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Update no :- 84
Ranvir :- beta ab se tumhe job kerne ki koi jarurat ni h , tum kal hi resignation dedo.
Jyoti :- wo kyu papa.
Ranvir :- beta inse milo ye h mr bajaj, yani ki aapke hone wale husband .
Jyoti chonk k khadi hoti hui tez aawaz me boli .
Jyoti :-. Kyaaaaaaaaa.
Ranvir :- ha beta , mane or aapki choti ma ne aapka rishta inse pakka ker diya h or apke exam hone k baad aapki shadi inke sath ker di jayegi or kal aapki sagayi h.
Ranvir ne ye bol karan or jyoti p to bomb ni nuclear bomb sa hi fod diya, karan ne to jese ye suna uski ankho k age ek baat to andhera sa chane laga , per usne khud ko sambhal liya , uski to ye halat ho gayi thi, jese uske kisine praan hi chinne ki baat ker di ho.
or ho bhi kyu na Jis jyoti ki yani ki uski bahan , uski saheli , uski jaan,uski shakti , or yaha tak ki jo uski sab kuch h or uske bina jine ki wo kalpana tak ni ker sakta ,usi jyoti ko usse dur kiye jane ki baat ki ja rahi thi uske baap k dwara.
Sach to ye tha ki karan bhi jyoti ko ek bahan k pyaar k sath sath ek premika ki tarah bhi chahata tha.
Or sath me karan k krodh ka jwalamukhi bhi fatne ko ho gaya tha apne baap or choti maa ki is harkat p
Jyoti ka to or bhi bura halat ho gaya tha, jyoti bhi vesa dard or kash mahasus ker rahi thi jesa karan ker raha tha, jis jyoti ne aaj tak sapne m bhi apne bhai k alawa kisi or k baare m socha tak ni tha , or aaj usika baap uske bhai yani k uske prem, uske pram se dur kerne ki baat ker raha tha.
Ab to uska waha rukna bhi mushkil ho gaya tha, wo vaha se apne kamre m bhag gayi or gate lock ker liya.
Ranvir :- lagta h hamari bitiya sharma gayi.
Karan ka krodh bhadta ja raha tha apne pita pjika kaaran tha , ki itna sab hone k baad bhi ranvir ko ye hak kisne diya ki vo jyoti se bina puche , bina uski marji ko jane uska rishta tay kerne ka, or wo bhi usse jo jyoti se dugni umer ka tha , yani ki jyoti k bap ki umar ka tha bajaj lag bhag.
Uska man to ker raha tha ki abhi apne baap ko acha sa sabak sikha de , lekin usne priority jyoti ko sambhalne ko di or apne kamre ki or bad gaya.
Ranvir :- aaiye bajaj sahab garden m beth k aage ki baat kerte h.
Ye bol wo dono bahar chale gaye ,kavya or shivani jara bahar gayi hui thi.
Karan jese hi apne kamre k pass pahunch gate khole ko hota h to pata h ki gate lock h
Karan :- gudiya darwaza khol .
Lekin koi jawab ni aata ander se ,karan bar bar darwaja pit raha tha, lekin jyoti koi jawab ni de rahi thi, ab karan ka tension k maare bura hal ho gaya tha , use kuch galat hone ka ahsaas hone laga.
Ab usse or ruka ni gaya or usne darwaja tod diya or ander ka najar dekh chonk gaya .Or dar bhi gaya.
Jyoti ne apni hath ki kalayi kast li h or uske hath m jahar h jise wo pine hi wali h.
Karan bhag k jyoti k hath se shishi chinta h or ek kas k taphad jad diya jyoti k gal pe , ye aaj first time tha jab karan ne jyoti p hath uthaya tha, kyunki jyoti ne harkat hi esi ki thi aaj , thappad itni jor ka tha ki jyoti k chahara puri tarah lal pad gaya.
Karan chillaya :- ye kya kerne ja rahi thi tu jyoti ,esa kerne se pahale tujhe jara bhi apne is bhai ka khayal ni aaya , ki tujhe kuch ho gaya to mera kya hoga ,
Ye bol karan jyoti ko sine se lagate hue rone laga , jyoti k hath ka ghav bhi bhar gaya tha, darasal usne pahale apne hatho ki nas katne ki hi koshis ki thi , lekin uski shaktiyon ki vajah se ghav bhar rahe the, isliye usne jahar khane ki koshis ki
Jyoti rote hue :- to m kya karu bhai , mujhe mar jane dijiye , m aapke bina ni ji sakti bhai , mujhe ni kerni shadi vadi, ager m aapse dur hui to vo pal mot se bhi baatar ho ga, isse acha mujhe mar hi jane dijiye bhaiya, mujhe mar jane dijiye.
Karan :- gudiyaaa dimag kharab ho gaya h kya tera , kesi baat ker rahi h tu , kya tera ye bhai bhi tere jese tere bina ji sakta h , kya tune socha ni ager aaj tujhe kuch ho jata to kya m ji pata , are m to us din hi mar jata , jis din humne apni maa ko khoya , per nhi m esa kerne ki soch bhi ni sakta tha, kyunki tu jo mere sath thi , tune hi mujhe us dukh se nikala mera sahara bani , ye karan ab tak jinda h to uski vajah tu hi h meri gudiya , mere jine ki vajah hi tu h , tu hi bata gudiya , kya ye karan apni jyoti k bager ji pata . Jese is shakti k bina shiv bhi shav h , vese hi ye karan bhi apni jyoti k bina shav hi h.
Ager fir bhi tu merna chahati h to thik h , lekin khud ko khatam kerne se pahale tujhe ye chaku apne is bhai k sine m ghopna hoga
Ye bol karan jyoti ko chaku pakda deta h or jyoti se khud ko marne ko kahata h.
