Romance Three Girls of My Life

[Mr. Perfect]

Behad hi shandar update tha SGP bhai______
To aakhir gupta sir ko atharva ved ne pata hi liya do teen pen de kar lekin dono is baat se confuse bhi hain ki kya gupta sir pat gaye hoge. Kahi aisa to nahi ki rishwat bhi le liya ho aur ab class me gaand bhi maar le atharva ki. Waise bhai agar aisa hua to maja bahut aayega______
Riya rose ko manane ka idea fussed ho gaya. Atharva ko ved se hi idea lena chahiye tha. Atharva over smart jyada banta hai aur chutiya to wo % hai______

Update-32​

“arey aisa kyun kar rahe ho… koyi jaroorat nahi hai…”turant Gupta ji apne tevar badalte hue thode shant man se bole... ab unka ye tevar mere birthday ka sunkar badla ya fir unka bill main pay karunga... ye sunkar... is bare me main aaj tak suspence me hoon.

“aaj mera birthday hai... sir aur aap hee ekmatra aise teacher hai, jo tab se is school me hai, jab se main hoon… aapke saamne hee pale-badhe hum log. Aapke dar aur maar ke kaaran hee toh Sanskar Valley me ab bhi Sanskar hai. warna hum bhi Government school ke ladko ki tarah bus stand me ladkiyo ke peechhe ghoom rahe hote, sitiya-baji kar rahe hote... aap inspiration ho sir, humare liye…. Hai school ke itihaas me aapke aalawa koyi dusara teacher… jo bina book ko hath lagaye, pura subject padha de… kyun , Ved ... hai koyi aisa... bol... Ved...? Bol bhai.... abey bolegaaaa....”

“nahiiiiiiiiiii.....”apna hath upar uthate hue Ved cheekha aur Gupta ji ko salute kiya “jai hind , Sir...”

“thik hai.. thik hai… ab jao yaha se…”

“Jai Hind, sir….”Ved ki dekha-dekhi maine bhi Gupta ji ko salute kiya

“ye sir aapke liye....”apne jeb se do naye pen nikal kar mujhe dete hue Ved bola “ Atharva , ye toh tu sir ko dena hee bhool gaya... sir ko gift karne ke liye hee toh kharida tha tu kal...”

“arey haan.. achchha hua.. tune yaad dila diya... warna sir kahte ki rukhe-sukhe aashirwad le liya....”Gupta ji ko daant dikhate hue maine kaha jiske baad unhone bhi mujhe daant dikhaye.... I mean, pen lete hue muskura diye... Ved ne pen kab kharid lliya...?

“isme laal pen toh hai hee nahi...”dono pen ko jeb me rakhte hue Gupta ji ka bas itna bolna hee tha ki ... main waha se turant bhaga, dukan se 5 waala ek red pen liya aur turant Gupta ji ke paas pahuchkar bhet swaroop unhe diya...

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“kya lagta hai… Gupta maan gaya hoga…”wapas school ki taraf aate hue Ranjan ne mujhse puchha…

“ye toh ab class me pata chalega… Ved , tu pen kab kharid liya tha be...…?”

“Mira se manga ... jab tu pure school me bheekh maang raha tha toh... pahle toh wo dene se mana kar di, lekin jaisi hee usko apna pura plan sunaya toh turant de di wo pen. kasam se, ab main Sunayana mam se pyar karta hoon, warna ... usich time Mira ko I Fuck you kah deta.... mast ladki hai yar, choda nahi rahi bas... ”

“choda toh rahi hai... par tere se nahi ”ye ek aisi line thi.. jo mere aur Ranjan ke muh se ek sath nikli... jise sun Ved ki ek pal ke liye gand fat gayi ki kahi El Dorado wali raat ki tarah hum dono fir se toh uski nahi maarne waale aur sach kahu toh ye vichar tha bhi mera.... Ranjan ka pata nahi

“tu paise de... itna mast-mast idea diya hu...” topic turant Mira se change karte hue Ved ne bhikhariyo ki tarah apne hath failaye

“sala , consulting fees lekar hee maanega … lagta hai… par abhi bhi ek problem hai… wo Karan Naik, pelega mujhe… aur yadi us-se bachne ke liye ghar me bata diya toh ghar wale bhi pelenge aur defend karne ke liye kuch hai bhi nahi mere paas … kya bolunga ki… raat me daru ke nashe me akeli Sanjana se milne jaa raha tha to Karan Naik ne mujhe roka aur fir maine patthar utha kar use maar diya… ? mahtarichod, bitiyachod, burchatta, bursungha jaisi gaali bhi di... wo alag. waise kya dum laga kar maara tha saale ko… ab bhi dard de raha hoga usko… yadi ye baat ghar me pata chali toh mommy toh danda lekar pichhwada toh laal karegi hee, baapu bhi apni rum ke khatam hone ke gum me ulta maarega... Ved , tu mere friends ranking me no.1 sthan par hai... iska bhi kuch jugaad bata ”

“Karan Naik wala problem se nikalne ka idea hai mere paas… par main sure nahi hu ki ye work karega ya nahi…”Ranjan kuch sochte hue bola

“idea bata..”main khushi se puchha

“par main sure nahi hu…”

“bata toh… work main aur Ved karwa lenge…”

“wo tujhe na pakde isliye kisi dusare ko pakadwa de…. Samjha..?”

“kya samjha…? thoda explain kar… ek toh wo history ka question daag kar gayi hai, usko bhi samajhna hai abhi... aur tu ab samjha… samjha kar raha hai… seedhe-seedhe bol…”

Jiske baad Ranjan ne mujhe samjhaya ki mujhe kya samajhna chahiye… jise sunkar main samajh gaya ki shayad Karan Naik ko apne raaste se hatane ka Ranjan ka ye idea kaam kar sakta hai… khair wo baad ki baat thi.. abhi ek aur problem thi aur wo thi Riya Rose…. Us-se bhi toh baat karni thi… waise use samajh jaana chahiye ki, main ek ladka hu aur ek ladke ki kuch sharirik jaroorate hoti hai… jaise ki............................................... daru. tum logo ne sex samjha naa..? ashleel, sanskarless people

Anyway.... toh use samajh jaana chahiye ki, main ek ladka hu aur ek ladke ki kuch sharirik jaroorate hoti hai… jaise ki daru. jise ladke ko pura karna hota hai aur kabhi-kabhi isme ladka bahak bhi jaata hai… ise normally lena chahiye… lekin wo toh is samay apna gaal fulaye, gubbare ki tarah… school ke garden me baithi hui thi, jaha lunch time me aksar jhaant barabar launde-laundiya kuda-fandi karte the, jhula-vula jhoolte hue khela karte the. Riya Rose se milne main bhi wahi jaa pahucha…. Ved , Riya Rose ke liye bhi ek alag plan bana raha tha... lekin maine use rok diya aur wapas class bhej diya... kyunki Riya Rose meri territory thi aur yadi yaha bhi main haar gaya yaa mujhe Ved ki jaroorat hui toh.... fir laanat hai mujhpe

