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Update no :- 59
Location :- rampur .
Naina :- ' karuna me jo shakti h , vo krodh me kaha baba'
Fir naina boli .
Naina:- Shila ji k gunahgar sirf sukhiya hi ni tha , balki aap sab bhi h.
Ganv ka ek admi bola.
Admi :- hum bhala kese gunahgar hue , humne to kuch kiya hi ni tha.
Naina :- yahi to aap sabka apradh h , ki aapne kuch ni kiya . Us bichari k sath anyay hote hue dekhte rahe . Anyay kerne wale jitna hi gunhegar wo bhi hota h , jo anyay hota dekh k bhi mon rahe.
Bujurg :- beti tumne hamari ankhe khol di , tumne sahi kaha beti bhul to humse hui h or hume iska pashchatap bhi kerna chahiye
Tum hi koi iska koi upaay beti , jo hum is paap k bhar se mukt ho jaye .
Naina:- baba , pashchatap ki bhavna wo agni h , jo kisi k hriday m prajvalit ho jaye to uske kiye galtiyo ki maafi ishwar swayam de deta h .
Fir bhi aap kuch kerna hi chahate h to , meri ek prathna h , ganv me se koi bhi tirtharaj gaya ji jaker , shila ji ka pind dan ker de. Yahi aap sab ka Sacha pashchatap hoga .
Bujurg ko bhi ye baat bilkul sahi lagti h or vo bolte h.
Bujurg:- adhbhut pratibha h tumhari beti , 17 saal ki umar me , esi pratibha , itni samjhdari .
Pandit ji to dhanya ho gaye h tumhe pake beti . Tumne jesa kaha h vesa hi hoga beti . M khud apne bete k sath "gaya" ji ja ker shila ka pind dan karunga beti.
Naina bas muskurati h or bolti h.
Naina:- acha baba , ye to bahut achi baat h, ab mujhe ijajat dijiye.
Ye bol wo jaane lagi , to ladke ka pita bola.
Pita :- are beti apni mahanat ka koi inaam ya koi vetan(fees). Bina liye hi jaa rahi ho.
Naina :- kesi baat kerte ho chacha , mane jo bhi kiya , ye mera kartavya tha, mane apne pitaji se ye vidhya sikhi hi samaj ki niswarth seva or lok kalyan k liye hi h chacha ji.
Isliye m is kaam k apse koi pese ni le sakti .
Naina ne ye baate badi vinamrata se boli , jisse sab prabhavit ho gaye.
Naina:- or aap fir bhi kuch kerna hi h , to jo pese aap mujhe dene wale the, use goshala m daan ker dijiye.
Itna bol naina waha se nikal gayi.
Or wapas apne ghar aaker apne kaamo m lag gayi . Sham ko uske pita yani pandit ji bhi aagaye.
Naina pandit ji ko dekh bahut khush hui . Or dod k unke charan chuti h or gale lag ke boli.
Naina:- baba aap aagye, aap to kal aane wale the na ,
Pandit :- ha beti aane wala to kal tha , per kya keru beti teri yaad mujhe jaldi kich layi .
Mane socha ek to tu itne sal baad vapis yaha apni school ki padhayi puri kerke aayi or m tujhe time bhi ni de raha.
Naina kuch ni bolti or apne pita ko or kaske gale laga leti h. Fir pandit ji bole
Pandit ji :- beti jara apni ankhe to band ker .
Naina:- kyu baba .
Pandit :- please ker na beti .
Naina ne apni ankhe band ker li or pandit ji use ankhe na kholne ko bol uska hath pakad k ghar k bahar lejane lagte h.
Or ghar se bahar le jaker naina ko ankhe kholne ko bolte h ,or jese hi apni ankhe kholti h , to khushi k mare uchal padti h , or jhat se pandit ji k gale lag k , unke dono gal chum k bolne lagi .
Naina:- thank you , thank you so much baba , aap duniya k sabse ache baba ho.
Naina k itne khush hone ka kaaran ye tha
Ha pandit ji shahar naina k liye ye jeep lene hi gaye the , kyunki naina shahar m hi hostel m rah ker padhai kerti to , usme kuch shahari shok bhi aagaye the , jo normal the. Jisme sabse jyada uski khawaish ek jeep lene ki hi thi khud k liye.
Naina :- baba , per aapko itna kharcha kerne ki kya jarurat thi baba or wo bhi new . Second hand hi lelete na.
Pandit ji :- ese kese second hand ke leta bhai , meri gudiya kya kisi ki use ki hui gadi chalayegi.
Or beti tu har baat p peso ki chinta mat kiya ker , mane ye sab savings tere liye hi to ki h meri bachi , ab tere liye kuch na kiya to fir kya fayda in peso ka.
Naina:- per baba fir bhi itna kharcha.
Pandit ji uske sir p hath ferte hue bole.
Pandit ji :- beta meri asli sampati to tu h meri bachi , mera gorav mera abhiman h tu. Beta mane suna kese tumne shila ki aatma ko nyaya dilwaya aaj , mujhe garv h meri bachi tum per .
