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Uss ACP ko indra dev ke kavach ke bavjood kuch feel kaise ho gaya?? jabki indradev ko to pata tha ki kon kon arnav ko dundhne aaye h city mein to unhone usi ke according kavach banaya hoga na?..... 
Surbhi ka koi role nhi h kya story mein vo kidhar gayab ho gayi...?
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UPDATE 16
me ghar per pahucha fresh hua or neeche aagya. Jaha badiya coffee Mera intjaar kar rahi thi.
Main- or dadu kya baat hai aaj kal aapke pass mere liye time hi nahi hai.
Dadu- hai ye dailogue mera hai. Samjha kya. Bahu Jara ise batao ye baat.
Mom- pitaji sahi keh rahe hai. Tu aajkal bahut alag behave kar raha hai. Akhir baat kya hai.
Main- ye aaplog kya baat kar rahe hai. Maine kab alag behave Kiya. Jo aisa keh rahe ho.
Dadu- kyu aaj kal tera routine badal gya hai. Dhyan me baithne laga hai. Or mere se to baat karna hi band kar diya hai.
Mom- or mujhse bhi.
Main- ye sawal aap apne aap se puchho. Jab se aapki dono betiya aai hai. Aap dono unhi me lage rehte ho. Ab isme meri kya galti. Ye dono to free hai. Lekin mujhe to clg Jana padta hai na. Or dadu aap ye kaisi sikayat leke baith gye hai. Kitne din ho gye aapne mujhe ek Jodi kapde Tak la ke nahi diye. Na hi mere liye koi gift leke aaye. Naraz to mujhe hona chahiye. Ulta aap ho rahe ho.
Meri is baat se dadu ek dum shan't pad gye. Or mom ek Tak Mera chehra dekhne lagi. Or renu or shurbhi ka to muh hi khula reh gya.
Renu- dadu ye kya keh raha hai. Iski shopping aap karte ho.
Main- shopping nahi. Gifts.
Renu- ha bahi. Aapne mujhe to kabhi koi gift nahi diya.
Dadu ne meri taraf dekha or Maine unhe aankh maar di.
Dadu- beta tum dono yaha rehti hi nahi ho. To me gifts kaha du tumhe. Ye yahi rehta hai to kabhi kabhar isko kuch ka kar de deta hu. Ab jabse tum dono aai ho. Sara din ghar me hi ghusi rehti ho. Na to khud kahi bahar jati ho na hi mujhe sath le jati ho. To me gifts kab lakar du tum logo ko.
Renu- dadu aap akele bhi to ja sakte hai na.
Dadu- akele jane me kya maja beta ji. Jab sab sath me hote hai tab jyada maja aata hai. Ek kaam karte hai. Abhi chalte hai sabhi. Badiy bahar hi khana khayenge kuch shopping karenge.
Mom- aaj nahi kal chalenge. Aaj maine khana bana liya hai. Vo sara waste ho jayega.
Main- ha ye sahi rahega. Baise bhi inki shopping me raat ke 12 baj jayenge. Or me itni der tk bhuka nahi ghum sakta.or na hi dadu. Kyu sahi kaha na Maine da du.
Dadu- ha bilkul theek. Kal chalenge
Shurbhi- maja aayega. Chal Renu ham list bana lete hai hame kya kya chahiye hai. Taki kal jyada time barbaad na ho.
Renu- theek hai. Lekin dadu kal koi bahana nahi chalega.
Dadu- beta me tum logo se jyada exited hu.kal ke liye.
Renu- ok
Uske baad dono jaldi se apne kamre me ghus gyi kal ki list banane ke liye. And dadu ne meri taraf dekha or maine ab baha se khisakne me hi bhalai samjhi.
Dadu- ae ruk. Kaha bhag raha hai.
Mom- beta ye sab kyu kaha tune.
Main- mom me to bas dadu ki tang kheech raha tha. Or sath me ye bhi ishara kar raha tha ki kafi din se koi bhi kahi ghumne nahi gya hai. Ye dono yaha ghumne aai hai dono din bhar Ghar me hi ghusi rehti hai. Na to aaplog unhe bahar jane dete ho. Jungle ke dar ki bajah se. Isliye maine socha ki sab sath me chalenge to masti or ghumna sab sath me ho jayega.
Dadu- lekin gifts ki baat kyu kahi tune unko. Vo kya sochengi mere bare me ki maine apne pote ko khoob gifts diye hai or apni poti ko kuch nahi diya.
