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Karan jyoti or radha 3no khushi khushi hm or hina se vida lete h.
Fir karan or jyoti ko radha unke ghar pe chod deti h or apne ghar p nikal jati h.
Jese hi ghar m wo enter kerte h to , shivani unhe hall me hi mil jati h.wo waha per tv pe horror picture dekh rahi thi.or thoda thoda dar bhi rahi thi ,usko abhi ahasas ni hua tha ki karan or jyoti aachuke,tabhi karan ko ek shararat sujhti h.
Sham ka time ho chuka tha to kafi had tak andhera bhi ho gaya tha , to jyoti ko chupke se ishara ker ke chup rahane k liye kahata h , or chupke se uke sofe k piche jata h or dhire se chutki bajata h, jisse ghar ki sari lights band chalu hone lag jati h.
Shivani k to tote ud jate h ye sab dekh ker , or isse pahale shivani uthkar kuch kerne ki soche. Tabhi karan jhat se uske piche se aaker kaan k pass bolta h.
Karan :- booo
Shivani mummy bolte hue sare ghar m idher udher donde lagti h.
Shivani :- bhoot bhoot , koi to bachao.
Karan or jyoti shivani ka ye reaction dekh k jor jor se hasne lagte h, or jab shivani ki najar unpe padti h to pahale to chok jati h, fir sara mamla samjh ke gusse se unke piche dodti h.
Shivani :- bhaiya , didi ruko aaaj m aap dono ko ni chodungi , esa bhi koi majak koi kerta h kya.
Jyoti :- are mane kuch ni kiya , ye to bhai ne kiya
Shivani :- lekin aapne bhaiya ka sath to diya na aap dono aaj ni bachoge.
Jyoti bhi aaj full masti k mood m thi wo jaldi se apne kamre m jaker door band ker leti h.
Karan bichara bahar hi rah jata h or majak me darwaza pitte hue bolta h.
Karan :- gate kholo gudiya , mujhe bacha.
Jyoti :- (maje lete hue) ni bhai mane gate khola to shivani bhi ander aajayegi or mujhe pitna ni h.
Karan abhi aage kuch bolta itne m shivani vaha pahuch gayi or apni kalayi ko marodte hue boli.
Shivani :- wo to bach gayi , lekin ab tera kya hoga kaliya .
Karan (jhut mut ka darte hue) :- maaf ker do sardaar , humne aapko har roj chocolate khilaya h.
Shivani :- to ab mukke khao.
Or ye bol k tut padi karan pe or ker di mukko ki barsat , karan majak majak m bachao bachao chilane laga.Or thodi der ki dhulayi k baad shivani ne use choda .Itne m shivani bhi bahar aake ye sab dekh k maze le leke has rahi thi.
Karan jhut mut ka muh fula ke bolta h.
Karan(jyoti se) :-
acha sila dia tune mere pyaar ka , bahan ne hi bhurta banwa diya apne bhai ka.
Jyoti jor jor se hasne lagi or boli .
Jyoti :- bas bahut ho gayi notanki , aap betho m dinner banati hu.
Shivani :- ni di uski jarurat ni h.
Karan :- kyu.
Shivani :- wo mummy banake ja chuki h pahale hi bahut sara khana unhonne bola to kuch ni , per mujhe lagta h ye unhone aapki liye bhi banaya h.
Karan ispe kuch ni bolta usko dar tha kahi jyoti ka krodh firse jagrit na ho jaye.
Fir sab sath beth ker dinner kerne lagte h , itne saalo baad apni choti ma k hatho ka bana khana khaker unki ankho m pani aajata h.
Fir dinner ker sab dinner kerke jaldi sone chale jate h , kyunki kal se sab shivratri ki teyariyo k liye mandir jo jana tha.
Agle din 3no bhai bahan jaldi uthkar teyar ho jate h or mandir ki or nikal jate h or puja shuru kerte h itne m radha , riya , rohan or priya bhi waha pahunch jate h.
Fir karan jaker pandit ji se milta h.
Pandit ji :- beta koi intezam hua kya.
Karan :- ha pandit ji , mane kaha tha na bholenath hamari sahayta jarur karenge .
Or karan unhe sari baate batata h or pese unhe dene lagta h pandit ji kuch soch k bolte h.
