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Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running

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Update no :- 94
Location :- nahar singh haveli

Kabir ko shubham le gaya apni car me hospital ki or fir raghunath bola

Raghunath :- naina beti please kuch kijiye, isse pahale wo buri shakti hamare parivar ko tabah ker de.

Thakur ki patni :- per pitaji esa kyu ker rahe h ji , wo bhala apne hi khun ko kyu marna chahate h

Naina :- aap chinta mat kijiye thakur sahab vo jo bhi shakti h , uska aaj raat ko hi ant ho avashya ho jayega , parantu pahale hume nahar singh ji ki aatma se baat kerni hogi kyunki ho na ho baat kuch or hi h.

Hum aaj raat hi kabristan me jayenge or unhe bulane ki kriya karenge

Shina :- lekin ager aap yaha se chali gayi to humara kya hoga,kahi aapke piche se wo aatma yaha aagayi to.

Naina :- aap log chinta mat kijiye , m haveli k charo or ek esa kavach bandh dungi,ki koi bhi buri shakti haveli me pravesh ni ker payegi.

Raghunath :- per ager wo shakti ghar k ander hi hui to.

Naina :- uska bhi intezam h mere pass, aap sabse meri vinti h ki aaj raat aap sab ek hi kamre me rahe or aapki security k liye humari preety to yaha hogi hi, jo kamre k bahar pahara degi.

Preety ye sun ker dar gayi or boli.

Preety :- mmmme

Naina muskurate hue :- ha ni to kya preetu, tu hi to h hum sab me sabse takatwar or bahadur , jisse bhut pret bhi darte h, kyu veer

Veer :- yaa


Preety :- per sister.

Naina :- ruko m tumhe ek mantra or batati hu , jara kaan aage lao apna.

Naina preety k kan me boli.

Naina :- abe jhali, isse acha moka tujhe ni milega veer ko impress kerne ka , or tu bar bar kyu bhul jati h , ki tu kya h or tera ye bhut pret kuch ni bigad sakte .

Veer ka nam sun preety ko man masos k manna pada or naina apni teyariyo me lag gayi.

Usne kali ma ki puja ki bhasm se haveli k charo or ek lakshman rekha khich di , or ghar k main gate pe ek kalash rakh diya.

Naina or veer nikal gaye kabristaan ki or , or preety hall me bethi rakhwali ker rahi thi.

Kabristan raat me bahut jyada hi bhayanak lag raha tha , or uper se barish ka mosam or ho raha tha, jo vatavaran ko or bhayavah bana raha tha , rah rak ker bijli k kadkne or kutto k rone ki aavaje aarahi thi.

Naina or veer ko andhere m time to laga , per nahar singh ki kabar unhe mil hi gayi, naina ne apne or veer k charo or ek kavach rupi ghera bana diya or vahi p beth ker mantra jaap kerne lagi.

Wahi dusri or

Preety hall me bethi thi hath me ek bada sa danda liye bethi thi, lekin akeli bethi hone ki vajah se uska thoda sa mood ban gaya or usne haveli me bane chote se bar me se ek choti bottle utha k pi li.

Preety :- chal bhai preety , bahut din ho gaye mahfil jamaye , ye sister to pine dena to dur , dekhne bhi ni deti.
Abhi sister yaha ni h preety , jaldi se ek peg mar le

Usko thodi chad gayi thi , aakhir purani aadat h , itni jaldi to jayegi ni.


Tabhi puri haveli me fir se kisi admi k rone ki aavaj gunjane lagi , jisse sun preety ki halat kharab ho gayi.

Preety :- kkkon h yaha

Tabhi vaha ek aadmi jisne thakuro wale kapde or pagdi pahani thi , preety ko wo ghumte najar aaya , jo dikhne m bhuda tha.

Nashe me Preety ko laga wo raghunath hoga to wo boli.

Preety :- are thakur sahab , kaheko tension le rele ho , apun h na idher , aap aram se apne kamre me jaiye.