Door se Riya ko dekh kar mujhe laga tha ki wo garden me aise hee apna samay kaatne ke liye baithi hogi, par fir jaise-jaise main uske najdeek jata gaya mujhe abhas hua ki wo koyi painting bana rahi thi aur usi style me ghaas ke upar baithi hui thi, jis style me us din park me baithi hui thi, jab mera pair pipe me fas gaya tha aur main uske saamne gira tha… aur us din ki tarah main aaj bhi uske peechhe khada tha… mujhe kahna toh nahi chahiye, par peechhe se Riya ko dekh ke mera mann machal utha aur tan bhi _/\_

“kya bolu… ? hiiii…? Nahi, seedhe pair pakad kar peechhe ghaseet leta hu isko aur maafi maang leta hu… nahi, is-se ghanghor beizzati hogi, ye sahi nahi rahega…. Direct I love you ,bol du kya.. ? par Ved toh bol raha tha ki ladkiya, I love you ka jawab hamesha naa me hee deti hai,... toh fir kya bolu…? Is-se science quiz me participte karne ka puchhta hoon … ye sahi rahega...”

“nahi yar, nahi karegi… ye toh painting wale me jaayegi… fir kya puchhu…??????”

“yeeee puchh… -1 point…”khud se khud pe point chadhate hue main mann hee mann me bola ... -1... –Ve sign isliye, kyunki ... Vigyan ki bhasa me bolu toh yaha gravity ke against main dusaro par nahi balki khud par point chadha raha tha aur yadi hindi bhasha me explain karu.. toh yaha Karta bhi main tha, Karak bhi main tha aur karm bhi main hee tha....

“ek kaam karta hu, is-se aaj ki tarikh puchh leta hu… nahi yar… fir”

“fir lawda puchhu kyaaaaaa…..” mann hee mann main chillaya… kash mere paas bhi 2.0 hota

Jiske baad main peechhe muda aur apna dahina hath saamne karke khud ko Riya ki taraf dhakela… iske baad, jaise main us din park me Riya ke bagal me gira tha, waise aaj bhi yaha garden me gira… jaise us din Riya mujhe dekhkar bhauchakki rah gayi thi , waise aaj bhi thi… par us din se kam… kyunki aaj wo shocked kam, gussa jyada thi… kyunki…. Kyunki… girte waqt maine uske hath ko anjaane hee dhakka de diya tha, jis-se uski painting bigad gayi....

“TUU…..mmmm.... tummm”itna bolkar Riya ruk gayi aur fir apne bayi hatheli ko baandhkar , daant peesate hue dheere-dheere boli “CONTROL… RIYA..… just ignore him….”

“... aise.. kaise... ignore...”

Riya apni band mutthi, apne sar me dheere-dheere markar control… control bolne lagi aur jab bahut der tak wo aise hee karte rahi, I mean apne sar ko apni band mutthi se sahlati rahi toh mujhse dekha nahi gaya aur main bola…

“sar dard de raha hai kya…? Kamal hai, daru maine pi… hangover tumhe ho gaya… waise aaj tum paani peene nahi gayi , R.O. ke paas… main kabse wahi line me laga hua tumhara intezaar kar raha tha , taaki tumko line me naa lagna pade...”

Maine kahaa... Main toh bas kisi tarah conversation shuru karna chahta tha, par wo mujhe ab aise dekhne lagi jaise wo Sanjana ho aur uske naam pe donation lene ke baad maine paise use diye hee na ho… ekdum cold blooded… andar bahut kuch tha, lekin chehra ekdum shant… gambhir… fir usne apni painting ki taraf dekha… aur jab usne apni painting ko dekha toh , maine bhi dekha…

“ise main ek hafte se bana rahi thi…”wo shant swar me bas itna boli…

Uski painting ke beecho-beech black colour phail gaya tha... jo ki mere neeche girne ke karan uske hath me dhakka lagne ki vazah se hua tha…. Main toh soch raha tha ki us din park ke mafiq neeche girkar style me use, heeyyy Rosie bolunga aur wo mujhe … how funny… bolkar haste hue maaf kar degi aur gale laga legi… par aisa hua nahi… mera plan bhi perfect tha, execution bhi perfect tha… lekin result nahi.... Ved ko hee plan banane dena chahiye tha. ye sab mere sath hee kyun hota hai...

Pata nahi, shayad main hee chutiya hoon......

 

[Mr. Perfect]

Behad hi shandar update tha SGP bhai. Bole to ekdam jhakkaaaaas aur mere naam ki tarah perfect_______
Riya ko manane ke sare paitre bekaar gaye atharva ke. Waise ek baat to clear ho chuki hai ki atharva dramebaaj aur chutiyapanti bahut karta hai. Riya wo painting contest ke liye bana rahi thi jisko atharva ne kharab kar diya tha aur wo pagla ye samajha tha ki riya uski painting bana rahi thi. Waise riya Nana Patekar ki filme jyada dekhti hai kya. Control uday jaisa same wo khud ko bol rahi thi control riya aur sach me usne khud ke gusse ko control bhi kar liya tha warna jo kaand atharva ne kiya tha usse to uska band bajna bakka tha______
RO me gupta sir ke name se paani bharna aur Madhu se baate karne se baaki logo ki soch sahi thi. Madhu se hi use pata chala ki riya ki maa hospital me admit thi. Ye baat atharva ke liye shocking thi. Riya aur sanjana me sach me kafi similarity thi aur coincidence sochne wala hai. Gupta sir ka period tha is liye atharva class ki taraf bhaga lekin raaste me daffar ne oh sorry Jaffar ne use rok liya. Ab ye jarur gupta sir se atharva ki band bajwayega. Dekhte hain kya hota hai aage_______

Update-33​

“Rosie, ye toh ekdum perfect hai……”

Par Wo kuch nahi boli….

“naraz hai…? Come on Rosie… itne achchhe ladke ki itni achchhi painting banane ke baad bhi tum mujhse gussa raho…? Aisa ho hee nahi sakta… aur yadi mujhpar gussa hoti toh tum meri painting yaha baithkar complete nahi karti balki ise faad deti… dekha, kya logic lagaya hai maine… de mukke pe mukka…” mukka banakar apna hath maine aage kiya , is aas me ki Ved ke mafiq Riya bhi mukka banakar mast degi... isi bahane use chhu bhi lunga...