Main- dadu aap kuch jyada hi soch rahe hai. Renu samajdar ladki hai. Or rahi baat gifts ki to ek tarah se ye sach bhi hai. Vo jabse delhi gyi hai aapne use koi bhi gift nahi bheja hai.
Dadu- me janta hu ye baat. Isiliye maine ek surprise gift already manga liya tha. Or use me baad me dene wala tha.
Main- to kal hi de dena. Double khush ho jayegi vo.
Dadu- ab koi rasta bhi nahi bacha hai. Me soch raha tha jis din vo dono jayengi tab dunga unko lekin ab kal hi dena padega. Chalo koi na. Lekin aage se dhyan rakhna samjha.
Main- ok. Baise baat kya hai aap aaj kuch serious mood me lag rahe hai. Kuch office ka tension hai kya.
Dadu- ha chhota sa tension hai. Lekin tu fikr mat kar me handle Kar lunga.
Main- kaisi baat karte ho dadu. Mere hote hue aapko koi or tension de ye mujhe to bilkul bhi manjoor nahi hai. Ye sirf mera kaam hai. Jara batao mujhe ki kisne aapko tension di hai.
Dadu- dekh rahi ho bahu kya keh raha hai ye.
Mom- mere hisaab se to sach hi keh raha hai. Ek yahi to hai jo aapko sach me tension me daal sakta hai. Baki kisme itni himmat hai.
Dadu- sach kaha tumne.
Main- to ab bata bhi deejiye.
Dadu- are beta aisi koi badi baat nahi hai. Darashal koi businessman hai jo jabardasti hamari company ke shares kharidna chahta hai. Maine use sedhe na keh diya. Jab hame bechna hi nahi hai to koi kharidega kaise. To vo mujhe dhamki dene laga. Bas to Maine use achhe se samjha Diya hai. Ab vo kabhi hamare raste me nahi aayega.
Main- baise kon hai vo. Jara naam to bataiye.
Dadu- uska naam hai. Surendra Rana. Kuch bade netao ka support hai isliye itna uchhal raha hai. Jab maine apni pahuch use dikhai to reh gya vo.
Main- badiya Kiya dadu.
Maine ye kehke dadu ki aankho ki taraf dekha. Jo mujhse chhipa rahe the. Thodi hi der me mujhe dadu ki aawaj sunai di.
Ab kaise kahu isko ki usne mujhe sabko jaan se Marne ki dhamki di hai. Or ab mere me itni himmat nahi ki me is age me apne bacho ki lasho ko dekh saku. Isliye ab mujhe uski baat manni hi padegi.
Ye aawaj sunte hi me samaj gya ki mamla kafi aage bad gya hai. Ab mujhe ise kuch alag tarike se solve karna padega.
Main- dadu ek kaam karte hai. Kal vaise bhi clg to ja nahi paunga. To soch raha hu. Kal office chala jaye. Thoda sabse jaan pehchan bhi kar lunga. Akhir sabko pata to chale ki me hu kon. Kya khayal hai aapka.
Dadu- baise idea achha hai. Lekin tu pehle apni padai to puri karle. Ye business to fir tujhe hi sambhalna hai.
Main- dadu Mana aapki baat sahi hai. Lekin office me sabke chehre to mujhe pata chale ki kon kya karta hai. Kya nahi. Kon apna hai kon paraya.kyu mom Maine kuch galat kaha kya.
Mom- pitaji Mera manna hai ki dev ko jana chahiye. Vo abhi se seekhega jab to aage chalkar sambhal payega Business. Or logo ki parakh karna aapse behtar koi nahi sikha sakta dev ko. Isliye kal aap isko le jana apne sath.
Main- or dadu me kaha roj aane wala hu. Kal hi ki to baat hai.
Mere or mom ke jor dene per dadu maan gye. Or me ab kal ka besabri se intjaar karne laga.
Bahi dusri taraf vo detya Acp ne mind to mind apne sare sathiyo ko raat me Milne ke liye bulaya. Usi jungle me.
Charo bahi per aagye time per.
D2- aisi kya baat thi jo hame aise achanak bulaya.
D1- baise baat kitni khas hai ya nahi ye me Dave ke sath nahi keh sakta hu. Lekin baat me thoda hi sahi dum to jarur hai.
D3- ab bata bhi do.
D1- ek ladka hai jisper mujhe shak hua hai.
D2- kaisa shak.
