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Update no :- 52.
Karan or jyoti ye sun ker thoda tension m aajate h , kyunki wo ye soch rahe the ki wo itni dur jane ki permission kese le apne papa se .
Per unhonne ye baat apne coach ko jahir ni hone di.
Karan :- ok sir hum ready h but hume kab nikalna hoga.
Aanand :- tum dono ki flight parso ki h.
Jyoti :- kya parso fir to sir hume chalna chahaiye abhi, bahut teyariya kerni hogi hume.
Fir karan or jyoti aanand se vida le nikal jate h Ghar ki or.
Location :- shimla.
Un preto ne us ladke ko to maar k uska khun pi liya tha or uski lash ko
Fek diya tha.lekin wo ladki bilkul sahi salamat thi.lekin uske bhi unhone hath panv janjiro se bandhe hue the or wo behosh thi.
Tabhi wo chudel ek hath me falo se bhari ek plate leke aati h or us ladki k chahare pe pani daal k hosh m lati h.
Wo ladki ek jhatke sath hosh m aajati h, usko pahale to kuch ni aata ki wo yaha kese aayi or is halat m kese , lekin fir dhire dhire raat ka manzar sab yaad aajata h or apne samne us chudel ko dekh pahale to dar jati h, lekin use gussa bhi aaraha tha.
Chudel :- uth gayi tu, le ye kha le ab chupchap.
Ladki gusse or duk se rote hue boli.
Ladki :- kyu kiya tum logo ne hamare sath , kya bigada tha humne tumhara, kyu mara meri jaan ko , ab uske bina mere jine ka bhi kya fayda.mujhe bhi maar dalo, mar dalo mujhe bhi.
Chudel(bhayanak hasi haste hue) :- tum mamuli prani hum logo ka bigad bhi kya sakte ho , or tumhe kese maar de hum , tu hi to h wo jariya , jisse hum or bhi shaktishali honge.isliye chup chap khana kha.
Ladki :- ni bilkul ni m tum dushto k hath ka pani bhi ni piyungi , tum preto k kaam aane se acha to m bhuk pyaas m se marna pasand karungi.
Chudel (gusse se) :- e ladki chup chap ye khana kha le,verna .
Ladki :- verna kya , mar dalogi na mujhe , to maar do na.
Chudel kamini muskan k sath boli.
Chudel :- verna hum tujhe ni tere pure parivar ko maar ke kha jayenge. Yahi h na tera parivar.
Or ye bol k vo apna ek hath aage kerti h or uske hath se ek kali roshni nikal k diwar p padti h jisse kisi projector k jese divar per ek parivar ki tasvir ban jati h.
Chudel :- kyu yahi h na tera parivar, tera chota bhai to dikhne m kitna swadisht lag raha h , iske maas ko khane m bada maja aayega re.
Ladki ye sun bahut dar jati h or bolti h.
Ladki :- ni ni mere parivar ko kuch mat kerna tum jesa bologe m vesa karungi.
Chudel :- shabas le ab chup chap ye fal kha.
Or wo waha se jane lagti h. Tabhi ladki piche se bolti h.
Ladki :- ye tum log sahi ni ker rahe ho, ek din esa aayega k tumhara esa bhayanak ant hoga ki tumhe pashchatap ka avser bhi ni milega
Chudel(haste hue boli):- galat fahmi me mat rah ladki, hum tumhare jese koi mamuli insaan ni h , hum pret h or koi bhi hamara samna ni ker sakta.
Ladki:- galat fahmi me m ni tum ho chudel , jo sarvashaktiman hone ka ghamand ker rahi ho.
Bhulo mat yahi galat fahmi us dashanan ravan ko bhi thi. Jo maha gyani tha or tum logo ka hi raja tha.
Lekin uska ant kya hua , ye mujhe batane ki jarurat ni h. Fir tumhari to haisiyat hi kya h.is sansaar m tumse badi bhi ek shakti h. Wo h us ishwar ki shakti or mujhe mere ishwer mere hanuman ji pe pura bharosa h per pura bharosa h. Wo meri madad jarur karenge.or tum papiyo ka ant bhi jarur hoga.
Us chudel ko ye sun bahut gusa aata h or vo bolti h.
