ke baad uss saagar mein doob chuki hai... Veer ke kahe gaye shabd uske dil – o – dimaag mein kaafi samay tak rehne waale hain jinke chalte usse jald hi apne behaviour ka realisation hoga... Par I don't think ke Veer Aur Bhumika ke beech aasani se sab kuchh normal ho jaayega... Kab aur kaise hoga iska to apun ko Koyi Idea nahi hai ...


In the End iss note ke baare mein pata chala hume... Jisne Raghu aur Jassi ki madad ki Kaera tak pahunchne mein... I'm sure ke ye “Shubh – Chintak” aur koyi nahi balki wahi shakhs hai joki Veer ke baare mein Slogan ko information de raha tha... Ek pal ko to mujhe laga ke ye Suhana ho sakti hai, par fir why will she get Veer trapped in the cage of Slogan... Of course Raghu aur Jassi ko wahaan pahunchne ka raasta bata diya gaya tha shubh chintak dwara par agar Veer ko Slogan uss se pehle hi tapka deta... But still agar ab tak story mein aa chuke characters mein se koyi ye shakha hai to definitely Suhana hi hogi, uske alawa koyi hai to wo New Character hi hona chahiye...

Veer pahunch gaya Suhana ke paas apne business ko start karne ke silsile mein... Par jaisa ki Suhana ne pehle kaha tha ke use Clothes and all ka business karna chahiye, Veer filhaal iss baat se taalukaat nahi rakhta... Manoj Kumar Saahab ki movie Roti, Kapda aur Makaan ke hi tarj par wo in teen areas mein apna business khada karna chahta hai... And the best thing to start with according to him is Food... Mujhe bhi ye idea kaafi badhiya laga kyonki agar chef acchha ho to Food Truck, Mumbai jaise shehar mein kam samay mein hi bada kaam kar sakta hai...

Aur ek baar Food Truck ka business chal gaya then, Clothes yaani Kapda uska Target hoga to be followed by Makaan, in the sense, Real Estate business... And Real Estate ka business kitne tagde returns waala hota hai ye to sabhi jaante hain... Basically Veer ka Vision bahut bada hai aur Suhana iss baat se anjaan hai... Anjaan to wo iss baat se bhi hai ke Veer has became an absolute chef... Pichhle Update mein 40 points apni Intelligence aur Strength mein use karne ke baad Veer ne 400 points se Absolute Chef joki ek Gold Tier Skill hai usse khareed liya hai... Now he remains with 0 points...

Khair, Suhana ko hum sabhi jaante hain, she's a little bit of egoistic attitude and from her Point Of View Food Truck is just a shit basically... Par jald hi wo apne shabdon par pachhta rahi hogi... Waise achha hi hua ke ab Veer apna business khud hi shuru karega aur khud hi usse ek Bade Empire mein tabdeel bhi karega... Otherwise Suhana would have Stinged her throughout his Life ke usne hi Veer ka business setup karwaya tha...

Idhar Veer se ek Karan naamak ladka joki Update ke Title waala shakhs yaani “A New Friend” hai... Karan aur koyi nahi balki Kaera ka bhai hai... Raghu aur Jassi ke through hi usse Veer ke baare mein pata chala hoga... Aur wo Veer se milne pahuncha... I think wo Kaera ke iss tarah “Unknowingly Broken” hone ki wajah Veer ko batane waala hai...

Wahin Subah subah Veer ne Suman ke saath param aanand ki praapti bhi kar li... Par koyi tha jo un dono ko dekh raha tha... Ye aur koyi nahi balki Aabha hi thi jo in dono ki kaamleela dekh kar hastmaithun & all kar rahi hogi... Nateejtan ya to uska load ya fir uski Panty wahaan chhoot gayi hogi, jo Suman ne dekh liya... Aur lagta hai Aabha hi wo Gift hone waali hai jiska zikr Suman ne kiya... Saala Zindagi ho to Veer jaisi ho warna Zinda to Pranjal aur Vivek bhi hain ...

Let's see aage kya hota hai kyonki kayi saare sawaal hain... First of All Suman ka wo Gift joki Aabha hi honi chahiye, uss baare mein Veer ki kya pratikriya hogi... Secondly, Veer ka Food Truck ka business kab aur kaise shuru hoga... Third, Suhana apne iss faisle par pachhtayegi ya aise hi attitude banakar rakhegi... Karan, Veer se kyon milne aaya hai aur Kaera ke baare mein kya batayega wo Veer ko... Wahin Ragini aur Veer ke beech jo kuchh bhi chal raha hai wo aage chalkar kya mod lega... And of course Kameene Brothers ka aage ka kya plan hoga aur kya Shweta bhi usmein unke saath hogi... Bhumika bhi ek sawaal hai, aakhir wo bhi Guilt ke bhanwar mein fansna start ho chuki hai... Wahin Kaera apne Father se milne pahunchi thi to uska kya hua...

Saala kitne saare sawaal hain, abhi to Slogan ka zikr bhi naa hua fir bhi ... At last,Nidhi ... Iski baat kiye bina Revo poira ho jaaye ye Mumkin nahi ... Nidhi ke saath Veer ki hospital mein huyi mulaakat ke baad uske manobhaav kya hain aur Veer se next conversation ke dauraan kya hoga ye dekhna bhi dilchasp rahega...

