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Fantasy Kaisa Yeh Ishq Hai.... Ajab Sa Risk Hai...... (Completed)

Naina

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Niachal apni baat kah'kar wahin baith gaya aur raja apne kabil log ko bhej'kar apne bete ko turant hajir hone ke liye kahne laga… lagbhag 3 minute baad wo ladka Nischal ke samne khada tha..


Nischal:- Tum hi HuYu ho..


HuYu:- Haam main hi HuYu hun..


Nischal:- Ek shasak ke bete ho'kar chori karte tunhe acha lagta hai kya..


HuYu:- Mujhe kis baat ki sharm aani chahiye.... jab main akele sari suraksha bhed'kar koi saman churata hun to uska alag hi maza hota hai…


Nischal:- Tumne dileri se nahi balki chhal se wo saman Churaya hai… Baat aage mat badhao aur Serin se jo kuch bhi liya, hai usse wapas kar do..


HuYu ka chehra khil gaya jab wo Serin ka naam suna….. "Mujhe laga wo khud aayegi, lekin dekho to kise bhej diya, apne half blood ko, jo apne hi desh ka bhagoda hai".


Raja, turant apne bete ko ek thappad marte… "Sahjada nadan hai ye, jane do isse … main sara saman wapas lakar deta hun..


Ek thappad khane ke baad HuYu apne gale se ek locket nikala, jiske niche ek khubsurat pendent laga tha… "Yahi hai na wo saman… Maine apni mehnat se ye saman hasil kiya hai.. tum apni mehnat se ise le"…


Wo HuYu shayad khud par jyada hi bhadosa kar baitha… jabtak wo aakhri ke shabd kahta .. "le jao".. uss se pahle hi Nichal apna saman le ja chuka tha aur wo HuYu 60 fit unche jhumar par latka hua tha…. "Kisi ke kahne par mai tumhe bina saja diye huye ja raha hun, warna tera baap bhi kuch ukhad na pata"..


Okatey:- Sahjada aap ka kaam ho gaya na, aap jaeye..


Nischal:- Raja isse ache se samjhao ki jab mai pahli baar yahan aaya tha to kya hua tha… dobara tera ye kapoot mere najron ke samne aaya to isse le jakar universe ke dusre chhod par fenk aaunga…


Nischal apna kaam khatm karke 5 sone ka sikka raja ko aur 5 Okatey ko dete huye kahne laga.. "Ye dhatu tumhare bete ki mehnat aur Okatey tunhare saman ke nuksan ke liye hai. Aur haan raja apne bete ko samjhao, jab log gusse me ho to jyada nahi bola karte hai"… Nischal apni baat kahkar wapas viman me aa gaya aur uske thodi der baad Nandni aur Ansh bhi wapas aaye, aur un dono ko chhodne puri bhid aayi thi…


Nischal, Viman ko upar leta.. "Kya baat hai ek taraf hot ladkon ki line to dusri ore sexy ladkiyan wo bhi aada trichha kapdon me.


Nandni:- Hihihihihi… Ansh to sharma raha tha Nischal… aree mauka mila tha aur culture yahan ka aisa hai, fir itna sharmane ki kya jaroorat…


Nischal:- Oh jaisa desh waisa bhesh…. Lekin ye ye bhid tum dono ko bye-bye kyon karne aayi thi…


Ansh:- Nandu sabke samne mere honth ko chumti hui kahne lagi ki yadi main iske sath dance nahi kiya to ye kisi bhi hot ladke ko pakad kar dance karne shuru kar degi… maine dance kiya..


Nischal:- Dance kiya wo bhi yahan … hahaha..


Ansh:- Abhi to puri baat batayi bhi nahi maine..


Nischal:- Fir bhi main jaan gaya na… yahan ke jawan joshiley tum dono ka kartab dekh kar unhe sikhane ki jid kiye honge… bahut pyare log hai ye… inhe jo bhi acha lagta hai samne se jid karke sikh lete hain…


Nandni:- Acha, aur tumne kya sikhaya in logon ko..


Nischal:- Yahi ki mujh se kuch mat sikhna..


Kuch hi der me Nischal apne mukhya viman me tha.. aur wo pendent ko le jakar control room me kadi suraksha ke bich rakh diya..


Decca ghumkar aane ke baad har koi 2 jaam lekar aaram se so gaya. Nandni sone jane se pahle Nischal ko cheta kar gayi ki abhi uski kahani adhuri hai aur kal subah puri kar de.. Nischal mukurate huye haan kaha aur wo bhi chala gaya sone…


Subah ke waqt Nandni aur Ansh kafi der se jage. Dono fresh hokar jab hall area me aaye, tab dono ke liye nasta pahle se laga hua tha…. Ansh, Nandni ke ore dekh'kar muskurate huye Nischal se kahne laga… "Sorry hum late ho gaye"..


Nischal:- Koi baat nahi, raat 1 baje tak to maine bhi live show dekha tha, fir socha ki so jata hun kyonki tum dono to…


Nischal abhi "to-to" hi kar raha tha tabhi ek jordar jhatka laga aur wo jakar sidha diwar se takrakar niche gira… Nandni muskurati hui Nischal ko dekh kar puchhne lagi… "Baby kuch live show ke bare me kah rahe the.. batao na.. waise kaisi thi huamri performance"..


Ansh, Nandni ke ore jaise hi hairani se dekha… "Oh mare hubby ko kuch samjh me nahi aaya.. Ansh baby idhar aao samjhati hun"..


Ansh jaise hi uske pass jane laga… "Mat jao Ansh.. nahi.. ruk jao..".. Nischal mana karne laga lekin tabtak Ansh, Nandni ke karib pahunch chuka tha. Jhatka usko to Nischal ke muakable kuch bhi nahi laga, lekin haal Nischal jaisa hi tha aur wo bhi Nischal ke pass para tha..


Ansh:- Isse bhut chadh gaya ya koi daivik shakti lekar lauti hai Decca se..


Nandni:- Kamine Ansh tumhe sharm nahi aayi, chhichhodon ki tarah muskura'kar meri ore dekhte huye uss kaminey Nischal se baat kar rahe the... Darwaja khol'kar room me hi bulan lete kamre me aur der hone ki wajah bhi dikha hi dete. Mere pass bhi tum fatke na Ansh to abhi jaisa haal kar dungi.. aur kaminey Nischal, Jisa ko aane de fir teri harkaten batati hun..


Nandni gusse me wahan se chali gayi.. Ansh kamar me haath diye khada ho'kar… "Abe sant mahatma.. jo dekha usse apne tak rakhna tha na.. waise sharm na aayi apne dost ko aisa karte dekh".


Nischal:- Abe pagal mujhe kya sapna aaya tha ki tum dono 1 baje tak lage ho ki 4 baje tak.. maine to uddta tir chhoda tha..


Ansh:- Wo Rajnikanth ki fan nikli.. ussi tir ke 2 hisse karke ek tumhare aur ek mere pichhwade ghusa di.. aur ye bencho bijli ka jhatka kahan se uske hatho se lag raha hai..


Nischal:- Dr gusse me aur kaun kaun si gali dete ho..


Ansh:- Bijli ke itne tej jhatke khane ke baad kya muh se amritvani niklegi.. bahut kosis ke baad gali juban se chhuti thi.. warna mera baap meri juban tak jala chuka hai.. ye sab chhodo aur ye batao wo jhatke kahan se maar rahi..


Nischal:- Uske haath me ek tarah ka globes hai, jo skin me chhipa hai, pata nahi chalega.. isse main Mask kahta hun jiske bare me Nandu bata rahi thi ki mask ke upar pura GPS aaya tha… ye jhatke ussi ke hain..


Ansh:- O teri, kamal ki innovation.. lekin uss jalim ke hathon me dene ki kya jaroorat thi..


Nischal:- Kyonki wahi waris hai uss globes ki doctor.. lagbhag 3 sal to ho gaye honge usse globes ke sath.. aur tumse kayi baar jhagra bhi hua hoga.. jhatka laga kya kabhi.. ya jahir hone di kya?


Ansh:- Hmmm ! Samjh gaya.. matlab mujhe darne ki katai jaroorat nahi hai.. bus tumhari wajah se mujhe aaj jhatka laga..


Nischal:- Haan bol lo.... Apni kamini hansi to bhul gaye na jise hum dono ne notice kiya tha..


Ansh:- Hahahaha.. Arre yaar ab tun hum dono ke sath chhed chhad nahi karoge to kaun karega.. waise sorry yaar..


