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Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running (restart)

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Vickey1211

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Mast update h bhai
Maza aa gya
Sorry bhai kal ka 2nd update nhi padh paya tha so gya tha
But aaj padha 2no update
Kaafi acche the
Apne hero ki fight ek dum mast thi
Accha kia us gumde ko jinda chod kar
Is halat m jinda rhna hi saza h
Bechara main point m kick se behosh ho gya
Lagta h Naina apne hero ki sister hi h
Aur lagta h uski Maa jinda h
Jo khatre m h
Khair jo bhi ho aane wale updates me pta chal hi jayga
 

Naughtyrishabh

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Maf karna bhai itne deri se review dene ke liye.
Aaj hi ghar se Lauta hoon Holi ki chhutiyon ke Baad.

Update 57

Behad hi shandaar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Kafi behtareen or Kamal ka update bhai.
Mzaaaa aa gya bhai waah.
Jyoti ki fighting fantastic or us pr Karan ka dimag to bemisal
Lekin e ladke ka kya chakkar h ??

Or isilye ,
Aage ka intjar
 

Dark Devil

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Update no :- 63
Jese hi jyoti k jitne ki announcement hui , to pure stadium m tournament k pure hone ki khushi m pure auditorium m fire crackers chalu ho gaye.

Jyoti ring se nikalte hi karan ki or bhagi , karan ne bhi muskurate hue apni bahe fela di or jyoti apni full speed se karan k gale lag gayi or karan use gale lagaye hue hi thoda utha k gol gol ghum apni khushi jatane laga.

Jyoti :- dekha bhai , m jit gayi .

Karan (uske mathe ko chumte hue) :- ha meri gudiya jeet hi gayi , per mujhe koi hairani ni h tumhare jitne pe , tere p pura vishwas jo tha mujhe pura bharosa jo h tujh per.

Phir jyoti radha or sonam or radha se bhi gale milti h.

Radha:- congratulations di ,

Sonam.:- congratulations didu.

Jyoti dono k gaalo ko chum ker unhe thank u bolti h.

Fir karan or jyoti ek dusre ka hath pakad price distribution k liye jate h.

Tabhi ek announcement hoti h.

Anchor :- ladies and gentlemen rukawat k liye mafi chahata hu ki , lekin ek bahut hi jaruri announcement kerni h mujhe.

Aaj jo prize distribution ka program hona tha, wo kinhi kaarano se aaj postpone kiya ja raha h.

Or ab prize distribution aaj ni , balki parso hoga, or function ki location kal announce ker di jayegi.

Radha:- shit yaar , m kitni excited thi bhai ko di ko first prize milte hie dekhne k liye, chalo koi baat ni ek din or sahi hum kal ni parso wapas jayenge.

Sonam bhi ye sun ker khush ho gayi ki kam se kam use ek din or mil jayega ,apni saheli or apne bhai bhahan k sath rahane ka.

Per yaha karan tension m aagaya tha , usne garima se ek din pahale lotne ka wada jo kiya tha , kyunki garima ko waha radha ki jarurat thi.

Fir isi baare m sochte hue karan or apni bahano k sath , hotel ki or nikal jata h.

Wahi dusri or

Location :- thakur house.

Naina ne us pret ka ant kerti h , uske baad use thodi kamjori mahasus hoti h.

Tabhi uski najar pandit ji per padti h or wo dod k unke pass jati h jinki halat bahut kharab thi , unka pura sharir lahu luhan ho gaya tha , or wo behosh ho gaye the.

Naina(rote hue ) :- baba , uthiye baba kya hua aapko , are koi jaldi se ambulance ko bulao.

Thakur jaldi se pass k shahar se ambulance bulata h , or jab tak ambulance aaye , tab tak naina ne pandit ji ki first aid ker di.

Thodi hi der m ambulance aajati h ,or pandit ji ko usme letakar hospital ki or nikal jati h.

Naina ki nili ankho se ansu jhar jhar bah rahe the , jisko dekh to kisi ka bhi dil tadaf uthe.

Karib 20 min m ambulance hospital pahunch jati h, or ambulance se nikal ker do compounder unhe hospital me le jate h.

Or ek compounder jaldi se jaa ker doctor ko bula k lata h , doctor ko dekhte hi naina unke pero m gir k roti hui boli .

Naina:- please doctor mere baba ko bacha lo, m apke pao padti hu, mere baba k alawa is duniya m koi ni h.

Doctor(nanina ko uthate hue):- are beti ye kya ker rahi ho utho, m dekhta hu tumhare baba ko.

Ye bol doctor pandit ji ko examine kerta h or bolta h.

Doctor:- oh my god, inki condition bahut hi critical h , ye hua kese .
I m.sorry ye police case h , mujhe police ko info kerna hoga.

