tumko kyaa lag raha..ye story khud ko imagin karke likha rahi hai..aaju baju ke sexy aurat aur uske frinds ka refernce deke story ke most character isne likhe hai aisa mze lgtaa...aur usme yaani apkesha me aag to kaafi hai...bistar pe todna padta uskoo...tab jaake khushil milegi..jab tak bistar ki chaddar uske badan se gili nahi hoti....wo bhi yahi chahit hai..agar rules naa hote to wo khud randibaazi ki tarah iss story ke kaafi zalil aur brutal nana deti..uski writting se ye to mai samj gaya..ye story real hai..bus wo shwta wala angle thoda fantasy laga..