Preety ki aawaz sun jese hi us shaks ne apna chahara preety ki or kiya , to uska to sara nasha hi uter gaya, kyunki wo shaks raghunath ni , thakur nahar singh tha.

Nahar singh bhi preety ki aavaj sun chonka or bola.

Nahar singh :- beti kya tum mujhe dekh sakti ho.

Nahar singh k bolne k dhang se hi pata chal raha tha , ki wo bahut pareshan or dukhi h.

Preety ko to kabir ki halat yaad ji aagayi or wo kabristan ki or bhagi, chilati hui.

Preety :- sister , bachao nahar singh ka bhut yaha h .

Vahi jab naina k mantra chal hi rahe the tabhi veer bola.

Veer :- naina vo dekho .

Naina ne veer k batayi disha m dekha to paya ek kabar khudi hui thi , jab dono ne waha jake dekha to kabar me lash ni thi or us kabar k pathar pe samar singh ka nam likha hua tha.

Abhi vo kuch bole or kare ki itne me preety bhi vaha bhagi bhagi vaha aagayi or hafne lagi.

Naina :- preety tum yaha kya ker rahi ho , tumhe to haveli m rukne ko bola tha na mane.

Or ye kya tumne fir se sharab pi , mane mana kiya tha na tumhe.

Preety :- abhi vo baat chodo sister or meri suno.

Fir preety use sari baat bata deti h or itne me hi nahar singh ki atma bhi vahi aagayi , jise dekh preety naina k piche ho gayi or boli.

Preety :- dekho sister wo yaha tak aagaye.

Naina ko vo dikhe to ni per fir bhi vo boli :- preety tum daro mat inse , ager mere kavach k hone k bavjud bhi ye ghar se bahar nikal yaha tak aagaye h to iska matlab ye ek achi aatma h , kyunki koi bhi buri aatma mere kavach ko langh ni sakti thi.

Nahar singh ki aatma achanak se veer me pravesh ker gayi or boli.

Veer :- tumne sahi kaha beti , m koi buri shakti ni hu , m to khud ek asahaye aatma hu , jo apne parivar ko savdhan kerne k liye raat ko rota hu or unko aane wale sankat ki chetavni deta hu.

Naina :- sankat , kesa sankat nahar singh ji , kya aap jante h kon h vo buri shakti.

Nahar singh :- wo buri shakti or koi ni mera bada beta samar singh h beti or uske sath uska beta yani ki mera pota kabir bhi.

Wo usi nakshe ko pane aayq h jiske chakkar me uski mot hui thi

Short flashback.

Jab naina ne suitcase rakh mandir m gayi thi , to aadhi raat ko kabir ne hi duplicate chabi se gate khol ker suit case se hath ko nikala or mandir k bahar aake bola.

Kabir :- aap chinta mat kero bapu jab tak m hu , hume humara maksad pura kerne se koi ni rok payega. Ab bataiye mujhe kya kerna hoga.

Ji ha dosto ye hath samar singh ka hi tha , jise usne kale jadu k time kaat diya tha

Us hath ne kabir k ek hath ki or ungli ki , fir usi ungli ko kabir k mathe ki or kiya jisse us ungli se ek roshni nikal kabir k sir m sama gayi or use samjh aagaya use kerna kya hoga.

Kabir ne ek bade se chaku se apna hath kat liya or us jale hue hath ko us jagah laga diya , or us pret ki shakti se wo ese chipak gaya , jeSe wo hath kabir ka hi ho.

Esa kerne se kabir k ander samar singh ki sari kali vidyaon ki jankari aagai or wo kabristaan me pahuch samar singh ki lash ko bahar nikalta h or kake jadu ki madad se uske sharir m wo uski aatma dal ker ke use jinda kerne m lag jata h.

Lekin usme 10 ghante lagne the , to usne wahi ek purane jhopde m lash ko chupa diya or waha se nikal gaya.

Aaj subah jab naina or baki sab mandir m gaye to wo apne baap ki lash k pass gaya or usne wo jala hu hath firse kaat ker apne baap ki lash k hath me laga diya.