M ramu(ganv ka ek admi , jiske sath pandit ji jeep lene gaye the ,or wahi drive kerke laya tha) k sath jab aaraha tha , to ganv walo ne mujhe rok rok k teri tarif ki h .
Ab wo chod gudiya ab apne baba ko apni nayi jeep ki ser ni kerwaogi kya.
Naina(excited hote hue) :- ha ha kyu ni baba chaliye.
Fir naina apni jeep p pandit ji ko pura gaanv ghumati h.
Location :- kfd lok.
Kfd apne singhasan pe bethe hue naina k is prakram ko dekh rahe the or sath m naradji bhi the.
Narad ji :- adhbhut , kitni adhbhut pratibha h is balika m prabhu , kitna saral or ahankaar mukt pravarti h is balika ki , bilkul vese hi jesi paravarti karan or jyoti jesi h.
Na jane kyu mujhe esa pratit ho raha h ki ,naina ka karan or jyoti se bahut gahara sambhand h prabhu.
Kya mera anuman uchit h na prabhu ?.
Kfd:- ha devrishi , aapka anuman uchit h , naina ka karan or jyoti se bahut hi ghahra rishta h .
Ya yu kah lijiye karan or jyoti ka hi ek hissa h h naina , bhavishya m karan k liye naina , jyoti saman hi priya hogi.
Narad ji thoda jhijakte hue bole.
Narad ji :- prabhu , ager aap abhay dan de to ek prashn puchu.
Kfd:- puchiye na devrishi, kesi baat kerte h , m aapki kisi baat se rush ho sakta hu kya bhala.
Narad ji :- prabhu mere man me ye shanka h ki , jesa ki apne kaha ki naina bhavishya m karan ko atyant priya hogi.
To mujhe ye bhay h prabhu kahi naina jyoti ka sthan na lele karan k hriday me. Ye bhay mere man me isliye uttpan hua h , kyunki naina ka vyaktitv ko bhi prabhavit ker de .
Narad ji ki baat bilhul sahi thi . Naina ka sach m hi esa vyaktitv hi h . Yaha tak k is story sare reader sirf naina k entry seen m hi usse impress hogaye.
Kfd (haste hue bole) :- ye kesa balko jesa prashn ker rahe h aap devrishi, mana ki naina m esi pratibha h ki vo kisi ko bhi apne mahan vyaktitv se prabhavit ker de
Parantu jyoti ki to baat hi kuch bhin h dev rishi , jyoti to sakshat tyag ,karuna or prem ki jiti jagti murat h. Uske vyaktitv k aage dev kanyaye bhi kuch ni h . Swayam vichar kijiye devrishi , itne kathinaiyon m bhi , jyoti ne apne vyaktitv me lesh matra bhi parivartan ni aane diya , uski jagah koi or hoti to kya wo itna saral or paropakar ki bhavna se yukt hota.
Usne itni kathinaiyon m bhi apne bhai ka sath na choda , ishwar ki bhakti ni chodi , or paropakar kerti rahi.
Nahi devrishi esa kerna kisi k liye bhi sambhav ni hota. M ye ni bol raha , ki naina jyoti k samne kuch bhi ni , parantu jyoti ki tulna kisi se bhi kerna uchit ni h devrishi.
Or rahi baat karan ki to jyoti karan ki bahan hi ni , uski shakti bhi vahi h or prem bhi. Shwas bhi wahi h or hriday ki dhadkan bhi. To aap hi batiye devrishi , jesa aapne kaha vesa hona kya sambhav h.
Narad ji :- apne uchit kaha prabhu mera prashn vastav me hi murkhta purn tha , jo mane in 3 mahan aatmao ki tulna kerne ka prayas kiya.
Back to the story.
Karan or jyoti subah aaj jaldi uth jate h thoda , kyunki unhone kafi din se dhyan ni lagaya tha or baba ne kaha tha ki unke liye dhyan lagana bahut jaruri h.
Karan or jyoti abhi dhyan m bethe hi the , ki achanak jyoti k chahare k hav bhav thode badalte h .
Fir thodi der baad jyoti apni ankh khol k boli.
Jyoti :- bhai kya aapne bhi vahi anubhav kiya , jo abhi mane kiya tha.
Karan kuch ni bolta or bas apni gardan ha me hila deta h.
Jyoti :- ager hume jo anubhav kiya h bhai vo sach h to hume shigra hi kuch kerna hoga bhai.
Karan :- tum pareshan mat ho choti mane sab kuch soch liya h, tu to bas competition or ghumne firne m dhyan laga.
Hm fir 2no bhai bahan bari bari se nahane jate h. Or thodi m dono teyar ho jate h.
Jyoti aaj kuch esi lag rahi thi. Bahut hi pyari or khubsurat .Karan hamesha ki tarah uski tarif kerte hue uske gal chumta h.
Jyoti :- bhai , abhi tak sonam or radha ni aayi.
Karan :- lagta h dono maharaniya abhi tak so rahi h.chal gudiya unko uthate h.
Karan or jyoti jese hi radha k kamre m enter kerte h , to pate h uski dono bahane abhi tak so rahi h.