Teeno updates behadh hi khubsurat the Werewolf bhai... Jahaan Update 53 & 54 Emotions based the... Jinmein Ragini, Suman aur Nidhi ke saath kuchh pal shaamil the to wahin Dadaji ke saath bhi Veer ne samay bitaya... To ab Waapis se Veer apne Business ki taraf rukh kar raha hai... Veer ho ya Suman ya fir the most beautiful Nidhi , sabhi ke emotions ko bakhoobi chitrit kiya Bhai aapne... Wahin Kavya ki cuteness bhi bahut pasand aayi mujhe... Waiting for that moment jab Kavya aur Juhi ek saath ek hi scene mein hongi... That scene would be amazing, Cuteness ki baarish hogi...

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

वीर का सोचना सोलहों आने सच है । कोई भी काम बुरा नहीं होता । और किसी भी व्यापार की शुरुआत कम पूंजी और छोटे पैमाने से ही शुरू करनी चाहिए । खास तौर पर यदि आप पहली बार बिजनेस करने जा रहे हैं ।
ख्वाब हमेशा ऊंचे होने चाहिए पर पांव हमेशा धरती पर ही रहनी चाहिए । मतलब " ताते पांव पसारें जाते लांबी सोर "

वो फुड के बिजनेस में उतर रहा है ‌। शायद रेस्टोरेंट खोलने वाला हो । यह भी बढ़िया बिजनेस है । हेड शेफ वो खुद ही रहेगा और परी की बदौलत खाने का स्वाद लजीज होना ही होना है ।
बात उसे यह ध्यान रखना है कि किस लोकेशन पर रेस्टोरेंट खोलना है ! सही जगह का चुनाव ऐसे बिजनेस में बहुत कारगर सिद्ध होता है ।
वैसे मेरी नजर में दो बिजनेस ऐसे हैं जिसमें मुनाफा बहुत ज्यादा है पर इन्वेस्टमेंट भी काफी है । एक है जेम्स एंड ज्वेलरी और दूसरा है रियल एस्टेट का बिजनेस ।
जेम्स एंड ज्वेलरी सबसे ज्यादा टफ है क्योंकि हीरे-जवाहरात की पहचान सिर्फ जौहरी ही कर सकता है ।


इसमें कोई संदेह नहीं कि वीर को एक अच्छे फ्रैंड की तलाश पूरी हुई । मुझे लगता है काईरा के भाई करण से उसकी अच्छी निभेगी ।

वेयरवोल्फ भाई ! सुमन के मुंह से वीर के लिए बार बार " मालिक " कहना मुझे पसंद नहीं आता । ऐसा लगता है कि एक बार फिर से स्लेव डायनेस्टी शुरू हो गई है । दोनों के बीच में शारीरिक संबंध है तो कुछ बढ़िया नाम से सम्बोधित करे ! उम्र में भी तो वो उससे काफी बड़ी है ।


बहुत ही बेहतरीन अपडेट था वेयरवोल्फ भाई ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग ।

Nice update

Fantastic update

excellent fantastic update

Aisa he to hota hai Maa Baap ka Rishta....Jo Halat jaisi bhi ho lekin apne bache 0er us bure halat ka saya bhi nahi parne dete andar se chahe jitne bhi toote ho lekin apni Aulad ke saamne ek Mazboot chattan ki tarha dat ke khare rehte hai......Baap chahe kisi ke yahan nokar he kiu na ho apne bache ke liye wo superman he hota hai.....Har bache ke liye us ka baap pehla super hero hota hai jis ko wo daikhta hai


Ashu to apni taraf se Apni Aai baba ki madad ker raha tha....Lekin us bechare ko kia he pata ke us ke Aai baba kin takleefo se jhoong rahe hai








Maan gye ustaad.....jaisa ke main ne kaha tha har single detail per bohat khubsoorati se dhayan rakha gaya hai...har cheez ki kariya apas me mil rahi hai bohat be khubsoorati se ap ne bina kuch zada likhe Atish ke apne Baba ke liye pyaar ko darsha diya





Aisa jhatka ache se ache insaan ko badal ker rakh de Ashu to phir ek bacha tha jis ko halato ne badla jaisa ke main ne kaha insaan ke halat us ki shaksiyat per bohat gehra asar chorr jate hai




Ek badla jis ne Atish ko ek masoom bache se ek janwar bana dia tha wo he badla ab Veer ki kismat ko badle ga daikhna bohat maze ka ho ga ke veer kaise iss change ko le ga

O teri....

Ghazab ka update bhai.
Bahut achhe yaara.

Mazaaaa aa gaya bhai waah....

Nice update

Bhai next update ajj a rahi hai?

My condolences... Take your time

Koi baat nahi

Mind blowing

Super update

Waiting for next update

excellent fantastic update

maiendblowing sooper update

Bhai aj update kab tk ayega

Waiting

Nice ...

