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Isme itna dukhi hone ki baat nahi starting mein aisa ho hota hai jaise jaise story badhegi readers log apne aap REVIEW denge bas aap apna kaam karo, readers apna kaam khud kar denge, and 12 page mein 15k views sahi to jaa rahi hai storySTORY NOT CONTINUE Sorry Friends I will Quit this Fouram Because Hamne Bhut mehnat ki per koi proper response nahi na jyada view no comment bas 4-6 log hi padte aur bas like karke formerly poore karte na hi koi suggestion plot ke bare me .there . Again thx 3-4 log jo jude but baki bas padke like.??
Kal Sunday 4 -5 bade update ke bad no response

THX FOR SUGGESITION BUT LOG PADTE HAI NA TO KUCH BOLTE BASIsme itna dukhi hone ki baat nahi starting mein aisa ho hota hai jaise jaise story badhegi readers log apne aap REVIEW denge bas aap apna kaam karo, readers apna kaam khud kar denge, and 12 page mein 15k views sahi to jaa rahi hai story
Aur sab ki apni apni choice hai kisi ko ganng bang pasand aata kisi ko nahi
Btw achi hai aapki story![]()
THX FOR YASH JI LOG PADTE KAM PER CHAT JYADA BOLTE HUM ME AUR MERE HUSBAND LONDON SE ABHI LOCKDOWN SE YAHAAN RUKE FLYTE OPEN HONE PER WAPAS WORKING FROM THERE HUM DONO LIKHTE STORY BUT MERI STORY ME WRITING HUSBAND KI TO HUM LOG TIME PASS BUT LOG OTHER ME LETE NA KOI COMMENT NA KOI SUGGESION KI PLOT AAGE KA AAP SABHI LIKHTE MENE DEKHA MEHNAT LAGTI HAI PER LOG NAHI SAMJHTE MEHNAT AAP 4-5 LOG HOSLA DETE BARABAR SO AGAIN THX HUMARI TARF SE AAP SABHI KO.Sarla G Kuch bhi Soch ne se pehle story Ka view Dekh ligiya ga
or rahi baat close ker ne ki aap bhi oron ki tarah mat ho jao plz
last main sirf itna kahunga ki Mehnnat Ka fal humesh milta hai
Baki aap Samajh daar ho
I think unhe bolne ke liye kuch masala nahi mil raha hoga isliye kuch masaledaar add bhi karo isme, like thrill action, kuch aisa add karo jisse readers log relate kar sake thoda attract ho sake, sirf sex hi sex to sab likhte haiTHX FOR SUGGESITION BUT LOG PADTE HAI NA TO KUCH BOLTE BAS

THX FOR YASH JI LOG PADTE KAM PER CHAT JYADA BOLTE HUM ME AUR MERE HUSBAND LONDON SE ABHI LOCKDOWN SE YAHAAN RUKE FLYTE OPEN HONE PER WAPAS WORKING FROM THERE HUM DONO LIKHTE STORY BUT MERI STORY ME WRITING HUSBAND KI TO HUM LOG TIME PASS BUT LOG OTHER ME LETE NA KOI COMMENT NA KOI SUGGESION KI PLOT AAGE KA AAP SABHI LIKHTE MENE DEKHA MEHNAT LAGTI HAI PER LOG NAHI SAMJHTE MEHNAT AAP 4-5 LOG HOSLA DETE BARABAR SO AGAIN THX HUMARI TARF SE AAP SABHI KO.
YASH JI THX FOR COMPLIMENTS HOSLA BADANE OK I WILL WRITE UPDATE 16 JALDI HI AUR 15 UPDATE KO BHI MERZ KAR BIG UPDATE KAR DIYA JAB TAK HUM YAHAAN HAI KOSISH YAHI KI ACHA ENJOY HO AAP SABHI KA THX.
Is post ko edit kar hata de mene post changIsme itna dukhi hone ki baat nahi starting mein aisa ho hota hai jaise jaise story badhegi readers log apne aap REVIEW denge bas aap apna kaam karo, readers apna kaam khud kar denge, and 12 page mein 15k views sahi to jaa rahi hai story
Aur sab ki apni apni choice hai kisi ko ganng bang pasand aata kisi ko nahi
Btw achi hai aapki story![]()