Tabhi piche se doctor k kano m ek aawaj padti h.

"Wo sab m dekh lunga doctor sahab , bas pandit ji ko kuch ni hona chahiye"

Ye awaaz thakur ki hi thi , jo ambulance k piche piche hi apni car m aagaya tha.

Doctor :- are thakur sahab aap yaha,

Thakur :- wo sab chodo doctor, abhi bas aap pandit ji ka ilaz kero , or unko kuch ni hona chahiye.

Thakur ek bahut hi powerful, lekin ek dil insaan tha, usko andaza tha ki doctor ye police case wala drama jarur karenge , isliye wo khud bhi unke sath aagaya tha.

Doctor turant pandit ji ko ot m leker jata h , or naina hath jod k thakur se boli.

Naina:- aapka bahut bahut dhanyawad thakur sahab , aapne mere pe bahut bada upkaar kiya h

Thakur :- esa bol k mujhe lajjit mat kero beti , upkaar to tumne pure thakur khandan p kiya h beti , meri bachi ko us shaitan se bacha ker ,
Tum sach me hamare liye masiha ban k aayi ho.

Or ye bol thakur naina k per pakadne ko hota h to naina unhe ro k boli .

NainA:- are thakur sahab ye aap kya ker rahe h, aap mujhse umra , pad or har chij m mujhse bade h , esa kerke mujhe pap ka bhagi na banaye.

Or m kon hoti hu kaha kuch kerne wali, kerne wali to mere bholenath or meri maa jagdamba kali h, unhi ki kripa se m us shaitan ko maar payi.

Aapko dhnyawad kerna h , to un maa jagat janni ko kijiye.

Thakur :- tum sach me mahan ho beti , maa tum.per apni kripa sadev banaye rakhe

Tabhi thakur ki najar naina k sharir per padti h , chote to usko bhi aayi thi , or uske kapde bhi kuch side se fat gaye the.

Thakur jaldi se ek lady doctor ko bulata h or use naina k ilaaz kerne ko bol naina ko bhej deta h uske sath.

Or ek nurse ko kuch pese deker naina k liye ek jodi kapde mangwata h.

Thodi der m naina ki marahm pati ho jati h, or wo thakur k mangwaye hue kapde pahan k ot k bahar beth jati h , or doctor k bahar aane ka intezaar kerne lagti h.

Karib 2 ghante baad doctor bahar aata h or bolta h.

Doctor :- I m sorry thakur sahab , unki halat bahut hi jyada critical h or hum ab kuch ni ker sakte .

Unke paas ab jyada samay ni h , yahi koi 5 6 ghante ka samay h , aap chahe to unhe ghar le ja sakte h.

Naina ye sun k buri tarah tut jati h , use bahut bada jhatka laga tha.

Naina(rote hue) :- kya m apne baba se mil sakti hu.

Doctor :- ha beti , hum abhi thodi der m unhe genral ward m shift kar denge , tum tab unse mil lena.

Thodi der baad pandit ji ko general ward m shift ker diya jata h, or naina pandit ji k side m beth rone lagti h.

Tabhi pandit ji k sharir m halchal hoti h , jise dekh naina apne ansu puch leti h .

Pandit ji ko jese hi hosh aata h , pahale to wo bahut ghabra jate h or unhe naina ki chinta hone lagti h per jab unki najar naina p padti h to unhe rahat pahunchti h.

Pandit ji :- tu thik to h na beti or hum yaha kese pahunche .

Fir naina pandit ji ko sari baat batati h or boli .

Naina:- baba aap chinta mat kijiye ,ap jaldi thik ho jaoge .

Pandit ji :- beti m janta hu ki mera ant samay nikat aachuka h , kyu yu jhut bol ke khud ko taklif de rahi ho.

Ab naina k sabar ka bandh tut jata h or wo jor jor se rote hue pandit ji k gale lag k boli.

Naina:- ni baba , aapko kuch ni hoga , m aapko kuch ni hone dungi , aapko kahi ni jane dungi.

Pandit ji :- beta ye to jindagi ka katu satya h , jiska janm hua h uski mrityu bhi nishchit h . Or tum kabse sach se darne lagi .

Naina:- ni baba m aapko kuch ni hone dungi , m duniya k sabse ache se ache doctor ko dikhaungi, aap jald hi swasth ho jaoge .

Pandit ji :- beta ab iska koi fayda ni h,meri bachi m apne pran is hospital m ni tyagna chahata , mujhe mere ghar , meri maa k pass le ja meri bachi.

Meri ye aakhiri khawaish h ki , m apne praan maa k charno m hi tyagu.

Naina ne bahut koshis ki pandit ji ko samjhane ki or bade doctor k pass le jane ki , lekin pandit ji ni mane , shayad unhe ab apne ant samay k ane ka ahasas ho chuka tha.