D1- yahi shak ki us ladke me kuch khas baat to hai. Me jab uske pass me tha to mujhe bahut ajeeb sa ehsas ho raha tha. Lekin kuch confirm nahi ho raha tha.ki vo ehsas akhir kis baat ka hai.
D4- baise kon hai ye ladka.
D1- yaad hai kal Maine kaha tha ki ek ladke ne police me sikayat ki thi ki is jungle se log gayab ho rahe hai.
D2- ha yaad hai. Or tumne ye bhi kaha tha ki sayad bahi shakti ho. Lekin hamne baad me use nakar diya tha.
D1- ha me usi ladke ki baat kar raha hu. Me aaj usse Mila tha. Isi jungle ke bare me puchhtach karne ke liye. Usne same bahi bataya Jo us report me likha tha. Lekin uske pass aate hi mera dill bechain sa hone laga tha. Mujhe pata nahi kyu thodi ghabrahat si ho rahi thi. Mujhe kuch ajeeb sa ehsas ho raha tha. Maine apni shakti se uske bare me janne ki kosis ki. Uska mind read karne ki kosis ki. Lekin me use nahi pad paya. Jis bajah se mujhe us per doubt hua hai.
Ye sab sunne ke baad un charo ka bhi dimaag hil gya ki kahi jiski talash me vo log aaye hai. Vo insan dev hi to nahi.
D2- tumhe yakeen hai ki tumhe kuch ajeeb sa ehsas usi ki moujudgi me ho raha tha. Kisi or ki nahi.
D1- mujhe pora 100% yakeen hai apni baat per.
D4- fir to us ladke se ek baar milna hi padega. Baise vo padta kaha hai.
D1- Maine pata Kiya hai. Vo usi ke dada ke dwara banaye gye ek clg me padta hai. Uska naam hai.*****************.
D2- me isi clg me to padata hu.
D4- fir to achhi baat hai. Baise bhi ham abhi jis jagah per jaankari juta rahe hai. Baha per hame koi bhi aisa insan nahi mila hai. Ek kaam karte hai me bhi usi clg me padna suru kar deta hu.
D2- ha tum ek kaam karo. Us clg ke kisi student ka roop le lo. Or tum bhi usi clg me padane wale kisi master ka roop le lo. Or jinka roop tum dono ne le rakha hai usko bapis unke ghar bhej do. Or unki jagah per us clg me padne wale or padane wale ko bhej do.
D3- theek hai. Lekin ye sab karne se pehle hame ek baar or pakka kar lena chahiye ki ye bakai me koi khas hai bhi ya nahi.
D2- ye bhi theek hai. Ek kaam karta hu. Me kal usse clg me hi milta hu. Agar mujhe bhi kuch ehsas hua to pakka ye bahi hai. Or baha se me uski jaankari bhi nikal lunga. Agar shak thoda bhi pakka nikla to. Uske baad tum dono apne roop badal lena.
D4- ha yahi theek rahega.
D1- me police bankar hi uske ware me or jaankari jutane ki kosis karunga. Or agar ye vo nahi hua to kisi or ka pata lagane me bhi aasani hogi.
D2- ha ye theek hai.
Ab hame chalna chahiye.
Uske baad ye Charo baha se bapis apne apne ghar pahuch gye. Matlab uske jinka inhone roop liya hai.
Or inke Jane ke Baad baha per devraj pragat hue.
Indradev- bilkul sahi raste per ja rahe ho tum log. Bilkul apni mout ke karib. Jao jao.
Ye kehke vo bhi antardhyan ho gye.
To be countinue………………….
me ghar per pahucha fresh hua or neeche aagya. Jaha badiya coffee Mera intjaar kar rahi thi.
Main- or dadu kya baat hai aaj kal aapke pass mere liye time hi nahi hai.
Dadu- hai ye dailogue mera hai. Samjha kya. Bahu Jara ise batao ye baat.
Mom- pitaji sahi keh rahe hai. Tu aajkal bahut alag behave kar raha hai. Akhir baat kya hai.
Main- ye aaplog kya baat kar rahe hai. Maine kab alag behave Kiya. Jo aisa keh rahe ho.
Dadu- kyu aaj kal tera routine badal gya hai. Dhyan me baithne laga hai. Or mere se to baat karna hi band kar diya hai.
Mom- or mujhse bhi.