Nischal:- Ab ye sorry kyon.. doctor tum apni jagah bilkul sahi the… tab bhi aur ab bhi.. bus fark itna hai ki tab ki bhawna samaj ka wo sahi darpan thi, jisme riston ki maryada tay ki gayi thi.. kyonki kiske dil me kya chhipa hai koi nahi janta.. abhi ki tumhari manodasha bhi sahi hai, kyonki tumhe kuch baton ka yakin ho gaya hai.. right doctor..



Ansh:- Absolutely right sir.. chalo chal'kar kuch gala gila kiya jaye..


Nischal:- Aaj subah subah..


Ansh:- Kaun sa wo hume dekhne aane wali hai.. jabtak gusse me fufkar rahi hai.. 2 peg to laga hi lenge..


Dono turant hi baith gaye pine.. aur jaise hi jaam ka pahla sip liya.. thik ussi waqt Nandni prakat ho gayi.. aur jo hi dono ko sunayi.. tikhi nok jhonk aur chidhane ka lamba daud chalta raha jo ki din ke khane tak chala..


Khana khane ke baad Nandni ne Nischal se puchh hi liya ki uske janm ke baad kya hua aur kyon usse apne grah ka bhagoda ghoshit kar diya gaya…


Nischal gahri shwans leta…


Itihas ki jitni bhi baten maine tumhe batayi uske vishay me mujhe koi bhi jankari nahi thi… Mujhe jab hosh aaya tab maine ek pyari si half blood.. matlab sauteli bahan Serin, ek pagal baap, jiska pagalpan kewal mujh se juda tha, apna Jaal mahal, nafrat karne wala mera sautela bada bhai aur suteli maa… aur apna pyara jungle, kul milakar yahi sab the.


Jis Serin ko tum bura kah rahe ho, wo shayad meri maa ho jise banane aur mitane ka adhikar hai.. lekin ek maa kabhi mitati nahi hai.. balki banati hai…


Tum jis super computer ko sun rahi thi.. jisne tumhe khatre ke samay me aagah kiya tha.. yahan ke pura acess control wo sab Jaal mahal se baith'kar kar rahi thi.. jab main tum logon se mila aur wo mujhe yahan khush dekhti, to aksar hi kahti thi main yahin settle ho jaun. Mujh jaise logon ke liye Prithvi hi behtar jagah hai, jahan kam se niyam se bandhe log to rahte hain, jo hans kar ya ro kar niyamon ka palan karte hain..


Hum dono ko hi Jaal mahal se kabhi bahar jane nahi diya gaya tha.. humare pita ka kahna tha ki hum dono ka janm vigyaan ke liye hua hai.. Jaal Mahal matlab yun samjh lo hum dono ke hath se banaya gaya humara bacha..


Jaal mahal ki kaman jab humare haal me aayi tab kewal buniyadi dhancha hi tha aur kuch buniyadi tecnology.. 11 sal ki umr se lekar hum dono ne purn vyask yani ki 60 salon tak lagbhag wahin jaal mahal me kaam kiya tha.. wahan ki har chhoti si chhoti chij se lekar, bade se bade innovation ke liye hum dono ne puri science aur technology ko apne brain me 11th year me hi download kiya tha..


Shuru se ek dusre ke sath rahe to judaw bhi utna hi strong tha.. jab pure Aizem me is baat ki charcha hone lagi ki hum dono me half blood nahi, balki pure blood ka rista hai, jiska bich ki pyar aur bhawnaye kafi jud chuki hain. Fir mere bhai ne pahle to Jaal mahal ko apne kabje me lena chaha, lekin Serin ne jab aisa nahi hone diya, tab Sahjada ka tamga lagakar mujhe jaal mahal se bahar nikala…


60 salon ke band mahol se mujhe nikal'kar achanak hi log aur samaj ke bich dal diya gaya. Mera apna ilaka, apna mahal aur mujhe har kuch mila, lekin sab kuch hote huye bhi mujhe kuch bhi acha nahi lagta tha..


Jo ladka Serin ke sath rahkar hamesa muskurata tha, ab wo chir-chira aur gussail ho gaya tha… aur fir mujh par tamga lag gaya laparwah Sahjada ka… rahi sahi kasar un ladkiyon ne puri kar di jo nange hi mere mahal ke charo ore ghuma karti thi..


Mere apne log jo bahar aane ke baad mujhse jude aur Serin ko chhod'kar, har kisi ne mujhe awara hi samjha tha… mujhe kuch pata nahi ki mere pith pichhe kya ho raha tha.. ek raat maine mahal ke kam se kam 2000 guard ko jaan se maar dala tha aur apne sabhi khandan ko marne pahunch gaya, jab mujhe pata chala tha ki shasak ne yani mere baap ne Serin ko mara…


Bach gaya tha wo, yadi Serin bich me na aayi hoti.. wo mujhe jaal mahal lekar gayi… kafi chinta me thi aur sirf itna hi khati rahi.… "Nischal, duniya bal se nahi, chhal aur buddhi se chalti hai.. kab tum sikhoge"..


Uss raat bahut bahas hui hum dono me, kyonki wo kya samjhana chah rahi thi mujhe kuch samjh me nahi aa raha tha aur main bus uss se ye kahta raha ki buddhi aur chhal mujhe nahi samjhna.. mujhe jo acha lagega main wo karunga…


Kafi khaffa thi aur mere hath me ek chabhi deti hui Serin kahne lagi, yadi teen 3 din me maine iss chabi ka rahasya nahi suljhaya to wo mujh se fir kabhi baat nahi karegi… Pata nahi kya ho gaya tha mujhe.. itna jyada gussa maine pahle kabhi mehsus nahi kiya tha… Ek Serin hi thi jo mere gusse ke pratikriya me wo bhi mujhpar chilla rahi thi, warne mere sutele bhai aur baap tak me himmat nahi thi mujhe se baat karne ki.


Gusse me to chabhi maine raat ko fenk di thi, lekin subah jab gussa shant hua aur Serin ek do baar mujh se takrakar bhi jab baat nahi ki, tab main chabhi utha'kar uske kahne anusar chabhi ka rahasya pata lagane jane laga..
Yeh decca pe rahne wale log kaafi bhole bhale hai sibaye ush raja ke bete ko chhod ke... wow kya himmat hai iski toh.. sidhe nischal ke muh pe hi bol diya par bechare ko iska parinam bhi bhughatna para...
kya baat hai..in teeno ke bis kaafi mazak masti suj rahi hai . waise aise serious mahol thodi bahot Mazak masti hoti rahni chahiye.. taaki mind fresh rahe...
yaar nainu ji pehle batana chaahiye tha na ju ko... ki serin na hoti na shayad aaj nischal bhi hota... ek serin hi toh thi apni baaki sab toh swarthi hi the... :sigh:
Bina wajah roast ho gayi bechari... sab aapki wajah se hua hai.... bechari serin :lollypop:
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill nainu ji :applause: :applause:
 

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Jaal mahal se jab main bahar aa raha tha tab Serin mukhya dwar par khadi thi… roti hui mujh se maafi mangi.. aur kahne lagi wo bhi sath chalegi aur chabhi ke pichhe ki duniya ko dono sath dekhnege..


Main hairan bhi tha aur ek baar fir gussa bhi.. kyonki Jaal mahal me ya to command dene main rah sakta tha ya wo.. lekin mujhe manjoor nahi tha ki koi teesra huamare Jaal mahal ko chalaye…


Serin ne kisi tarah mujhe manaya aur hum chal diye.. Serin ke pass kewal ye chabhi thi aur meri maa ki kuch information. Wo apne marne se pahle tak yahan iss viman me aaya karti thi…


Hum dono sath me hi pahli baar iss viman me kadam rakhe the.. aur ye hum dono ke sath ka aakhri kaam tha. Aizem se udan bharne se pahle tak, bahut si aisi baten thi jo Serin ne mujh se chhipayi thi.. kuch baton ka pata udan bharne se pahle chala to kuch ka pata tab chal gaya jab Nandu mujhe mili…


Viman ki banawat aur iska vigyan ne hum dono ko khincha tha… 3 sal sath kaam karne ke baad humne isme puri tarah se jaan dal diya tha… Khair isse banate waqt hi hume Viggo ke itihas ke bare me pata chala.. dard ki wo kahani pata chal gayi jo gussa aur takat ke nashe me humare purwajon ne likh diya tha. Sath hi sath uss bade parde se bhi raaj uth chuka tha ki kyon Aizem shasak Viggo ko marne ke liye pagal the..