Nice update Werewolf bhai.
Ye update ka title se to lagta he ki jese veer ko karan ke roop me ek dost mila ho ?? Par aage kya hoga kuch na pata.
Suman ke sath kal raat palang todd masti karke veer jaga to firse suman ki khoobsurati me bandh gaya. Aakhir suman thi bhi to uski daasi. Jiske liye sabse uper uska Malik veer he. Kal ko pair bhi dabane lag jayegi dekh lena. Ab suman ne jo dekha wo chut ka pani hi hoga. Par sawal he kiska?? Aabha lagti mujhe to. Kyuki usse sab pata he aur wo train bhi sharma rahi thi veer se jese usko pata ho ki ek din uska no bhi aane wala he veer ke niche. Sonali to sidha gussa hi karti aur ragini hurt hoti maybe. Ab Aabha ki bari. Par Aabha veer ki dasi nahi he na technically?? Dasi wo hi bann sakti jo suman ki family se ho aur Aabha uske pati ki paheli bete ki biwi he. Bloodline se to koi lena dena nahi dono ka.
Ab suhana se milne gaya par kapdo ka business to gaya abhi ke liye. Ab food business me try karna chahta he wahi suhana ko ye baate bachkani lagti he veer ki. Usse na pata na ki veer ke pass system he. Uski pari. Ab veer bhi pichli baar ki tarah hi ek statement deke gaya he to suhana ko darr lag raha kahi firse usse jhukna na pade veer ke samne. Wahi iss waqt Sonia kaha he. Sonia se jyada to suhana milti he veer se. Aur lagta he ab wo aayegi kyuki kaera bhi yahi he. Sonia, kaera aur veer teeno ek table pe majha aayega. Veer ki halat patli hogi dono ke bich. Sonia cuteness se vaar karegi wahi kaera apna husn dikhayegi aur ghar aake wo sab jhelegi suman .
Ab ye karan to kaera ka bhai nikla. Ab jija sala ki dosti hogi esa? Jetha aur sundar jesa na ho. Anyway karan ko bhi chinta he apni bahen ki jo har jaankari rakhta he wo. Ab veer ke karname bhi janta he to thankful hoga hi. Ab pata chalega kaera ka past. Jitna karan ko pata hoga utna batayega hi.
Ab ek sath kafi chije chal rahi kahani me. Aarohi shaq kar rahi pranjal pe, ragini Nidhi ki baato aur hospital ke baad ab kadi nigrani rakhegi veer pe, suman ka surprise,shreya ka badhta jhukav, Nidhi ki problem. Kafi kuch he.
Waiting for next update.

Waiting for your next update bro....

Waiting 4 update

Bhai aj update jaldi dena plz

Kya aj update ka koe chance hai bhai

Intazar rahega update ka

Waiting

Waiting bhai...

Update 56 has been posted.

 

[Werewolf]

Index has been updated!

 

[Werewolf]

Update 55 ke baad ke comments ke replies evening tak de diye jaenge.

 

[Rajdeepchatha]

Kaera ki zindagi to bht hi sad hai sala ese baap hone sai to ho hi na or us guru ko to maar do or eva maybe veer ki sis hogi

 

[Devil hunter123]

Fantastic mind-blowing super update
Lagta hai ab kisika wicket girnewala hai

 

[bantoo]

Super update.

 

[RAJIV SHAW]

Super update hai Bhai

 

[BIZMAN]

excellent...
update is completed in suspense....
tum ne itni mehnant sy update dia ha k ab next update ka kehty b sharam ati ha....
lakin dil ka kya karain ye dil mange more....

 

[Ashwathama]

Update - 56 ~ Wilted Rose
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Ab tak...

Karan : Raghu mujhse harr detail share karta tha. Including details about you. Mujhe pata chala hai ki kayi baar Raghu ne didi ko tumhaare saath dekha hai, wo bhi muskuraate hue. Didi muskura rahi thi. Wo khush thi. So... I want to tell you about something. Kya tum sunoge? It's about her.

Veer (frowns) : ....

Karan : ....

Veer (sighs) : Fine... Talk!

Ab aage...

19 Years Ago...

Ek behad hi khubsoorat aur aalishaan se bangle ke baahar bane ek park me behad hi pyaari sii bacchi apni do saheliyo ke sang khel rahi thi.

"Kaera! Ye dekh ye waala phool, kitna accha hai na? Kitni khushbu aa rahi hai iss se?"

Uski ek pyaari sii saheli ne muskuraate hue kaha.

"Sach Sonu? Mujhe bhi dikha na!"
Kaera jaldbaazi me nazdeek aayi aur usne apni saheli ke haatho se wo phool lia aur uski khushboo soonghte hi maano jese uska mann prafullit ho utha.

"Kitna pyaara phool hai hahaha~" Wo khil-khilaayi.

Uski muskaan itni pyaari thi ki kisi bhi kathor se kathor aadmi ka dil jeet le. Wo nadaani, wo chanchalta, wo bachpana aur khaas kar wo chaand jaisa pyaara chehra jo kisi ko bhi uss par pyaar lutaane par majboor kar de.

Kuch aisi thi Kaera.

"Mujhe bhi dekhna hai." Kehte hue uski dusri saheli aage aayi aur phool ki sugandh ka jayza lene lagi. Par tabhi...

"Kaera!!! Kaera!!!!"

Achanak aayi andar se tezz awaaz sunte hi Kaera ekdum sachet ho gayi aur palti toh usne dekha ki andar se uske Pita baahar garden me aa rahe the.

Par wo akele nahi the. Usne dekha ki unke saath saath uski Maa bhi aa rahi thi. Lekin aur bhi chaunka dene waali baat ye thi ki uske Mata Pita ke saath koi 2 anya log bhi the jo unke saath aa rahe the. Iske pehle Kaera ne unn aadmiyo ko pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha. Kaun the ye log bhala?

Wo naye anjaan aadmi dhoti kurta pehne hue the. Unme se ek javaan tha aur ek budha. Jab chaaro log aake Kaera ke nazdeek khade hue toh Kaera ke Pita usse dekh uss budhe aadmi se bole.

"Ye hai hamaari laadli Guru jii! Iska naam hai Kaera!"

"Sundar! Bada hi pyaara naam hai. Kaera ka toh matlab hi Anokha hota hai. Anootha! Adwiteeya!"

Wo anjaan budha aadmi itna bol fir muskuraate hue aage aaya aur Kaera ke sarr par pyaar se haath ferra aur apni aankhein band kar liya.

"Adhbhut! Avishvasaneey! Alaukik! Ekdum utkrasht!"