Karan ko ek masti sujhti h or wo jyoti k kan m kuch bolta h , pahale to jyoti na bolti h, lekin karan mana leta h.
Fir karan un dono ko apni shakti se pahale to gahari nind sulata h , fir bathroom m ja ker tub ko garam pani se bharta h.
Or dusre rum m jaker jyoti bhi vese hi kerti h. Or fir karan sonam ko or jyoti radha ko god m uthati h .
Or karan sonam ko le jaker bath tub m dal deta h , esa hi jyoti radha k sath dusre kamre me kerti h.
Sonam had bada k uth jati h
Sonam :- mummy , bad aagayi koi to bacho.
Tabhi use karan k hasne ki aawaz aati h or wo khud ko bath tub m paker sabhi majra samjh jati h.
Sonam:- bhaiiiii, aaj to aap gaye bol k karan ko marne uske piche bhagi .
Karan jese hi bathroom se nikla to dekhta h ki jyoti bhi bachao bachao kerte hue usi room m aarahi h , or uske piche puri bhigi hui radha padi hui h.
Or dono bahane mil ker karan or jyoti ko pakad leti h . Or fir shuru hoti h dono bhai bahan ki dhulayi,
Per pyaar se.
Fir 4ro bhai bahan yu hi masti kerte hue khana khate h. Or fir nikal jate h ghumne .
Karan :- gudiya , aaj hume kaha chalna chahiye ,
Sonam :- bhai aaj m aapko , shimla ki kul devi k mandir le jane wali hu.
Kaha jata h ki jo shimla aata h , use maa k darshan karna anivarya h.
Fir nikal padte h sabhi devi tara k mandir . Fir waha mandir m jaker sonam boli.
Sonam :- bhai kaha jata h ki ager , yaha maa k samne apne mannat mangne se manchaha jivan sathi milta h .
Karan(hath jod k man me bolta h) :- he jagat janni maa , aap to sarv vyapini ho , aapse bhala kya chupa h ma, aap to janti hi ho ki ye karan is sansaar m sabse jyada kisi se sabse jyada prem kerta h to vo h jyoti. Or aapke is bete ne apna dil use hi de betha h maa.
M janta hu ma ye samaj k niyamo k virudh h , parantu aap or mere mahadev sakshi h ki mera prem utna hi pavitra h,jitni bhagwan gangadhar ki jatao se nikalne wali gana maa. Apne is putra ki sahayta kero maa.use is dharm sankat se nikalo.
Jyoti (man me ) :- he maA, aap to janti hi h , ki mane sirf or sirf apne bhaiya se prem kiya h ,or kisi k baare m sapne m bhi ni socha.
M janti hu ma ki ye samaj ye rishta swikar ni karega , parantu maa mujhe bas apna aashirwad or ye vardan dijiye ki , mere bhai mere prem ko swikaar ker le. Fir m is samaaj se ladne ko bhi teyar hu ma
Ese hi karan or jyoti maa k samne apne dil ki vyatha maa k samne sunate h.
Lekin waha ek ghatna or hui jo kisi ne ni dekhi . Maa ki murti se ek adrishy roshni nikal ker karan or jyoti p padhi , jiska arthat tha ki unhe maa ka aashirwad mil chuka h.
Fir mandir se bahar nikal sonam batati h.
Sonam :- bhai shimla ka naam , maa tara k ek nam "shyamala" se hi bana h , jo present m shimla ho gaya.
Kahate h ek baar yaha k raja ek baar jungle m ghumne gaye to is jagah maa ne unhe darshan diye , or yaha pe rahane ki icha jahir ki.
Isliye raja ne yaha maa ka ye mandir banwaya , or uske baad hi shimla shahar ka nirman hua.
Karan or jyoti maa ki ek or divya katha sun ke bahut khush hue or sonam ka dhanywad kiya.
Fir sabhi nikal gaye snow skeeying k liye. Sonam unko shimla ki us jagah leker jati h, jaha snowfall hoti h.
Radha:- wow bhai ,kitni sunder h ye jagah , har or hi baraf hi baraf . Pata h bhai mera bachpan se dream tha .
Jyoti :- haa gudiya mera bhi.
Ye dono baat ker hi rahe the ki dono ko ek ek baraf ka gola lagta h, jo karan ne mara tha.
Karan :- kyu bachu , snow pasand h na , to lo .
Or fir se wo gole marne lagta h , ab radha , jyoti or sonam bhi isi khel me shamil ho jati h.
Per inhe ni pata tha , ki abhi ek durghatana hone wali h. Jisse anjan sabhi bhai bahan aaram se khel rahe the.
Aaj k liye bas itna hi.
Stay tuned.
Superb update
Naina ka role yani ki lamba hai
Kya Naina is story ki second heroine hogi
Jiski shaadi bhi Karan se hogi in future
Naina ka nature kaafi impressive hai
Wo kaise Karan nd Jyoti se milegi
Karan ND Jyoti ne Kya feel Kiya sapne mein
Aur Karan ne Kya plan Kiya hai
Charon MAA k mandir mein maatha tek aaye
Snow bhi dekh li aur snow se khel bhi liya
Ab konsi musibat aa gayi hai
Waiting for the next update