Dakshat prajati jise hum vilupt mante the, bistarwadi niti aur Aaynek par humla karne ke dristikon se, unki ek puri colony Aizem par aakar basi thi aur yahan ke shashk ke sath Dakshat ki jodiyan bani thi.. jitni bhi ladkiyan thi uski jodi Aizem ke ladkon ke sath aur jitne bhi Dakshat ke ladke the unki Aizem ki ladkiyon ke sath..


Main to jindgi me mul swabhaw ko upar-upar se hi samjhta raha aur apni manmani karta tha. Lekin yahan aakar mera baudhik vikas ne aisa karwat mara ki fir main yudh aur gusse se lagbhag dur hota chala gaya..


Ek baat jo ache se sikh chuka tha wo ye ki yadi aap marne par aate ho to kewal anth me aap akela bach jaoge.. jaisa ki Viggo ke itihas se saaf pata chalta hai…


Humne apne vinash ki kahani khud apne hathon se likhi thi fir dusron ka kya dosh… Jab yah viman purn roop se naya aur technology me sabko pichhe chhod diya.... fir aayi iss viman ko uddane ki bari..


Ek complex web tha isse uddana aur dwitiya Sigma ne isse apni urja se udaya tha, jise yahan lakar jab band kiya gaya to wo dobara fir engine chalu na kiya ja saka.. isse chalane ke liye pahle to mujhe apni shakti ki pahchan karni thi, jis se ru baru hone ke liye hum medical section gaye..


Wahan hume puri jankari aur sath me wo sabhi liquid mil gaye, jo dawa dwara supress ki gayi meri power ko dobara kewal chand minute me wapas laya tha.. ye baat kewal mere aur Serin ke bich me thi aur jabtak maine nahi bataya tabtak kisi ko pata bhi nahi chala ki main ek Viggo hun…


Serin ne hi meri pahchan ki thi.. main Viggo Sigma tha .. wo bhi unclassified alpha jiske bare me aaj tak kisi bhi Viggo classification me varnan nahi tha. Shayad Dakshat aur Viggo ke milan ka natija tha ye ki mujhme kayi sare vises gun Viggo smuday ke bahar ke the, jo Serin ke guno se bahut milte the.. Halanki Serin eklauti aisi hai jo mere unclassified ko bade hi aasani se classified kar sakti thi.. aur ek baar aap classified ho gaye fir marne ka jariya bhi nikal hi aata hai…


Khair Viggo Sigma ki pahchan hote hi, iska engine start karne hum dono control room me gaye the… kafi khush the hum.. maine engine me command diya.. meri urja dhire-dhire khatam hone lagi.. lekin engine start ho gaya..


Ek baar jab iska engine shuru ho gaya, fir hum dono hi bhag'kar jaal mahal aaye the... 12 din ke kaam ke baad humne iss viman ka remote acess mode active kiya tha.. haan bus ek hi problem thi.. ye viman mere baigar start nahi ki ja sakti thi… aur satrt bhi tab hoti jab main apne full power me hota..


Khair remote acess lene ke baad hum dono lagbhag 40000 logon ke sath 6 mahine ke liye universe ki shair par nikle the… Decca aur iss jaise bahut si jagah par hum pahunche the jahan Serin ne kya utpat machaya tha..


Halanki uska maksad padesan karna nahi tha, balki mere power aur control ko parakhna tha.. Hum jab apni chhuti se laut'kar wapas aaye, tab bahut kuch badal chuka tha.. main pahle ki tarah laparwah aur aawara hi tha bus ab khatarnak nahi rah gaya tha...


Serin ko pura Jaal Magal dekar, main apne logon me vhyast ho gaya. Uss dauran kayi chhoti aur badi ghatnayen hui, jaisa ki har jagah hote rahta hai aur zindgi chalte rahte hai.. uss chhuti se lautne ke baad mujhme bahut se badlaw aaye aur insani swabhaw aur zindgi ko janne ki ruchi badhne lagi..


Main ek lambe bharman par nikalna chahta tha, khud ko dhundhna chahta hai.. main kya hun, mere paida hone ka maksad kya hai.. aakhir jab mere sabhi log mare gaye fir mujhe hi iss duniya me kyon akela chhoda gaya.. kayi sare sawal the jiska koi jawab nahi tha…


Pahle Zindgi Jaal mahal me bit rahi thi ab zindgi apne aashiyane me bit rahi thi aur waqt ki sajison ne karwat lena shuru kar diya tha, jiski bhanak Serin shuru se thi… uss raat Serin kafi ghabrayi thi, jab wo mujh se milne aayi..


Serin mujhe yahan se chale jane ke liye kah rahi thi, lekin baat kya thi wo mere palle nahi par rahi thi… jab main nahi mana tab usne raaj khole the ki mera jinda hona, ek sanki ki dur dristhi thi… yahan ka shasak yani ki mera baap ek Viggo ki shakti apne ander chahta tha, aur jab hum dono yahan nahi the, tab Jaal mahal ki bahut si anmol tecnology, Zoren se sajha karke, wahan ke Mahamahim se wo reflector device Gupt roop se mangwayi gayi thi, jiska prayog kewal Mahamahim ko pata tha aur ab Aizem ka raja janta tha… iss ke vishay me kisi ko kano-kaan bhanak tak nahi lagi thi…


Serin mujhe jane ke liye kahti rahi, lekin main apne baap ki mansa jaan kar sirf itna hi kaha tha, humare Jaal mahal ka khyal rakhna. Meri baat sun'kar Serin mujh se ek shabd nahi kahi aur gusse me pure pagal ho kar wahan se nikli thi. Uska wahan se bina kuch kahe jana, tab samjh me aaya jab usne Zoren ke kuch khas technology visesgya ke naak ke niche se apni takniki kusalta dikhate huye, pure reflector precess ko hi ulta kar diya..


Mera baap mujh se meri shakti lena chah raha tha.. Aur Serin ne mere moh me bahut bada kadam utha liya.. usne shasak ko he khatm kar diya. Apne baap ko marne ke baad wo mujh se aakar kahi thi.. "Yadi ab bhagte ho to main kahungi ki tumne machine ke sath chhed-chhad kiya, warna yahan ruke to tum apni marji ka karo aur main apni.. main sabke samne jakar sab sach kah dungi"..


Finally mujhe wahan se nikalna para.. lekin wo Jaal mahal se mujhpar pura najar banaye thi.. usne bus 5 sal mange the.. aur mujhe kahi thi 5 sal main akele apne dum se iss jahan ko samjhun.. shyad jab wo ye kah rahi thi tab baat utni samjh me nahi aayi thi, jitni ab uske kahe ka matlab samjh me aata hai…


Nischal gahri shwans lete apni puri kahani kah chuka tha aur puri kahani batane ke baad bus idhar udhar dekh raha tha mano Serin ko yaad karke wo rona chahta ho..


Nandni:- Ro lo Nischal, dil halka ho jayega..


Nischal:- Jab Serin se dur hua tab mujhe ehsas hua ki mere jindgi me uske hone ke kya mayne the… usne kewal aur kewal mere liye kiya tha… uske bina chijon aur logon ko samjhna utna hi muskil hota tha jitna kisi agyani ko vigyaan ki bhasha samjhana..


Ansh:- Jab wo tumhe itna pyar karti thi Nischal, tab tumhare maut ka farman kaise jari kar di…


Nischal:- Usse Sabaiyya ki sabhi sajison ka pata tha, lekin uski baat na maan'kar ek baar fir main bewakoofi kar gaya… Serin ne Prithvi ke karibi grah Decca par, iss viman ko mere bina chalane ki taknik develope karke, khud Decca ke sabse shatir chor HuYu ke hatho chori karwa'kar Decca tak bhijwa di thi, aur mujhe bus wo lekar aana tha…


Serin ko pahle se pata tha ki Mahamahim aur Sabaiyya kosis karna nahi band karega, isliye Prithvi se final udan bharne se pahle, Sabaiyya ko nischint kar dene ki yojna bani Jisme mujhe mara hua dikhana tha..


Serin unhe har wo pukhta jankari de chuki thi, jis se mujhe mara ja sakta tha… aur mujhe iss viman ko chalu karne ka jariya ussi waqt bhijwa chuki thi jab main Jivisha ko trained kar raha tha, taki unke jasooson ko jab yakin ho jaye ki maine apni urja ka 90% hissa viman ko shuru karne me laga diya hai, tab wo mujhpar humla karenge…


Mujhe laga lakh nafrat hi sahi, lekin hai mera bhai, mujhe jaan se to nahi hi maar sakta hai… bus issi soch ne mujhe nischint kiya tha ki, mujhe kewal gambhir roop se ghayal kiya jayega… Serin ko shayad mujhse aise hi kisi tarah ki bewakoofi ki ummid thi, isliye Viggo ko jis hathiyar se mara jata, uspar jahar ke badla, life supported material laga kar usse jahar ke tarah project ki.