Isiliye Daant dikhate hue maine apna hath aage badhaya, par Riya ki taraf se koyi reaction nahi aaya… uske toh chehre ke expression tak nahi badle…

“I’m sorry that I got drunk and said those things……..that I meant…… lol... but shouldn’t have said……. sorry”

bolkar main apne aap me hasa… par jab Riya fir bhi kuch nahi boli toh maine fir hasna band kar diya…. Wo ekdum shant sirf mujhe aur meri harkato ko aise dekhe jaa rahi thi ki... yadi uske hath me abhi koyi khanjar hota toh wo us khanjar ko chup-chap dheere se mere seene ke aar-paar kar deti.... uske , mujhe aise dekhne ke kaaran mere seene me halka –halka imaginary dard bhi hua, jise sahlate hue maine kaha....

“did I really hurt you.. ?"

wo fir kuch nahi boli....

" please, put aside your ego and just.... talk to me…. You know, I’m apologizing to you. But after seeing your reactions... I feel like, I am on a ship in a storm heading towards the rocky shoreand. you can save me from drowning but you...... won’t do it…”English jhadte hue maine kaha ... is aas me ki wo shayad impress ho jaaye... par yaha bhi aasha ki jagah nirasha hee mere hath lagi

Aur Riya ke bhaav ab bhi nahi badle... tab maine haar maan li aur socha ki next plan bana ke next time milunga..... afterall, Riya Rose meri territory hai, yadi yaha bhi haar gaya toh fir laanat hai mujhpe. Isliye main waha se jaane ke liye khada hua...

“ I think I should be get going…”Maine wo painting uthayi aur waha se jaane ke liye aage badha…

“painting maine tumhare liye nahi banayi hai , annual day ke contest ke liye banayi thi, ab time hai nahi ki dusari banau… isiliye ise abhi tak fad kar feka nahi hai, warna fad ke fek deti... isliye ye painting dete jao…”

“wowww…. Rosie... Among All the things you could have said to me, you chose this …anyway, all the best for the contest and have a nice day” bina peeche mude maine painting wahi neeche gira diya aur garden se baahar ki oor prasthan kiya.

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Garden se nikal kar main wahi gaya, jaha aksar lunch over hone ke pahle jaya karta tha… yaani paani peene… jaha pahle ki maafiq Riya Rose toh nahi thi… lekin uski do saheliya Madhu-Mini jo uske ird-gird ghoomti thi.. wo dono zaroor thi… jisme se ek bachpan se mera botal churate aa rahi thi….

“aee chotti… botal de mujhe… aur hat saamne se”wo R.O. ke paas khadi hokar apne baari ka intezaar kar rahi thi ki maine Madhu ke hath se achanak botal sarkaya... uski pakad dheeli thi, isliye botal mere hath me aa gaya

“chup bhatti… tu botal chor…”

“hato.. hato… Gupta ji ne paani magaya hai…”saamne jhund banaye ladko ko hatane ke liye maine kaha “Shubham… jyada hoshiyari mat jhad… warna Gupta sir ko tera name de dunga naa toh, page number puchh-puchh ke thokenge… samjha… isliye side character hai toh side hee rah... jyada lead role me aane ki koshish mat kar, waise bhi…. lead role waale ko utni power nahi hai is wali me….”

Maine Gupta ji ke naam par apne hath me rakha botal toh bhara hee par jab main botal bhar raha tha toh Madhu ne mujhe apni saheliyo ka bhi botal thama diya… aur jab main Madhu ki saheliyo ka botal bharne laga toh waha mauzood anya log mujhe ghoorne lage, mann hee mann mujhe chodu, laundiyabaaz bhi bolne lage… aur ye mujhe kaise pata….??? Toh jawab hai……

Aiseeeeeee……. 1 point . apne aap par meri taraf se chadha lo. sab koyi....

actually , main bhi unke bare me yahi sochta, yadi meri jagah koyi aur Madhu aur uski saheliyo ka botal bhar raha hota toh…. main bhi unhe chodu aur laundiyabaaz bolta… jo ki abhi filhaal main tha. Madhu ke sath aaj Riya nahi thi, fir bhi unki tikdi aaj bhi thi. Riya ki jagah unke sath ek dusari ladki thi aur fir maine gaur kiya toh paya ki R.O. ke paas jama bheed me jitni bhi ladkiyo ka group tha… wo sab teen ke group the…

“tum sab ladkiya, teen ke group me hee aati ho kya…”

“tu bhi toh Ved ke sath ghoomta rahta hai, bhatti…”ye bolkar wo ek dusare ko taali dekar pagalo ki tarah hasi aur unke baad baaki ki ladkiya bhi… wo sab us din is tarah kyun hasi ...? main aaj tak suspence me hu… kyunki main aur Ved.. 2 hee hue naa...? aur isme hasne ki kaun si baat thi...?

“koyi logic hai teri is baat me ? paglet.. anyway, Riya kyun nahi aayi tere sath… tujhe apne class ki khidki se dekha toh socha ki Riya bhi har din ki tarah tere sath yaha aayi hogi, par wo nahi hai…”

“mujhe follow karta rahta hai kya tu har waqt… “bolkar Madhu aise maje se muskurane lagi, jaise main uski chut me ungali daal kar ahiste-ahiste uski chut hila raha hoon... matlab waisa madak, sexy muskan. par wo us pal kyun muskurayi …. Ye bhi aaj tak mere liye suspence hai…

“jyada khush mat ho… tu Riya ke live location ka landmark hai bas…”

“Riya isliye nahi aayi kyunki uski maa admit hai hospital me… thodi sad hai na toh garden me baithi hai...”

“kyaaa… iski maa ki…. Mera matlab iski maa bhi…. ? iski maa ko kya hua,…”

“kidney stone…”

“fuckkkkk me….”

“ I have a boyfriend…”

“kya baat hai… ab bas koyi ek chaku de de mujhe toh khud hee khud ke seene me ghusa du… tujhse baat karne se jyada aasan wo karna hai…”

“tu depressed hai kya… main ek doctor ko jaanti hu…”

“devi.....”hath jod kar maine Madhu ko chup rahne ka hint diya, par wo hint le hee nahi paayi ..

“Sanskrit kyun bol raha hai tu, ab toh Sanskrit subject bhi nahi hai humara…

“Madhu, please tu yaha se jaa… ya mujhe jaane de… kasam se thodi der aur baat ki na ... tu mujhse toh brain hemohrrhage ho jayega mujhe… ekdum unjheleble hai tu... ”

“kaha jyega… abhi toh school time hai, yadi kisi ne school se bhagte hue dekh liya to complaint kar denge….”