Vo.darinda jinda to ho gaya tha, lekin puri takat hasil kerne k liye use raat tak rukna pad raha tha.

Or kabir ne naina ko raste se side kerne k liye, jhuti kahani banayi.

Flash back end.

Naina :- oh no , iska matlab shubham ki jan ko khatra h,hume jald hi kuch kerna hoga.

Lekin kya aap bata sakte h ki wo naksha kaha per hoga , taki hum use nasht ker sake.

Nahar singh :- wo usi kamre m h beti jaha wo hadsa hua tha, lekin wo meri ankho k samne ni h.

Ab mere parivar ki kismat tumhare hath me h beti , bhagwan k liye mere parivar ko bacha lo.

Naina ne nahar singh ko ashvast ker unhe mukti dedi.



Lekin ab der ho chuki thi , naina jab mantro charan ker rahi thi or preety ghar ki rakhwali. Tab

Tab Aas pas koi acha hospital na hone k kaarn tha , shubam ne chote hospital me kabir k pati kerwa di or vo dusre bade hospital ki or jaa rahe the.

Tabhi achanak se gadi apne aap ruk gayi or saamne ek shaks khada najar aaya use.

Shubham :- kon h waha or raste me kyu khade ho.

Wo or koi ki samar singh tha , jiska pura sharir jala hua tha or vo bola.

Samar singh :- ye kya bhatije , ek sal bhi ni hua or apne tau ko bhul gaya tu.

Shubham chonk ke :- samar tauji aap , aap to mar chuke the.

Tabhi piche se kabir kamini muskan se bola.

Kabir :- mar to chuke the chote , per kya kare , ye pesa h hi esi kuti chij jo kuch bhi kerwa de or yaha to baat bhi khajane ki thi.

Shubham :- bhaiya , iska matlab aap bhi.

Samar singh :- ab beta to baap p hi jayega na bhatije.

Shubham car se nikal ker bhaga , lekin samar singh ne use apni shaktiyon se niche gira diya tha.

Kabir or samar singh uski or bhadne lage , shubham dar k mare gidgidane laga.

Shubam :- tau ji please mujhe chod do , mane aapka kya bigada h , m bhi to aapke liye kabir bhaiya jesa hi hu na, aapko dadaji ki kasam.

Samar singh ye sun shubham ko uthata h or aram se bola.

Samar singh :- tune sahi kaha beta tu bhii mere liye kabir jesa hi h fir m tujhe kese maru.

Kabir chonkte hur :- baapu.

Samar singh use chup rahane ka ishara ker aage bola.

Samar singh :- per beta ye tune kya galti ker di , mujhe us insaan ki kasam de dali jisse m sabse jyada nafrat kerta hu.

Bas itna bol samar singh shetani hasi haste hue shubam ki gardan tod di.Or fir wo 2no baap bete nikal pade haveli ki or .

Per jese hi samar singh ne apna kadam haveli k ander rakhne ki koshis ki to usko ek jordar jhatka laga or wo dur ja ker gira.

Samar singh chilaya:- kabir , jaldi se us kalash ko waha se hata or ye rekha mita.

Kabir ne apne baap ki baat mante hue vesa hi kiya, tabhi vaha raghunath aagaya or kabir ko dekh chonk k bola.

Raghunath :- kabir beta tum yaha kese or shubham kaha h , or ye tum kya ker rahe ho beta , us kalash ko waha wapas rakho verna.

Samar singh waha aate hue :- verna m aajaunga, kyu chote.

Raghunath chonkte hue :-bhai sahab aap ,aap to mar gaye the.

Samar singh (gusse se) :-ha mar gaya tha , lekin apne khajane ko pane k liye m wapas aagaya hu. Kyu chote apne bhai ko dekh k khushi ni hui, dekh m tere liye ek tohfa laya hu.

Ye bol samar singh ne kuch feka raghunath ki or jese hi raghunath ne wo chij dekhi , wo wahi fut fut k rone laga , or baki sara parivar jo waha aagaya tha vo bhi.