Jyoti jese hi apne bhai ki ye baat suni , usne chaku ko turant feka diya or karan k pero m ghutne k bal beth roti hui boli
Jyoti :- mujhe maaf ker do bhaiya , aaj apki gudiya ne apka bahut dil dukhaya h esi harkat ker , per m kya keru bhaiya, ye baat aap bhi jante ho ki aapki ye jyoti apne karan yani apne bhaiya k bina is jivan ki kalpana tak ni ker sakti or papa ne to ye shadi ki baat bol to mere sine m chura sa ghop diya , mujhe to aap khud se dur hote saaf saf najar ane lage, to mujhe kuch ni sujha.
Karan jyoti ko apne pero se utha khud k kas k gale lagate hue bola
Karan :- ager unhonne tumko mujhse dur kerne ki baat bol di to iska matlab suicide ker logi , kya tujhe apne bhai p jara bhi bharosa na tha,ki tune mujhse ek baar baat kerne tak ki naa sochi ya tu apne bhai ko itna kamjor samjhti h ki wo apni jaan ko , apni bahan ko yu apne se dur hone dega, wo bhi ek bhude se shadi hone deker.
Jyoti :- ni bhaiya , please esa mat boliye , ki mujhe aap pe bharosa ni h , jiske sath mane apni pahali saas li h is duniya m , usse jyada bharosa ye jyoti to un mahadev p bhi na kare , jinhone ye saas di h.
Karan :- ager jo tumne bola wo ager sach h na to ye apna rona band kero , jab tak tera ye bhai jinda h , tujhe khud se dur ni hone dega or m dekhta hu sb kon karwata h teri shadi us buddhe se or mujhse tumko kon dur kerta h.
Karan ka ashvasan sun jyoti kuch shant hoti h ,or karan use pani pilata h or jyoti karan ko or fir uske gale se laga leta h.
Tab tak itna shor sharaba sun ranvir or bajaj bhi vaha aaphunche or kavya or shivani bhi jo karib 5min ghar k garden m pahunche hi the.
Ranvir :- ye kya ho raha h yaha , itna shor sharaba kyu macha raka h or ye gate kese tuta or tum dono ro kyu rahe ho , aaj to khushi ka moka h karan , tumhari bahan ki shadi jo tay ho gayi.
Karan jyoti ko apne se alag ker side m bed p bitha ker bola.
Karan sakht lahaje me:- mujhe aapse is baare m hi baat kerni h papa , jyoti ko ye shadi manjur ni h or wo ye shadi ni karegi.
Ranvir :- mane tum dono se tumhari permission ni mangi balki apna decision sunaya h , jise tum dono kaan khol k sun lo , jyoti ki sagai to hogi wo bhi kal hi.
Karan :- or m jan sakta hu ,aapko ye hak kisne diya, ki aaap tay karoge ki jyoti ki jindagi k itne bade fesle ko or vo bhi bina uski marji k.
Ranvir :- e ladke ab tum jyada bol rahe ho , or rahi baat fesle ki to baap hu m iska or tera bhi or ye mera hi hak h ki jyoti kaha kab or kisse hogi iska fesla sirf m lunga.
Karan :- wah , aapko yaad h ki ap hamare baap ho or ham aapki olad , vese , hume to lala jis tarah ma k jane k baad apka ravaiya raha hamare se , us hisab se aap bhul hi gaye ki apka ek beta or beti kon h.
Ranvir tej aawaj me :- karan.
Ranvir ki tez aawaz se to kavya or shivani to dar hi gayi.
Karan :- chilane se sachai badal ni jayegi mr sharma , ek baap ka matlab ye ni hota ki har mahine bas apni olad ko kharcha dedo or ho gaya baap hone ka farz pura.
Kabhi aaj tak aapne kabhi ye janne ka bhi prayas kiya , hum dono ko koi taklif h ya ni , kisi chij ki jarurat h ya ni , wo sab to chodiye aapne to 2min beth k humse pyaar se baat tak ni ki or aaj aap ek baap k haq ki baat ker rahe ho, kis muh se aap ye haq mang rahe ho , jabki aaj tak aapne apne baap hone ka farz nibhaya tak ni.
Ranvir karan k thappad marne ki koshis ki lekin karan ne uska hath bich m hi rok liya or bola.
Karan :- na mr sharma ye bhul kerne ki sochna bhi mat ,aap ye haq kabks kho chuke ho.
Ranvir gusse se :- teri himmat kese hui mera hath pakade ki or apne baap se ese baat kerne ki , mat bhul ye ghar mera h or is ghar ka ek ek fesla m hi lunga.
Karan :- baap ,kya is shabd ka matlab bhi pata h aapko , kese baap ho aap mr sharma , jo apni hi beti ki shadi us admi se karwana chahata h jo khud apki beti k baap ki umer ka hi h.or itna hi ni aap ek ese insaan se shadi kerwane ka soch rahe ho apni beti ka , jiske uper na jane hi kitne rape or murder k charges lage hue h , jinhe isne apne peso k dam p daba diya h.
Ye sun k to bajaj ki to herani se ankhe fati ki fati rah gayi , ki karan ko is baare m kese pata .
karan ko is bare m kese pata chala ye aapko batane ki jarurat to hi hi ni na dosto.