Uss bhale jaise hathiyar par ek high wave device bhi lagi hai, jo biometric coded thi. Matlab Serin ko yakin tha ki uska bhai isse pahle ek baar test karega, fir wo apne Jasoos ko kaam par lagayega.. isliye jisko bhi Serin ne wo bhala mara hoga, uske sine me bhala utarne ke sath hi uss high wave ko command di hogi aur wo ussi waqt saaf…


Yadi uss hathiyar par Viggo ko marne wala zahar laga hota, fir to main mara hua hi tha. Bus mere maut ke karib pahunchne ki wajah sirf itni thi ki, wo jab pahunche the mujhe marne tab main apne sharir ki lagbhag urja viman ko chalane ke liye istamal kar chuka tha. Upar se main high heat prani hun, isliye rahi sahi kasar jami barf ne puri kar di..


Serin me chhal ke sare gun Dakshat wale hai.. Uske ander ka bal, gussa aur kusalta bhi Dakshat samuday wali hai… lekin uska hriday prithvi ke insano jaisa hai, jo sahi aur galat ko bahut achhe se fark karna janti hai…


Nandni:- Ek baat batao Nischal… tumne kaha Prithvi par aakar tumne bahut kuch sikha hai... Kuch aisa bato jis se lage ki tum aage koi bewakoofi nahi karoge..


Nischal:- Yahan aakar tum aur Jivisha mujhe jab se mile tab se main logon ko bhi samjhna sikh gaya hun.... Aur tum dono ki wajah se jab se mujhe filmi kida kata hai tab se main drame karna bhi to sikh gaya… iss se jyada main nahi sikh sakta… bus itna pata hai ki ab mera bada sa pariwar hai.. jisme ye logon ke ander chhipi mansa ka detail nikalna mere bus ka nahi.. wo tum logon ki jimmedari hai… Filhaal hum Zoren pahunchne wale hai.. Jatin ko bulana hoga…


Jatin se sampark karne se pahle, Nischal ne Ansh aur Nandni ko mask ki tarah hi ek shield diya, jo kisi bhi high wave weapon ke war ko 100 baar tak jhel sake… sath me hi Nischal ne pahli baar weapon kisi ko gift kiya tha.. Ansh ko 2 gun dete huye kaha.. "Iske ander ka wave kafi hai kisi ko bhi sulane ke liye, imandari se iska prayog kare"..


Iske baad Nischal ne Jatin se sampark kiya aur usse tay location par bula liya, jahan pe Jatin ne uske pure sahar jaise viman ko land karne ki jagah batayi thi..


Jatin ke pass jab yah sandesh pahuncha tab wo Baby ke sath hi kaam kar raha tha… sandesh jaise hi mila Jatin hairani se Baby ko dekh raha tha..


Baby:- Ghur kahe raha hai..


Jatin:- Wo Viggo..


Baby, utsukta se… "Aage bhi bolo na"..
matlab saaf hai sare apne apas milke nischal ki hi bajane ke chakkar mein the aur nischal thahra us mandbudhi ka.. uska bas chale toh har jagah bas shakti istemaal karne ka... woh aachha hua ki har waqt serin uske sang thi ek dhaal banke..
Yeh nischal ka baap toh maha kamina nikla.. power hashil karne ke chakkar mein apne bete ka kaam tamam karne wala tha... lekin serin ne aise na hone diya... ulta apne bhai ko bachane ke chakkar mein apne hi baap ko mout ki ghaat utar di... aur 2saal pehle joh hua usme nischal ka marna shayad tay tha par serin ki soch samaj ki wajah se nischal aaj jinda hai..
serin :adore:
Khair..... so finally nischal & party zoren grah aa hi gaye.. ab zoren walo ki bajegi pungi :evillaugh:
aainn :hmm2: is gaddar jatin ko kahe inform kar raha hai nischal
Let's see what happens next
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Jatin:- Likha hai usne, jab tumhe sandesh mil raha hoga, main tumhare jamin par land kar chuka haounga aur jab main tumhari bhumi par pahla kadam rakhunga.. meri dhadkan yahan ke fijaon me aisa raag chhedegi, jo tum sab ke dil me ehsas karwayegi ki bhay kya hota hai…



Baby:- Arre baap re.... Matlab dono ki aatma jud chuki hai kya..


Jatin:- Aatma to Nischal aur Jivisha ki shayad uske janm purv hi jud chuki ho… Kisi janm ka karj ho ek dusre par jiska bhugtan karne dono sath me chale hain… Khair yadi Jivisha apna thoda bhi roop dikha di to hum kisi guard ke najar me nahi aayenge…. ret wala chasma le lo.. hum abhi nikal rahe hain..


Jatin aur baby turant hi Nischal ko receive karne nikal gaye.. lagbhag 5 miniute unki gadi chali hogi.. tabhi aasman me kale badal chhane se lage.. hawayen bekabu ho kar chalne lagi… hawayen tej bahti hui aisi awaj kar rahi thi, mano koi attahas bhadi hansi hans raha ho… aur jis ret ke gole me Jivisha ki shaktiyon ko kabu kiya gaya tha.. wahan ke charo ore ki haalat kuch aisi thi ki mano charo ore se bawandar uth raha ho aur uss bawander ke bich Jivisha itni khatarnak hans rahi thi ki wahan maujood jitne bhi guard the sab ke sab bhay se behosh ho gaye…


Jivisha ki hansi ki gunj dur-dur tak sunai de rahi thi.. jis kisi ne bhi ye hansi najdik se suni, wo behosh ho gaya. Aur jo dur se sun rahe the, wo paglon ki tarah chilla rahe the.. har kisi ko lag raha tha ki unka dum ghut raha hai. Mahamahim aur uski puri sabha jo iss waqt darbar me thi, har koi harain tha kewal Mahamahim ko chhod'kar.. wo bhi utni hi tej hans raha tha jitni tej Jivisha.. aur hanste huye kahne laga… "Ye hui na baat.. Ye hai pratham Malkia ka jalwa… kewal jine ki shwans bachi hai, fir bhi itna jod… Rijo lagta hai samay nikat aa gaya hai"..


Rijo:- Ji Mahamahim…


Idhar Nischal ne jaise hi pahla kadam rakha, uthe bawandar aur kale badal dekh'kar seham gaya.. Usne turant apna dhyan lagaya… Kuch hi pal me wo Jivisha ke pass tha… dono ke sampark pranali mano toot rahe the… "Meri jaan tum kosis mat karo.. bus thodi der aur dhairya rakho. Aur khud ko shant karo.. main aa raha hun"..


Nischal Jivisha ko shant karwa'kar jaise hi apni aakhen khola samne se khuli jeep jaise ek wahan me Jatin aur Baby aa rahe the… Jaise hi Jatin uske samne aaya… Nischal uska gala pakad kar hawa me lete… "Sale mujhe aane me der kya ho gayi, tune meri Jivisha ka kya haal bana diya"..


Baby:- Dum hai boss… hayyy aap ko dekh kar to machle hai arman Viggo..


Nischal apne baju me dekhte… "Ye teri bahan Baby hai na.. aur ye teri half blood hai ya complete"..


Jatin:- Aree bhul bhi jate ho kya, gala se pakad kar hawa me uthaye ho.. chhodo na Viggo..


Nischal ne jaisa hi Jatin ka gala chhoda, kuch der khanskar khud ko shant karne ke baad… "Aap ki wo liquid main chupke se Malkia ko pilane ke liye bhejta jaroor tha, lekin wo piti nahi thi… bahut royi thi wo aapko lekar, jabki unhe to maine bataya bhi nahi tha ki aapke sath kya hua hai"..


Nischal:- Hmmm ! Behosh hogi wo viman me, warna jama deti wo tum sabko antriksh me..


Baby:- Viggo main pawitr patthar bhi lekar aayi hun.. kya kahte ho.. ek Zoren par bhi jodi banate jao.. bus 2 min lagenge jodi banane me.. kuch ghante maze karenge, fir aap chale jana Malkia ko bachane..


Nischal:- Abe mental .. tune Viggo puran apni bahan ko nahi sunaya tha kya.. aur tune bataya na ye half hai ya complete..


Baby:- Meri maa dusri jodi banakar gayi.. laut'kar 70 sal se dekhi bhi nahi.. Viggo jodi ke koi niyam thode na hote hain.. waise bhi aapki jitni jodi rahegi, utne hi jaldi Viggo pariwar badhega.. abhi aap akela Viggo isliye aapki kosis to yahi honi chahiye ki kaise jald se jald 1000 Viggo ho jaye..