Kyunki samar singh ne shubam ka kata hua sir feka tha, raghunath bola.

Raghunath :- ye aapne kya kiya bhai sahab , apne hi bhatije ko maar dala aakhir kyu.

Samar singh :- ager m ni marta to ye mere bete ka haq marta bhavishya me or pitaji ka sath dene k liye tum bhi maroge.

Ye bol samar singh ne apna ek hath hava me esa ker liya jese usne kisi ka gala pakad rakha ho or usi samay raghunath ka gala apne aap ghutne laga.

Lekin isse pahale samar singh raghunath ko mar pata , use ek or jhatka laga or fir se wo dur ja ke gira, esa isliye hua kyunki naina waha pahunch gayi thi or apne yantra ka istemal ker liya tha usne.

Samar singh :- ladki tujhe ek baar moka diya tha jinda chod ki tu hamare raste m na aaye , lekin ab in sab k sath tu bhi maregi.

Ye bol samar singh fir se aage badha , lekin naina ne use apne yantra se rok ek divar se chipka diya or boli.

Naina :- ant to hoga lekin sirf tera samar singh , lekin usse pahale tujhe mere ko samraat tak pahuchana hoga.

Samar singh tantrik bhi tha or uper se samraat ka ek acha dost bhi , to wo kuch jyada hi takatwar tha, usne ek shakti prahar se naina ko piche dakhel diya.

Samar singh haste hue :- marne k liye samraat tak jane ki kya jarurat h murkh ladki , teri ye khawaish m hi puri ker deta hu or ye tera chota mota yantra mera kuch ni bigad sakta .

Sabse pahale m tere sathiyo ko hi marunga.

Ye bol samar singh ne ek shakti ka gola preety ki or feka , per ye kya preety ne apni or gola aate dekh apna wo hath apne muh ki or ker liya , jispe wo tritya ka nishan tha or jese hi vo gola uss nishan se takraya to wo kisi ball ki tarah gola piche ki or tappa kha k kabir se takra gaya or kabir chinkta hua rakh m tabdil ho gaya.

Apne bete ki mot dekh kabir buri tarah bhokhla gaya or bola.

Samar singh preety se :- Oh to tu ek trittya h , lekin m bhi kam ni hu ladki , samraat k sath rah ker mane bhi trittyao ko marne ki vidya sikh li h , tune mere bete ko mara h ladki ab tu ni bachegi.

Ye bol samar singh apni ankhe band ker kuch mantra bolne laga or usne apna hath jese hi aage kiya uske hath me ek lal or kale rang ka shakti ka gola aagaya or usne wo preety ki or feka.

Naina chilayi :- niiiiiiii

Preety ne to apni ankhe hi band ker li thi , tabhi puri haveli me ek dardnaak chinkh gunj uthi .

Lekin ye chinkh preety ki ni veer ki thi , hua yu tha jese hi veer ne wo gola preety ki or aata dekha , wo jhat se preety ko bachane k liye bich me aagaya or wo gola usko lag gaya.

Naina or preety jor se chilayi :- veeeerr

Veer us prahar k bad piche ki or girne laga , preety ne use tham liya or wahi farsh pe uske sir ko apni god m rakh rote hue boli.

Preety :- ye tumne kya kiya veer , mujhko bachane k liye khud p ye war kyu jhela , akhir kyu mujh jesi ek trittya ko bachane k liye apni jaan sankat me dali.

Veer adhbehoshi ki halat me :- mane tume pahale bhi kaha tha na preetu, mujhe koi fark ni padta tum kya ho or kyu ho , fir ye trittya wali baat kaha se aayi.

(Khaste hue ) m janta hu preety tum mujhse pyaar kerti ho ek dost ki tarah hi ni ek premika ki tarah bhi.

Sach to ye h ki m bhi tumko pasand kerta hu preety , wo bhi aaj se ni bachpan se hi , per kabhi kahane ki himmat ni ker paya , to kese m apni ankho k samne apne bachpan k pyaar ko marta hua dekh sakta tha.