Aapne to apne baap hone ka haq usi din kho diya tha, mr sharma jisdin aap daru k nashe m apni beti ko bina vajah marne aye the ek darinde ki tarah , vo to bhagwan ka shukar h lekin us time ek darinde baap se apni bahan ki raksha k liye uska ye bhai vaha mojud tha or vo aap dono k bich aaker aagay . Or aapke diye hue har berahami se giye ek ek vaar ko apne uper leliya or lekin na to aapko apne bacho p daya aayi , yaha tak ki aapne apne bacho ki halat ka jayja tak lena sahi ni samjha. kya tab aapke ander k ek pita ne aapke is dushkritya p dutkara ni , nahi na , fir kese aap apne baap hone ka haq mang rahe jo
Or rahi baat ye aapka ghar hone ki to mane us din bhi kaha tha , ki hume aapke is jhute ahasan or bhik ki koi jarurat ni h
Or sun lijiye us din mane bola tha ki m ek mahine m ghar khali ker dunga , per ab to m us ghar m ek pal bhi ni rah sakta jis ghar m meri bahan ka koi samman or uski marji ki koi kadar na ho.
(Jyoti se) chal choti apna saman pack ker le ,hum abhi hi is ghar ko khali ker rahe h .
Shivani to ye sun buri tarah rone lagi or apne kamre ki or bhag gayi, kavya ne bhi bahut muskil se khud ko.comtrol kiya hua tha.
Bajaj jo itni der se chupchap khada tha ab vo bhi apni okaat p aagaya .
Bajaj :- e ladke tu hota kon h sharma ji k fesale p ungli uthane wala , koi kahi ni jayega , jyoti se meri shadi ho ke hi rahegi sun le kaan kholke , kyunki jyoti mujhko pasand h or ek baar jo kuch bhi bajaj ko pasand aajaye , fir to wo usko paker hi dam leta h.
Karan apne gusse ko control kerte hue :- meri bahan koi chij ni h bajaj , jise tu apne dam p jabardasti paa lega, or jab tak iska ye bhai jinda h tab tak to bilkul ni.
Hum dono to abhi hi ghar chodenge , ager tere gurde m dam h or tu rok sakta h hume to rok ker dikha.verna hava aane de.
Bajaj ye sun karan ko mukkha marne ki koshish kerta h , lekin karan uske mukke ko pakad leta h or ek jordar laat maar deta h , jisse wo samne divar se takra jata h or uske sir se khun nikalne laga.
Bajaj ki ye halat dekh ranvir uski or doda, or karan ne gusse se sirf itna hi bola.
Karan :- "mujhe dobara bolne ki aadat ni h" .
Fir karan or jyoti apne sare samaan jese kapde , apne papers or books or kuch jaruri saman pack kerne m lag jate h.
Bajaj bhi khud ko sambhal k kisi ko phone lagata h or gusse m kuch bolta h or .
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Location :- kundera.
Sham ko preety or naina bore ho rai thi to thoda ganv ghumne nikal gaye .
Tabhi vaha ek paagal bhikhari aaya or pagalo jese harkate kerte hue jor jor se dono k samne bolne laga.
Bhikhari :- tumko pata h mane lila ko mara , mane lika ko mara.
Or ye bol wo khud hi waha se bhag gaya , preety bhi majak kerte hue uske piche se chilayai.
Preety :-are wah mere sher kya kaam kiya h tune .
Naina ek chapat uske marte hue hasti hui boli :- hat pagli kahi ki.
Thodi der ganv ghumne k baad vo ek ped k niche bane chabutre p beth gayi.
Preety :- yar sister tum to boli thi na tum meri baat veer se jarur aage bhadaogi, per tum to kuch ker hi ni rahi or veer h ki samjhta hi ni
Naina :- are meri bholi saheli ye sab itna aasan ni h jitna tum soch rahi ho, pahali baat to ye ki mane tumhe bola tha na apne bolne k lahaje ko badalne k liye .
Preety :- apun try ker reli h na sister, ab itni purani aadat ek dam se to jayegi ni na.
Naina :- hmm , ab suno dusri tip. Tumhe ye apne kapde pahanane ka style bhi change kerna hoga.
Preety :- kapde ?Ab kapdo m kya kharabi h sister , itne ache to h.
Naina :- baat ache buri ki ni h meri lado , baat darasal ye h ki tumhara dressing sence bilkul ladko jesa h.
Naina ne bilkul sahi baat boli thi , preety hamesh ladko jese kapde hi pahanti thi, without sleeves top , gents pant , baal bade the lekin usne is type se bandha hua tha ki wo chote hi dikhte the, kahane ka matlab ye h ki koi bhi preety ko dur se dekhne per ladka hi samjhta.
Naina:- mere kahane ka matlab h , ki khud ko thoda sajao savaro, ladki ho to thoda ladki dikhne ki koshish bhi to kero.Meri pyari saheli ladko ko ager set kerna ho to pahale hume unko apni or attract ker a padta h.mera yakin mano tum bahut khubsurat ho , mujhse bhi jyada , bas tumhe dressing sense sikh k khud ko badalna h , fir dekhna veer kese tum pe lattu ho jayega.
Preety :- per kese sister , apun ko to kuch idea hi ni h is mamle me, maa jyadatar apne kamo m busy rahati ghar chalane k liye , fir unki tabiyat kharab ho gayi , isliye unse kuch jyada sikh hi ni payi is mamle me or ladko ki company m rah rahkar unke jesi hi ban geli apun.
Naina :- uske liye teri ye sister h na , tu chinta mat ker kal hi hum shahar jayenge or tere liye shopping karenge .
Abhi dono saheli baate ker hi rahi thi ki waha karuna apne chote se bache k sath waha aayi or naina k pero m gir gayi.
Naina :- are chachi ye kya ker rahi h , uthiye please ese kerke mujhe paap ka bhagi to na banaye.
Ye bol naina karuna ko uthati h or apne side m bitha thi h
Karuna :- tumhara shukriya ada kese karu beti , tune na keval mere pran bachaye , balki aaj mere bache ko anath hone se bhi bachaya h. Tum mere liye bhagwan ka roop ban k aayi ho beti.
Naina :- chachi esa bol k kripya mujhe sharminda to naa kare,mane jo bhi kiya wo mera farz bhi tha or dharm bhi .