Nischal, apne sath laye tape se Baby ka muh, hath aur paun bandhte… "Aahhh ! Ab kuch acha lag raha hai... Jatin main chahta hun tum mujhe Jivisha ke chhudane ki puri yojna batao...


Jatin:- Viggo Malkia ko mahal ke thik upar, takriban 4000 fit ki unchai par rakha gaya hai.. jiske jane ka rasta kewal Mahamahim ke mukhya kamre se hokar hai. Aap ne jaisa detail diya tha waisa reflector device Mahamahim ke ussi kamre me hai…


Nischal... Viggo Veg Pariwartak lage hai kya (wo device jisse lagane ke baad koi bhi kewal paidal chal sakta hai, yadi daurne ki kosis kiya to fridge ho jayega)..


Jatin:- Rijo ko aapka khuaff aisa hua ki usne Primos aur Aizem se takriban 40 veg Pariwartak khariden, wo bhi kewal dhatu ke badle..


Nischal:- Sale prithwi ki dhatu to chura kar le aate ho tum log aur ussi chori ke maal se yahan ka amir grah bane ho… chhodo ye sab aur batao ki ye 40 veg Pariwartak kahan-kahan laga hai…


Jatin:- Yun samjh lo ki pure Zoren me kewal jahan hum khade hain, yahan se lekar pure alpaayu ke sima me nahi laga hai..


Nischal:- Koi nahi itna to main sochkar hi aaya tha.. iske machine ko deactivate to kar sakta hun, lekin kewal ek baar.. aur koi taknik lekar aaya hai ki nahi tera shasak mere khilaf istamal karne ke liye.…


Jatin:- Haan har purani waywastha jo classified Viggo ko marne ke liye kar sakte hain, ye maloom hone ke baad bhi ki tum mar gaye ho…


Nischal:- Classified par jor kyon diya..


Jatin:- Kyonki main janta hun … aap inke kisi bhi vidhi se nahi rukne wale.. haan bus usw Pariwartak ke bare me khas pucha, matlab eklauti wahi chij rora ban rahi hogi..


Nischal:- Meri jaan ko nikalne ka plan bata..


Jatin:- Aap ke liye wo reflector kitna jaroori lagta hai..


Nischal:- Jitna ki tere Mahamahim ko marna..


Jatin:- Pahle nahi bata sakte the… isme main kya madad karun, kuch samjh me hi nahi aa raha… unn umm tu kya kar rahi hai..


Nischal:- Kuch kahna chah rahi hai shayad.. kholo usse..


Jaisi hi Baby ka muh khula… "Bhaut bade wale pagal ho, koi ladki ko aisa bandhta hai kya?"


Nischal:- Baby ji aap padesan kar rahi thi.. chaho to hum ache dost ho sakte hain.. aap meri padesani samjhiye aur koi upay ho to bata dijiye..


Baby:- Upay hai mere pass lekin pahle usse kaho plan batane..


Jatin:- Yadi aap upar 4000 fit tak pahunch jate ho aur Malkia ko jis jagah par rakha hai wahan ki suraksha ko jaise hi bhed doge.. Mahal me takriban 1 lakh sainik honge aur Mahamahim khud.. uski shakti ko najarandaj karna bhul ho sakti hai.. isliye ek baar upar gaye to ek bhrm ko aap niche bhejna aur khud Malkia ko lekar pachimi dewar se niche aa jana.. aur ek baat aap normal speed se niche utroge isliye yadi wahan lage reflector ko ek line me lakar….


Nischal:- Tu rahne de bhai.. Main samjh gaya tu kitne bade wala case hai. Normal speed se main kyon utarne laga bewakoof.. hook ke sahare gutwakarshan ka istamal karunga.. Gati Pariwartak Veg, gutwakarshan ke virudh kaam nahi karta. Wo kisi girti chij ko hawa me thode na latka dega..


Jatin:- Point hai.. ab maine thode na itni science padhi hai..


Nischal:- Baby main 4000 fit se sabko safely lekar paschim ki deewar se niche le aaunga… tumhare pass Mahamahim ke kamre se hokar upar jane ka koi tarkib hai…


Baby:- Haan hai mere pass tarkib. Main Mahamahim ki hone wali jodi hun.. ek test aamntran dekar apna kamra chun lungi.. bus aap mere sath ladki ke vesh me chalna.. wo bhi kewal meke up se, kyonki kisi ka roop badlna yahan kaam na aayega..


Jatin:- Kyon ye baat yaad dila rahi hai… rahne de.. wo roop nahi badal sakte humari tarah.. lekin makeup karke ladki bam jayenge..


Nischal.. Mere pichhe aao dono…


Nischal ne wahan apne security ko hataya, bhumi ke niche se ek rasta khula aur teeno ander chale aaye… Nichal ne Jatin ko rassi aur huk wale section me bhej diya aur khud baby ko lekar medical section me aa gaya…


Nischal:- Tum bhi taiyar ho jao… hum yahin se sidha Mahamahim ke pass pahunchenge..


Baby:- Jo humum Viggo.. kapde waigrah…


Nischal:- Wahan side darwaje se ander jakar naha lo, main kapde aur sara jaroorat ki chijen bhejta hun..


Baby:- Nahi, kaam mera nahi aap ka hai.. isliye aap mujhe taiyar karoge .. main bus nahakar aaungi..


Nischal:- Matlab antim shwans tak mera test logi kya...


Baby:- Jiska itihas aur classification padhti aa rahi hun.. usse samne se janne ka mauka mila hai aur haan aap bhi bina kapdon ke rahoge to jyada acha hoga… madad ke badle ye chhoti si kimat.. ..


Nischal:- Hmmm ! Thik hai.. aao fir..


Baby bathroom me gayi, idhar Nischal hospital ke dwar par jakar pani ki achhi fuhar me jabardast nahaya.. aur nange hi khade hokar, computer par multiple command dene laga..


Itne me baby piche se aakar Nischal se lipat gayi… Baby ko aisa laga jaise wo kuch pal hawa me gayi uske hath paun apne aap uth rahe hain aur chehre par sine par halka brush chal raha hai. Sab kuch itna teji me ho raha tha ki usse kuch pata bhi nahi chala…


Jab sab kuch shant hua to Baby aaine ke samne khadi thi aur thik uske pass ladki ke vesh me Nischal khada tha.. Baby hairani se usse dekhti hui… "Kam se kam kuch pata chalne layak to karte... Jaldbaji me kahin sab kuch to na kar gaye"..


Nischal:- Sabkuch matlab


Baby:- Wahi sambhog ..


Nischal:- Kamal ke ilzam hai.. medical section me hi ho, kaho to test kar dun..


Baby, apne ghutne par aati… "Maaf karna Viggo, aap ko pane ki chahat aur ek Viggo ko apne pass dekhkar shayad mansik santulan kho chuki hun.. kisi Viggo ke sath hona to mere uss waqt ki khwish thi jabse Viggo ka itihas padhi thi…


Nischal:- Kamal hai ek kurur ke itihas se tum itna romanchit ho…


Baby:- Koi-Koi kurur hi kewal apni jodi ke liye pagal hota hai Viggo. Itihas hum jase logon ne hi likha hai aur main sochne ke liye swatantr hun… isliye koi mujh se yah tark mujhe yah yakin nahi dila sakta ki Viggo ek kurur prajati the.. Itihas likhne wala itihaskar kuch baten apni ore se jod ya ghata bhi to sakta hai..