“bas lawda aur nahi jhel sakta main…. Madhu ki maa ki….. jai…”

Main waha se adhmari halaat me jaise-taise Madhu se apni jaan bacha kar bhaga aur daudte hue seedhiya chadhne laga, daudte hue isliye kyunki lunch khatm ho chuka tha aur Sunayana mam aaj bhi nahi aayi thi yaani ki Gupta ji aaj bhi lagatar do period apna prakop dikhane wale the aur main nahi chahta tha ki main aaj late ho jaun aur Gupta ji ko mujhe pelne ka naya mauka mil jaye… isliye main dauda, gand faad dauda…. Rahi baat Riya ki maa ke beemar hone ki toh bada hee wahiyat coincidence tha ye… ki … Riya aur Sanjana , dono jo ki mere dil ke karib thi… kuch jyada hee similarities thi un dono ke beech me… ek toh dono 12th me pad hti thi. Dusara, dono ki height,color wagerah bhi same hee tha. teesara, dono ko hee painting pasand thi aur chautha, un dono ki maa ek hee time me hospital me admit thi… aur sabse aakhiri aur mukhya ye tha…. Ki… un dono par main flat tha… par aisa coincidene main pahli baar nahi sun raha tha… Ved, mujhe ek aise hee coincidence ke bare me ek baar pahle bhi bata chuka tha… tab center point par main nahi tha, balki Ved ka Mausera bhai, Varun tha…. jiske college ki donation wale wakye se inspired hokar maine Sanjana ki maa ke liye paise jode the. Varun BHU se mass communication ki jab degree kar raha tha tab uske sath bhi kuch aisa hua tha….

Ved ke bhai Varun , jo ki ab shayad ek journalist hai, use… uske college me do ladki se pyar hua tha… aur dono Bengali thi, dono hee singer thi , dono ki height same thi yaha tak ki dono saanwali bhi thi… aur un dono se hee Varun ko pyar hua tha…. Baad me kya hua maine nahi puchha aur naa hee Ved ne kabhi bataya… shayad use khud bhi nahi maloom tha…

“ruk… ruk…. Kaha jaa raha hai, itni jaldi me… us din bahut bol gaya tu, a”main jaise hee daudte hue seedhiyo ko paar kiya, Jafar achanak se mere saamne aa kar khada ho gaya... iske paas koyi kaam -dhaam nahi hai kya........................... .................................... lawda...

 

[Naina]

Update-33​

“Rosie, ye toh ekdum perfect hai……”

Par Wo kuch nahi boli….

“naraz hai…? Come on Rosie… itne achchhe ladke ki itni achchhi painting banane ke baad bhi tum mujhse gussa raho…? Aisa ho hee nahi sakta… aur yadi mujhpar gussa hoti toh tum meri painting yaha baithkar complete nahi karti balki ise faad deti… dekha, kya logic lagaya hai maine… de mukke pe mukka…” mukka banakar apna hath maine aage kiya , is aas me ki Ved ke mafiq Riya bhi mukka banakar mast degi... isi bahane use chhu bhi lunga...

Isiliye Daant dikhate hue maine apna hath aage badhaya, par Riya ki taraf se koyi reaction nahi aaya… uske toh chehre ke expression tak nahi badle…

“I’m sorry that I got drunk and said those things……..that I meant…… lol... but shouldn’t have said……. sorry”

bolkar main apne aap me hasa… par jab Riya fir bhi kuch nahi boli toh maine fir hasna band kar diya…. Wo ekdum shant sirf mujhe aur meri harkato ko aise dekhe jaa rahi thi ki... yadi uske hath me abhi koyi khanjar hota toh wo us khanjar ko chup-chap dheere se mere seene ke aar-paar kar deti.... uske , mujhe aise dekhne ke kaaran mere seene me halka –halka imaginary dard bhi hua, jise sahlate hue maine kaha....

“did I really hurt you.. ?"

wo fir kuch nahi boli....

" please, put aside your ego and just.... talk to me…. You know, I’m apologizing to you. But after seeing your reactions... I feel like, I am on a ship in a storm heading towards the rocky shoreand. you can save me from drowning but you...... won’t do it…”English jhadte hue maine kaha ... is aas me ki wo shayad impress ho jaaye... par yaha bhi aasha ki jagah nirasha hee mere hath lagi

Aur Riya ke bhaav ab bhi nahi badle... tab maine haar maan li aur socha ki next plan bana ke next time milunga..... afterall, Riya Rose meri territory hai, yadi yaha bhi haar gaya toh fir laanat hai mujhpe. Isliye main waha se jaane ke liye khada hua...

“ I think I should be get going…”Maine wo painting uthayi aur waha se jaane ke liye aage badha…

“painting maine tumhare liye nahi banayi hai , annual day ke contest ke liye banayi thi, ab time hai nahi ki dusari banau… isiliye ise abhi tak fad kar feka nahi hai, warna fad ke fek deti... isliye ye painting dete jao…”

“wowww…. Rosie... Among All the things you could have said to me, you chose this …anyway, all the best for the contest and have a nice day” bina peeche mude maine painting wahi neeche gira diya aur garden se baahar ki oor prasthan kiya.

are phir se painting gira diya
Maybe wo maaf kar bhi deti.. agar atharva apne sath guru veda ko bhi le aata to wahan par

Garden se nikal kar main wahi gaya, jaha aksar lunch over hone ke pahle jaya karta tha… yaani paani peene… jaha pahle ki maafiq Riya Rose toh nahi thi… lekin uski do saheliya Madhu-Mini jo uske ird-gird ghoomti thi.. wo dono zaroor thi… jisme se ek bachpan se mera botal churate aa rahi thi….

“aee chotti… botal de mujhe… aur hat saamne se”wo R.O. ke paas khadi hokar apne baari ka intezaar kar rahi thi ki maine Madhu ke hath se achanak botal sarkaya... uski pakad dheeli thi, isliye botal mere hath me aa gaya

“chup bhatti… tu botal chor…”

“hato.. hato… Gupta ji ne paani magaya hai…”saamne jhund banaye ladko ko hatane ke liye maine kaha “Shubham… jyada hoshiyari mat jhad… warna Gupta sir ko tera name de dunga naa toh, page number puchh-puchh ke thokenge… samjha… isliye side character hai toh side hee rah... jyada lead role me aane ki koshish mat kar, waise bhi…. lead role waale ko utni power nahi hai is wali me….”

side character
ye atharva jab botal mein pani bharne aata hai tab hi itne bhayanakar ideas kyun dimag aata hai
ush din saanp.. aaj Gupta ji....