Main- ye sawal aap apne aap se puchho. Jab se aapki dono betiya aai hai. Aap dono unhi me lage rehte ho. Ab isme meri kya galti. Ye dono to free hai. Lekin mujhe to clg Jana padta hai na. Or dadu aap ye kaisi sikayat leke baith gye hai. Kitne din ho gye aapne mujhe ek Jodi kapde Tak la ke nahi diye. Na hi mere liye koi gift leke aaye. Naraz to mujhe hona chahiye. Ulta aap ho rahe ho.
Meri is baat se dadu ek dum shan't pad gye. Or mom ek Tak Mera chehra dekhne lagi. Or renu or shurbhi ka to muh hi khula reh gya.
Renu- dadu ye kya keh raha hai. Iski shopping aap karte ho.
Main- shopping nahi. Gifts.
Renu- ha bahi. Aapne mujhe to kabhi koi gift nahi diya.
Dadu ne meri taraf dekha or Maine unhe aankh maar di.
Dadu- beta tum dono yaha rehti hi nahi ho. To me gifts kaha du tumhe. Ye yahi rehta hai to kabhi kabhar isko kuch ka kar de deta hu. Ab jabse tum dono aai ho. Sara din ghar me hi ghusi rehti ho. Na to khud kahi bahar jati ho na hi mujhe sath le jati ho. To me gifts kab lakar du tum logo ko.
Renu- dadu aap akele bhi to ja sakte hai na.
Dadu- akele jane me kya maja beta ji. Jab sab sath me hote hai tab jyada maja aata hai. Ek kaam karte hai. Abhi chalte hai sabhi. Badiy bahar hi khana khayenge kuch shopping karenge.
Mom- aaj nahi kal chalenge. Aaj maine khana bana liya hai. Vo sara waste ho jayega.
Main- ha ye sahi rahega. Baise bhi inki shopping me raat ke 12 baj jayenge. Or me itni der tk bhuka nahi ghum sakta.or na hi dadu. Kyu sahi kaha na Maine da du.
Dadu- ha bilkul theek. Kal chalenge
Shurbhi- maja aayega. Chal Renu ham list bana lete hai hame kya kya chahiye hai. Taki kal jyada time barbaad na ho.
Renu- theek hai. Lekin dadu kal koi bahana nahi chalega.
Dadu- beta me tum logo se jyada exited hu.kal ke liye.
Renu- ok
Uske baad dono jaldi se apne kamre me ghus gyi kal ki list banane ke liye. And dadu ne meri taraf dekha or maine ab baha se khisakne me hi bhalai samjhi.
Dadu- ae ruk. Kaha bhag raha hai.
Mom- beta ye sab kyu kaha tune.
Main- mom me to bas dadu ki tang kheech raha tha. Or sath me ye bhi ishara kar raha tha ki kafi din se koi bhi kahi ghumne nahi gya hai. Ye dono yaha ghumne aai hai dono din bhar Ghar me hi ghusi rehti hai. Na to aaplog unhe bahar jane dete ho. Jungle ke dar ki bajah se. Isliye maine socha ki sab sath me chalenge to masti or ghumna sab sath me ho jayega.
Dadu- lekin gifts ki baat kyu kahi tune unko. Vo kya sochengi mere bare me ki maine apne pote ko khoob gifts diye hai or apni poti ko kuch nahi diya.
Main- dadu aap kuch jyada hi soch rahe hai. Renu samajdar ladki hai. Or rahi baat gifts ki to ek tarah se ye sach bhi hai. Vo jabse delhi gyi hai aapne use koi bhi gift nahi bheja hai.
Dadu- me janta hu ye baat. Isiliye maine ek surprise gift already manga liya tha. Or use me baad me dene wala tha.
Main- to kal hi de dena. Double khush ho jayegi vo.
Dadu- ab koi rasta bhi nahi bacha hai. Me soch raha tha jis din vo dono jayengi tab dunga unko lekin ab kal hi dena padega. Chalo koi na. Lekin aage se dhyan rakhna samjha.
Main- ok. Baise baat kya hai aap aaj kuch serious mood me lag rahe hai. Kuch office ka tension hai kya.
Dadu- ha chhota sa tension hai. Lekin tu fikr mat kar me handle Kar lunga.
Main- kaisi baat karte ho dadu. Mere hote hue aapko koi or tension de ye mujhe to bilkul bhi manjoor nahi hai. Ye sirf mera kaam hai. Jara batao mujhe ki kisne aapko tension di hai.
Dadu- dekh rahi ho bahu kya keh raha hai ye.
Mom- mere hisaab se to sach hi keh raha hai. Ek yahi to hai jo aapko sach me tension me daal sakta hai. Baki kisme itni himmat hai.