Pandit ji :- beta ye tum filhal apne pass hi rakho , kyunki har sal ki tarah sari teyariya to tumhe or jyoti ko hi kerni h na.
Karan ko bhi ye baat sahi lagti h or wo lag jate h teyariyo m . Parso hi mahashivratri thi. To sab lag gaye apne apne kaam m. Sab lag gaye apne apne kam me, jese mandir ki saaf safayi sajawat or us special kam ki teyari m bhi .
Karib 3 ghante ki mahanat k baad sab thoda rest k liye mandir k angan m bethathe h.
Tabhi priya bolti h .
Priya :- bhaiya , ye sab teyariya kyu ker rahe.
Karan :- beta , kyunki parso mahashivratri h na , shivji ka sabse bada festival to uske celebration k liye.
Priya :- bhai , hum ye festival kis liye manate h.
Jyoti :- iske do kaaran h
1:- kyunki isi din mahadev sakar rup m prakat hue the.
2 :- isi din bhagwan shiv or mata parvati ki shadi hui thi.
Shivani :- bhai mane suna tha ki shiv ji to veragi the , to unki shadi kese hui.
Karan :- iske piche ek lambhi kahani h.
Priya (pyaar se ) :- to sunaiye na bhaiya please.
Karan priya k gal chum k bolta h
Karan :- ok betu.
Note :- shiv vivah ki ye story av start hone ja rahi h, use suna to karan raha h , lekin m third person k tor p likhunga.
Ye baat tabki h jab bhagwan sa
shiv ne srishti rachna k baad sabko sabke kaam baat diye . Tab mata aadishakti unke pas jaker bolti h.
Adishakti :- swami aapne sabhi ko unke karya pradan ker diye h or swayam bhi nirakar se sakar ho gaye h parantu ab hamara milan kab or kese hoga , kyunki m to prakrti hu, aapke dwara sope gaye kartavya ko purn kerne k liye aapse vimukh hona hoga.
Mahadev :- aap tanik bhi udaas na ho priye , humara milan bhavishya m shighra hi hoga lekin uske liye aapko bhi sakar rup lena hoga, m bhi kaha sukhi hu aapse dur ho ker priye , aakhir shakti k bina shiv bhi to shav hi h. Isliye he devi aap shighra hi prasthan kijiye, taki hamara milan shighra ho sake , m. Vachan deta hu , ki aapki aane ki pratiksha mujhe sadaiv rahegi.
Mata aadishakti mahadev se aashirwad le vaha se anter dhyan ho jati . Or mahadev apni samadhi m chale jate h.
Or mata aadishakti braham dev ki sahayata kerne m lag jati h. Fir janm hota h devo or danvo ka .
Ek samay ki baat h tarkasur namka rakshas ek per p khada ho ker mahadev ki tapasya m laga hua tha. Uski tapasya ko kayi hajar varsh ho gaye the lekin vo tapasya se tas se mas na hua , chintiyo (ants) ne uspe apna ghar bana liya tha.
Uski itni kathin or ghor tapasya dekh bhagwan bholenath prasan ho gaye .Or uske samne prakat ho ker pahale to uske halat ko sahi kiya or bole.
Mahadev:- ankhe kholo tarkasur , hum tumhari tapasya se prasan h putra.
Tarkasur jese hi ankhe kholke apne samne mahadev ko dekh ke khushi k mare unke pero m gir k unke pero ko chute hue bola.
Tarkasur:- akhir kar aap prasan ho hi gaye prabhu , m to dhanya ho gaya aapke darshan pake .
Mahadev :- utho tarkasur, mango kis abhisht var ki kamna h tumhari .
Tarakasur(har asur ki tarah natak kerte hue):- prabhu apke darshan ki hi meri to kamna thi , jo aaj puri ho gayi , parantu ager aap mujhe kuch dena hi chahate h to prabhu mujhe amaratv pradan kijiye prabhu, yamraj ka kaal phas mujhe chu bhi na paye esa vardan dijie prabhu.
Mahadev (muskurate hue) :- putra ye asambhav h , jisne janm liya uski mrityu bhi nishchit h, isliye amaratv k alawa kuch bhi mang lo putra.
Tarkasur kuch sochte hue bola .