Maine Gupta ji ke naam par apne hath me rakha botal toh bhara hee par jab main botal bhar raha tha toh Madhu ne mujhe apni saheliyo ka bhi botal thama diya… aur jab main Madhu ki saheliyo ka botal bharne laga toh waha mauzood anya log mujhe ghoorne lage, mann hee mann mujhe chodu, laundiyabaaz bhi bolne lage… aur ye mujhe kaise pata….??? Toh jawab hai……

Aiseeeeeee……. 1 point . apne aap par meri taraf se chadha lo. sab koyi....

actually , main bhi unke bare me yahi sochta, yadi meri jagah koyi aur Madhu aur uski saheliyo ka botal bhar raha hota toh…. main bhi unhe chodu aur laundiyabaaz bolta… jo ki abhi filhaal main tha. Madhu ke sath aaj Riya nahi thi, fir bhi unki tikdi aaj bhi thi. Riya ki jagah unke sath ek dusari ladki thi aur fir maine gaur kiya toh paya ki R.O. ke paas jama bheed me jitni bhi ladkiyo ka group tha… wo sab teen ke group the…

“tum sab ladkiya, teen ke group me hee aati ho kya…”

“tu bhi toh Ved ke sath ghoomta rahta hai, bhatti…”ye bolkar wo ek dusare ko taali dekar pagalo ki tarah hasi aur unke baad baaki ki ladkiya bhi… wo sab us din is tarah kyun hasi ...? main aaj tak suspence me hu… kyunki main aur Ved.. 2 hee hue naa...? aur isme hasne ki kaun si baat thi...?

“koyi logic hai teri is baat me ? paglet.. anyway, Riya kyun nahi aayi tere sath… tujhe apne class ki khidki se dekha toh socha ki Riya bhi har din ki tarah tere sath yaha aayi hogi, par wo nahi hai…”

“mujhe follow karta rahta hai kya tu har waqt… “bolkar Madhu aise maje se muskurane lagi, jaise main uski chut me ungali daal kar ahiste-ahiste uski chut hila raha hoon... matlab waisa madak, sexy muskan. par wo us pal kyun muskurayi …. Ye bhi aaj tak mere liye suspence hai…

“jyada khush mat ho… tu Riya ke live location ka landmark hai bas…”

“Riya isliye nahi aayi kyunki uski maa admit hai hospital me… thodi sad hai na toh garden me baithi hai...”

“kyaaa… iski maa ki…. Mera matlab iski maa bhi…. ? iski maa ko kya hua,…”

“kidney stone…”

“fuckkkkk me….”

“ I have a boyfriend…”

“kya baat hai… ab bas koyi ek chaku de de mujhe toh khud hee khud ke seene me ghusa du… tujhse baat karne se jyada aasan wo karna hai…”

“tu depressed hai kya… main ek doctor ko jaanti hu…”

“devi.....”hath jod kar maine Madhu ko chup rahne ka hint diya, par wo hint le hee nahi paayi ..

“Sanskrit kyun bol raha hai tu, ab toh Sanskrit subject bhi nahi hai humara…

“Madhu, please tu yaha se jaa… ya mujhe jaane de… kasam se thodi der aur baat ki na ... tu mujhse toh brain hemohrrhage ho jayega mujhe… ekdum unjheleble hai tu... ”

“kaha jyega… abhi toh school time hai, yadi kisi ne school se bhagte hue dekh liya to complaint kar denge….”

“bas lawda aur nahi jhel sakta main…. Madhu ki maa ki….. jai…”

sabko pareshan karne wala aaj khud hi pareshan ho gaya.... riya ki mom bhi admit hospital mein...
shayad ab atharva ko jo paise jama huye the, usko sanjana aur riya ko de dena chahiye..

Main waha se adhmari halaat me jaise-taise Madhu se apni jaan bacha kar bhaga aur daudte hue seedhiya chadhne laga, daudte hue isliye kyunki lunch khatm ho chuka tha aur Sunayana mam aaj bhi nahi aayi thi yaani ki Gupta ji aaj bhi lagatar do period apna prakop dikhane wale the aur main nahi chahta tha ki main aaj late ho jaun aur Gupta ji ko mujhe pelne ka naya mauka mil jaye… isliye main dauda, gand faad dauda…. Rahi baat Riya ki maa ke beemar hone ki toh bada hee wahiyat coincidence tha ye… ki … Riya aur Sanjana , dono jo ki mere dil ke karib thi… kuch jyada hee similarities thi un dono ke beech me… ek toh dono 12th me pad hti thi. Dusara, dono ki height,color wagerah bhi same hee tha. teesara, dono ko hee painting pasand thi aur chautha, un dono ki maa ek hee time me hospital me admit thi… aur sabse aakhiri aur mukhya ye tha…. Ki… un dono par main flat tha… par aisa coincidene main pahli baar nahi sun raha tha… Ved, mujhe ek aise hee coincidence ke bare me ek baar pahle bhi bata chuka tha… tab center point par main nahi tha, balki Ved ka Mausera bhai, Varun tha…. jiske college ki donation wale wakye se inspired hokar maine Sanjana ki maa ke liye paise jode the. Varun BHU se mass communication ki jab degree kar raha tha tab uske sath bhi kuch aisa hua tha….

Ved ke bhai Varun , jo ki ab shayad ek journalist hai, use… uske college me do ladki se pyar hua tha… aur dono Bengali thi, dono hee singer thi , dono ki height same thi yaha tak ki dono saanwali bhi thi… aur un dono se hee Varun ko pyar hua tha…. Baad me kya hua maine nahi puchha aur naa hee Ved ne kabhi bataya… shayad use khud bhi nahi maloom tha…

jis tarah se hadbadi jaa raha tha, lage ki riya ko milne ground pe jaa raha... par nahi janab class ki aurr bhag raha hai... kyunki Sunayan mam ki jagah aaj class lenge Gupta ji

“ruk… ruk…. Kaha jaa raha hai, itni jaldi me… us din bahut bol gaya tu, a”main jaise hee daudte hue seedhiyo ko paar kiya, Jafar achanak se mere saamne aa kar khada ho gaya... iske paas koyi kaam -dhaam nahi hai kya........................... .................................... lawda...

are ye phir se side character bhide lead character se... itni mazal...
Kyun na guru veda aur atharva milke pehle kuch aisa planning kare ki yeh Jafar Gupta ji ke hatthe chhad jaaye... ya aisa kuch kar de jiske chalte Gupta ji Jafar ko jaani dusman maan baithe
Atharva ko uska kissa hi khatam kar dena chahiye.. ye roj roj jhik jhik koun sahe
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills gyani sir

 

[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

nice and beautiful update ..

Great writing skills ...

 

[Naina]

waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting for next update

 

[Daredevil420]

Update-33​

“Rosie, ye toh ekdum perfect hai……”

Par Wo kuch nahi boli….