"Huh!? K-Kya hua Guru jii! Kaera sach me bohut hi honhaar niklegi na?" Uske Pita ne Guru jii se pucha.

"Honhaar niklegi? Arre! Karodo me se ek niklegi ye bacchi! Itna hunar mene aaj tak kisi bacchi me nahi dekha."

Badle me Guru jii muskuraate hue bole aur fir kuch aur baatein bhi kahi, "Ye bacchi, heera hai heera Kishor! Tumhaari ye bacchi, itna aage jaegi ki pucho mat. Keval tej dikh raha hai mujhe iski aankho me. Kabhi bhi koi bhi iske raaste me aakar iska adanga nahi ban sakta. Apna raasta ye ladki khud banaegi. Aur sabse sarvashreshth hi banegi."

"K-Kya!? Haha~ Ye toh... Ye toh badi hi acchi baat hai Guru jii! Aapne aisa keh ke maano jese meri saari chintaaye dur kar dii!"

Kaera ke pita Kishor khush hote hue Guru jii ke paav padne lage toh Guru jii ne unhe unki baah pakad uthaaya.

"Arre! Thik hai baccha! Khush raho! Khush raho!"

"Sach me Guru jii! Aapki baato se mera bhi mann ab halka ho gaya hai. Dhanyavaad! Aur iss nanhe bacche ka jab janm hoga toh mein chaahti hu ki aap hi iska naam karan kare." Kaera ki Maa ne apna ubhra hua pait sehlaate hue kaha.

Toh Guru jii bhi haan me sarr hilaaye, "Theek hai beti! Mein zaroor ek antim baar iss sheher aaunga keval tumhaare navjaat shishu ke liye. Mene tab hi bataya tha Kishor ko ki sheher ki zindagi mujhe pasand nahi. Mera ghar toh kudrat me hai. Fir bhi ek antim baar zaroor aa jaunga."

"Dhanyavaad Guru jii! Mein jaanta hu ki aap ko ye sab kyu pasand nahi hai. Wo toh ye meri kismat thi jo mere kehne par aap yaha mere ghar tak aaye. Warna uss din toh mene dekha tha ki aap kisi ke bulaane par kahi nahi jaate."

"Sahi kaha tumne Kishor! Mene uss din hi tumhari aankho me dekh liya tha. Ki tumhe meri sakht zaroorat thi."

"Jii! Dhanyavaad Guru jii! Arre mein bhi na... kaha aapko yaha baato me laga liya. Aaiye na bhojan taiyaar hai!" Kishor ne haatho se ishaara kar andar chalne ke liye kaha. "Aur beta Sonu aur Ava beti, jao ab tum dono ghar theek!? Kaera abhi khaana khaegi."

"Okay Uncle!" Aur dono hi bacchiya Kaera ko bye bol apne gharo ki orr chali gayi.

"Kya ye dono Kaera beti ki saheliya thi!?" Guru jii ne pucha.

"Jii haan! Guru jii! Wo kaale baalo waali Sonia hai, pyaar se Sonu kehte hai sab usse. Aur wo jo videshi sii prateet ho rahi thi, peele rang ke baalo waali, wo Ava hai. Dono hi hamaare do acche padosiyo ki beti hai. Ava ki maa videshi hai, aur pita hindustani. Isliye wo..."

"Ohhh!! Samjha!! Par tumhaari ye ladki boht aage jaegi Kishor! Ekdum alag starr pe rahegi ye bacchi..."

Guru jii hasste hue bole toh unke bagal se khade uss naujavaan vyakti ne unki baah kheech unke kaano me khuspusaate hue kaha, "Guru jii! Kuch zyaada nahi ho gaya? Kahi humne kuch zyaada jhooth toh nahi keh diya? Ye aadmi chota mota aadmi nahi hai. Mujhe toh darr lag raha hai Guru jii."

Guru jii jese apne shishya, Raman ki baat sunn sachet ho gaye. Par fir muskuraate hue Raman ko dekhe aur dheere se bole, "Tum abhi bhi kacche khilaadi ho Raman. Isliye mein tumlogo ka guru hu aur tumlog mere chele."

"Par Guru jii, aapne iss bacchi ke baare me boht kuch keh diya hai. Yadi ye bacchi bhavishya me wesi nahi nikli jesa ki aapne iska varnan kiya hai toh fir toh, sab ko pata chal jaega ki hum dhongi hai."

Raman zaahir sii baat thi ki darr gaya tha. Wo Guru jii ka naya shishya tha. Aur Guru jii ko kaam karte dekh usse bas iss baat ki chinta sataaye jaa rahi thi ki kahi galti se unki pol na khul jaaye. Warna sab kuch dhara ka dhara reh jaega.

"Tum hamesha hi mand buddhi rahoge Raman!" Guru jii ne muskuraate hue kaha. Wo dekh rahe the ki Kishor aur uski patni andar ki orr jaa rahe the. Khaane ki taiyaari karne.

Aur nanhi Kaera unhe apni pyaari sii aankho se badi hi jigyaasa se ghur rahi thi.

"M-Mein kuch samjha nahi Guru jii!?"

Guru jii ne Raman ko dekha aur fir darwaaze ki taraf jaha ek 40-45 ki umr ka vyakti ek butler ke kapde pehne hue khada tha. Aur unn dono ko hi ghur ke dekh raha tha.

Wo muskuraate hue Kaera ke nazdeek aaye aur pyaar se uske sarr pat haath ferr Raman se dheere se bole,

"Arre! Mere mand buddhi waale shishya. Yadi gadhe ko bhi baar baar, lagataar koi cheez sikhayi jaaye toh gadha bhi hoshiyaar bann jaata hai. Fir ye toh insaan ki bacchi hai."