Nischal:- Jab aisi baat hai to uss Itihas ke kewal kuch baton par yakin kyon, jisme likha tha Viggo ki kewal ek jodi hoti hai…


Baby:- Bilkul wah baten bhi jhut ho sakti hai… lekin aap ne unhe sach sabit kiya…


Nischal:- Ye sach dikhawa bhi to ho sakta hai Baby…
yaar yeh baby ( urf goli - xp wali ishq risk pe yehi naam tha uska) toh hath dhoke nischal piche lag gayi hai... par nischal thahra loyalty rakhne wala Viggo jiska dil sirf jivu ke liye hi dharakta hai...
kya baat hai meri soch ko galat sabit karte huye yeh dono bhi nischal ke hi saathi hi nikle... yaar ju na nainu ji pehle nahi bata sakte the kya... bechare yeh dono masoom bhi roast ho gaye bina wajah.. lagta hain in sabke piche us imli ki hi sazish hai koi :sigh:
I think jivu jaan gayi hai ki nischal aa chuka hai isliye aise attahas kar rahi hai... waise jivu sach mein kuch zyada hi powerful hai... Agar woh chahe toh chutkiyo mein eent se eent baja de us zoren grah ki..
Khair let's see kaise nischal aur baby jivu ko us gande naali kida mahamahim je chungul se chhurate hai...
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Baby:- Aap me koi chhal nahi tha Viggo isliye shayad aap ki maa ne aap ko Nischal pukara tha… baki maine bahut duniya dekhi hai Viggo, aap itne bade chhaliya to nahi hain jo mujhe vivas kar de yah sochne par ki ek purn nagn ladki jo aap ko kaam vash me kar rahi hai aur aap ki chetna kewal apni priyasi ke dhyan me lagi ho… Yahan ki bhumi par utarte hi kewal usse wapas lane ka soch rahe.. kya khatra hai, khud ki jaan bachegi ki nahi.. kitne hathiyar honge unki koi fikr nahi… aap rahne do Viggo, aap jabardasti khud ko chhaliya kahte raho lekin wo kabhi aap ho nahi sakte…


Nischal:- Bus bhi karo aur mere bare me mujhe mat samjhana.. uss khatarnak ko safai dena jise bachane ja rahe hai.. wi mujhe to maar nahi sakegi, lekin tumhe marne me wo waqt nahi lagayegi.. yadi apne bich jo hua usse pata chal jaye to..


Baby:- Malkia ka intro to kafi khatarnak hai.. rahne do jab main unse milungi.. khud hi pura vision dikha dungi.. paap to nahi tha mere man me, aage unke nyay karne ki kshmta.. unse bhaybhit hokar kyon jhut bolna..


Niachal:- Best of luck..


Jatin ka bhi kaam ho chuka tha.. teeno jald hi bahar nikle aur chal diye apne mukhya kaam ke liye.. aage Jatin chal raha tha, piche se baby aur uske sath usko sawarne wali uski sewika. Baby ko ghayal karne wale look me dekh'kar pura darbar hi uske ore dekh raha tha.. tabhi Mahamahim protocol lete huye uthkar Baby ke pass aaya aur ghutno par baith kar apna hath aage badhate huye… "Mujhe suchna bhijwana tha na Sangini.. main khud aata lene"


Baby:- Aap humare Mahamahim hai.. aur main ab bhi kewal hone wali jodi.. apni-apni maryada hai..


Mahamahim:- Jatin tumhari bahan bhi tumhari tarah kusal hai. Kya kahte ho Rijo..


Rijo:- Ji Mahamahim aapka chunaw shresth hai.. waise Shasika ke sath ye mehman kaun hain..


Baby:- Ji jab se aap ke sath jodi ka suni hun.. inhi ki salah se sajti sawarti hun.. aaj inhone hi mujhe sajaya hai..


Mahamahim:- Aap me achhi shasika ke sabhi gun hai. Kab kya karne ka aur kis kaam ke liye uchit logon ki jaroorat hai.. iski achhi pahchan hai. Aaeye humare sath..


Mahamahim ne Baby ko apne sath bithaya aur uske pass aakar Nischal khada ho gaya. Tabhi Baby, Mahamahim ke kaan me kuch kahi aur Mahamahim ke chehre ka bhaw badal gaya.. wo apne darbar ka kaam chhod'kar baby ko lekar chal diya aur baby ke sath Nischal..


Mahamahim:- Test ki tum gawah bhi rakhna chahti ho..


Baby:- Ye gawah nahi hai mere malik, ye to mere tarike ko dekhkar mujhe aap ko khush karne ke naye tarike batayegi.. aap naye anubhaw ke liye budhe ho gaye hain kya..


Mahamahim, uchhalte huye…. "Fir to main bhi issi se naye tarike sikh lunga.. mukabla barabari ka hona chahiye"..


Baby:- kyon nahi..


Mahamahim, Baby ko ek kamre me laya.. kamra dekhte hi Baby… "Nahi pasand.. koi aur kamra dikhaeye"..


Mahamahim hanste huye… "Lagta hai jodi ke nakhre utana sikhna hoga".


Baby:- Aap ko iss kala me to main akeli aapko mahir kar dungi..


Mahamahim ko purn rijhane ka kaam chalu tha. 1 aur kamra badlne ke baad, Dono apne padaw tak pahunch chuke the.. jaise hi baby kamre ke ander aayi, Mahamahim ko chumte huye apne kandhe se dress ko sarkar kamar tak lati, upar se topless ho gayi.. Mahamahim, uske stan ko hathon me lekar… "Ye kitne aakarshit kar rahe… Abhi bahut se kaam adhure chhod aaya hun… jabtak aap ye kamra bhraman kijiye ya chahe to upar jakar Malkia ko dekh aaeye.. jise aaj tak maine kisi ko dekhne nahi diya"..


Baby, muh banakar apne kapde kandhe me dalti… "Usse kyun dekhun.. mujhe aap ko dekhna tha to aap bhag rahe hain"..


Nischal:- Ji meri jigyasa hai ek baar Malkia ko dur se hi dekh lun..


Mahamahim:- Ab to mehman ne bhi kah diya.. aur inke kaam ka bhugtan samjh kar mil aaeye, jabtak main kaam khatm karke, yahan purn roop se taiyar milunga..


Baby:- Sine me arman ki kami hai aapme .. thik hai aaeye main jara kamra ghum'kar, uss Malkia se bhi mil aati hun..


Mahamahim apne machlte arman ke sath medical section me pahuncha aur apne doctor se josh vardhak dawa lakar sidha darbar me pahuncha… darbar me Jivisha ki aaj ki harkat par baat chal rahi thi, jab Baby pahunchi thi…


Mahamahim dawa ka sewan karke 15 minute hone ka intzar kar raha tha aur gudgudate arman ke sath har kisi ki baat sun raha tha..


Rijo:- Mahamahim, jo pratham Malkia ki shakti ko purn roop se dekh chuka hai, uska darbar me aakar wapas jana kuch ajib nahi lag raha…


Mahamahim gusse me… "Rijo mat bhulo wo Vises me auhde par hai"



Rijo:- Mahamahim mujhe sajis ki bu aa rahi hai.. Jo Malkia kitne mahino se boli nahi, wo aaj chetwani bhadi hansi hans rahi thi… Jatin ko aaj ki ghtna ko lekar humare sath vichar vimarsh karna chahiye tha, to apni bahan ko lekar aaya aur uske sath darbar me aisi aurat aayi, jiski koi pahchan nahi..


Mahamahim:- Rijo sabko alert bhejo.. kahin koi galatfehmi na ho, isliye mujhe aage jane do…


Itne me hi wahan ka alarm baj gaya.. ye kamre se chori ka alarm tha.. "Rijo ye bahar nahi jane chahiye, reflector device usne abhi-abhi chori kiya hai. Mujhe khud aage jana hoga"..


Idhar Mahamahim ke jate hi… "Ye batao yahan ke lift ko kitna samay lagta hoga upar se niche jane me"…


Baby:- Upar se niche hokar aati hun tab pata chal jayega.. bewakoof..


Nischal:- Thik hai suno.. main upar jata hun, jaise hi lift niche aaye, tum ye reflector uthana aur sidhe upar chali aana..


Baby:- Dhyan se kuch gadbad hui to main adhure khwab ke sath hi mar jaungi..


Nischal:- Jiske pass dimag hota hai wo bal par bhadi par hi jate hain... tum nahi marogi.. best of luck..


Nischal upar gaya aur lift ko niche bhej diya… Upar ke behosh guard jo abhi-abhi hosh me aaye the, Nischal ko dekh'kar usse ghurne lage.. Nischal ko khyal aaya wo to alag hi roop me hai.. Khair wo apna bhesh badlne se pahle dono ko wapas se behosh kar diya..


Jaise hi uss ret me pahuncha, wahan ka tapman kam se kam 1000⁰ celcius ke aas pass hoga.. soch'kar hi uski ruh kanp gayi… Jivisha ke ore dekhne ki himmat hi nahi hui, tabhi bebas hi awaz aayi.. "yun najren na fero, aur jyada dard de jayega"..


Nischal ke aashu jhar-jhar karke bahne lage, lekin garmi itni thi ki wo aakhon me hi Sukh jate.. Baby bhi abtak upar aa gayi thi.. Nischal usse apni jagah thehar jane ke liye kaha aur pahle to usne lift ko niche bhej'kar uske sare connection cut kar diye.. fir sabhi heat reflector ko wahan se hata kar niche feka aur kone se hokar baby ko tay jagah tak pahunchne ke liye kaha...


Nischal, Jivisha ke pass pahunch'kar, apni najar utha'kar Jivisha ko dekha… uske rukhe se hont par muskan thi.. kale pare jhulsa chehra khila hua lag raha tha aur dono ek dusre ko dekhte huye honth se honth laga'kar chumne lage..