Dadu- sach kaha tumne.
Main- to ab bata bhi deejiye.
Dadu- are beta aisi koi badi baat nahi hai. Darashal koi businessman hai jo jabardasti hamari company ke shares kharidna chahta hai. Maine use sedhe na keh diya. Jab hame bechna hi nahi hai to koi kharidega kaise. To vo mujhe dhamki dene laga. Bas to Maine use achhe se samjha Diya hai. Ab vo kabhi hamare raste me nahi aayega.
Main- baise kon hai vo. Jara naam to bataiye.
Dadu- uska naam hai. Surendra Rana. Kuch bade netao ka support hai isliye itna uchhal raha hai. Jab maine apni pahuch use dikhai to reh gya vo.
Main- badiya Kiya dadu.
Maine ye kehke dadu ki aankho ki taraf dekha. Jo mujhse chhipa rahe the. Thodi hi der me mujhe dadu ki aawaj sunai di.
Ab kaise kahu isko ki usne mujhe sabko jaan se Marne ki dhamki di hai. Or ab mere me itni himmat nahi ki me is age me apne bacho ki lasho ko dekh saku. Isliye ab mujhe uski baat manni hi padegi.
Ye aawaj sunte hi me samaj gya ki mamla kafi aage bad gya hai. Ab mujhe ise kuch alag tarike se solve karna padega.
Main- dadu ek kaam karte hai. Kal vaise bhi clg to ja nahi paunga. To soch raha hu. Kal office chala jaye. Thoda sabse jaan pehchan bhi kar lunga. Akhir sabko pata to chale ki me hu kon. Kya khayal hai aapka.
Dadu- baise idea achha hai. Lekin tu pehle apni padai to puri karle. Ye business to fir tujhe hi sambhalna hai.
Main- dadu Mana aapki baat sahi hai. Lekin office me sabke chehre to mujhe pata chale ki kon kya karta hai. Kya nahi. Kon apna hai kon paraya.kyu mom Maine kuch galat kaha kya.
Mom- pitaji Mera manna hai ki dev ko jana chahiye. Vo abhi se seekhega jab to aage chalkar sambhal payega Business. Or logo ki parakh karna aapse behtar koi nahi sikha sakta dev ko. Isliye kal aap isko le jana apne sath.
Main- or dadu me kaha roj aane wala hu. Kal hi ki to baat hai.
Mere or mom ke jor dene per dadu maan gye. Or me ab kal ka besabri se intjaar karne laga.
Bahi dusri taraf vo detya Acp ne mind to mind apne sare sathiyo ko raat me Milne ke liye bulaya. Usi jungle me.
Charo bahi per aagye time per.
D2- aisi kya baat thi jo hame aise achanak bulaya.
D1- baise baat kitni khas hai ya nahi ye me Dave ke sath nahi keh sakta hu. Lekin baat me thoda hi sahi dum to jarur hai.
D3- ab bata bhi do.
D1- ek ladka hai jisper mujhe shak hua hai.
D2- kaisa shak.
D1- yahi shak ki us ladke me kuch khas baat to hai. Me jab uske pass me tha to mujhe bahut ajeeb sa ehsas ho raha tha. Lekin kuch confirm nahi ho raha tha.ki vo ehsas akhir kis baat ka hai.
D4- baise kon hai ye ladka.
D1- yaad hai kal Maine kaha tha ki ek ladke ne police me sikayat ki thi ki is jungle se log gayab ho rahe hai.
D2- ha yaad hai. Or tumne ye bhi kaha tha ki sayad bahi shakti ho. Lekin hamne baad me use nakar diya tha.
D1- ha me usi ladke ki baat kar raha hu. Me aaj usse Mila tha. Isi jungle ke bare me puchhtach karne ke liye. Usne same bahi bataya Jo us report me likha tha. Lekin uske pass aate hi mera dill bechain sa hone laga tha. Mujhe pata nahi kyu thodi ghabrahat si ho rahi thi. Mujhe kuch ajeeb sa ehsas ho raha tha. Maine apni shakti se uske bare me janne ki kosis ki. Uska mind read karne ki kosis ki. Lekin me use nahi pad paya. Jis bajah se mujhe us per doubt hua hai.
Ye sab sunne ke baad un charo ka bhi dimaag hil gya ki kahi jiski talash me vo log aaye hai. Vo insan dev hi to nahi.
D2- tumhe yakeen hai ki tumhe kuch ajeeb sa ehsas usi ki moujudgi me ho raha tha. Kisi or ki nahi.