"M-Mein kuch samjha nahi abhi bhi Guru jii!"

Raman aage kuch aur keh paata ki tabhi andar se Kishor nikal kar baahar aaya aur Guru jii se bola,
"Arre!? Aap yahi hai ab tak Guru jii? Khaana lag hi chuka hai. Andar aaiye na."

"Darasal! Mein kuch soch raha tha!" Guru jii ne jawaab diya.

"K-Kya soch rahe the aap?"

"Kaera bitiya ke baare me."

"Kaera ke baare me? Kya hua?"

"Tumhari patni saath me thi isliye mene saari baat nahi bataayi thi."

"S-Saari baat? Guru jii saaf saaf kahiye na."
"Hmm! Dekho Kishor! Tumhaari ye bacchi niklegi toh boht honhaar par..."

"P-Par? Par kya Guru jii?"

"Par ye ki... iske jeevan me kayi saari adhchane aaengi. Aur aisa bhi ho sakta hai ki unn adhchano ke chalte ye apni disha se bhatak jaaye aur apni zindagi me kuch bhi haasil na kar paaye." Guru jii ne ekdum serious hote hue kaha toh bechaare Kishor ke chehre ka rang hi udd gaya.

"M-Mein kuch samjha nahi Guru jii! Kripya kar khul ke samjhaaiye!"

"Saral bhaasha me hi keh raha hu Kishor. Harr vyakti ke jeevan me pareshaaniya aati hi hai. Mein bas itna kehna chaah raha hu ki... Kaera bitiya ke jeevan me kuch zyaada hi adhchane aaengi. Aur yadi Kaera bitiya zara bhi unn adhchano me fassi. Toh wo kuch bhi haasil na kar paegi. Unn pareshaaniyo ka muaqaabla isse khud hi karna hoga."

"Ye sab!?? T-Toh mein kya karu Guru jii? K-Koi hal toh hoga hi aapke paas!?"

"Hai na baccha! Par... Thoda mushqil rahega."

"Aap bataiye bas Guru jii!"

"Tumhe iss par dhyaan dena hoga. Boht zyaada dhyaan. Iski adhchane zaahir hai ki tabhi aaengi jab ye kahi jaegi. Saral bhaasha me, tumhe Kaera bitiya se uski thodi azaadi chheen'ni padegi. Usse sarvashreshth shiksha pradaan karni hogi. Par ye sab baahar na ho. Tum samajh rahe ho na Kishor?"

Kishor toh jese Guru jii ki baat sunn stabdh sa murti bann ke reh gaya tha. Kuch derr maun rehne ke baad wo bola,

"Guru jii! Aaiye! Andar chal ke vistaar se baat karte hai. Meri patni ko bhi jaan'na zaroori hai."

"Theek hai baccha! Chalo!"

Aur Guru jii Kishor ke saath andar jaane lage. Baahar bageeche me khada Raman Guru jii ko dekhta raha bas aur mann hi mann sochne laga.

'Toh ye matlab tha Guru jii ka. Ki gadhe ko bhi baar baar sikhao toh wo hoshiyaar bann jaata hai. Matlab Guru jii iss nanhi sii bacchi ko bachpan se hi baahri duniya se dur rakh ke keval isse padhaayi me lagwa denge. Aur aise me zaahir hai ki ye ladki aage chal ke hoshiyaar hi niklegi. Waah! Maan gaye guru jii ko! Par abhi Kishor raazi nahi hua hai. Dekhte hai Guru jii kese karte hai ye sab?!'

Kuch derr tak andar sabhi log bhojan karte rahe. Kaafi samay guzar chuka tha. Aur Kaera ke baare me sab kuch Guru jii ne bata diya tha Kishor aur uski patni ko. Ab nirnay karna Kishor ke haath me tha. Kya wo Guru jii ki baat ko maanega? Ya nahi?

Wo apna faisla sunaane hi waala tha jab baahar bageeche se Kaera ki ek zordaar cheenkh unn sabko sunaayi dii.

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa...."

Ghabraate hue wo sab uthe aur baahar ki orr bhaage.

Jese hi Kishor aur baaki sab waha pohuche toh jo nazaara unhone dekha usse dekh sabki rooh kaanp gayi. Unke raungte khade ho gaye.

"Aaaahhh!"

Kaera ki maa jo garbhvati hone ke kaaran thoda dheere dheere chalte hue waha aayi, unhone saamne ka manzar dekhte hi apna chehra apne haatho se dhak liya.

Neeche zameen par unke yaha jo maali kaam karta tha wo khoon se latpat pada hua tha.

Uske seene par churri ke gopne ke ghaav the jinme se khoon nikal kar poora uski shirt ko lahu luhaan kar chuka tha. Uski khuli daraawni aankhein jo andekhi aur ankahi kuch ghatna ke baare me vyakt karna chaah rahi thi.

"Archana! Kaera ko lekar andar jao forun...!"

Apne Pati ki baat sunn Archana ne Kaera ko pakda aur uss nanhi sii darri hui bacchi ko wo forun hi andar le gayi.

"Anarth! Ghor anarth! Baap re! Hey bhagwaan!!! Ye aaj mene kya dekh liya?" Guru jii darrte hue bole.

"Madhav!! Oo madhav! Jaldi aao idhar!"

Kishor ne awaaz lagaayi toh wahi 40-45 waali umr ka aadmi jo butler ki uniform me peeche hi khada tha wo saamne aaya. Aur usse jese pata tha ki kya karna hai.

Usne jhuk ke uss maali ko check kiya aur fir Kishor se kaha. "Sahab! Ye toh marr chuka hai."