Chudel :- bas bahut sun li teri bakwaas,m koi or ladki le aayungi apne kaam k liye per av tu ni bachegi.
Ye bol wo us ladki ka gala dabane k liye apna hath aage bharati h per ye kya jese hi wo us ladki ka gala chuti h use or ek jhatka lagta h or wo thodi dur ja girti h.
Chudel tilmilate hue:- ye aakhir ho kese sakta h , hum tujhe chu kyu ni pa rahe.kesi maya h ye .
Baat darasal baat ye thi ki wo chudel ya koi bhi pret use chu bhi ni parahe the.usko ked bhi unhonne badi muskil se apni shaktiyo se uske hat per bandh k liye the.
Ladki :- ye koi maya ni h chudel, ye bhakti ki shakti h , ye mera bajrangbali ki shakti h.
Or itna bol k vo apne top k ander hath dal ek locket nikalti h.or wo locket ek hanumanaji ki choti se murti thi.
Ladki :- kyu chudel bhul gayi ,
"bhut pishach nikat ni aave
Mahavir jab naam sunave".
Chudel hanuman ji ka nam sun ni pati or jor jor se chikhne lagti h.
Chudel (takleef se chillate hue):- band ker band ker uska nam lena.
Lekin ladki hanuman ji ka nam liye ja rahi thi jor jor se.
Tabhi chudel ne pas me pade pathar ko apni shakti se utha us ladki k sir ki or feka.jiske lagte hi vo behosh ho gayi.
Or chudel bhi rahat ki sans le vaha se nikal gayi.
Back to the hero.
Karan or jyoti ghar pahunch ker apne kamre m jaker apne bed p let jate h.
Jyoti :- bhai humne sir ko bol diya ki hum ready h , lekin papA ko kese bole or kya wo manenge.
Karan :- ha jyoti m bhi isi bare m soch raha hu.
Tabhi unke kano m ek awaz padti h
Kis baare m.soch rahe ho bhaiya , kis chij ki permission chahiye didu.
Ye awaz shivani ki thi jo school se lot aayi thi.
Or wo jaker karan k dusri side se chipak k let jati h.
Jyoti :- are princess aap aagayi, wo baat darasal ye h ki....
Or fir jyoti use sari baat bata deti h
Shivani :- are wahi bhaiya fir to aapko jarur jana chahiye or rahi baat permission ki to m aapki help karungi.
Shivani ki is baat se karan or jyoti ko ek ummid ki kiran dikhayi di.
Rat ko.khane k baad ranvir apne kamre me betha tha or kabya kitchen m kaam ker rahi thi.
Tabhi 3no bhai bahan ranvir k pas pahuchte h.
Karan :- papa vo mujhe aapko kuch batana h.
Ranvir(sanvaliya najar se dekhte hue):- ha bolo kya kaam h.
Fir karan ranvir ko sari baat batata h or permission mangta h
Karan :- please papa hame jane dijiye please, m aapse wada kerta hu ki hum dono aapka naam roshan kerke hi aayenge.
Shivani :- please papa man jaiye na jane dijiye na bhaiya or didi ko.
Ranvir kuch der sochta h or fir bola
Ranvir :- are bhai ab meri gudiya ne bol diya to m kese mana ker sakta hu.
Fir wo karan se bola.
Ranvir:- thik h tum dono ja sakte ho.
Or bas itna bol vo apne kam me lag jata h office k.
Location :- kfd lok
Kfd apni mata k sath bethe ye sab dekh rahe the.
Mata :- to wo samay aahi gaya putra.
Kfd:- ha mata samay aagaya h papiyo k nash ka , samay aagaya h, sajjno k udhar ka Samay aagaya h is sansar ko uske rakshak k milne kA.
Samay aagaya h " karan" ka apne jivan k pratham uddeshy ki or agrasar hone ka.
Mata :- putra karm k vidhan k anusar jo karm karega use karmfal avashya milega.
Parantu is mahan karya ko purn karne ka use kya karmfal milega.
Kfd muskurate hue)- karan ko puraskar swaroop kya karmfal milega wo to aapko or sath sath pure sansar ko bhavishya m hi gyaat hoga mata.
Aaj k liye bas itna hi .
