Zas23
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Thanks for your valuable reviews Riya20 ji , aaj bahut dino baad comment aaya aapka, kher koi baat ni , ab yu hi sath bane rahiyega or comment kerte rahiyega or haa aapne jesa sujhav diya h mane bhi vesa hi socha hua h , m 100 update m part 1 pura kerne ka hi soch raha huFirstly great going dude..
Story achi chal rahi hea..
Khass kar karan or naina wala part acha jaa raha hea..
Muje pata he 2 side ek sath batana wo b ek he update mea asaan nai hota..
So hats off dude..
Last update b kafi acha tha..
Preety ke character ko lekar abi b kai mistries hea..
Wahi ab sayad veer ko bachane ke baad preety or veer ke bich chemistry panapti dekhne milegi..
Or karan ne fight li he preto se wo b dekhne mea maja aayega..
Ek req he aapse..
Ki preto se fight or veer ko bachane wale part ko jada lamba mat lejayega..
Ye sirf ek req hea..
Baki ye sab kaise likhna he aapne pehli he soch rakha hoga..
Or aap waisa he kijiye..
Bas agar possible ho toa mere sujav par gor kijiye ga..
Baki aapke naam ke he tarha u rock..
Bhai ap story chng mat krna mst chl rhi hai.... full on ...Bhai sahab ye truth ki pipdi bajana band kero or rahi baat dushman samjhne ki to pahale us bande k bAt kerne k tarike ko dekho ,m yaha kisi ka worker ni hu jo har kisi ki sunta firu be faltu , saf saf bol raha hu jise ni pasand wo padhna chod de story ko , meri story k bare m ulta sidha bolne ki koi jarurat ni h . Or na hi ye ummid rakhe ki koi bhi ki m jabardasti adultery banaunga meri story ko. Tumne to bas bina jane uski side leli , uske baat kerne k tarike ko ignore ker. Bas yahi h tum logo ki kami , kuch bhi tumhare hisab se na ho writer ko dish dedo , or esi bhadi language m mujhe opinion chahiye bhi ni h.
Bhai mai Riya20 se sehmat ho aur bhai aap apne tareeke se likhe main app k saath ho.............Firstly great going dude..
Story achi chal rahi hea..
Khass kar karan or naina wala part acha jaa raha hea..
Muje pata he 2 side ek sath batana wo b ek he update mea asaan nai hota..
So hats off dude..
Last update b kafi acha tha..
Preety ke character ko lekar abi b kai mistries hea..
Wahi ab sayad veer ko bachane ke baad preety or veer ke bich chemistry panapti dekhne milegi..
Or karan ne fight li he preto se wo b dekhne mea maja aayega..
Ek req he aapse..
Ki preto se fight or veer ko bachane wale part ko jada lamba mat lejayega..
Ye sirf ek req hea..
Baki ye sab kaise likhna he aapne pehli he soch rakha hoga..
Or aap waisa he kijiye..
Bas agar possible ho toa mere sujav par gor kijiye ga..
Baki aapke naam ke he tarha u rock..
Thanks for your support bhaiMast update h bhai
Maza aa gya