Aur ye sunte hi Guru jii aur Raman ki sitti pitti gul ho gayi.

Par jese unhe abhi aur ek jhatka lagna baaki tha.

Jese hi sabki nazar saamne ki diwaar par gayi toh sab ke sab ek baar fir maun reh gaye.

Saamne safed diwaar par bade bade aksharo me paint se likha hua tha.

"Killed by Slogan"

Ye bhure paint se likha hua tha. Wo maali paudho ke gamlo me paint kar raha tha. Aur shayad hatyaare ne ussi paint se ye sab likha tha.

Ye dekhne ke baad toh jese Kishor ekdum darr gaya.

"Dekha tumne Kishor!?" Guru jii bole.

"H-Huh!??"

"Mene tumse kaha tha na? Kaera bitiya ke jeevan me adhchane aaengi! Dherr saari! Aur dekho... Hey bhagwaan! Itna bada ghor anarth! Itna bada apraadh! Bechaari Kaera bitiya itni sii umr me kya kya dekh baithi. Mene kaha tha na Kishor! Tumhe boht dhyaan dena padega. Mujhe ab meri aankho ki shuddhi karni hogi. Na jaane kya dekh liya ye mene aaj. Bhagwaan reham kar!!!"

Aur Kishor ne fir ek pal bhi nahi gawaaya aur bola,

"Aapne ekdum sahi kaha Guru jii! Aaj se hi... Kaera kahi nahi jaegi. Uski padhaayi ke liye... Mein sarvashreshth professors ko ghar hi bulwaunga aur usse ghar par hi padhwaunha. Wo apne exams ghar se hi degi. Mein apni bacchi ko khona nahi chaahta. Aaj se uska khelna kudna band. Keval usko growth par hi mera poora dhyaan hoga. Poora dhyaan... Meri Kaera..."

Raman jo khade khade sab dekh raha tha. Wo mann hi mann apne Guru jii ki tareefo ke pul baandh raha tha.

'Maan gaye Guru jii aapko. Kisi bhi paristhiti ko apne faayde ke liye kese upyog karna hai koi aapse seekhe. Yaha kisi ki hatya ho gayi aur aapne apna kaam nikalwa liya. Waah! Maan gaye aapko!'

Par wahi dusri orr Kishor saamne Slogan likhe naam ko padh ke aur bhi ghabraaya hua tha.

'K-Kaun hai ye? Meri toh kisi se bhi dushmani nahi hai. Kaun hai ye Slogan? Kaun ho sakta hai ye?'

"Madhav! P-police ko jald se jald bulao."

"Jii Sahab!"

Kehte hue Madhav andar chala gaya telephone se phone karne.

"Ab mein chalta hu Kishor! Mujhe jald se jald mandir jaana hoga. Warna mein apna ye vichlit mann shaant nahi kar paunga."

Kehte hue Guru jii jaane lage toh Kishor ne unhe bulaaya. Par wo toh jese kisi ki sune hi nahi aur apni hi dhun me aage badh waha se nikal gaye.

Ab waha keval Kishor aur Raman hi bache hue the.

"Guru jii aise hi hai. Boht pavitra hai. Unhe toh ab mandir ka vatavaran aur bhagwan ke bhajan hi shaant kar sakte hai. Na jaane kya dekh liya aaj unhone." Raman bola.

"M-Mujhe maaf karna. Aise mere ghar par... Guru jii ko..."

"Arre!? Nahi nahi! Isme aapki koi galti nahi hai. Ye toh zindagi hai. Kab kaha pe na jaane kis ke sath kya ho jaaye. Accha! Ab mein chalta hu."

"Arre? Par Guru jii ki daskhina?"

"Dakshina? Guru jii toh apne naam par aaj tak ek rupaya nahi liye. Wo toh wese hi kudrat me rehna pasand karte hai. Haan! Par kabhi kabhi kuch diler log unke shishyo ko raashi thama dete hai. Aur badle me Guru jii uss raashi ko samaaj ke kaamo me laga dete hai. Yahi hai bas hamaara toh..."

"Haan! Toh, rukiye na aap..." Kehte hue Kishor forun hi andar gaya aur usne paiso ki kuch gaddi almaari se nikaali aur laa kar Raman ke haatho me thama dii.

"Arreeee!? Y-Ye... Ye kya kar rahe hai aap? Itne saare paise?"

"Dekhiye! Ye meri taraf se hai. Guru jii ko dhanyavaad kahiyega. Aur aap inn raashi ka mujhe pata hai nek kaam ke liye hi istemaal karenge."

"P-Par...!?!"

"Dekhiye! Naa mat kahiyega! Aur maafi chaahta hu mein thoda jaldi me hu. Itna bada haadsa ho gaya ghar me. Ghar ka mukhiya hone ke naate mujhe hi sab dekhna hoga."

Aur kehte hue Kishor waha se nikal gaya. Police aa chuki thi aur saari jaanch padtaal kari.

Par uske pehle hi Raman waha se apni thaili me wo paise liye nikal chuka tha.

'Hahahaha~ Maan gaye Guru jii ko. Ye toh lakh se bhi zyaada hai. Baap re!!! Ye itna raees aadmi kaha se mil gaya Guru jii ko?'

Wo sochte sochte bus stand pohcha aur ek bus me sawaar ho gaya. Aur andar hi ek seat par uske Guru jii baithe hue the. Jaise maano wo uska hi intezaar kar rahe the.