Lagbhag 5 minute tak dono ek dusre ko chumte rahe. Nischal uss se alag hokar Jivisha ko uski dawa pine ke liye diya.. Jivisha me itni jaan nahi thi ki uska hath bhi uth sake.. Nischal ne uska sar apne gode me rakhkar, wo dawa pura pilaya aur uske janjir ko jhatke me todte huye baby ke pass tak lekar gaya.. "Baby, iske sar ko gode me lekar baitho"


Nischal, Baby se apni baat kah'kar, pachimi deewar se rassi ko fasa'kar, usme huk waigrah tight karke, sabhi prakriya purn kar chuka tha, bus dono ko lekar niche kudne ki der thi. Wahin Jivisha jamin me leti Nischal ko dekh'kar bus muskura rahi thi.


Nischal nikalne ki purn taiyari kar chuka tha... uska dil abhi Jivisha se lipatne ka bhi ho raha tha, kintu dimag ke ander kuch aur hi chal raha tha. Aur apni iss soch ko aur pukhta karte huye Nischal ne Mahamahim ke kamre se churaya reflector device ko apne pichhe pith par tanga, aur wahin ret par khade hokar intzar karne laga…


Lagbhag 15 minute baad Mahamahim ussi lift se sabse pahle upar pahuncha, uske thik sath me Rijo aur pichhe se 10-12 sainik. Jaise hi Mahamahim dikha, Nischal gusse me uski ore badha aur usse gale se pakad'kar hawa me uthate...


"Jo jahan hai wahin rahna, warna iska gala nichodkar vocal cord ki pipe nikalne me waqt na lagega. Sorry Mahamahim ek purana wada pahle pura kar lun"..


Nischal apni baat kahte huye dusre hath se Rijo ko hawa me uthakar, niche sine par ek jor ka laat mara. Rijo ki gardan, ander ke kayi tarah ke pipe sahit Nischal ke hath me aur dhar jakar diwar se chipak gaya… "Tujhse kaha tha na Rijo agli baar dikhega to main itna mehrban nahi rahunga aur mera kahar dekhne ko milega"..


Mahamahim, Rijo ki haalat dekh'kar sakte me aa gaya. Uske sainik 10 kadam aur pichhe chale gaye aur baki sainik ko aane se rokne laga… idhar nichal Mahamahim ko dekhkar, gusse se laal aakhen kiye wahan ke temprature ka jayja liya… thoda normal dikha raha tha..


Nischal uske chehre par thukte huye… "Ye kyon bhul gaya ki jis device ki madad se tu dusron ki shakti apne ander leta hai, wahi device teri shakti bhi niskriya kar degi. Lekin tu dar mat gandi nali ke kide… tune meri jaan ko yahan 2 saal jhulsaya hai aur iske jaisi na jane kitno ko.. jakar yudh ki taiyari kar.. apni jaan ko main thik karke, yudh ke liye 5 din purv sandesh dunga, aur uss din main tumhe ehsas karwa dunga ki apni purn shakti ke sath bhi tu itna hi bebas hoga, jitna abhi hai.. meri jaan ne aaj hi yudh ke taan chhed di hain.. tu jitni taiyari kar sakta hai kar le.. diya waqt"..


Jaise hi Nischal ki dahar samapt hui.. Baby siti bajati hui kahne lagi… "Jyada bole to bechara tunhari baton ke dar se na mar jaye.. sala napunsak Shasak".. Nischal ne baby ko reflector apne pith par bandhne kaha, aur Jivisha aur baby ko kandhe ke piche latkakar, Mahamahim ko fenka aur khud chhlanga laga diya..


Jabtak Mahamahim kuch karne ki sochta kafi teji se teeno niche ja rahe the… Jamin aane se kuch der pahle apne huk ko dhire-dhire tight kiya. Unki gati dhire-dhire ghat'ti chali gayi. Teeno jamin par the aur dare huye sainik ghati ke ore badh rahe the..
Finally jivu ko chhuda hi liya us kamine ki chungul se aur woh kamina mahamahim kuch na kar paya :vhappy:
ulta nischal ne hi uski pungi baja diya...
tu dusron ki shakti apne ander leta hai, wahi device teri shakti bhi niskriya kar degi. Lekin tu dar mat gandi nali ke kide… tune meri jaan ko yahan 2 saal jhulsaya hai aur iske jaisi na jane kitno ko.. jakar yudh ki taiyari kar..
ha ha ha ha ha ha ha :lol: :lol1: :roflol: :lotpot:
Ab toh nischal ne bhi maan liya ki yeh sach mein ek gande naali ka hi kida hai :roflol:
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So baby ne bahot madad ki.... waise yudh ki bigul toh baj chuke hai phir bhi nischal ne waqt de diya hai us mahamahim ko taiyar ho ke liye..
Khair let's see what happens next
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jivu thik toh ho gayi... lekin ek bada khulasha bhi hua hai ki nischal hi hai in sabhi kand ke piche.... matlab yeh zoren ke aliens jivu ko agva karne se leke nischal ka woh adh mara hone tak se leke zoren grah tak aake us mahamahim ka reflector device chin lena, yeh sab nischal ke planning ka hissa tha...
aur serin bhi mili huyi hai uske sath is planning mein.... lekin kya hasil hua... ulta uske chaahne wale is kadar taklifen jhele ki soch se bhi pare hai... :sigh:
ya phir yeh soch liya ki is khel ko hi ant kiya jaaye joh sabiya aur mahatharki mahim khel raha hai power hasil karne ki chakkar mein... taaki in future inke wajah aur taklif na uthani pare aur ek achhi life ek sukun bhari jindagi jee sake baaki log...
Khair let's see what happens next
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Jivisha:- Aree itni jor se kisne kaha chipkane..


Nandni:- Haan to tu bhi kahan sun rahi thi.. wo 2 saal se mara para tha, tu to shwans bhi le rahi thi...Nischal ki to lagbhag shwans band thi...


Nischal:- Usse pata hai Nandu sab pahle se… wo to gussa sirf isliye thi, kyonki bina uski jankari ke maine Jivisha ko yahan lane ka plan kar liya tha..


Nandni:- Idhar aao to jarra.. tum bhi..


Nischal:- Ab ho gaya na tu Jivisha ko shant karwana chah rahi thi aur wo hi gayi..


Jivisha:- Nandu faisla barabar ka hona chahiye warna mujhe lagega bhed bhaw ho raha hai…


Nandni:- Nischal abhi aao yahan..


Jaise hi Nichal uske pass pahuncha, 440 volt wala kadak thappad usse jadti hui… "Kasam kha lo tum Nischal ki aaj ke baad koi plan nahi karoge. Tumhari wajah se hum 2 salon se apne pariwar se na mile… tunhare wajah se Jivisha til-til marti rahi.. aur tumhari wajah se tunhari bahan, na jane kin musibaton ka samna kar rahi hogi"..


Nischal, muskurate huye, apne dono kaan pakad liya aur kahne laga…. "Haan main kasam khata hun.. ab chal tu bhi gussa thuk de"..


Nandni:- Hmmm ! That's better..


Jivisha:- Computer ji meri wajah se viman ko jo damage hua hai, kya usse aap thik kar sakte hai..


Computer:- O airi ladki, uss chadar ke ander kitne sari lines aur function hai pata bhi hai… ander ja'kar manually thik karo warna bulate rahna saman, kuch na pahunchega..


Jivisha:- Koi na computer ji mere janu kis Marj ki dawa hai.. Janu wahan jao abhi aur thik karo… Waise iss grah par kuch hari sabjiyan milti hain kya?


Baby:- Yahan kuch bhi hara nahi.. aur jo bache hain, mujhe to lagta hai wo bhi banjar na ho jaye..


Sab baton me vyast ho gaye… takriban 2 ghante ki mehnat ke baad, wahan ke sari chijon ka proper function check karke Nichal wapas lauta… control room jakar sab kuch check kiya aur wahin aaram se baith gaya..


Achanak hi Nischal ko Serin ka pendent yaad aaya aur wo pendent nikal'kar dekhne laga… pendent kafi khubsurat dikh raha tha jiske niche takriban 3 inch ke size ka ek hexagonal patthar ka dhancha tha.. Dekhne me kafi khubsurat aur gahre hare rang me tha..