Vese chachi kya aap janti h ye lila kon thi , jisne aapke ander pravesh ker chacha ko mara.
Karuna :- kya batau beti , lila wo bala h jo hamare ganv ka picha marne k baad bhi ni chod rahi.
Lila hamare ganv ki hi ladki thi jo apni maa k sath isi ganv m rahati thi , pura ganv use bahut pasand kerta tha, kyunki ek to uska acha bartav or dusra uske pass kuch deviya sidhiyan thi , jise wo ganv valo ki har bimari ka ilaaj kerti or santoshi itni thi ki ilaj k badle m jo kuch bhi thoda kuch ager koi de deta usme hi apna gujara chala leti or koi kuch na bhi de to uski shikayat na kare.
Ek din ganv m bahut hi bhayanak sukha pada , jisme kayi ganv k bache bhude bhi mar gaye.
Ganv k pandit ji ne apne gyan ki madad se bataya ki ye sab kuch isliye ho raha h kyunki kisi ne ganv m kala jadu kiya h or bali bhi di h.ab ganv valo ko samjh ni aaraha tha ki kon ker sakta h esa kaam .
Lekin ek din sham ko mere pati or ganv k kuch or log kisi dusre ganv k function se wapas lot rahe the tab unhone ganv k bahar ek sunsan area m lila ko kuch kriyae kerte dekha .
Kismat se pandit ji bhi unke sath pandit ji bhi the jo ye sab dekhte hi pahachan gaye ki lila kala jadu ker rahi h.
Tab pata chala jise hum devi samjh rahe the , wo ek dayan thi jo kala jadu kerti thi
Mere pati or baki sab ne use khub samjhaya or apni kriya kerne se roka per wo lila ni mani or un sab ko hi marne ki dhamki dene lagi .
Per tabhi achanak se hamare ganv k pagal bhikhari ko na jane kya sujha to usne lila k pet p piche se kulhadi de mari , jis karan uski mot ho gayi. Hum ladies to waha thi ni , lekin mere pati ne ye sab baate hume or ganv valo.ko lila ki mot k bad ghar aake bataya.
Fir ganv valo ne uski lash ko.vahi dafna diya or ek bada sa pathar waha rakh diya kabar p nishani k tor p.
Ab shayad wo humse dayan ban ker badla lene aayi h beti , mere pati to ni bache , kam se kam bakiyo ko to bacha lo . Taki mere bache ki tarah kisi or bache k sir se baap ka saya na hate.
Naina :- chachi m apni puri koshis karungi aap chinta mat kijiye , kya aap hume bata sakti h lila ka ghar kaha h.
Karuna naina or preety ko vo adress bata deti h or naina raat ko vaha jane ka decide kerti h or fir naina or preety veer ki mosi k ghar ki or nikal padi , kyunki veer ki mosi ne unhe dinner p invite kiya tha.
Naina or preety vaha jake veer se mili or fir 2no veer ki mosi se mili or thodi der yu hi baato k baad 3no dosto ne dinner kiya.
Fir naina ne dekha raat ho gayi h to vo lila k ghar ki or nikal gayi , wo preety ko apne sath ni leke gayi , taki veer or preety ek sath thoda samay bita sake.
Naina apni jeep me beth gayi tabhi use apne locket ka dhayan aaya jo usne jeep k dashboard m rakh diya tha tutne se.
Naina ne us locket ki dori ko change kerke wapas pahan liya , or uske pahante hi locket ek baar chamka or usike sath hi naina ko apne sharir m nayi urja si mahasus hui .
Naina :- akhir kya h is locket ka raaj , jo swayam maa kali ne mujhe ye pradan kiya , jab tak mere gale me ye locket tha , jab tak ek tritiy bhi mera kuch na bigad saka or iske tutte hi ek mamuli pret ne hi mujhe hara diya.
Usi locket k baare m sochte hue hi wo lila k ghar ki or nikal gayi or kuch der baad vo lila k ghar k samne thi , ganv m us time light gayi hui thi , to ghar m andhera tha.
Naina apna edp meter nikal jese hi ghar ki sima m apna per rakha uske meter lal light show kerte hue bip bip kerne laga , jiska matalab ye tha ki waha bahut jyada negative energy mojud thi. Lekin naina bina dare ghar k ander pravesh ker gayi.
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Location :- kfd lok.
Kfd apne singhasan p bethe hue the or dusre ek aasan p narad ji, unke mastak per chinta ki rekha saaf saf najar aarahi thi.
Narad ji :- narayan narayan , bhagwan antatah karan or jyoti ki is chakravyooh rupi pariksha k aarambh ho hi gaya , parantu is pariksha ki avashyakta kya h bhagwan
Kfd :- devrishi ! Aap to swayam gyani h , or is baat se aap anbhigya bhi ni h ki is sansaar m ghatne wali har ghatna k piche , koi na koi kaaran avashya hota h.
Vese hi karan or jyoti ki yah pariksha na keval unko ek dusre k or karib laa un dono k prem ko sarthak karegi apitu sath m unke ek jivan k ek naye adhyay or ek naye karya ki or agrasar bhi karegi, unhe unke jivan k uddeshy ki or bhadayegi.
Narad ji :- aapka kathan uchit h shiv priya , parantu mujhe bhay h ki ye parikshaye karan or jyoti ko unke uddeshy k marg dikhane k sathan p kahi unhe marg se brahmit hi naA ker de.
Kahi esa na ho karan ka sayam na tut jaye or koi anarth na ho jaye.
Kfd :- aapka bhay kuch kuch uchit bhi h devrishi , is baat ki chinta to hume bhi sata rahi h, parantu hum is vishay m kuch ni ker sakte. Ab jo kuch bhi karega vo keval samay hi karega
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Ranvir :- beta ab se tumhe job kerne ki koi jarurat ni h , tum kal hi resignation dedo.