Wo paise, zaahir hai ki kisi nek kaam me istemaal nahi hone waale the. Balki unn paiso ka istemaal toh Daru, aur anya aisho araam ke liye istemaal hone waala tha. Guru jii aur unke shishya mil kar kitna bada dhong rach rahe the duniya ke logo ke saath ye baat koi nahi jaanta tha.

Shayad, abhi tak kisi ne bhi Guru jii ko nahi pakda tha. Aur aise hi unki zindagi aisho araam se bhar chuki thi.

Par...

Jaha Guru jii aur anya log masti me lage the wahi dusri orr bechaari nanhi Kaera ki zindagi jese ujaad ke rakh dii thi Guru jii ne.

Kishor ne uska school jaana sakht band kar diya tha.

Pehle toh Kaera ko baat samajh nahi aayi. Kyuki wo kaafi choti thi. Par jese jese wo badi hui, aur usse pata chala ki uski saheliya sabhi baahar nikal ke ghoomne firne school jaati thi toh jese usse samajh me aaya.

Wo zidd karti, aur Kishor uski baatein ignore kar deta. Wo roti, bilakhti, ki usse bhi baahar jaana hai. Par koi faayda nahi.

Wo ek band pinjre me kisi chidiya ki tarah bann ke reh gayi thi. Beshaq! Usse ucchh shiksha pradaan kii jaa rahi thi. Harr ek vishay ka honhaar professor aake usse padhaata tha.

Par...

Kya faayda tha aisi shiskha ka? Jaha usse koi azaadi tak nahi thi. Wo bas uss aalishaan se bangle me qaid rehke khidki ke baahar anya baccho ko raaste se hasste khelte hue guzarte dekha karti thi.

Uski saheliya zaroor kabhi kabhi aati thi. Sonu aur Ava.

Par jese dheere dheere unse bhi uska touch khatam ho raha tha.

Dost kya hote hai, shayad ye bhi wo ab bhulne lagi thi.

Ek samay aisa bhi aaya jab uski Maa ka dehant ho gaya. Aur tab se wo jese aur shaant sii ho gayi.

Baap, jo uski baat sunta hi nahi tha. Keval uski padhayi ki baat karta tha. Maa, jo waqt se pehle chal basi.

Aur ek chota bhai, jo abhi kaafi chota tha inn sab baato ko samajhne ke liye.

Jab Kaera 8th std me thi tab uski padosi saheli Ava, waha se chali gayi videsh. Hamesha ke liye.

Aur jaane se pehle bhi, wo dono hi ek dusre se keval ek baar hi mil paaye.

Ava : I'm going Kaera!

Kaera : Hmm~

Ava : T-Tum... Tum kab tak aise rahogi? Ghar me?

Kaera : Jab tak Dad allow nahi karte.

Ava : Tumhe apne Dad se baat karni chaahiye. Really!

Kaera : I will!

Ava aage badhi aur usne Kaera ke haath me ek bracelet pehnaaya aur uske gale se lag gayi.

Ava (cries) : I will never forget you. Goodbye!

Par Kaera ki aankho se aasu na nikle. Usse samajh me hi nahi aa raha tha ki usse rona chaahiye ya nahi. Usse pata hi nahi tha kuch. Kyuki wo bachpan se hi inn sab feelings se jese vanchit reh gayi thi.

Ek chote bacche ko aap bachpan me jo sikhaoge, bade hone ke baad wo ussi ko follow karta hai. Aur uske lakshan bhi dekhne ko milte hai.

Kaera ke saath bhi kuch aisa hi tha. Usse feelings ke baare me kuch sikhaaya hi nahi gaya tha. Uska din shuru hota tha subah 5 baje. Naukar aake uske kapde badalte the. Naashta hota tha dining table par. Subah subah uski good manners ki ek class lagti. Uske baad subah se raat tak alag alag vishay ke teachers aake usse personally padhaate the.

Beech beech me uth wo apna lunch karti aur raat me dinner aur bas fir uska din khatam ho jaata. Aur agle din se fir wahi routine shuru.

Uske dost nahi the. Jo the wo bhi ab nahi aate the. Ava jaa chuki thi. Sonu hi hamesha beech beech me zidd kar ke aa jaati thi aur uss se baat karti.

Kabhi kabhi toh Sonu uske Dad se bhi ladd gayi thi.

Wo Kaera se sawal karti ki kyu wo apne aap ko yu qaid karke rakhe hue hai.

Toh Kaera bas ek hi jawaab deti, "Dad mujhe kamyaab hote dekhna chaahte hai."

Aur bas, wahi discussion khatam ho jaaya karta tha.

Wo ek robot ki tarah ban chuki thi. Jisse bas kaam karwaane ke liye banaaya jaa raha tha.

Jab uska janmdin aata toh bas ek cake kaata jaata tha aur bas ho gaya uska janmdin.

Apne bhai Karan se kabhi kabhi Kaera ko jalan hoti thi. Kyuki uska bhai school bhi jaata tha aur dosto ke saath khelne bhi. Usse koi manaahi nahi thi.

Par jese uska ye emotion bhi gaayab ho gaya. Ek prakaar se usse bas ab business karna aata tha. Kyuki wo business sambhaalne ke liye hi padh rahi thi ab tak.

Baaki saari cheeze jese wo bhulti jaa rahi thi.

Jab usne School se graduate kiya toh Kishor ne usse pehli baar videsh bheja University join karne ke liye. Par waha bhi, wo ek bangle me rehti thi. University nahi jaati thi. Aur wahi se usne University me top bhi kiya tha.

Sonia urf Sonu, uski bachpan ki dost uss se jalti thi. Kyuki hamesha hi Kaera uss se aage rehti thi. Aakhir itna knowledge koi vyakti lega toh zaahir hai ki wo anya logo se aage hi rahega.