(Atakte hue) lekin shayad khuda ko hamara milan manjur ni tha preetu , isliye m jane se pahale tumhe ye sachai bata dena chahata hu,

I love u preety.

Isi k sath veer ki ankhe band ho jati h or preety chilati h.


Preety :-. Niiiiiiiiiiiiii.

Or wahi beth fut fut k rone lagi , or naina ka bhi wahi hal tha , wo bhi veer se kafi close ho gayi thi.

Samar singh bich me haste hue bola :- tera yaar to gaya ladki , ab tujhe kon bachayega.


Preety ne jese hi ye suna uske gusse ka jwala mukhi fut pada or uski aankhe surk lal ho gayi, jo chamak rahi thi.

Preety bhayanak awaz me :- marega to tu ab kamine .

Ye bol preety ne apna ek hath aage kiya jisme ek aag ka gola aagaya.




Preety ne us gole ko samar singh p fek dala , lekin ye utna takatwar ni tha , jitna ek proper trittya ka hota h , kyunki preety apni shaktiyon se achi tarah vakif ni thi .

isliye us war ne samar singh ko ghayal ker ek baar k liye bhaga to diya , lekin wo mara ni.

Wahi preety ka gusaa or badhta ja raha tha or naina bhi use rok ni pa rahi thi .

Wahi dusri or

Karan or jyoti nikal pade padmanabh swami k mandir ki or.

Sabse pahale to waha jaker unhone ek dharmshala me ek room leker kapde change ker waha k paramparik kapde pahane .

Jyoti ne ek yellow color ki simple saree pahani , lekin wo simple saree me or bhi jyada sunder dikh rahi thi.or usne ek choti bandhi thi.
Jisme bilkul wo ek south indian ladki hi lag rahi thi.

Apna hero to use dekhta hi rah gaya , or usme kho sa gaya, jyoti uske pass aake boli.

Jyoti :- kesi lag rahi hu bhai m.

Karan uske gal chumte :- hamesha ki tarah bahut pyari lag rahi h meri gudiya , per ek chij ki kami h.

Jyoti :- wo kya bhai.

Karan :- hmm , tum yahi ruko m abhi aya,

Ye bol karan kamre se bahar chala gaya or 15 min baad wapas aaya , lekin usne apne piche kuch chupaya hua tha.

Jyoti :- bhai kya chupa rahe ho mujhse jara dikhaiye ,

Karan :- ese ni gudiya , pahale ankhe band kero .

Jyoti :- kya bhai , ap chote bacho jese kerte ho kayi baar to.

Ye bol jyoti ne apni ankh band ker li , karan jyoti ko shishe k pas leker gaya or usne jo chij layi thi wo jyoti ko pahana di.

Karan :- ab tum akh khol sakti ho meri sweety

Jyoti ne jese hi apni ankhe kholi to usne dekha ki uska bhai uske liye ek kajra laya tha , jo uske baalo me bahut hi acha lag raha tha.




Karan :- ab lag rahi h meri gudiya ek dam south ki heroine.

Jyoti sharma ke karan k gale lag k boli .

Jyoti :- thank you so much bhai , it's so beautiful.

Karan pyaar se uske chapat laga ke :-. Hat pagli , apne bhai ko bhi koi thanks kahata h kya.

Fir karan ne bhi kapde change kiye or parampara anusar ek dhoti or uper ek white kapda dal liya.

Jyoti samet tino ladkiya to pagal hue ja rahi thi karan ka wo look dekh ker.

Kiran(man me) :- haaye kitna handsome h karan , man to kerta h abhi propose ker du.

Per ye kawab me hadi ki tarah iski bahan jyoti hamesha isse chipki hi rahati h , karu to kya karu.

Kirti ka bhi kuch esa hi haal tha , jinhe dekh jyoti chid rahi thi.

Jyoti man me :- m bhi ek no ki gadhi hi hu , jo in chudelo ko apne sath yaha le aayi , dekho to kese besharmo ki tarah mere bhai ko ghure ja rahi h.