Isliye wo wapas ma k mandir jane ko bol rahe the , unhonne sari umra maa ki seva ki thi , or unki yahi khawaish thi , ki wo apne pran maa k charno m tyag.

Akhir m naina ko pandit ji ki jid manni hi padi or usne thakur ki madad se pandit ji ko apne mandir le ker pahunchi .

Or wahi thakur ne mandir k ander ek gada or takiya lagwaya or pandit ji ko uspe leta diya gaya.

Naina wahi side m bethe royi ja rahi thi , or pandit kuch sochte hue bole.

Pandit ji :- beti .

Naina:- ha baba boliye.

Pandit ji :- beti mera ant samay nikat achuka h , lekin m jane se pahale tumhe tumhare satya or tumhare jivan k prayojan se avgat kerwa dena chahata hu .

Taki mrityu k baad meri aatma ko shanti mil sake .

Naina:- kesi sachai baba.

Pandit ji thakur ki or dekhte h or thakur pandit ji ka ishara samjh mandir se bahar chala jata h.fir pandit ji bole.



Pandit ji :- beta , sabse pahale to m tujhse shama chahata hu ki mane tujhse aajtak ye sachai chupayi.

Fir pandit ji bole.

Pandit ji :- beti , satya ye h ki m tumhara , sach m pita ni hu.

Naina ko ye sun bahut bada sock lagta h.

Naina :- ni baba ye satya ni h , kah dijiye , apne jo bola wo jhut h.

Pandit ji (rote hue ) :- ni beti , mane jo bola h wo purntah satya h.mane to bas tumhe ek putri ki tarah pala h . Lekin tumne mujhe kabhi ahasas hi ni hone diya ki tum meri beti ni ho na hi mere man me esa kabhi vichar aaya.

Naina(rote hue boli) :- ager ye satya h to kon h mere pita , kon h wo maa , jisne apni beti ko yu asahay chod diya.

Mujhe janm dene wale bhale hi koi or ho baba , parantu mere liye mere pita mere baba aap hi rahoge.

Naina (gusse me)Mujhe ni janna us maa k bare m , jisne apni bachi ko janm to diya , per use marne chod diya.

Pandit ji :- ni beta , esa ni bolte . Tumhari maa ki bahut badi majburi thi , or abhi bhi vo khatre m.

Naina:- kya ?

Pandit ji :- ha beti , m tumhe batata hu kya kaaran tha , tumhari maa ka tumhe mere pas chodne ka.


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Sham ho chuki thi or karan ki tension or bhi bad gayi thi , kyunki use msg mila tha .

Jiske according prize distribution ceremony parso raat ko thi , pahale to usne socha hua tha , ki ceremony din m ho jayegi or wo sham ko yaha se nikal k raat tak apne ghar pahunch jayenge , per yaha to sab ulta ho raha tha.

Karan radha ko apne room m bulata h or use wo sab bat batata h or bolta h.

Karan :- gudiya , tum kal ki flight se wapas ghar lot jao , aunty ko tumhari bahut jarurat h .

Radha:- nahi bhai m apke bina yaha se kahi ni jane wali , or ek din m koi fark ni padne wala.

Jyoti :- baat ko samjhne ki koshis ker choti , aunty ko waha jarurat h tumhari.

Radha:- ni di mane kaha na m kahi ni jane wali , m aapki prize ceremony dekh ker hi jaungi.

Karan or jyoti use bahut samjhate h per radha man hi ni rahi thi.

Radha(rote hue) :- m samjh gayi , aap ni chahate na m yaha ruku or wo bacho jese rote hue kamre se bhag gayi.

Karan :- are gudiya ruk to.

Tabhi sonam kamre m enter kerti h or boli.

Sonam:- kya hua bhaiya , aap itna pareshan kyu ho or ye radha yu rote hue kyu gayi.

Karan ko sonam ko dekh ek ummid ki kiran najar aati h or karan use sari baat batata h.

Karan :- gudiya ab tu hi radha ko samjha sakti h , kyunki jaha tak m samjh raha hu , prize distribution to bahana h , asal m to uska tumhe chod k jane ka man ni h.

Please choti ab tu hi kuch ker .

Sonam bhi ye baat sun udaas ho jati h , chahati to wo bhi ni thi ki radha jaye , per uska jana jaruri tha, ye soch ker boli.

Sonam :- thik h bhaiya, m radha se baat kerti hu.

Karan sonam ko gale laga ke bola

Karan :- thank you so much gudiya hamari majburi samjhne k liye , m janta hu ki tu bhi bahut udaas h radha k jane se .

Per meri gudiya tu chinta mat ker , hum dobara jald hi aayenge , tumse milne.