Par Sonia ko jab ye baat samajh aayi ki uski dost uss par zara bhi dhyaan nahi deti. Toh Sonia ne jese ye maqsad bana liya tha apna.

Wo bhi same University jaegi. Wo bhi same pratispardha me bhaag legi aur Kaera ko haraegi. Taaki uski dost uss par dhyaan de.

Kabhi kabhi Kaera kuch contests me aati thi. Par contests khatam hote hi wo gaayab.

Aur aise hi uski zindagi ek nark ke samaan ho chuki thi.

Ek khila hua gulaab aise murjha ke reh gaya tha.

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Karan : Aur ye hai... Didi ki sacchaayi.

Jab Karan ne saari baatein bata kar apni baat khatam kari toh Veer ki mutthi gusse me kass gayi.

"Damn ittttt!!!!"

*Thud*

Usne zorr se apna mutthi bench par maari toh lohe ki wo bench pe ek dent pad gaya.

Karan uske gusse ko dekh taajub tha.

Veer : So that's the reason... That's the reason why she... Damn it!!!!

Veer ko yaad aaya ki Kaera ki mulaqaat uss se pehli baar kab hui thi. Club me...

Aur usse jese samajh aa chuka tha ki kyu Kaera waya aayi thi. She just wanted to know things out...

Wo toh bechaari bas ye dekhne aayi thi ki club ki life kesi hoti hai. Kya hota hai waha? Apni curiosity ko khatam karne aayi thi waha wo. Aur uss din hi Aatish ne waha hamla kar diya tha. Aur fir Veer aur uska yu aapas me intercourse karna...

Bechaari! Harr jagah toh jhela hi tha usne. Ye sab sochte hi maano Veer ke mann me Kaera ke prati responsibility aur badh chuki thi.

Veer : Tumhe kese pata chali ye sab baatein!? Tum toh tab paida bhi nahi hue the!?

Karan : Yadi wafadaari ka koi dusra naam hai toh woh hai Madhav Uncle! Unhone hi mujhe sab kuch bataaya tha jab mein foreign jaane wala tha. Aur isliye tab se hi mein Raghu ke contact me hu. Kuch bhi hota hai wo mujhe bataata hai.

Veer : Hmm~ Toh Madhav uncle uss Guru jii ke baare me jaante the.

Karan : Madhav uncle ki nazar tezz hai logo ko parakhne me. Unhe samajh aa chuka tha ki wo Aadmi dhongi tha. Unhone Dad ko bataya bhi par Dad ne vishwaash nahi kiya. Wo inn sab me kuch zyaada hi vishwaash karte hai.

Veer : Itne bade aadmi hone ke bawajood inn sab pe...!?

Karan : Harr bada aadmi kisi na kisi andhvisvaash pe yakeen karta hi hai Veer. Kuch logo numerology par yakeen karte hai. Ki unka lucky number ye hai. Wagarah wagarah...

Veer : I see! Well!? Toh ye sab kyu bataaya tumnd mujhe!?

Karan : Because I think you can change her.

Veer : Huh!?

Karan : Tumhe pata hai mene kesi kesi situations me dii ko dekha hai? Unka bday tha last year. Aur Dad ne unhe wish tak nahi kia tha. Wo kaam me itna busy the. Upar se wo Dii ko meetings par time par pohuchne ke liye keh rahe the. Aur dii ne koi complaint nahi kii. Fir raat me mene Dad se thoda uchi awaaz me baat kii tab jaake unhe yaad aaya aur unhone Dii ko wish Kiya tha. Tum samajh rahe ho na?

Veer : ....

[That's quite sad...]

Karan (sighs) : Jab mujhe pata chala ki Dii ne tumhe approach kiya aur tumse baat karte hue unke chehre par smile aa jaati hai. That means you are someone special. Didi faaltu logo se kabhi impressed nahi rehti. Koi special hi hota hai jo unhe impress kar sake.

Veer : O-Ohhh!

Karan : So? Can you help her?

Veer (smiles) : Yadi tumne nahi bhi kaha hota toh bhi mein kar raha hota.

Karan (smiles) : Hmm~ Par dhyaan rahe, if I find you taking advantage of her. Toh mujhse bura koi na hoga.

Veer : *smiles*

Aur tabhi Karan ne apna haath aage badhaaya.

Karan : So? Friends?

Aur pal bhar ke liye Veer ko jese kuch yaad aaya.

Golu!!!!

Aise hi toh usne dosti ka haath aage badhaaya tha. Aur kya hua tha uske saath?

Ye yaad aate hi Veer ki nazre neeche jhuk gayi aur wo palat gaya.

Veer : I don't make friends...

Kehte hue wo waha se nikal gaya. Aur bechaara Karan usse bas prashn bhari nigaaho se jaate hue dekhta raha.

***

Agli subah hui. Aaj Veer ko apne food truck ka bandobast karna tha. Aur yahi soch aaj wo jaldi uth gaya.

Par tabhi...

*Knock knock*

Uske darwaaze par kisi ne dastak dii.

Uthte hue usne jaise hi door khola toh saamne Suman khadi hui thi.

Par...

Par uske bagal se koi aur bhi khada hua tha.

Veer : ???

Suman muskuraa rahi thi aur apne bagal me khade vyakti ko usne dhakka deke andar kamre me dhakela aur khud andar aake darwaaza band kar lii.

Suman : Mene kaha tha na? Kal aapko ek uphaar milega!?! Ye hai aapka uphaar!

Veer : Ehhh!?
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[Shahrukh]

Awesome update bhai but bahut slow chal rahi story