Stay tuned.
Karan or jyoti ye sun ker thoda tension m aajate h , kyunki wo ye soch rahe the ki wo itni dur jane ki permission kese le apne papa se .
Per unhonne ye baat apne coach ko jahir ni hone di.
Karan :- ok sir hum ready h but hume kab nikalna hoga.
Aanand :- tum dono ki flight parso ki h.
Jyoti :- kya parso fir to sir hume chalna chahaiye abhi, bahut teyariya kerni hogi hume.
Fir karan or jyoti aanand se vida le nikal jate h Ghar ki or.
Location :- shimla.
Un preto ne us ladke ko to maar k uska khun pi liya tha or uski lash ko
Fek diya tha.lekin wo ladki bilkul sahi salamat thi.lekin uske bhi unhone hath panv janjiro se bandhe hue the or wo behosh thi.
Tabhi wo chudel ek hath me falo se bhari ek plate leke aati h or us ladki k chahare pe pani daal k hosh m lati h.
Wo ladki ek jhatke sath hosh m aajati h, usko pahale to kuch ni aata ki wo yaha kese aayi or is halat m kese , lekin fir dhire dhire raat ka manzar sab yaad aajata h or apne samne us chudel ko dekh pahale to dar jati h, lekin use gussa bhi aaraha tha.
Chudel :- uth gayi tu, le ye kha le ab chupchap.
Ladki gusse or duk se rote hue boli.
Ladki :- kyu kiya tum logo ne hamare sath , kya bigada tha humne tumhara, kyu mara meri jaan ko , ab uske bina mere jine ka bhi kya fayda.mujhe bhi maar dalo, mar dalo mujhe bhi.
Chudel(bhayanak hasi haste hue) :- tum mamuli prani hum logo ka bigad bhi kya sakte ho , or tumhe kese maar de hum , tu hi to h wo jariya , jisse hum or bhi shaktishali honge.isliye chup chap khana kha.
Ladki :- ni bilkul ni m tum dushto k hath ka pani bhi ni piyungi , tum preto k kaam aane se acha to m bhuk pyaas m se marna pasand karungi.
Chudel (gusse se) :- e ladki chup chap ye khana kha le,verna .
Ladki :- verna kya , mar dalogi na mujhe , to maar do na.
Chudel kamini muskan k sath boli.
Chudel :- verna hum tujhe ni tere pure parivar ko maar ke kha jayenge. Yahi h na tera parivar.
Or ye bol k vo apna ek hath aage kerti h or uske hath se ek kali roshni nikal k diwar p padti h jisse kisi projector k jese divar per ek parivar ki tasvir ban jati h.
Chudel :- kyu yahi h na tera parivar, tera chota bhai to dikhne m kitna swadisht lag raha h , iske maas ko khane m bada maja aayega re.
Ladki ye sun bahut dar jati h or bolti h.
Ladki :- ni ni mere parivar ko kuch mat kerna tum jesa bologe m vesa karungi.
Chudel :- shabas le ab chup chap ye fal kha.
Or wo waha se jane lagti h. Tabhi ladki piche se bolti h.
Ladki :- ye tum log sahi ni ker rahe ho, ek din esa aayega k tumhara esa bhayanak ant hoga ki tumhe pashchatap ka avser bhi ni milega
Chudel(haste hue boli):- galat fahmi me mat rah ladki, hum tumhare jese koi mamuli insaan ni h , hum pret h or koi bhi hamara samna ni ker sakta.
Ladki:- galat fahmi me m ni tum ho chudel , jo sarvashaktiman hone ka ghamand ker rahi ho.
Bhulo mat yahi galat fahmi us dashanan ravan ko bhi thi. Jo maha gyani tha or tum logo ka hi raja tha.
Lekin uska ant kya hua , ye mujhe batane ki jarurat ni h. Fir tumhari to haisiyat hi kya h.is sansaar m tumse badi bhi ek shakti h. Wo h us ishwar ki shakti or mujhe mere ishwer mere hanuman ji pe pura bharosa h per pura bharosa h. Wo meri madad jarur karenge.or tum papiyo ka ant bhi jarur hoga.
Us chudel ko ye sun bahut gusa aata h or vo bolti h.