Jyoti :- wo kyu papa.
Ranvir :- beta inse milo ye h mr bajaj, yani ki aapke hone wale husband .
Jyoti chonk k khadi hoti hui tez aawaz me boli .
Jyoti :-. Kyaaaaaaaaa.
Ranvir :- ha beta , mane or aapki choti ma ne aapka rishta inse pakka ker diya h or apke exam hone k baad aapki shadi inke sath ker di jayegi or kal aapki sagayi h.
Ranvir ne ye bol karan or jyoti p to bomb ni nuclear bomb sa hi fod diya, karan ne to jese ye suna uski ankho k age ek baat to andhera sa chane laga , per usne khud ko sambhal liya , uski to ye halat ho gayi thi, jese uske kisine praan hi chinne ki baat ker di ho.
or ho bhi kyu na Jis jyoti ki yani ki uski bahan , uski saheli , uski jaan,uski shakti , or yaha tak ki jo uski sab kuch h or uske bina jine ki wo kalpana tak ni ker sakta ,usi jyoti ko usse dur kiye jane ki baat ki ja rahi thi uske baap k dwara.
Sach to ye tha ki karan bhi jyoti ko ek bahan k pyaar k sath sath ek premika ki tarah bhi chahata tha.
Or sath me karan k krodh ka jwalamukhi bhi fatne ko ho gaya tha apne baap or choti maa ki is harkat p
Jyoti ka to or bhi bura halat ho gaya tha, jyoti bhi vesa dard or kash mahasus ker rahi thi jesa karan ker raha tha, jis jyoti ne aaj tak sapne m bhi apne bhai k alawa kisi or k baare m socha tak ni tha , or aaj usika baap uske bhai yani k uske prem, uske pram se dur kerne ki baat ker raha tha.
Ab to uska waha rukna bhi mushkil ho gaya tha, wo vaha se apne kamre m bhag gayi or gate lock ker liya.
Ranvir :- lagta h hamari bitiya sharma gayi.
Karan ka krodh bhadta ja raha tha apne pita pjika kaaran tha , ki itna sab hone k baad bhi ranvir ko ye hak kisne diya ki vo jyoti se bina puche , bina uski marji ko jane uska rishta tay kerne ka, or wo bhi usse jo jyoti se dugni umer ka tha , yani ki jyoti k bap ki umar ka tha bajaj lag bhag.
Uska man to ker raha tha ki abhi apne baap ko acha sa sabak sikha de , lekin usne priority jyoti ko sambhalne ko di or apne kamre ki or bad gaya.
Ranvir :- aaiye bajaj sahab garden m beth k aage ki baat kerte h.
Ye bol wo dono bahar chale gaye ,kavya or shivani jara bahar gayi hui thi.
Karan jese hi apne kamre k pass pahunch gate khole ko hota h to pata h ki gate lock h
Karan :- gudiya darwaza khol .
Lekin koi jawab ni aata ander se ,karan bar bar darwaja pit raha tha, lekin jyoti koi jawab ni de rahi thi, ab karan ka tension k maare bura hal ho gaya tha , use kuch galat hone ka ahsaas hone laga.
Ab usse or ruka ni gaya or usne darwaja tod diya or ander ka najar dekh chonk gaya .Or dar bhi gaya.
Jyoti ne apni hath ki kalayi kast li h or uske hath m jahar h jise wo pine hi wali h.
Karan bhag k jyoti k hath se shishi chinta h or ek kas k taphad jad diya jyoti k gal pe , ye aaj first time tha jab karan ne jyoti p hath uthaya tha, kyunki jyoti ne harkat hi esi ki thi aaj , thappad itni jor ka tha ki jyoti k chahara puri tarah lal pad gaya.
Karan chillaya :- ye kya kerne ja rahi thi tu jyoti ,esa kerne se pahale tujhe jara bhi apne is bhai ka khayal ni aaya , ki tujhe kuch ho gaya to mera kya hoga ,
Ye bol karan jyoti ko sine se lagate hue rone laga , jyoti k hath ka ghav bhi bhar gaya tha, darasal usne pahale apne hatho ki nas katne ki hi koshis ki thi , lekin uski shaktiyon ki vajah se ghav bhar rahe the, isliye usne jahar khane ki koshis ki
Jyoti rote hue :- to m kya karu bhai , mujhe mar jane dijiye , m aapke bina ni ji sakti bhai , mujhe ni kerni shadi vadi, ager m aapse dur hui to vo pal mot se bhi baatar ho ga, isse acha mujhe mar hi jane dijiye bhaiya, mujhe mar jane dijiye.
Karan :- gudiyaaa dimag kharab ho gaya h kya tera , kesi baat ker rahi h tu , kya tera ye bhai bhi tere jese tere bina ji sakta h , kya tune socha ni ager aaj tujhe kuch ho jata to kya m ji pata , are m to us din hi mar jata , jis din humne apni maa ko khoya , per nhi m esa kerne ki soch bhi ni sakta tha, kyunki tu jo mere sath thi , tune hi mujhe us dukh se nikala mera sahara bani , ye karan ab tak jinda h to uski vajah tu hi h meri gudiya , mere jine ki vajah hi tu h , tu hi bata gudiya , kya ye karan apni jyoti k bager ji pata . Jese is shakti k bina shiv bhi shav h , vese hi ye karan bhi apni jyoti k bina shav hi h.
Ager fir bhi tu merna chahati h to thik h , lekin khud ko khatam kerne se pahale tujhe ye chaku apne is bhai k sine m ghopna hoga
Ye bol karan jyoti ko chaku pakda deta h or jyoti se khud ko marne ko kahata h.