“naraz hai…? Come on Rosie… itne achchhe ladke ki itni achchhi painting banane ke baad bhi tum mujhse gussa raho…? Aisa ho hee nahi sakta… aur yadi mujhpar gussa hoti toh tum meri painting yaha baithkar complete nahi karti balki ise faad deti… dekha, kya logic lagaya hai maine… de mukke pe mukka…” mukka banakar apna hath maine aage kiya , is aas me ki Ved ke mafiq Riya bhi mukka banakar mast degi... isi bahane use chhu bhi lunga...

Isiliye Daant dikhate hue maine apna hath aage badhaya, par Riya ki taraf se koyi reaction nahi aaya… uske toh chehre ke expression tak nahi badle…

“I’m sorry that I got drunk and said those things……..that I meant…… lol... but shouldn’t have said……. sorry”

bolkar main apne aap me hasa… par jab Riya fir bhi kuch nahi boli toh maine fir hasna band kar diya…. Wo ekdum shant sirf mujhe aur meri harkato ko aise dekhe jaa rahi thi ki... yadi uske hath me abhi koyi khanjar hota toh wo us khanjar ko chup-chap dheere se mere seene ke aar-paar kar deti.... uske , mujhe aise dekhne ke kaaran mere seene me halka –halka imaginary dard bhi hua, jise sahlate hue maine kaha....

“did I really hurt you.. ?"

wo fir kuch nahi boli....

" please, put aside your ego and just.... talk to me…. You know, I’m apologizing to you. But after seeing your reactions... I feel like, I am on a ship in a storm heading towards the rocky shoreand. you can save me from drowning but you...... won’t do it…”English jhadte hue maine kaha ... is aas me ki wo shayad impress ho jaaye... par yaha bhi aasha ki jagah nirasha hee mere hath lagi

Aur Riya ke bhaav ab bhi nahi badle... tab maine haar maan li aur socha ki next plan bana ke next time milunga..... afterall, Riya Rose meri territory hai, yadi yaha bhi haar gaya toh fir laanat hai mujhpe. Isliye main waha se jaane ke liye khada hua...

“ I think I should be get going…”Maine wo painting uthayi aur waha se jaane ke liye aage badha…

“painting maine tumhare liye nahi banayi hai , annual day ke contest ke liye banayi thi, ab time hai nahi ki dusari banau… isiliye ise abhi tak fad kar feka nahi hai, warna fad ke fek deti... isliye ye painting dete jao…”

“wowww…. Rosie... Among All the things you could have said to me, you chose this …anyway, all the best for the contest and have a nice day” bina peeche mude maine painting wahi neeche gira diya aur garden se baahar ki oor prasthan kiya.

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Garden se nikal kar main wahi gaya, jaha aksar lunch over hone ke pahle jaya karta tha… yaani paani peene… jaha pahle ki maafiq Riya Rose toh nahi thi… lekin uski do saheliya Madhu-Mini jo uske ird-gird ghoomti thi.. wo dono zaroor thi… jisme se ek bachpan se mera botal churate aa rahi thi….

“aee chotti… botal de mujhe… aur hat saamne se”wo R.O. ke paas khadi hokar apne baari ka intezaar kar rahi thi ki maine Madhu ke hath se achanak botal sarkaya... uski pakad dheeli thi, isliye botal mere hath me aa gaya

“chup bhatti… tu botal chor…”

“hato.. hato… Gupta ji ne paani magaya hai…”saamne jhund banaye ladko ko hatane ke liye maine kaha “Shubham… jyada hoshiyari mat jhad… warna Gupta sir ko tera name de dunga naa toh, page number puchh-puchh ke thokenge… samjha… isliye side character hai toh side hee rah... jyada lead role me aane ki koshish mat kar, waise bhi…. lead role waale ko utni power nahi hai is wali me….”

Maine Gupta ji ke naam par apne hath me rakha botal toh bhara hee par jab main botal bhar raha tha toh Madhu ne mujhe apni saheliyo ka bhi botal thama diya… aur jab main Madhu ki saheliyo ka botal bharne laga toh waha mauzood anya log mujhe ghoorne lage, mann hee mann mujhe chodu, laundiyabaaz bhi bolne lage… aur ye mujhe kaise pata….??? Toh jawab hai……

Aiseeeeeee……. 1 point . apne aap par meri taraf se chadha lo. sab koyi....

actually , main bhi unke bare me yahi sochta, yadi meri jagah koyi aur Madhu aur uski saheliyo ka botal bhar raha hota toh…. main bhi unhe chodu aur laundiyabaaz bolta… jo ki abhi filhaal main tha. Madhu ke sath aaj Riya nahi thi, fir bhi unki tikdi aaj bhi thi. Riya ki jagah unke sath ek dusari ladki thi aur fir maine gaur kiya toh paya ki R.O. ke paas jama bheed me jitni bhi ladkiyo ka group tha… wo sab teen ke group the…

“tum sab ladkiya, teen ke group me hee aati ho kya…”

“tu bhi toh Ved ke sath ghoomta rahta hai, bhatti…”ye bolkar wo ek dusare ko taali dekar pagalo ki tarah hasi aur unke baad baaki ki ladkiya bhi… wo sab us din is tarah kyun hasi ...? main aaj tak suspence me hu… kyunki main aur Ved.. 2 hee hue naa...? aur isme hasne ki kaun si baat thi...?

“koyi logic hai teri is baat me ? paglet.. anyway, Riya kyun nahi aayi tere sath… tujhe apne class ki khidki se dekha toh socha ki Riya bhi har din ki tarah tere sath yaha aayi hogi, par wo nahi hai…”

“mujhe follow karta rahta hai kya tu har waqt… “bolkar Madhu aise maje se muskurane lagi, jaise main uski chut me ungali daal kar ahiste-ahiste uski chut hila raha hoon... matlab waisa madak, sexy muskan. par wo us pal kyun muskurayi …. Ye bhi aaj tak mere liye suspence hai…

“jyada khush mat ho… tu Riya ke live location ka landmark hai bas…”

“Riya isliye nahi aayi kyunki uski maa admit hai hospital me… thodi sad hai na toh garden me baithi hai...”

“kyaaa… iski maa ki…. Mera matlab iski maa bhi…. ? iski maa ko kya hua,…”

“kidney stone…”

“fuckkkkk me….”

“ I have a boyfriend…”

“kya baat hai… ab bas koyi ek chaku de de mujhe toh khud hee khud ke seene me ghusa du… tujhse baat karne se jyada aasan wo karna hai…”

“tu depressed hai kya… main ek doctor ko jaanti hu…”

“devi.....”hath jod kar maine Madhu ko chup rahne ka hint diya, par wo hint le hee nahi paayi ..

