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Romance भंवर (पूर्ण)

Rahul

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nain11ster

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Mitra mai achchhe lekhako ki bahut kadar karta hu aur khashkar prem par adharit kathao ka adhayan karne ko prayasrat rahta hu aapki kahani me mujhe apsayu ka kirdar kafi pasand aaya h
Mazak karne ki manahi nahi h mitra bas darta hu ki kahi kisi ko apne kathan se prabhavit na kar du.

Esliye fir se love you bhai

Update padha achchha laga aaj sanchi ki savedna ka abhas hua ki vo apne kiye par sharminda hai kintu ek baat kahna chahunga ki jo ye sanchi kah gai ki mai to ye chahti thi ki apsayu mujhse vasna matra ki purti kar le Ese uska gussa smajh Kar mai ye karke kahi dur chali jaungi.
Kya apna hero itna hi bekar hai ki vo matra vasna purti ke liye sanchi se judav mahsoos karta tha aur kya vo sanchi ko swayam se dur jane de sakta hai.

Aapke mazak ke uplakshya me chand lineS

Hum tum bhole piya jag hai julmi,
Preet ko paap kahte adharmi,
Sabse na kahio Ye baata Dilo ki,
Jag sune to julam hoi jaye.

Nishdin mai karu teri puja,
Naino me nhi aaye koi duja,
Mano kasam gar jhooth kahe hum,
Ye chadhati jwani bhasam hoi jaye.

Jab tak hai jwani tab tak hai jmana,
Chahe jise ji bhar ke sata lo,
Yaad rakhio tab koi na chahe,
Jab ye jwani khatam hoi jaye.
Humari atariya pe aaja re swariya dekha dekhi balam hoi jaye.

:hug: ... chaliye koi na ... yahan sab mature hain ... halke fulke hasi mazak hote rahte hain ...

dekhiye prashn acha hai lekin yahan par 2 baten hain ....

1) hum moh aur maya me mad me sadaiw jivan jite hain... jab viswamitr ki tapsya bhang ho sakti hai jo "Para Vidhya" ke marg par agrsar the .. fir Apasyu to insan hi hai .. aur usme bhi insani bhawnayen hi hain... bas dikhata kam hai ...

2) jo bhi baaten thi wo ektarfa baten thi ... Sachi ki .. jo uske man me vichar aaya .. aur jitni bhi baten usne kahi ... wo sachi ka anubhaw aur uski soch ki bhawana thi ... abhi Apasyu ka kya najriya hai is pure mamle me ya wo uski soch kya chal rahi hai .. uska aaklan sidhe sidhe nahi kiya ja sakta...

kabhi kabhi hum khud se itna kuch soch lete hain jitni baten hoti nahi .. isliye pariksha hi ekmatr upay hai .. aane wale update ke sath sab clear ho jayega :)
 

nain11ster

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Lagta h aap bhi un priya pathako me se hi h bhai jinhe mera kathan apriya pratit hua h
Vo love you bhai ji nain11ster galati se ek sath post ho gya space dena yaad nhi raha baki aapse bhi mafi mangta hu.
are wo bhi majak hi kar rahe hain .. bahut mature hain aur ksfi suljhe bhi .. unhe 0% hi bura laga hoga .. arthat unhone bure lagne jaisa chij to dimag me laye bhi na honge
 

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इसलिए इसलिए.....
ये भटकाव अच्छा नहीं इश्क बुरी बला होती है। लग जाये तो आसानी से पीछा नहीं छूटता। साची, हम पाठकगण आपको मना तो नहीं कर सकते पर इतना जरुर हैं की प्रीत का स्वाद जो चखा जुबान ने फिर बेगाने हुए जग से समझो..... :lollypop:

Btw brilliant update with awesome writing skill nainu ji :applause: :applause:

ohk inispired by naina ji post .. sabko kinare lagate hain .. sabka break up karwate hain.. naina ji wo break up wala song ready rakhiye :D
 

nain11ster

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Wah bhai kya gajab ke update deiye he. Pehle update me jaha aapne rajeev ki akad todi wahi sachi ki ma ki najro me apasyu ki image bahut achhi bana di. Wahi dusare update me aapne sachi aur kunjal ki dosti bhi karwa di. Aur dono ko ek dusare ke kayi raaz bhi pata chal gaye. ab sayad kunjal sachi ki madad bhi karegi apasyu ko usake pass lane me.
Waiting 4 next update

dekhiye kahan jati hai ye deewangi (sachi ki) .. aur kab tak ego ke mad me jhumta rahega insan (rajiv mishra) .. thanks a lpt Aka bhai .. apne vichar dete rahiye
 

nain11ster

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भाई मुझे हंसी आ रही है............और आपको नाराज़ दिख रहा हूँ..........................
यहाँ हम आते ही असल ज़िंदगी की नाराजगियों को भूलकर हंसने मुस्कुराने का मूड बनाने के लिए हैं

--------------मुस्कुराइए की आप xf में हैं--------------
(ये पंक्ति एक शहर के बाहर लिखी हुई है..उस शहर के नाम के साथ ...offcorse xf की जगह ........... और किस किस को पता है उस शहर के इस slogan का ...बताना :))
lucknow :) ... ji maine bhi unhe yahi samjhaya hai :hug:
 

nain11ster

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agar yeh gyan patti pehle hi samajh jaati toh ish haal mein na hoti... Khair ab purani baton pe mitti dalo aur ek naye sanshar basa lo apsyu ke sang..
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update... Great going :applause: :applause:

areee .. aap ne pichle comment me pyar na karo ki salah de dali aur isme sansar basa lo ... apne sath sath mujhe b confuse kar diye .. maine to break up bhi shuru karwa diya hai :dazed:
 

nain11ster

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is ko bolte hai naye updates.
nhi to ab tak to aye sa he lag raha tha ki purani story ki ek ek jhalak dekhalake kam nikala jaa raha hai.

in updates main story samundar ki gharai ki tarah gharai ho gai hai.

aye se update do to kuch samaj main bhi aata hai ki kuch to chal raha hai.
nhi to lagta hai ki bus confuse karne main maja aar ha hai tum ko :beee:

vese itne gaharai main utarne ki vajah reader to nhi ho ge jo comment kar kar ke tum hara beja kha gai the.
is badalaw ke piche reader na ho to he acha hai.
kyu ki jo phale se socha kar likhi gai he baat ka alag he maja ho ta hai :D

moti ke sath kam raha karo .. dimag bhi tumhara mota hua ja raha hai... koi purani story wali baat na thi .. iska taste alag hai bakiyon se .. ab duniya bhar ki story dimag me rakh kar padhoge to yahi haal hona hai :D..

readers cpmment ke hisab se update aate to action shuru rahta .. kyon wo main baad me bataunga .. ya puch lena .. kahani apne lay me aur bilkul plot ke hisab se chal rahi hai ... kal raat bus main isi baat ki samiksha bhi kar raha tha.. so dont worry .. aur mote dimag ko patla karne ki kosis karo :D
 

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समझ कैसे आती................ पहले ही क्रेज़ी बॉय ने भड़का दिया................. नैना जी आप ही की फेक आईडी तो नहीं थी वो
mujhe bhi kuch kuch shaq ho raha hai .. waise id to crazy boy ki hi hogi .. istamal nanina ji kar rahi ho wo na pata :D
 
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