Jyoti jese hi apne bhai ki ye baat suni , usne chaku ko turant feka diya or karan k pero m ghutne k bal beth roti hui boli
Jyoti :- mujhe maaf ker do bhaiya , aaj apki gudiya ne apka bahut dil dukhaya h esi harkat ker , per m kya keru bhaiya, ye baat aap bhi jante ho ki aapki ye jyoti apne karan yani apne bhaiya k bina is jivan ki kalpana tak ni ker sakti or papa ne to ye shadi ki baat bol to mere sine m chura sa ghop diya , mujhe to aap khud se dur hote saaf saf najar ane lage, to mujhe kuch ni sujha.
Karan jyoti ko apne pero se utha khud k kas k gale lagate hue bola
Karan :- ager unhonne tumko mujhse dur kerne ki baat bol di to iska matlab suicide ker logi , kya tujhe apne bhai p jara bhi bharosa na tha,ki tune mujhse ek baar baat kerne tak ki naa sochi ya tu apne bhai ko itna kamjor samjhti h ki wo apni jaan ko , apni bahan ko yu apne se dur hone dega, wo bhi ek bhude se shadi hone deker.
Jyoti :- ni bhaiya , please esa mat boliye , ki mujhe aap pe bharosa ni h , jiske sath mane apni pahali saas li h is duniya m , usse jyada bharosa ye jyoti to un mahadev p bhi na kare , jinhone ye saas di h.
Karan :- ager jo tumne bola wo ager sach h na to ye apna rona band kero , jab tak tera ye bhai jinda h , tujhe khud se dur ni hone dega or m dekhta hu sb kon karwata h teri shadi us buddhe se or mujhse tumko kon dur kerta h.
Karan ka ashvasan sun jyoti kuch shant hoti h ,or karan use pani pilata h or jyoti karan ko or fir uske gale se laga leta h.
Tab tak itna shor sharaba sun ranvir or bajaj bhi vaha aaphunche or kavya or shivani bhi jo karib 5min ghar k garden m pahunche hi the.
Ranvir :- ye kya ho raha h yaha , itna shor sharaba kyu macha raka h or ye gate kese tuta or tum dono ro kyu rahe ho , aaj to khushi ka moka h karan , tumhari bahan ki shadi jo tay ho gayi.
Karan jyoti ko apne se alag ker side m bed p bitha ker bola.
Karan sakht lahaje me:- mujhe aapse is baare m hi baat kerni h papa , jyoti ko ye shadi manjur ni h or wo ye shadi ni karegi.
Ranvir :- mane tum dono se tumhari permission ni mangi balki apna decision sunaya h , jise tum dono kaan khol k sun lo , jyoti ki sagai to hogi wo bhi kal hi.
Karan :- or m jan sakta hu ,aapko ye hak kisne diya, ki aaap tay karoge ki jyoti ki jindagi k itne bade fesle ko or vo bhi bina uski marji k.
Ranvir :- e ladke ab tum jyada bol rahe ho , or rahi baat fesle ki to baap hu m iska or tera bhi or ye mera hi hak h ki jyoti kaha kab or kisse hogi iska fesla sirf m lunga.
Karan :- wah , aapko yaad h ki ap hamare baap ho or ham aapki olad , vese , hume to lala jis tarah ma k jane k baad apka ravaiya raha hamare se , us hisab se aap bhul hi gaye ki apka ek beta or beti kon h.
Ranvir tej aawaj me :- karan.
Ranvir ki tez aawaz se to kavya or shivani to dar hi gayi.
Karan :- chilane se sachai badal ni jayegi mr sharma , ek baap ka matlab ye ni hota ki har mahine bas apni olad ko kharcha dedo or ho gaya baap hone ka farz pura.
Kabhi aaj tak aapne kabhi ye janne ka bhi prayas kiya , hum dono ko koi taklif h ya ni , kisi chij ki jarurat h ya ni , wo sab to chodiye aapne to 2min beth k humse pyaar se baat tak ni ki or aaj aap ek baap k haq ki baat ker rahe ho, kis muh se aap ye haq mang rahe ho , jabki aaj tak aapne apne baap hone ka farz nibhaya tak ni.
Ranvir karan k thappad marne ki koshis ki lekin karan ne uska hath bich m hi rok liya or bola.
Karan :- na mr sharma ye bhul kerne ki sochna bhi mat ,aap ye haq kabks kho chuke ho.
Ranvir gusse se :- teri himmat kese hui mera hath pakade ki or apne baap se ese baat kerne ki , mat bhul ye ghar mera h or is ghar ka ek ek fesla m hi lunga.
Karan :- baap ,kya is shabd ka matlab bhi pata h aapko , kese baap ho aap mr sharma , jo apni hi beti ki shadi us admi se karwana chahata h jo khud apki beti k baap ki umer ka hi h.or itna hi ni aap ek ese insaan se shadi kerwane ka soch rahe ho apni beti ka , jiske uper na jane hi kitne rape or murder k charges lage hue h , jinhe isne apne peso k dam p daba diya h.
Ye sun k to bajaj ki to herani se ankhe fati ki fati rah gayi , ki karan ko is baare m kese pata .
karan ko is bare m kese pata chala ye aapko batane ki jarurat to hi hi ni na dosto.