“Sanskrit kyun bol raha hai tu, ab toh Sanskrit subject bhi nahi hai humara…

“Madhu, please tu yaha se jaa… ya mujhe jaane de… kasam se thodi der aur baat ki na ... tu mujhse toh brain hemohrrhage ho jayega mujhe… ekdum unjheleble hai tu... ”

“kaha jyega… abhi toh school time hai, yadi kisi ne school se bhagte hue dekh liya to complaint kar denge….”

“bas lawda aur nahi jhel sakta main…. Madhu ki maa ki….. jai…”

Main waha se adhmari halaat me jaise-taise Madhu se apni jaan bacha kar bhaga aur daudte hue seedhiya chadhne laga, daudte hue isliye kyunki lunch khatm ho chuka tha aur Sunayana mam aaj bhi nahi aayi thi yaani ki Gupta ji aaj bhi lagatar do period apna prakop dikhane wale the aur main nahi chahta tha ki main aaj late ho jaun aur Gupta ji ko mujhe pelne ka naya mauka mil jaye… isliye main dauda, gand faad dauda…. Rahi baat Riya ki maa ke beemar hone ki toh bada hee wahiyat coincidence tha ye… ki … Riya aur Sanjana , dono jo ki mere dil ke karib thi… kuch jyada hee similarities thi un dono ke beech me… ek toh dono 12th me pad hti thi. Dusara, dono ki height,color wagerah bhi same hee tha. teesara, dono ko hee painting pasand thi aur chautha, un dono ki maa ek hee time me hospital me admit thi… aur sabse aakhiri aur mukhya ye tha…. Ki… un dono par main flat tha… par aisa coincidene main pahli baar nahi sun raha tha… Ved, mujhe ek aise hee coincidence ke bare me ek baar pahle bhi bata chuka tha… tab center point par main nahi tha, balki Ved ka Mausera bhai, Varun tha…. jiske college ki donation wale wakye se inspired hokar maine Sanjana ki maa ke liye paise jode the. Varun BHU se mass communication ki jab degree kar raha tha tab uske sath bhi kuch aisa hua tha….

Ved ke bhai Varun , jo ki ab shayad ek journalist hai, use… uske college me do ladki se pyar hua tha… aur dono Bengali thi, dono hee singer thi , dono ki height same thi yaha tak ki dono saanwali bhi thi… aur un dono se hee Varun ko pyar hua tha…. Baad me kya hua maine nahi puchha aur naa hee Ved ne kabhi bataya… shayad use khud bhi nahi maloom tha…

“ruk… ruk…. Kaha jaa raha hai, itni jaldi me… us din bahut bol gaya tu, a”main jaise hee daudte hue seedhiyo ko paar kiya, Jafar achanak se mere saamne aa kar khada ho gaya... iske paas koyi kaam -dhaam nahi hai kya........................... .................................... lawda...

Aab me 100% sure hu yeh kahani 8th semester series ka hi hissa hai. 8th semester ka sare character kuch , kuch kissa hai isme...
Yeh varun bhi 8th semester me journalist tha, arman ka school life ka thoda bahut baate...
Baad me atharva aur ved arman ke hi collage me hi admission lenge sure hai kyunki atmakami ke last me jab arman wapas apna hostel aata hai to atharva-ved se milta hai.

 

[Aakash.]

While reading the update, I felt that Atharva was making his own joke in front of Riya, Riya is a bit upset because her mother is ill, so if Atharva makes her feel light, she will be better and also forgive him. Girls are impossible to understand. Break the face of Zafar this time.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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[The_Punisher]

Update-29​

“kyaaa… kaun si maal… tum dono…? tum dono kab aaye…”Ranjan chauka…

“maine puchha… koyi maal hai kya bahar , jise tu itna magan hokar dekh raha hai…”

“maal nahi yar… wo medical store dekh raha hu…”

“kyun pregnant hai kya…tu ”

“tu bhosdike 1 minute ke liye shaant nahi ho sakta…”khisiya kar maine Ved ke peeth me ek mukka ghuma ke diya...

“arey chhod usko bhatti… use books aur ladki ke chhed ke siwa kuch dikhta hee kaha hai… main toh apne sapne ko dekh raha tha… wo dekh... wo jo medical store hai na… mujhe bhi waisich ek medical store kholne ka hai… aur jo bullet khadi hai, uske dukaan ke bahar… Interceptor …. Wo bhi lunga main…. Apni favourite hai. Bas school khatm ho, fir pharma karunga…. Papa toh dukan bhi dekh chuke hai , jaha medical store rahega mera… jyada bade sapne nahi hai mere… bas ek medical store, interceptor bike aur fir Rewa ki kisi tej-tarrar ladki se shadi…. Jo mere papa tak ko chamka de, jab wo jyada daru piye toh.... Is-se jyada kuch nahi chahiye mujhe…”

“Ved… dekh le… iska toh clear hai… tu kya karega…?”

"jo tu karega....”

“matlab sari zindagi point chadhata rahega mere upar…”

“point se yaad aaya… Ranjan…. tu ek baar me mujh jaise kitne ladko ko maar sakta hai…”

“kyun….”Ranjan ne puchha

“bata na…”

“teen...... maybe chaar…”

“itni beizzaati… khair… sun”Ved ne Ranjan ko meri puri vyatha batayi… jise sunne ke baad Ranjan ne lunch me milne ke liye kaha aur wapas se school ke baahar Medical Store ko dekhte hue apne sapne bunne laga

Main aur Ved aapas me yahi planning karte hue waha se apni class ki taraf badhe ki 12th ke baad hum dono kya karenge. Ab hum Gupta ji se bachne ki bajay ye planning kar rahe the ki college me hum log hostel me rahenge ya fir baahar kahi room lekar... Ved ka kahna tha ki baahar room lekar rahenge , ekdum kone me, kisi nirjan sthan me... taaki ladkiyo ko laakar chodne me koyi aana-kaani naa ho , jispar maine kaha ki... uske liye pahle ladki patani padegi... yaha toh pat nahi rahi, jaha dab-daba hai... college me kya khaak kuch hoga hum dono se.... jiska solution Ved ne ye nikala ki...

“yadi aisa hai toh randi laakar chodenge.... kaaunnn hai be lawww...Miraaaa… tum.. heyy.. kaisi ho...”apna sar sahlate hue Ved ne kaha…

Hum dono aapas me planning karne me itna magan the ki pata nahi kaise, kab Mira Ved se jaa takrayi.... Mira ka sar seedhe Ved ke sar se jaa bhida... Mira shayad jaldi me thi

“dekh ke nahi chal sakta… andha hai kya…”

“Mira , you alright….? Is there something I can do…?”

