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Fantasy The Asura System

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Rex1 said:
Chapter 24: Teen Shaktiyan aur Shareer ki Hadd



Manas ke jaane ke baad garden mein jo sannata tha, wo kisi toofan se pehle ki shanti jaisi thi. Aryan apne zakhmi kandhe ko dekh raha tha jahan Manas ki aag ne uski skin ko kala kar diya tha.
"System," Aryan ne dheere se kaha, "Healing scan karo."
Ting!
[Scan Complete. Superficial burns detected. Recovery time: 2 hours. Suggestion: Use 'Spirit Frost' energy to neutralize the heat.]
Aryan ne Kavya ki taraf dekha. Kavya wahan khadi thi, uski aankhon mein abhi bhi gussa aur chinta mixed thi.
"Kavya, mujhe tumhari madad chahiye," Aryan ne kaha.
Kavya bina kuch bole aage aayi. Usne apna thanda haath Aryan ke kandhe par rakha. Uske haath se neeli roshni (Ice Qi) nikli aur Aryan ke zakhm se dhuan nikalne laga. Dard turant gayab ho gaya aur wahan nayi skin aane lagi.
Vanya yeh sab dekh rahi thi, usne apne hath cross kiye aur thoda muh banaya. "Theek hai, healing ho gayi. Ab asli kaam shuru karein? Agar humne 'Trinity Resonance' shuru nahi kiya, toh yeh gadha Manas ke pehle hi vaar mein dher ho jayega."
The Trinity Training: Ice, Darkness, and System
Mansion ke sabse niche wale basement mein ek Secret Training Chamber tha. Yahan ki deewarein 'Spirit Suppressing Stones' se bani thin taaki bahar kisi ko pata na chale ki andar kitni energy release ho rahi hai.
Aryan beech mein baitha tha. Uske right side Vanya thi aur left side Kavya.
"Suno," Aryan ne serious hokar kaha. "Humein teenon ki energy ko ek saath ghumana hai. Kavya, tumhari Ice Qi mere dimaag ko shant rakhegi aur body ko overheat hone se bachayegi. Vanya, tumhari Asura Qi meri strength aur meridians ko expand karegi. Aur main... main dono ko control karunga."
Training shuru hui.
Kavya ne Aryan ka baaya (left) haath pakda aur Vanya ne daaya (right).
Step 1: The Clash of Elements
Jaise hi dono ne apni energy release ki, Aryan ka sharir kaanpne laga. Ek taraf se baraf jaisi thandak ghusi aur doosri taraf se ubalte hue tel (boiling oil) jaisi garam Asura energy. Aryan ka chehra pal-pal mein neela aur laal pad raha tha.
"Aryan, focus!" Kavya chillayi. "Apne Dantian ko kholo!"
Step 2: The Breakthrough
Aryan ne apni aankhein band ki. Usne dimaag mein System Interface khola.
Ting!
[Warning: Extreme Energy Influx!]
[Do you want to spend 8,000 System Points to activate 'Body Tempering Mode'?]
"YES! Do it now!"
BAM!
Aryan ke shareer se ek sunehri (golden) aur kaali roshni nikli. Uske shareer ki haddiyan chatak-chatak karke tootne aur dubara judne lagin. Yeh dard itna bhayanak tha ki Aryan ke muh se khoon nikalne laga, lekin usne haath nahi chhode.
Vanya ne dekha ki Aryan ki limit khatam ho rahi hai. Usne apna sar Aryan ke kandhe par rakha aur apne andar ki asli Royal Bloodline release kar di. "Aryan, mujhse shakti lo! Har mat maano!"
Kavya ne bhi apni saari Ice energy jhonk di. "Main tumhari aatma ko jalne nahi dungi!"
Step 3: The Evolution
Teenon ki energy ek Whirlpool (Bhanwar) ban gayi. Aryan ke shareer ka kaala keechad (black impurities) uske pores se bahar nikalne laga. Uski skin ab kisi pathar (jade) ki tarah chamak rahi thi. Uski saansein ab kisi aam insaan jaisi nahi, balki ek sote hue dragon jaisi bhaari thin.
Ting!
[Level Up!]
[Stage 2 -> Stage 3...]
[Stage 3 -> Stage 4...]