Karan :- friends ab chale , yaha sara din yahi gujarne ka irada h

Karan ki aawaz se sab hosh me aaye or sab mandir ki or nikal pade

Mandir ki sundarta ka varnan shabdo me varnan asambhav sa tha, mandir ka gumbad swarn nirmit(sone ka bana) tha , or mandir ki divaron poranik patro ki pratimaye nakkashi k roop me sthith thi.




Jese hi sab mandir k garbh grah k pass pahunche to unka hriday samne dekh gad gad ho gaya.

Kyunki bhagwan vishnu ki vo murti jo 1008 se bhi jyada shaligram shilao ko milaker banayi gayi thi , uska roop anupam or avismaraniy tha, jink




Us murti ko dekh ker esa hi prateet ho raha tha , ki jese waha koi murti ni sakshat bhagavan narayan hi anant shaiya pe lete h or unki nabhi se nikal rahe kamal per brahama ji virajman h.

Isi karan to unhe padmanabh swami kaha gaya h , padm yani kamal or nabh yani nabhi.

Arthat jinki nabhi kamal saman vishal h , wo padmanabh swami yaha virajman the.

Karan man me :- he sachidanand, he narayan apne is das ka pranam swikar kare.

He prabhu m abhi tak apne jivan k udeshya se purntah parichit to ni hu , parantu itna ashvast avashya hu ki apne yadi is jivan k sath mujhe ye shaktiya jo pradan ki h wo avashya hi dharm ki raksha k liye hi h.

He madhav m apne guru ki aagya maan yaha nilmani ki khoj me aaya hu, jise aapne dwapar me devo ko sompa tha . M ye janta hu bhagwan ki m bhale hi yaha dwar tak pahunch chuka hu per us mani ko pana itna saral bhi na hoga, dev avashya mere marg me bhadha avashya banege .

Isliye hey dayanidhan apne is bhakt ko apna aashirwad deker is das pe kripya kijiye.

Karan ne kuch der yu hi prathna ki or fir sabhi mandir k parisar m mojud baki mandiro k darshan kerne lage.

Karan or jyoti ko taikhane ka rasta bhi mil hi gaya , lekin waha jana allowed ni tha.

To karan ne apni ankh band ker divya drishti power activate ki or taikhane k gate ki or dekha jisse usko darwaje k aar par dikhne laga.

Or usne dekha ki ander sidiyo se utarne k baad 7 darwaje the , jinme se 6 per to normal tale lage hue the parantu 7ve darwaje per na koi darwaja tha , na koi kundi. Or waha per cctv camera bhi lage hue the.

Karan ne aaj raat ko yaha ane ka decide kiya or apne hotel ki or nikal pade.

Location :- vishnu lok.

Mata lakshmi or bhagwan vishnu ye sab dekh ker muskura rahe the, tabhi lakshmi maa boli.

Lakshmi mata :- dekha swami kitni saralta se aapke in anokhe bhakto ne nilmani k dwar ko khoj liya,mujhe to purn vishwas h ki karan or jyoti saralta se nilmani ko praapt ker lenge.

Narayan :- devi aapko humare bhakt p vishwas h ye to achi baat h , lekin karan or jyoti k liye ye yatra itni saral bhi ni hone wali, jitna aap soch rahe h devi.

Isme karan k bal , budhi ,dhairya or prem sabki pariksha hogi.

Lakshmi :- wo to kabse hoti hi aarahi h na narayan , akhir in bhai bahan k jivan me parikshaon k alawa or aaya bhi kya h abhi tak. To ab konsi badi baat hogi.

Narayan :- badi baat to h priye , aap bhul rahi h ki dwapar yug me krishn roop m mane nilmani ki suraksha k liye kya vyuh rachna karwayi thi or kin kin ko mane uska rakshak niyukt kiya tha.

Isiliye to m kah raha hu devi ye pariksha itni saral ni hone wali

Lakshmi mata :- aap kuch bhi kahiye swami mujhe karan or jyoti p purn vishwas h , wo har pariksha ko avashya paar karenge.

Back to the hero.