Tarkasur :- thik h prabhu ager aap mujhe kuch dena hi chahate h to mujhe ye var dijiye , ki ager mera ant ho to keval aapke sage putra k hatho.
Mahadev:- ek baar punar vichar ker lo tarkasur , kya tumhe yahi var chahiye.
Tarkasur :- ha prabhu meri yahi icha h , denge na prabhu ye vardan prabhu aap.
Mahadev :- tathastu putra ! Parantu apne is vardan ka kabhi durupyog mat kerna.
Ye bol mahadev vaha se antardhyan ho jate h.unke jate hi tarkasur jor jor se haste hue bolta h.
Tarkasur:- satya hi kahate h sabhi , mahadev sach m hi bahut bholeh , bholenath h vo . Apne putra k hatho k vardan deker , unhonne mujhe vese hi amar bana diya.
kyunki mahadev to thahre veragi, or veragi kabhi vivah ni kerte . Or jab unka vivah hi ni hoga to putra kaha se aayega.
Ye sab bol wo waha se nikal jata h patal lok or apni vishal sena le 3no loko m hahakar macha deta h.
Mahadev k vardan ki vajah se koi bhi dev ,manushya , uske aage ni tik pate.
Sabhi dev ek sath braham dev k pass pahunchte h
Devraj :- raksha kijiye pitamah, raksha kijiye , dusht tarkasur mahadev se vardan paker ajay ho chuka h bhagwan, koi bhi uske samna ni ker paraha prabhu, 3no loko m hahakar macha hua h prabhu , kuch kijiye.
Brahama ji kuch soch ker bole.
Brahma ji :- he devo ! Aap sab nishchit ho ke apne apne lok ko prasthan kijiye , hum shighra hi kuch karenge.
Ye sun sab dev khush or santusht ho apne apne lok ko nikal jate h.
Or brahama ji apne karya m lag jate h.
Aaj k liye bas itna hi.
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Karan jyoti or radha 3no khushi khushi hm or hina se vida lete h.
Fir karan or jyoti ko radha unke ghar pe chod deti h or apne ghar p nikal jati h.
Jese hi ghar m wo enter kerte h to , shivani unhe hall me hi mil jati h.wo waha per tv pe horror picture dekh rahi thi.or thoda thoda dar bhi rahi thi ,usko abhi ahasas ni hua tha ki karan or jyoti aachuke,tabhi karan ko ek shararat sujhti h.
Sham ka time ho chuka tha to kafi had tak andhera bhi ho gaya tha , to jyoti ko chupke se ishara ker ke chup rahane k liye kahata h , or chupke se uke sofe k piche jata h or dhire se chutki bajata h, jisse ghar ki sari lights band chalu hone lag jati h.
Shivani k to tote ud jate h ye sab dekh ker , or isse pahale shivani uthkar kuch kerne ki soche. Tabhi karan jhat se uske piche se aaker kaan k pass bolta h.
Karan :- booo
Shivani mummy bolte hue sare ghar m idher udher donde lagti h.
Shivani :- bhoot bhoot , koi to bachao.
Karan or jyoti shivani ka ye reaction dekh k jor jor se hasne lagte h, or jab shivani ki najar unpe padti h to pahale to chok jati h, fir sara mamla samjh ke gusse se unke piche dodti h.
Shivani :- bhaiya , didi ruko aaaj m aap dono ko ni chodungi , esa bhi koi majak koi kerta h kya.
Jyoti :- are mane kuch ni kiya , ye to bhai ne kiya
Shivani :- lekin aapne bhaiya ka sath to diya na aap dono aaj ni bachoge.
Jyoti bhi aaj full masti k mood m thi wo jaldi se apne kamre m jaker door band ker leti h.
Karan bichara bahar hi rah jata h or majak me darwaza pitte hue bolta h.
Karan :- gate kholo gudiya , mujhe bacha.
Jyoti :- (maje lete hue) ni bhai mane gate khola to shivani bhi ander aajayegi or mujhe pitna ni h.
Karan abhi aage kuch bolta itne m shivani vaha pahuch gayi or apni kalayi ko marodte hue boli.
Shivani :- wo to bach gayi , lekin ab tera kya hoga kaliya .
Karan (jhut mut ka darte hue) :- maaf ker do sardaar , humne aapko har roj chocolate khilaya h.