Chudel :- bas bahut sun li teri bakwaas,m koi or ladki le aayungi apne kaam k liye per av tu ni bachegi.
Ye bol wo us ladki ka gala dabane k liye apna hath aage bharati h per ye kya jese hi wo us ladki ka gala chuti h use or ek jhatka lagta h or wo thodi dur ja girti h.
Chudel tilmilate hue:- ye aakhir ho kese sakta h , hum tujhe chu kyu ni pa rahe.kesi maya h ye .
Baat darasal baat ye thi ki wo chudel ya koi bhi pret use chu bhi ni parahe the.usko ked bhi unhonne badi muskil se apni shaktiyo se uske hat per bandh k liye the.
Ladki :- ye koi maya ni h chudel, ye bhakti ki shakti h , ye mera bajrangbali ki shakti h.
Or itna bol k vo apne top k ander hath dal ek locket nikalti h.or wo locket ek hanumanaji ki choti se murti thi.
Ladki :- kyu chudel bhul gayi ,
"bhut pishach nikat ni aave
Mahavir jab naam sunave".
Chudel hanuman ji ka nam sun ni pati or jor jor se chikhne lagti h.
Chudel (takleef se chillate hue):- band ker band ker uska nam lena.
Lekin ladki hanuman ji ka nam liye ja rahi thi jor jor se.
Tabhi chudel ne pas me pade pathar ko apni shakti se utha us ladki k sir ki or feka.jiske lagte hi vo behosh ho gayi.
Or chudel bhi rahat ki sans le vaha se nikal gayi.
Back to the hero.
Karan or jyoti ghar pahunch ker apne kamre m jaker apne bed p let jate h.
Jyoti :- bhai humne sir ko bol diya ki hum ready h , lekin papA ko kese bole or kya wo manenge.
Karan :- ha jyoti m bhi isi bare m soch raha hu.
Tabhi unke kano m ek awaz padti h
Kis baare m.soch rahe ho bhaiya , kis chij ki permission chahiye didu.
Ye awaz shivani ki thi jo school se lot aayi thi.
Or wo jaker karan k dusri side se chipak k let jati h.
Jyoti :- are princess aap aagayi, wo baat darasal ye h ki....
Or fir jyoti use sari baat bata deti h
Shivani :- are wahi bhaiya fir to aapko jarur jana chahiye or rahi baat permission ki to m aapki help karungi.
Shivani ki is baat se karan or jyoti ko ek ummid ki kiran dikhayi di.
Rat ko.khane k baad ranvir apne kamre me betha tha or kabya kitchen m kaam ker rahi thi.
Tabhi 3no bhai bahan ranvir k pas pahuchte h.
Karan :- papa vo mujhe aapko kuch batana h.
Ranvir(sanvaliya najar se dekhte hue):- ha bolo kya kaam h.
Fir karan ranvir ko sari baat batata h or permission mangta h
Karan :- please papa hame jane dijiye please, m aapse wada kerta hu ki hum dono aapka naam roshan kerke hi aayenge.
Shivani :- please papa man jaiye na jane dijiye na bhaiya or didi ko.
Ranvir kuch der sochta h or fir bola
Ranvir :- are bhai ab meri gudiya ne bol diya to m kese mana ker sakta hu.
Fir wo karan se bola.
Ranvir:- thik h tum dono ja sakte ho.
Or bas itna bol vo apne kam me lag jata h office k.
Location :- kfd lok
Kfd apni mata k sath bethe ye sab dekh rahe the.
Mata :- to wo samay aahi gaya putra.
Kfd:- ha mata samay aagaya h papiyo k nash ka , samay aagaya h, sajjno k udhar ka Samay aagaya h is sansar ko uske rakshak k milne kA.
Samay aagaya h " karan" ka apne jivan k pratham uddeshy ki or agrasar hone ka.
Mata :- putra karm k vidhan k anusar jo karm karega use karmfal avashya milega.
Parantu is mahan karya ko purn karne ka use kya karmfal milega.
Kfd muskurate hue)- karan ko puraskar swaroop kya karmfal milega wo to aapko or sath sath pure sansar ko bhavishya m hi gyaat hoga mata.
Aaj k liye bas itna hi .
Stay tuned.
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