Bhai mujhe nhi
Bhai mujhe nhi lagta writer story complete karne ke mood mein hai
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Akki ❸❸❸
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Writer ki bhi isme koi galti nahi h bhai, 100 karan ho sakkte hai,,,,,, isi liye me to yahi keh raha hu ki,,, Pritam.bs da aap is story ko jesa ki kamdev bhai ne bhi kaha, short me hi happy ending ya jo apne socha hoga sad ending ke saath khatam kar do,,taaki is story ko complete hone ka mauka mile
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Waiting for updates,,,, koi chance h updates ke ya nahi
Pritam da kuch reply hi de do kab ayenge updates,, ek mahine baad ya saal baad
Pritam da kuch reply hi de do kab ayenge updates,, ek mahine baad ya saal baad
Ye kahani adhuri chhode ga pichhle page me bi yahi kiya tha
Hello bhai
Me ny sirf apki story ky liye account bnaya hy... Kyn ky mujhy lgta hy ap readers sy naraz hn...
Bhai apko ek story sunata ho ek artist tha us ny ek bohat achi tasver bnayi... Usny wo tasveer ek busy place me lga di or neechy likha ky agr apko koi kami ya ghalti mehsos hoto us par nishan(mark) lgaen...
Agly din us artist ny jab wo tasveer dekhi tu wo nishano ay bhari pari thi... Wo artist kafi mayos(nirash) ho gya... Ek Friend ky idea sy us ny wesi hi pic dubara bnai or nechy likh diya agr koi ghalti lgy tu usy thek kr de... Agly din us wo tasver dekhi tu us pr koi nishan nhi tha...
So is sy sabit hota hy ek jab b ap koi chez audience ky samny rakhty hn tu apko criticism lazmi mily gi... Ab ye ap pr hy ky ap logo ki appreciation dekhty ho ya criticism...
Ab ap ki story par aty hn... Readers ki criticism sirf ek waja sy hy... Sab chahty hn ky hero hamesha on the top ho, dominant ho or wo ksi ky samny na jhuky... Yahan pr Vaani didi ki dominance dikhany ki waja sy readers naraz hn... But hme b ye samjhna chahye ky artist apni art ko hm sy behtar janta hy..
Baqi bhai agr apny ye story esy e chor di tu me apko wahin a kr dho kr jao ga
Wesy me Pakistan sy india kesy ao
Chalo koi na pm sy hi 2 4 galiyan dy do ga
Bhai umeed krta ho ap reply kro gy luv
Me ny sirf apki story ky liye account bnaya hy... Kyn ky mujhy lgta hy ap readers sy naraz hn...
Bhai apko ek story sunata ho ek artist tha us ny ek bohat achi tasver bnayi... Usny wo tasveer ek busy place me lga di or neechy likha ky agr apko koi kami ya ghalti mehsos hoto us par nishan(mark) lgaen...
Agly din us artist ny jab wo tasveer dekhi tu wo nishano ay bhari pari thi... Wo artist kafi mayos(nirash) ho gya... Ek Friend ky idea sy us ny wesi hi pic dubara bnai or nechy likh diya agr koi ghalti lgy tu usy thek kr de... Agly din us wo tasver dekhi tu us pr koi nishan nhi tha...
So is sy sabit hota hy ek jab b ap koi chez audience ky samny rakhty hn tu apko criticism lazmi mily gi... Ab ye ap pr hy ky ap logo ki appreciation dekhty ho ya criticism...
Ab ap ki story par aty hn... Readers ki criticism sirf ek waja sy hy... Sab chahty hn ky hero hamesha on the top ho, dominant ho or wo ksi ky samny na jhuky... Yahan pr Vaani didi ki dominance dikhany ki waja sy readers naraz hn... But hme b ye samjhna chahye ky artist apni art ko hm sy behtar janta hy..
Baqi bhai agr apny ye story esy e chor di tu me apko wahin a kr dho kr jao ga
Wesy me Pakistan sy india kesy ao
Chalo koi na pm sy hi 2 4 galiyan dy do ga
Bhai umeed krta ho ap reply kro gy luv
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Update please pritam bhai
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