Raat ko karib 3 baje karan or jyoti soker uthe or naha dhoker wo jane k liye ready ho gaye, itni jaldi isliye kyunki aaj brahm muharat yani ki subah 4 baje se amavasya ka din aarambh hone wala tha or karan or jyoti is kaam ko jald se jald pura kerna chahate the.

Karan ne apne purse se apni maa ki photo nikali or ashirwad leta hua bola.

Karan :- mumma m janta hu aap hamare sath hamesha ho or aapka aashirwad bhi .

Lekin fir bhi hume or aashirwad dijiye taki hum apne lakshay ko purn ker sake.

Ye bol karan or jyoti ne apni ma ki photo ko mathe se laga ker aashirwad liya .

Jyoti :- to chale bhai.

Karan :- bas ek min gudiya.

Ye bol karan ne ek chutki bajayi jisse waha mojud cctv camera band ho gaye or karan or jyoti teleport ho pahunch gaye us taikhane me.

Jaha per unhone sare dwaro ko dekhne lage, 6 dwaro p to lakshmi ji bani hui thi, jinhe indian govt ne already khol diya tha, wo sabhi sone k bane hue the

Lekin 7va dwar bilkul alag or thoda darawna bhi tha , kyunki 7ve dwar pe lakshmi ji ni saamp bana hua tha




Karan ne us darwaje ko achi tarah check kerne laga , tabhi us darwaje k bichobiche usne ek khali jagah si bani hui dekhi , jiski shape bilkul sheshanag jesi thi.

Karan samjh gaya ki ho na ho yahi h wo jagah , jaha pe us sheshanag ki murti ko rakhne se dwar khulega.

Karan ne apne bag se wo murti nikali or us sthan per usne wo murti rakh di or mantra jap kiya.

Karan :-

Shaanta-Aakaaram Bhujaga-Shayana m Padma-Naabha Sura-Iisham
Vishva-Aadhaaram Gagana-Sadrsham
Megha-Varnna Shubha-Anggam|

Lakssmii-Kaantam
Kamala-Nayanam Yogibhir-Dhyaana-Gamyam
Vande Vissnnum Bhava-Bhaya-Haram Sarva-Loka-Eka-Naatham ||

Karan ki stuti purn hote hi wo dwar do hiso me batte hue apne aap khulne laga.

Or jese hi gate khula to bhitar se bahut hi jyada prakash bahar aane laga , koi aam insaan hota to kabka andha ho chuka hota , lekin karan or jyoti ko koi khas fark ni padha.

Wo ander jane lage or jese hi wo ander gaye , dwar apne aap wapas band ho gaya.

Karan or jyoti jab dwar k bhitar pahunche to samne ka najara dekh unki herani ka thikana na raha .

Kyunki wo koi kaksh ni balki ek bahut hi sundar van (jungle ) me khade the, jo bahut hi ghana or sunder tha , pass me hi kal kal kerti hui nadi bah rahi thi

Waha se kayi dur ek pahadi thi , jispe ek bahut hi sunder or bada el mahal najar aaraha tha.

Karan abhi un najaro ko dekhne me hi khoya hua tha ki achanak uska dhyan jyoti ki chikh se tuta .

Jyoti :-. Bhaiiiiiiiiiiiiiii bachao.

Karan ghabra ker jyoti ko dekhta h to pata h ki jyoti ek shakti kavach rupi gole me fasi hui h or wo bahar ni nikal pa rahi.

Karan ne ankh band ker hath aage kiye to uske hath se ek roshni nikal us gole se takrati h per koi asar ni hua.karan ne ek baar fir kosis ki per koi asar ni hua.

Karan gusse se chilaya :- kon h vo jisne meri bahan ko ked karne ka dussahas kiya , veer ho to samne aao , yu kayro ki tarah piche se vaar kyu ker rahe ho

Itna bol karan ne apni talvaar ka aahvahan kiya or usi samay ek roshni k sath uske hatho me talvar aagayi.