D1- mujhe pora 100% yakeen hai apni baat per.
D4- fir to us ladke se ek baar milna hi padega. Baise vo padta kaha hai.
D1- Maine pata Kiya hai. Vo usi ke dada ke dwara banaye gye ek clg me padta hai. Uska naam hai.*****************.
D2- me isi clg me to padata hu.
D4- fir to achhi baat hai. Baise bhi ham abhi jis jagah per jaankari juta rahe hai. Baha per hame koi bhi aisa insan nahi mila hai. Ek kaam karte hai me bhi usi clg me padna suru kar deta hu.
D2- ha tum ek kaam karo. Us clg ke kisi student ka roop le lo. Or tum bhi usi clg me padane wale kisi master ka roop le lo. Or jinka roop tum dono ne le rakha hai usko bapis unke ghar bhej do. Or unki jagah per us clg me padne wale or padane wale ko bhej do.
D3- theek hai. Lekin ye sab karne se pehle hame ek baar or pakka kar lena chahiye ki ye bakai me koi khas hai bhi ya nahi.
D2- ye bhi theek hai. Ek kaam karta hu. Me kal usse clg me hi milta hu. Agar mujhe bhi kuch ehsas hua to pakka ye bahi hai. Or baha se me uski jaankari bhi nikal lunga. Agar shak thoda bhi pakka nikla to. Uske baad tum dono apne roop badal lena.
D4- ha yahi theek rahega.
D1- me police bankar hi uske ware me or jaankari jutane ki kosis karunga. Or agar ye vo nahi hua to kisi or ka pata lagane me bhi aasani hogi.
D2- ha ye theek hai.
Ab hame chalna chahiye.
Uske baad ye Charo baha se bapis apne apne ghar pahuch gye. Matlab uske jinka inhone roop liya hai.
Or inke Jane ke Baad baha per devraj pragat hue.
Indradev- bilkul sahi raste per ja rahe ho tum log. Bilkul apni mout ke karib. Jao jao.
Ye kehke vo bhi antardhyan ho gye.
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Uss ACP ko indra dev ke kavach ke bavjood kuch feel kaise ho gaya?? jabki indradev ko to pata tha ki kon kon arnav ko dundhne aaye h city mein to unhone usi ke according kavach banaya hoga na?.....
Surbhi ka koi role nhi h kya story mein vo kidhar gayab ho gayi...?
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Bro aapka sawal bakai me bahut achha hai. Or iske bare me main bas itna hi kehna chahunga ki indradev ne vo kavach hi aisa banaya hai. Jisse koi bhi confirm nahi ho sakta ki dev ke pass koi shakti hai. Lekin vo danav jo hai unke pass bhi mayavi shaktiya hai. Or usse vo har tarah ki shaktiyo ko pehchan sakte hai. Isiliye unhe dev ke karib aane per kuch ehsas hua. Or isme thoda bahut hath sayad indradev ka bhi hai...
or rahi baat surbhi ki to inka role jyada nahi hai filhal. Lekin aage ho sakta hai. Isiliye unko story me rakha gya hai. Bake aap dekhte jaiye ki aage kya kya hota hai.....
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Thanks bhai log........
apna sath u hi banaye rakhe.....
aapsabhi ko updates milte rahenge....
aaj ka UPDATE post kar diya hai. Ummid hai pasand aayega sabhi ko.......
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bro aapka shak sahi hai. Pehla to Vo acp hi hai. Baki dusra or baki ki pehchan hona abhi baki hai. Vo bhi jaldi hi samane aayenge....
aap bas dekhte jaiye......
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Pehla update page 2 per
Wah gajab ka start h bhai...
Maza aa gaya itna bada update padh kat......
Ab baki raat ko he padhunga aaram se aur agle update tak aapke saath milunga
thanks bhai........
bas aapka hi intjaar tha......
ab aap aagye hai to ummid hai ki aapko story pasand aayegi....
apna sath banaye rakhe......
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Dev man ki bate sun sakta h..... Badhiya bhai bhut badhiya....
Ek request h jara font change kar ke likha kare thodi dikkat hoti h isme.....
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Sahi likh rahe and regular update bhi dete ho
Bhai kis prakar ke font me likhu. Aap mujhe Bata deejiye. Me kosis karunga ki next update baisa hi ho...
and ha dev ab man ki bate sunne laga hai. Jo use aage bahut kaam aayega.... Aap bas dekhte jaiye ki aage kya kya hota hai....
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