Aapne to apne baap hone ka haq usi din kho diya tha, mr sharma jisdin aap daru k nashe m apni beti ko bina vajah marne aye the ek darinde ki tarah , vo to bhagwan ka shukar h lekin us time ek darinde baap se apni bahan ki raksha k liye uska ye bhai vaha mojud tha or vo aap dono k bich aaker aagay . Or aapke diye hue har berahami se giye ek ek vaar ko apne uper leliya or lekin na to aapko apne bacho p daya aayi , yaha tak ki aapne apne bacho ki halat ka jayja tak lena sahi ni samjha. kya tab aapke ander k ek pita ne aapke is dushkritya p dutkara ni , nahi na , fir kese aap apne baap hone ka haq mang rahe jo
Or rahi baat ye aapka ghar hone ki to mane us din bhi kaha tha , ki hume aapke is jhute ahasan or bhik ki koi jarurat ni h
Or sun lijiye us din mane bola tha ki m ek mahine m ghar khali ker dunga , per ab to m us ghar m ek pal bhi ni rah sakta jis ghar m meri bahan ka koi samman or uski marji ki koi kadar na ho.
(Jyoti se) chal choti apna saman pack ker le ,hum abhi hi is ghar ko khali ker rahe h .
Shivani to ye sun buri tarah rone lagi or apne kamre ki or bhag gayi, kavya ne bhi bahut muskil se khud ko.comtrol kiya hua tha.
Bajaj jo itni der se chupchap khada tha ab vo bhi apni okaat p aagaya .
Bajaj :- e ladke tu hota kon h sharma ji k fesale p ungli uthane wala , koi kahi ni jayega , jyoti se meri shadi ho ke hi rahegi sun le kaan kholke , kyunki jyoti mujhko pasand h or ek baar jo kuch bhi bajaj ko pasand aajaye , fir to wo usko paker hi dam leta h.
Karan apne gusse ko control kerte hue :- meri bahan koi chij ni h bajaj , jise tu apne dam p jabardasti paa lega, or jab tak iska ye bhai jinda h tab tak to bilkul ni.
Hum dono to abhi hi ghar chodenge , ager tere gurde m dam h or tu rok sakta h hume to rok ker dikha.verna hava aane de.
Bajaj ye sun karan ko mukkha marne ki koshish kerta h , lekin karan uske mukke ko pakad leta h or ek jordar laat maar deta h , jisse wo samne divar se takra jata h or uske sir se khun nikalne laga.
Bajaj ki ye halat dekh ranvir uski or doda, or karan ne gusse se sirf itna hi bola.
Karan :- "mujhe dobara bolne ki aadat ni h" .
Fir karan or jyoti apne sare samaan jese kapde , apne papers or books or kuch jaruri saman pack kerne m lag jate h.
Bajaj bhi khud ko sambhal k kisi ko phone lagata h or gusse m kuch bolta h or .
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Sham ko preety or naina bore ho rai thi to thoda ganv ghumne nikal gaye .
Tabhi vaha ek paagal bhikhari aaya or pagalo jese harkate kerte hue jor jor se dono k samne bolne laga.
Bhikhari :- tumko pata h mane lila ko mara , mane lika ko mara.
Or ye bol wo khud hi waha se bhag gaya , preety bhi majak kerte hue uske piche se chilayai.
Preety :-are wah mere sher kya kaam kiya h tune .
Naina ek chapat uske marte hue hasti hui boli :- hat pagli kahi ki.
Thodi der ganv ghumne k baad vo ek ped k niche bane chabutre p beth gayi.
Preety :- yar sister tum to boli thi na tum meri baat veer se jarur aage bhadaogi, per tum to kuch ker hi ni rahi or veer h ki samjhta hi ni
Naina :- are meri bholi saheli ye sab itna aasan ni h jitna tum soch rahi ho, pahali baat to ye ki mane tumhe bola tha na apne bolne k lahaje ko badalne k liye .
Preety :- apun try ker reli h na sister, ab itni purani aadat ek dam se to jayegi ni na.
Naina :- hmm , ab suno dusri tip. Tumhe ye apne kapde pahanane ka style bhi change kerna hoga.
Preety :- kapde ?Ab kapdo m kya kharabi h sister , itne ache to h.
Naina :- baat ache buri ki ni h meri lado , baat darasal ye h ki tumhara dressing sence bilkul ladko jesa h.
Naina ne bilkul sahi baat boli thi , preety hamesh ladko jese kapde hi pahanti thi, without sleeves top , gents pant , baal bade the lekin usne is type se bandha hua tha ki wo chote hi dikhte the, kahane ka matlab ye h ki koi bhi preety ko dur se dekhne per ladka hi samjhta.
Naina:- mere kahane ka matlab h , ki khud ko thoda sajao savaro, ladki ho to thoda ladki dikhne ki koshish bhi to kero.Meri pyari saheli ladko ko ager set kerna ho to pahale hume unko apni or attract ker a padta h.mera yakin mano tum bahut khubsurat ho , mujhse bhi jyada , bas tumhe dressing sense sikh k khud ko badalna h , fir dekhna veer kese tum pe lattu ho jayega.
Preety :- per kese sister , apun ko to kuch idea hi ni h is mamle me, maa jyadatar apne kamo m busy rahati ghar chalane k liye , fir unki tabiyat kharab ho gayi , isliye unse kuch jyada sikh hi ni payi is mamle me or ladko ki company m rah rahkar unke jesi hi ban geli apun.
Naina :- uske liye teri ye sister h na , tu chinta mat ker kal hi hum shahar jayenge or tere liye shopping karenge .
Abhi dono saheli baate ker hi rahi thi ki waha karuna apne chote se bache k sath waha aayi or naina k pero m gir gayi.
Naina :- are chachi ye kya ker rahi h , uthiye please ese kerke mujhe paap ka bhagi to na banaye.
Ye bol naina karuna ko uthati h or apne side m bitha thi h
Karuna :- tumhara shukriya ada kese karu beti , tune na keval mere pran bachaye , balki aaj mere bache ko anath hone se bhi bachaya h. Tum mere liye bhagwan ka roop ban k aayi ho beti.
Naina :- chachi esa bol k kripya mujhe sharminda to naa kare,mane jo bhi kiya wo mera farz bhi tha or dharm bhi .