Shivani :- to ab mukke khao.
Or ye bol k tut padi karan pe or ker di mukko ki barsat , karan majak majak m bachao bachao chilane laga.Or thodi der ki dhulayi k baad shivani ne use choda .Itne m shivani bhi bahar aake ye sab dekh k maze le leke has rahi thi.
Karan jhut mut ka muh fula ke bolta h.
Karan(jyoti se) :-
acha sila dia tune mere pyaar ka , bahan ne hi bhurta banwa diya apne bhai ka.
Jyoti jor jor se hasne lagi or boli .
Jyoti :- bas bahut ho gayi notanki , aap betho m dinner banati hu.
Shivani :- ni di uski jarurat ni h.
Karan :- kyu.
Shivani :- wo mummy banake ja chuki h pahale hi bahut sara khana unhonne bola to kuch ni , per mujhe lagta h ye unhone aapki liye bhi banaya h.
Karan ispe kuch ni bolta usko dar tha kahi jyoti ka krodh firse jagrit na ho jaye.
Fir sab sath beth ker dinner kerne lagte h , itne saalo baad apni choti ma k hatho ka bana khana khaker unki ankho m pani aajata h.
Fir dinner ker sab dinner kerke jaldi sone chale jate h , kyunki kal se sab shivratri ki teyariyo k liye mandir jo jana tha.
Agle din 3no bhai bahan jaldi uthkar teyar ho jate h or mandir ki or nikal jate h or puja shuru kerte h itne m radha , riya , rohan or priya bhi waha pahunch jate h.
Fir karan jaker pandit ji se milta h.
Pandit ji :- beta koi intezam hua kya.
Karan :- ha pandit ji , mane kaha tha na bholenath hamari sahayta jarur karenge .
Or karan unhe sari baate batata h or pese unhe dene lagta h pandit ji kuch soch k bolte h.
Pandit ji :- beta ye tum filhal apne pass hi rakho , kyunki har sal ki tarah sari teyariya to tumhe or jyoti ko hi kerni h na.
Karan ko bhi ye baat sahi lagti h or wo lag jate h teyariyo m . Parso hi mahashivratri thi. To sab lag gaye apne apne kaam m. Sab lag gaye apne apne kam me, jese mandir ki saaf safayi sajawat or us special kam ki teyari m bhi .
Karib 3 ghante ki mahanat k baad sab thoda rest k liye mandir k angan m bethathe h.
Tabhi priya bolti h .
Priya :- bhaiya , ye sab teyariya kyu ker rahe.
Karan :- beta , kyunki parso mahashivratri h na , shivji ka sabse bada festival to uske celebration k liye.
Priya :- bhai , hum ye festival kis liye manate h.
Jyoti :- iske do kaaran h
1:- kyunki isi din mahadev sakar rup m prakat hue the.
2 :- isi din bhagwan shiv or mata parvati ki shadi hui thi.
Shivani :- bhai mane suna tha ki shiv ji to veragi the , to unki shadi kese hui.
Karan :- iske piche ek lambhi kahani h.
Priya (pyaar se ) :- to sunaiye na bhaiya please.
Karan priya k gal chum k bolta h
Karan :- ok betu.
Note :- shiv vivah ki ye story av start hone ja rahi h, use suna to karan raha h , lekin m third person k tor p likhunga.
Ye baat tabki h jab bhagwan sa
shiv ne srishti rachna k baad sabko sabke kaam baat diye . Tab mata aadishakti unke pas jaker bolti h.
Adishakti :- swami aapne sabhi ko unke karya pradan ker diye h or swayam bhi nirakar se sakar ho gaye h parantu ab hamara milan kab or kese hoga , kyunki m to prakrti hu, aapke dwara sope gaye kartavya ko purn kerne k liye aapse vimukh hona hoga.
Mahadev :- aap tanik bhi udaas na ho priye , humara milan bhavishya m shighra hi hoga lekin uske liye aapko bhi sakar rup lena hoga, m bhi kaha sukhi hu aapse dur ho ker priye , aakhir shakti k bina shiv bhi to shav hi h. Isliye he devi aap shighra hi prasthan kijiye, taki hamara milan shighra ho sake , m. Vachan deta hu , ki aapki aane ki pratiksha mujhe sadaiv rahegi.