Aur jaise hee Ved ne ye kaha main Ved ki taraf dekha… itna achchha kab se ho gaya bhai tu…

“just…bugg off….”apna sar sahlate hue Mira chillayi

“Mira , is something bothering you.. what can I do to help out…? Just tell me and consider it done...”

“really…?”main fir ashcharyachakit hokar Ved ki taraf dekha aur mera dimag fir mujhse chilla kar puchha ki… ye itna achchha kabse ho gaya

“come on, Mira… let’s go for coffee and hot chocolate after school and then you can tell me about all your problems… “

Jiske baad main ek baar fir Ved ki taraf aankhe faad kar dekha aur mera dimag fir se.............ye lauda… itna achchha………….

“paise hai Ved, tere paas Hot chocolate ka...? Aur Atharva, paise toh tune le liye… mera kaam kab karega tu…”

“karta hu na.. bas thoda time mil jaye…”

“Mira tu Atharva ko chhod, mujhe bata… main tujhe padha dunga… jab bhi tu kahe , jaha bhi tu kahe…”

“you just want to put your dick in my ass… wanker… just fuck off…”bolkar Mira waha se chali gayi…

“beizzati… oops…”Mira ke jaane ke baad main bola

“kya hai lawda , topper ki izzat hee nahi hai koyi…. Isiliye bharat desh tarakki nahi kar paa raha, in jaisi ladkiyo ki vazah se. inhi jaisi ladkiyo ke kaaran bharat desh ka talent ISRO ki baajay NASA chalaa jaata hai aur tu kya daant faad raha hai... chal class seedhe…”


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Main aur Ved class me aaye… jaha Bulla, humara class teacher attendance register khole baitha hua tha… humare class teacher ka actual naam kuch aur hee tha.. par ladko ne uska naam Bulla rakh diyaa tha… kyun…? Pata nahi… humse pahle padhne walo ne ye naam uska rakha tha… jo aaj tak use ho raha tha. Bulla thoda-thoda Gupta ji ki tarah hee satka hua tha… use koyi bas disturb kar de attendance lete time… fir wo jhuka ke mukke pe mukka maarta tha… Gupta ki tarah full satkela toh nahi tha par furtila baahut thaa... ekdum ek second me aapni chair se uthkar, daudte hue jisko pelna hai, uske paas jaata aur use pel kar ek second khatm hone se pahle hee wapas apni jagah par aakar baith jaata. Maar khaane wale ko kuch der baad maloom chalta ki wo maar kha chuka hi. Bulla Gupta ji ki tarah satka toh nahi tha, fir bhi use Gupta ji Lite bol sakte hai… upar se daityo jaisi uski moti aawaz…. Tha toh wo machchar ki tarah dubla-patla par uski aawaz bhayankar moti thi….

“sir , may I come in…”maine puchha…

“kaha ghoom raha tha , abhi tak….”moti aawaz me Bulla ne puchha..

“wo sir, quiz competition se related kuch doubts tha toh principal sir ke office me tha…”

“principal office se toh main aa raha hu… tu waha kaha tha… jhooth bolta hai nalayak… chal aa andar… baith…”

Hum dono andar aakar baith gaye aur Bulla chair me hil-hil ke attendance lene laga… Bulla ki ek aadat thi ki attendance lete samay wo apni chair saamne wale desk ke paas khiska leta aur us desk me apne pair ko support dekar dheere-dheere hilte hue attendance leta tha… jiske karan… wo toh hilta hee tha… saamne wala desk bhi pure attendance ke dauran hilti rahti thi … shuru-shuru me hume yahi lagta ya fir jo new students the...unhe yahi lagta ki .. Bulla saamne baitha mutth mar raha hai.

Ved… present sir…

Vikash… yes sir…

Vimal… yes sir…..

Bulla apni hee dhun me mast hilte hue haziri le raha tha ki tabhi ek ladka beech me bol pada….

“sir… mera naam chhoot gaya….Vilom”

Bas itna hee bolna tha ki Bulla apni jagah se utha aur daudte hue turant Vilom ke paas gaya , use jhukaya aur do mukka uske peeth me pelkar, wapas dudte hue saamne apni chair par baith fir se attendance lene laga...

“aaayyyyyiiiiiiiiiii” mukka khane ke baad apni peeth sahlate hue Vilom cheekha… tab tak Bulla saamne apni chair par baith chuka tha..

“attendance lete samay disturb karta hai, nalayak… chal baith…”

Bulla ne jab Vilom ke peeth ko pyar se sahlaya tha, tab Vikas aur Vimal has pade the… hasi toh puri class thi.. par starting unhi dono ne ki thi… jise Bulla ne dekh liya tha par bina kuch bole wapas apni chair par gaya aur attendance lene laga…

Ranjan ke character ke baare me jo shuru me bataya tha uska character bilkul viparit hai khamkha badnaam karke rakha hai usko
Bichara Ved bas madad hi to karna chahata tha par ye ladkinyon ko jafar jaise fcukboys hi ache lagte hai sache pyar ki koi kimat hi nahi hai
Nice update lekin thoda chhota laga iss baar

 

[harshit1890]

Update - 16

Doston ki har baat par party magne ki adat, sadiyun se chali aa rahi hai. Hum bhi fakad the ek jamane mein aur dusron se partiyan manga karte the pr deta aaj tak koi nahi hai Bhai apne bilkul sahi likha, Ranjan wala jo scene tha vo bahut hi badia laga, Aur jo usne ek line kahi jo atharva ke jeevan mein chap gayi mere ko bhi kuch kuch aisach realization hota hai. Jada kuch nahi kahunga update thoda maskari aur ek chota sa parah seekh dekar jata hai. Insan ki ameeri/garibi hi decide karti hai ki kisko dost banan hai kisko nahi aur ye sikh koi aur nahi balki skulke teacher aur khud ke gharwale hi dete hai Behtarin update tha gyani bhai

 

[harshit1890]

Update - 17

Bahut hi pyara update tha bhai... I mean bahut pyara, Sanjana ho na ho kahin na ahin atharva ko dost se jada manti hai ya fir dost hi ladkiyu ka samajh nahi ata. Par ye update mein ek aie ki taraf saaf purity thi is relation mein. Bhale hi jo bhi jhagda ho par dono ke bich ka rishta apne ko bada pasnd aya. Vaise to shuruwat riya ki request ke sath hui jiske jaalne ke chkar mein hero sanjana ke pas gaya aur mere ko lagta hai ki vo jali bhi hogi, ladkiyun ki tendency. Lekin bhaiapne jis tarah se likha hai vo mere ko na fir touchy wali feeling de gaya jo ki reality se jodta hai... Aap ek numberke guru hain sirji... guru dev.... Behatrin update tha... bhai...