Vese chachi kya aap janti h ye lila kon thi , jisne aapke ander pravesh ker chacha ko mara.
Karuna :- kya batau beti , lila wo bala h jo hamare ganv ka picha marne k baad bhi ni chod rahi.
Lila hamare ganv ki hi ladki thi jo apni maa k sath isi ganv m rahati thi , pura ganv use bahut pasand kerta tha, kyunki ek to uska acha bartav or dusra uske pass kuch deviya sidhiyan thi , jise wo ganv valo ki har bimari ka ilaaj kerti or santoshi itni thi ki ilaj k badle m jo kuch bhi thoda kuch ager koi de deta usme hi apna gujara chala leti or koi kuch na bhi de to uski shikayat na kare.
Ek din ganv m bahut hi bhayanak sukha pada , jisme kayi ganv k bache bhude bhi mar gaye.
Ganv k pandit ji ne apne gyan ki madad se bataya ki ye sab kuch isliye ho raha h kyunki kisi ne ganv m kala jadu kiya h or bali bhi di h.ab ganv valo ko samjh ni aaraha tha ki kon ker sakta h esa kaam .
Lekin ek din sham ko mere pati or ganv k kuch or log kisi dusre ganv k function se wapas lot rahe the tab unhone ganv k bahar ek sunsan area m lila ko kuch kriyae kerte dekha .
Kismat se pandit ji bhi unke sath pandit ji bhi the jo ye sab dekhte hi pahachan gaye ki lila kala jadu ker rahi h.
Tab pata chala jise hum devi samjh rahe the , wo ek dayan thi jo kala jadu kerti thi
Mere pati or baki sab ne use khub samjhaya or apni kriya kerne se roka per wo lila ni mani or un sab ko hi marne ki dhamki dene lagi .
Per tabhi achanak se hamare ganv k pagal bhikhari ko na jane kya sujha to usne lila k pet p piche se kulhadi de mari , jis karan uski mot ho gayi. Hum ladies to waha thi ni , lekin mere pati ne ye sab baate hume or ganv valo.ko lila ki mot k bad ghar aake bataya.
Fir ganv valo ne uski lash ko.vahi dafna diya or ek bada sa pathar waha rakh diya kabar p nishani k tor p.
Ab shayad wo humse dayan ban ker badla lene aayi h beti , mere pati to ni bache , kam se kam bakiyo ko to bacha lo . Taki mere bache ki tarah kisi or bache k sir se baap ka saya na hate.
Naina :- chachi m apni puri koshis karungi aap chinta mat kijiye , kya aap hume bata sakti h lila ka ghar kaha h.
Karuna naina or preety ko vo adress bata deti h or naina raat ko vaha jane ka decide kerti h or fir naina or preety veer ki mosi k ghar ki or nikal padi , kyunki veer ki mosi ne unhe dinner p invite kiya tha.
Naina or preety vaha jake veer se mili or fir 2no veer ki mosi se mili or thodi der yu hi baato k baad 3no dosto ne dinner kiya.
Fir naina ne dekha raat ho gayi h to vo lila k ghar ki or nikal gayi , wo preety ko apne sath ni leke gayi , taki veer or preety ek sath thoda samay bita sake.
Naina apni jeep me beth gayi tabhi use apne locket ka dhayan aaya jo usne jeep k dashboard m rakh diya tha tutne se.
Naina ne us locket ki dori ko change kerke wapas pahan liya , or uske pahante hi locket ek baar chamka or usike sath hi naina ko apne sharir m nayi urja si mahasus hui .
Naina :- akhir kya h is locket ka raaj , jo swayam maa kali ne mujhe ye pradan kiya , jab tak mere gale me ye locket tha , jab tak ek tritiy bhi mera kuch na bigad saka or iske tutte hi ek mamuli pret ne hi mujhe hara diya.
Usi locket k baare m sochte hue hi wo lila k ghar ki or nikal gayi or kuch der baad vo lila k ghar k samne thi , ganv m us time light gayi hui thi , to ghar m andhera tha.
Naina apna edp meter nikal jese hi ghar ki sima m apna per rakha uske meter lal light show kerte hue bip bip kerne laga , jiska matalab ye tha ki waha bahut jyada negative energy mojud thi. Lekin naina bina dare ghar k ander pravesh ker gayi.
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Kfd apne singhasan p bethe hue the or dusre ek aasan p narad ji, unke mastak per chinta ki rekha saaf saf najar aarahi thi.
Narad ji :- narayan narayan , bhagwan antatah karan or jyoti ki is chakravyooh rupi pariksha k aarambh ho hi gaya , parantu is pariksha ki avashyakta kya h bhagwan
Kfd :- devrishi ! Aap to swayam gyani h , or is baat se aap anbhigya bhi ni h ki is sansaar m ghatne wali har ghatna k piche , koi na koi kaaran avashya hota h.
Vese hi karan or jyoti ki yah pariksha na keval unko ek dusre k or karib laa un dono k prem ko sarthak karegi apitu sath m unke ek jivan k ek naye adhyay or ek naye karya ki or agrasar bhi karegi, unhe unke jivan k uddeshy ki or bhadayegi.
Narad ji :- aapka kathan uchit h shiv priya , parantu mujhe bhay h ki ye parikshaye karan or jyoti ko unke uddeshy k marg dikhane k sathan p kahi unhe marg se brahmit hi naA ker de.
Kahi esa na ho karan ka sayam na tut jaye or koi anarth na ho jaye.
Kfd :- aapka bhay kuch kuch uchit bhi h devrishi , is baat ki chinta to hume bhi sata rahi h, parantu hum is vishay m kuch ni ker sakte. Ab jo kuch bhi karega vo keval samay hi karega
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