Mata aadishakti mahadev se aashirwad le vaha se anter dhyan ho jati . Or mahadev apni samadhi m chale jate h.
Or mata aadishakti braham dev ki sahayata kerne m lag jati h. Fir janm hota h devo or danvo ka .
Ek samay ki baat h tarkasur namka rakshas ek per p khada ho ker mahadev ki tapasya m laga hua tha. Uski tapasya ko kayi hajar varsh ho gaye the lekin vo tapasya se tas se mas na hua , chintiyo (ants) ne uspe apna ghar bana liya tha.
Uski itni kathin or ghor tapasya dekh bhagwan bholenath prasan ho gaye .Or uske samne prakat ho ker pahale to uske halat ko sahi kiya or bole.
Mahadev:- ankhe kholo tarkasur , hum tumhari tapasya se prasan h putra.
Tarkasur jese hi ankhe kholke apne samne mahadev ko dekh ke khushi k mare unke pero m gir k unke pero ko chute hue bola.
Tarkasur:- akhir kar aap prasan ho hi gaye prabhu , m to dhanya ho gaya aapke darshan pake .
Mahadev :- utho tarkasur, mango kis abhisht var ki kamna h tumhari .
Tarakasur(har asur ki tarah natak kerte hue):- prabhu apke darshan ki hi meri to kamna thi , jo aaj puri ho gayi , parantu ager aap mujhe kuch dena hi chahate h to prabhu mujhe amaratv pradan kijiye prabhu, yamraj ka kaal phas mujhe chu bhi na paye esa vardan dijie prabhu.
Mahadev (muskurate hue) :- putra ye asambhav h , jisne janm liya uski mrityu bhi nishchit h, isliye amaratv k alawa kuch bhi mang lo putra.
Tarkasur kuch sochte hue bola .
Tarkasur :- thik h prabhu ager aap mujhe kuch dena hi chahate h to mujhe ye var dijiye , ki ager mera ant ho to keval aapke sage putra k hatho.
Mahadev:- ek baar punar vichar ker lo tarkasur , kya tumhe yahi var chahiye.
Tarkasur :- ha prabhu meri yahi icha h , denge na prabhu ye vardan prabhu aap.
Mahadev :- tathastu putra ! Parantu apne is vardan ka kabhi durupyog mat kerna.
Ye bol mahadev vaha se antardhyan ho jate h.unke jate hi tarkasur jor jor se haste hue bolta h.
Tarkasur:- satya hi kahate h sabhi , mahadev sach m hi bahut bholeh , bholenath h vo . Apne putra k hatho k vardan deker , unhonne mujhe vese hi amar bana diya.
kyunki mahadev to thahre veragi, or veragi kabhi vivah ni kerte . Or jab unka vivah hi ni hoga to putra kaha se aayega.
Ye sab bol wo waha se nikal jata h patal lok or apni vishal sena le 3no loko m hahakar macha deta h.
Mahadev k vardan ki vajah se koi bhi dev ,manushya , uske aage ni tik pate.
Sabhi dev ek sath braham dev k pass pahunchte h
Devraj :- raksha kijiye pitamah, raksha kijiye , dusht tarkasur mahadev se vardan paker ajay ho chuka h bhagwan, koi bhi uske samna ni ker paraha prabhu, 3no loko m hahakar macha hua h prabhu , kuch kijiye.
Brahama ji kuch soch ker bole.
Brahma ji :- he devo ! Aap sab nishchit ho ke apne apne lok ko prasthan kijiye , hum shighra hi kuch karenge.
Ye sun sab dev khush or santusht ho apne apne lok ko nikal jate h.
Or brahama ji apne karya m lag jate h.
Aaj k liye bas itna hi.
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radha ne priya or geeta ki kahani apni maa garima ko bata di aur nek dil maa ne bhi unhe apna liya aur apni bahen hone ka darza de diya...hm ke ghar radha ko karan or jyoti ki baat chupane ka pata chal jata jiske baad radha ruht jati hai...par karan usko mana leta hai..phir unhe hm ki wife hina milti hai jiski karan phele hi madad ki thi jiske karan dono ek dusre ko jante the...aur mahadev ki kripa se chande ka bhi intezaam ho gya...
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