[Stage 4 -> Stage 5 (Peak)!]
Poore 10 ghante baad, Aryan ne apni aankhein kholi. Uski aankhon mein ek purple ring ban gayi thi jo thodi-thodi chamak rahi thi.
Usne mutthi band ki aur hawa mein ek chota sa mukka maara.
WHOOSH!
Hawa ke dabav (pressure) se saamne wali deewar mein darar aa gayi.
"Stage 5 Peak," Aryan ne muskurate hue kaha. "Aur meri physical strength ab Earth Realm Stage 2 ke barabar hai."
Vanya aur Kavya dono thak kar zameen par gir gayin thin. Dono paseene se bheegi hui thin. Aryan ne dono ko uthaya aur apne seene se laga liya. "Shukriya... tum dono ke bina yeh namumkin tha."
Kavya ne sharma kar sar jhuka liya, lekin Vanya ne Aryan ki gardan par ek halka sa bite (kaat) liya. "Yaad rakhna, yeh udhaar hai. Spirit Spring ke baad... mujhe tumhara poora waqt chahiye."
The Day of the Spirit Spring
Ek mahina beet gaya. Aryan ne baaki waqt apni nayi shaktiyon ko control karne mein bitaya.
Aaj poora Surya Sect saja hua tha. Spirit Spring ek aisi jagah thi jo saal mein sirf ek baar khulti thi. Yeh ek gufa ke andar ka neela jharna tha, jiska paani peene se cultivation ki rukaavatein (bottlenecks) khatam ho jati thin.
Sect Master Suryavansh stage par khade thay. "Aaj ke Tournament mein sirf 8 log hissa lenge. Jo aakhri 3 bachenge, wahi Spirit Spring mein jayenge!"
Bheed mein shor mach gaya jab Manas stage par aaya. Usne Aryan ki taraf dekh kar apni ungli gardan par pheri (kill gesture).
Aryan ne use ignore kiya. Uska pehla match Zora se tha, jo Manas ka sabse khas chamcha (underling) tha aur Stage 9 Spirit Awakening par tha.
"Aryan!" Zora ne stage par koodte hue kaha. "Tu kismat se yahan tak pahunch gaya, lekin aaj tera ye 'Asura' wala naatak main khatam karunga. Stage 5 lekar Stage 9 se ladega? Tu pagal hai!"
Aryan ne apni Shadow Fang nikaali. Talwaar ab pehle se zyada kaali aur vishali (deadly) lag rahi thi.
"Zora," Aryan ne thande swar mein kaha. "Level sirf unke liye maayne rakhte hain jinke paas dimaag nahi hota. Mere liye... tu bas ek punching bag hai."
Referee ne haath uthaya. "FIGHT!"
Zora ne turant apni 'Twin Daggers' nikaale aur ek bijli (lightning) ki speed se Aryan ki taraf lapka. "Marr ja!"
Aryan hila tak nahi. Jab daggers uske seene se sirf 1 inch door thay, Aryan ne apni talwaar ghumayi.
"Asura Style: Void Parry!"
CLANG!
Zora ko aisa laga jaise usne kisi pahad par takkar maari ho. Uske dono daggers ke tukde-tukde ho gaye. Aryan ne agle hi pal uski chhati par ek kick maari.
BOOM!
Zora stage se udta hua gaya aur seedha un bheed ke beech gira jo Manas ka support kar rahi thi. Wo ek hi vaar mein behosh ho gaya.
Poora stadium khamosh ho gaya. Ek Stage 5 ne Stage 9 ko 10 second mein hara diya?
Aryan ne apni talwaar saaf ki aur Manas ki taraf dekha.
"Next," Aryan ne shanti se kaha.
Manas ke chehre par se muskaan gayab ho gayi. Usne apni mutthi itni zor se bhinchi ki usme se khoon nikalne laga. "Theek hai... tu meri baari ka intezaar kar. Main tujhe itni dardnaak maut dunga ki tera System bhi tujhe bacha nahi payega."
Aryan ne mann mein socha, "System, Manas ki power level analyze karo."
Ting!
[Target: Manas]
[Rank: Earth Realm Stage 1 (Peak)]
[Note: He is hiding a secret weapon. Probability of him using poison: 70%.]
"Poison, huh?" Aryan muskuraya. "Lagta hai Kaalu ko aaj ek naya flavor chakne ko milega."
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Nice update bro
 
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