Nichal uss ruby se dikhne wale hare patthar ko hath me lekar bade gaur se ulat-palat kar dekhne laga… "Ye Serin ka banaya hua to nahi lagta hai… banawat kafi khubsurat hai jo kisi jewar ka hissa lagta hai. Iske ander itni urja kaise jo Viman shuru kar sake"… Nischal uss pathhar ko aur bhi bariki se janch karne ke liye, hawa me rakh'kar uss patthar ko hook kiya.


Apne aakhon par magnifying glass lagakar bade gaur se uski barik banawat dekhne ke baad, achanak hi usse kuch dhyan aaya aur wo turant Mahamahim ke reflector device ko nikal kar dekhne laga… "Hmmm ! To ye raaj hai… lekin itna jatil science.. dekhna hoga ki iska nirman kab hua tha"…


Nischal ne fir parten kuredni shuru ki… Pendent me lage ruby lagbhag 20000 vrash se bhi purv banaya gaya tha… computer system 20k varshon ke purv aur kitna pahle bana tha uski jankari nahi de sakta tha…


Fir uss reflector me lage patthar ki janch karne laga jo hu-bahu Serin ke diye patthar jaisa tha, kewal rang kala tha. Uss patthar ke bhi banne ki kahani uske judwa green patthar jaisa hi tha..


Hairani to tab ho gayi jab dono patthar ke banne ki location ko dhundha gaya… Dono patthar ka nirman earth par Antartica me hua tha. Lekin ye patthar Nischal ke milne ke purv kayi grahon par ja chuka tha… Ek to in pattharon ka jatil vigyaan, upar se earth me bana patthar kayi sare grah par le jaya ja chuka tha, jo ki saaf taur par sabit kar raha tha ki purv me bani har technology sajha ki jati thi.. kintu abtak iske kahin koi prman nahi mile the..


Nischal ne sabse aakhri me in patthar ki gunwatta aur karya saili ko janchna ki shuru kiya. Kamal ke parinam nikal kar aaye. Yah patthar manav nirmit nahi, yadhpi ye prithvi ke garv se nikle the.. kayi tarah ke khanij, aur bhutal me hone wale reaction ke karan in pattharon me gun paida huye the. Isse Prakrit ka vigyaan bhi kaha ja sakta tha, jo kayi sare reaction aur certain temprature se gujarkar bana ek nayab patthar, jise lab me kisi bhi vidhi se nahi banaya ja sakta tha..


Inka prayog kafi santulit aur nischit simaon tak hi tha… Jahan Serin dwara khoja gaya green patthar ek chhota paket energy tha jo kisi bhi media me apni energy khud banane ki capacity rakhta hai.. jo maximum 1200 mega watt prati ghante tak ja sakta tha .. yadi bijli generate karne ke sandarv me ek udharahan matr liya jaye to.


Wahin Mahamahim ke reflector me laga patthar thik green patthar ka ulta tha… Ye energy ko khich kar ek media se dusre media me transfer kar sakta tha... Iski capacity ka pata kar pana muskil tha kyonki jabtak maximum energy ke bich nahi rakha jata pata laga pana muskil tha..


Nischal dono hi patthar me jaise dub sa gaya tha. Har tarah ke prayog se to saaf tha ki is patthar ka prayog kewal ek kusal Vaigyanik hi kar sakta tha, anytha yah ek khubsurat nayab patthar tha jo kisi ke gale me latak'kar uski shaano shaukat badha sakta tha…


Lagbhag janch khatam ho chuki thi. Nichal dono patthar ko dekh'kar kuch soch hi raha tha, ussi waqt Jivisha control room me pahunch gayi… "Sir kaun se sawal ka jawab dhundh rahe han".. Nischal dono patthar ko wapas high security me rakhte huye, Jivisha ko dekha aur muskurane laga…


Jivisha:- 2 ghantey se control room me ho, main 3 baar aakar ja chuki hun..


Nischal:- Pagal, apne computer ko hi bol deti mujhe yahan se uthane..


Jivisha:- Wo computer bahut dhit ho gaya hai. Ek to meri sunta nahi, upar se pol bhi khol deta hai… Hatao inhe, chalo na baby ek walk par chalte hain..


Nischal:- Haan kyon nahi.. chalo chala jaye..


Dono viman ke bahar aakar ret par thodi dur chalne ke baad wahin baith gaye… "Tumhe to thik se mayus hona bhi nahi aata Nischal"..


Nischal:- Hey Jisa tumhe kisne kaha main mayus hun..


Jivisha:- Koi kahega to hi mujhe pata chalega ki tum mayus ho… Suno baby tumne koi galti nahi ki hai, aur na hi main tumhare wajah se til-til mari hun… Nandu shayad apne ghar ko miss kar rahi hai.. aur humare wajah se fans gayi, isliye gusse me wo sari baten kah gayi..


Nischal:- Miss to tum bhi sabko kar rahi ho Jisa..


Jivisha:- Bus ab to sab kuch samet'kar unse hi milenge na.. jahan 2 sal intzar kiye hain.. 2-3 mahine aur intzar kar sakte hain… lekin tum nakam nahi huye .. bus mera Nischal dil ka saaf hai.. ..


Nischal:- Bewakoof kahte hain usse..


Jivisha apna sar Nischal ke gode me rakhti… "Apne bholepan ko bewakoofi na batao, mujhe chubhta hai. Tum jis wajah se bhi maut ke muh me gaye hoge, kisi ke viswas me hi gaye hoge. Jisne viswas toda wo uski bhul thi ki usne kya khoya, tumhari koi galti nahi thi love"..


Nischal:- Lekin sach to ye bhi hai ki Serin wahan sirf mere wajah se na jane kya-kya sah rahi hogi. Kahin wo toot na jaye..


Jivisha:- Tumne hi to bataya tha ki wo shuru se tumhare liye khamoshi se ladti rahi, khud ke pita aur bhai se, lekin tumhe kabhi pata nahi chalne di, aur na hi wo kabhi samne aayi, fir uski chinta karke usse kamjor sabit karne me kyon tule ho.. Jante ho Nischal sabke dard wala kaam kya hota hai..


Nischal:- Kya ?


Jivisha:- Jab apne hi pariwar ke log galat ho, aur uske khilaf ladna.. kayi baar mere ghar ke log sahi hokar bhi galat the lekin main kahan lad payi thi.. wo tumhare liye unse ladti bhi rahi aur na to apne pariwar ko aur na hi kabhi tumhe ehsaas hone diya… tum to samne se jakar khade ho gaye ki le lo meri shaktiyan, lekin wo kya aisa hone di… uske husle ko hans kar salaam karo Nischal.


Nischal:- Haan thik hai samjh gaya… waise kitni khamosh hai na ye raat …


"Ander se mayus rahega to raat khamosh hi hogi na.. warna yun Jivisha ko apne gode me sulaye rahta"… Nandni dono ke pass aati hui kahne lagi…


Nischal uska bhi hath pakad kar uske sar ko apne gode me lekar jod jor se thokte huye…. "So ja lalli so ja… laal palang par so ja"..


"Lalli… hihihihihi… lalli… hihihihi"… Nischal ki lori sunkar Jivisha hans hans kar lotpot ho gayi… Nandni khadi ho'kar kuch dur pichhe hati aur apne dono kaan pakadti… "Maaf kar de yaar gusse me thi, nikal gaya muh se…. Main ander se bahut guilt feel kar rahi"..


Nischal:- Pagal, bura lage ya acha lage jo bol di so bol di.. tu hi to kahti thi na ye baat..


Nandni:- Mujhe yaad nahi.. kab kahi thi..


Jivisha.. lalli ko lori gakar yaad dilao Nischal… shayad yaad aa jaye…


Nandni… Jisa apne computer ko kabu rakh … ye mera paun ret me khinch raha hai..


Jivisha… Nahi re ullu.. main kuch na kar rahi… Nischal… aaaooo..


Ek ore Jivisha to dusri ore Nandni… dono ret ke ander pura dhans gayi… Nischal teji se Nandni ke ore bhaga, lekin ret me jo bhi tha, wo tha kafi tej… Nischal apni purn gati se bhag'kar jabtak Nandni ke pass pahuncha, uske kewal hath hi dikh rahe the.


Nischal ne Nandni ka hath tham to liya lekin khinch'kar bahar nikalne ki himmat nahi hui, kyonki jis gati wo Nandni ko ret me le ja raha tha, yadi Nischal takat lagata to Nandni ko bhadi nuksan ho sakta tha.
shayad woh zoren grah ke saanp logis le gaye indono ... baaki suspense hi rahe toh achha hai :listen:
Bas do logo ki kami rah gayi yaar
kash pichle kahani ki tarah yahan bhi sawelkar aur kasak.. yeh dono hote to baat hi kuch aur thi...
Khair let's see what happens next
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