Sonam ye sun thoda khush hote hue boli:- per bhai meri ek shart h, ki radha k jane k baad aapko mere ghar p rukna hoga.

Jyoti :- are gudia , tu kyu bina bajah pareshan ho rahi h.

Lekin sonam karan or jyoti ko mana hi leti h or bad jati h radha k kamre ki or .

Jaha radha takiye m muh chupaye roye ja rahi thi.

Sonam uske pass jake uske sir ko sahalate hue boli .

Sonam :- e bandriya kyu ro rahi h or
Ye m kya sun rahi hu tune bhai ki baat ni mani.

Radha sonam ko dekh jhat se uske gale lag rome lagi or boli

Radha :- dekh na sonam , bhai mujhe yaha rukne ni de rahe , m bhai ki prize distribution ceremony dekhna chahati hu.

Sonam :- acha , to ye mote mote aansu , ceremony k liye .

Udaas hone ki acting kerte hue .

Sonam :- or m soch rahi thi , meri saheli mujse dur hone pe udass h .

Radha uski baat ko samjh gai or usko gale lagate hue boli.

Radha:- ha sonu(radha sonam ko pyar se kabhi kabhi sonu bolti h) , sach yahi h ki m tujhe chod k ni jana chahati , jindagi m pahali baar to ek sachi saheli mili muje , ab m usse bichdna ni chahati


Sonam:- m bhi kaha khush hu radhu aap sab k jane se , m jab aap logo se jab pahali baar mili thi , tab m kitni khush hui thi ,m bata ni sakti , bhagwan ne karan bhaiya or jyoti didi itna pyar kerne wale k rup m bhai bahan or tere rup me itni achi saheli jo di bhagwan ne .

Mujhe to pata hi nk chala , kab 2 hafte nikal bhi gaye. M to khud ni chahati ki tum jao , per aunty ko bhi vaha tumhari jarurat h na. Tum hi batao Aunty mere bare m kya sochegi ki kesi saheli mili tumhe , jo usko apni maa. Se hi dur ker rahi h.
Tum chahti ho esa ho .

Radha ne na m sir hilaya.

Sonam :- to fir meri baat maan radhu or kal tum apni mummy k pas chali jao.

M tumhe promise kerti hu , ki jald m tumse milne aayungi, or hum dono fir khub ghumenge. Ghumaogi na mujhe.

Radha sonam k samjhane p maan jati h or boli .

Radha :- thik h sonu , tu bolti h to m jarur jaungi.

Per moti apna wada yaad rakhna , ager tu hamare jane k baad ni ayi humse milne jald or hume bhul gayi to yaha aaker tujhe pitungi .

Sonam:- ha jarur.

Or uske galo ko khichte hue boli

Sonam :- or tu bhi koi bhulne wali item h kya meri bandriya.

Ye bol dono hasne lagti h or dono jake ye baat karan or jyoti ko batati h ki radha man gayi h .Or radha bhi apne behavior k liye karan or jyoti se mafi mangti h.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi .

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Note :- I m very disappointed friends , kal mane ek ni 2 updates diye , fir bhi koi acha response ni aaya , ulta pahle se bhi kam response mila, please friends ager mujhse story m koi romance ya sex ko abhi add ni ker raha abhi ye soch k alawa bhi aapki najar m koi galti h to jarur bataiye .
Ese likhne m maja ni aata.or ha m un writer jesa ni hu ko response na ane ka bahana ker story adhuri chod dete h.
Mane ye pyari story shuru ki h to complete bhi jarur karunga friends , per please apne review jarur diya kijiye

Nice update bhai
Prize distribution ceremony to baad mein hogi ab
Radha to chali jayegi ab
To shayad ab wo time aa gya hai
Jab Karan ND Jyoti vikral se ladenge

Sonam phirse akeli ho jayegi
I think Karan ND Jyoti jaane se pehle Sonam ki financial help jaroor karenge apni prize money se

Naina k baba ka last time aa gya hai
Akhir Kya hai Naina ki hakeeqat
Kya bàat chuppai h pandit ji ne
Kon hai Naina k mom dad

Aur Naina ki mom kis tarah ki musibat mein hai
Karan ND Jyoti kab milenge Naina se
Kaafi kuch dekhna padega

Bhai aap tension mat lo jyada 31st March sar pe hai sabki to kaafi log busy honge
Sab 31 March k baad regular ND sahi tareke se reply Karne lag jayenge

Waiting for the next update
 

Arjun Singh 72

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awesome update
bhai aap review ki chinta mat kariye
aap ki story fantastic hi
aur Bhai humsealog free nahi hote ki aur aap ne dono update night main Diya tha
agar aap ek evening and ek night main post karte to aacha response milta
baaki main yahi kahuga story jabardast hi
 
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