Fir usne us ghere pe talvaar se bhi vaar kiya per uska koi asar na hua

Tabhi vaha achanak se ek divya roshni yukt manav akriti prakat hui or boli.

Roshni :- rasaatal lok me tumhara swagat h rakshak .
Ye aawaz kisi purush ki pratit ho rahi thi. Karan us roshni ko dekhta h to najane kyu apne aap uske aage jhuk use pranam kerta h, ye to wo bhi ni janta tha , per usko apne antarman se aawaz aayi ki use us roshni ko pranam kerna chahiye


Roshni :- m janta hu putra ki tum yaha nilmani ko prapt kerne aaye ho , parantu use pana itna saral ni h , nilmani ki priksha ek dhyut krida(jue) ki tarah h , jisme tume nilmami rupi puraskar pana h to apni sabse priya vastu ya vyakti ko danv pe lagana hi hoga, isliye jyoti ab jab tak mere pas surakshit rahegi , jab tak tum nilmani ko pa ni lete.

Karan :- ni , meri bahan koi vastu ni h jise m daav p laga du , isse acha to mujhe nilmani chahiye hi ni , aap meri bahan ko shighra mukt kijiye or hume yaha se jane ki aagya dijiye

Roshni :- ye asambhav h karan , ek baar jisne rasatal lok me kadam rakh diya to use meri chunoti ko swikar kerna hi padta h . Or ager tum jana chahate ho to jayo parantu jyoti tumhare sath ni jayegi.

Karan k paas ye sun or koi chara ni bacha tha , roshni ki parikshao ko paar kerne k bajaye , isliye vo bola.

Karan :- mujhe swikar h.

Fir wo jyoti k pass jaker nam ankho se bola

Karan :- mujhe maaf ker de gudiya , meri vajah se tu yaha fas gayi h or mujhe majburan tumhe danv p lagana pad raha h

Jyoti :- bhai aap please mat roiye, ye sirf aapki hi ni meri bhi pariksha h , to hum dono ko thoda kasht sahana hi hoga na.

Or mujhe aap per pura bharosa h bhai , aap sari chunotiyo ko aasani se par ker loge or mujhe mukt kerwa doge , fir hum sath me ghar jayenge bhai

Rona to jyoti ko bhi bahut aaraha rha tha per wo ni chahati thi ki uska bhai use rota dekh kamjor ho jaye isliye usne khud ko control kiya Or jyoti ne apni ungli se apni anguthi nikal k karan ki or bhadati h jise roshni karan tak pahuchne deti h .

Jyoti :- bhai ise apne pas rakhiye , ager raste me kabhi bhi meri kami aapko mahasus ho to ise apne dil se laga lena , aap mujhe apne pass hi paoge.

Karan :- tu chinta mat ker gudiya tera ye bhai , tujhe jald se jald mukt kerwayega.

Iske aage kuch or vo bol pata dhire dhire karke us gole samet jyoti waha se gayab ho gayi.

Karan tej aawaz me :- jyotiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

Or fir wahi ghutno k bal beth apni majburi p kuch der rota raha, tabhi roshni se aawaz ayi.

Roshni :- Rone m samay vyarth mat kero karan , jitna vilamb karoge ,utna samay jyoti se dur rahoge, isliye utho or sajjj ho jao nilmani ko pane k is safar k liye.

Karan ye sun shant hua or bola.

Karan :- hey divya shakti , aap jo koi bhi ho, ye shiv bhakt aapki har ek pariksha ko purn kerne ko sajj h , kahiye kya kerna hoga mujhe.

Roshni se aawaj aayi

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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Harry rocks

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Awesome update bhai,
vo shaya kaun tha jisne karan ko dhyaan ki avashtha me hi nuksan pahuncha diya,
vahi udhar naina ke paas ek naya twist aa gaya hai, uss suitcase ko kisne khola tha,
aur ye khajane ka sambandh kahi samraat se to nhi,
sonam ki bhakti ka adbhut vivaran prastut kiya hai aapne,
neelmani ka dwaar padmanabh mandir hai,
dekhte hai ab aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update
Thanks for your support bhai
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