Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running

[Harry rocks]

Bhai jb karam or jyoti itna hi jude hue h to
Jab karan ko he drishye aate h , vo itna vichlit hojata h inse to jyoti ko kaise kuch pta nhi lagta
Kyu usko ye drishye nhi aate

Naina wala scene cekn kar bhi khushi hui
Karan ko naina k baare mein bhi phlj baar ehsas hua

Brilliant update
Keep rocking bhai

Bhai abhi shaktiya pure tarike se jagrit kaha hui h pahali baat to.
Or dusri baat kuch bate h jo karan ni chahata ki abhi jyoti ko pata chale to shayad uske locket ne ye baat jyoti tak na pahuchne di ho , wo locket bhi to khud ek rahasya h

 

[JAY WALKER]

Harry rocks is update sirf do shabd bolunga wo hai CHAMATKAR & LAJWAB.
Aap sochiey aap is story aapke lie likhe rahe ho.Don't expect reviews from a single person.Then when u will see one review or one like u will be the happiest person in the world .




.......DHONNOBAD.......

 

[Raguhalkal]

Bhai itni jaldi fesale pe mat pahucho ki baba ka role itna hi tha , abhi to shuruat hui h , abhi bahut kuch baki h , itni jaldi decision lena sahi ni h

Matlub baba ka role age bi hai fir to teek hai

 

[Raj]

BHAI UPDATE TOH BAHUT HI SHAANDAAR AUR INTERESTING HAI.
BUT SUSPENSE JYADA HO RAHE HAIN .
KARAN KO GURU JI NE KUCH NAHI BATAYA SAB SAMAY PAR CHHOD DENE KO BOLA.APNI SHAKTIYON PAR AASHRIT NA RAHO YE BHI KAHA .PAR MUJHE JAHA TAK LAGA HAI KI ABHI TAK TOH KARAN NE SHAKTIYON KO TOH USE KIYA HI NAHI SIRF SADHNA HI KAR RAHA HAI.AUR KARAN KI SHAKTIYAN ABHI BHI BANDHI HUYI HAI AISA KYUN.BRIHASPUR ME BHI PRET NE KOHRAM MACHA RAKHA HAI.
DEKHATEN HAIN AAGE KYA HOTA HAI AUR KITNA SUSPENSE CLEAR HOTA HAI

 

[Harry rocks]

BHAI UPDATE TOH BAHUT HI SHAANDAAR AUR INTERESTING HAI.
BUT SUSPENSE JYADA HO RAHE HAIN .
KARAN KO GURU JI NE KUCH NAHI BATAYA SAB SAMAY PAR CHHOD DENE KO BOLA.APNI SHAKTIYON PAR AASHRIT NA RAHO YE BHI KAHA .PAR MUJHE JAHA TAK LAGA HAI KI ABHI TAK TOH KARAN NE SHAKTIYON KO TOH USE KIYA HI NAHI SIRF SADHNA HI KAR RAHA HAI.AUR KARAN KI SHAKTIYAN ABHI BHI BANDHI HUYI HAI AISA KYUN.BRIHASPUR ME BHI PRET NE KOHRAM MACHA RAKHA HAI.
DEKHATEN HAIN AAGE KYA HOTA HAI AUR KITNA SUSPENSE CLEAR HOTA HAI

Bhai wo sikh bhavishya k liye thi , or sab kuch suspense aage khulenge bhi or judenhj bhu

 

[JAY WALKER]

Bhai "Fantasy" spelling "Fantacy" kiu likhte ho?

 

[Harry rocks]

Bhai "Fantasy" spelling "Fantacy" kiu likhte ho?

Kaha bhai kaha likha h

 

[sonukale]

Waiting for next update

 

[Harry rocks]

Update no :- 76
Naina baba se mil ke wapas apni jeep ki or aagayi , jaha p wo ladka abhi bhi uska intezaar ker raha tha .Uske chahare pe naina k liye tension dikh rahi thi.

Naina ko sahi salamat dekh usko shanti padti h.

Ladke ka naam veer tha.

Veer :- kya hua naina ji baba ne kuch bataya kya , aapko itna time lagne p to mujhe tension hone lagi thi , kahi baba ne kuch to ni ker diya

Naina :- hmm baba ne jyada kuch to ni per , kuch hints to diye h filhal k liye.

Fir wo muskurate hue boli.

Naina :- wese veer ji , aapko meri itni tension kyu ho rahi thi , hum to ek dusre ko ache se jante bhi ni h , or to or m to kuch dino k liye hi yaha to.

Veer atakte hue :- vo to , vo to .

Veer :- ha , tension kyu na ho bhala , kuch din k liye hi sahi , aap hoto hamare ganv ki mahaman hi na , to apne mahaman ka khayal hum ni rakhenge to kon rakhega.

Or rahi baat anjaan hone ki to koi baat ni , hum ek dusre k naam to jan hi chuke h , to kyu na hum friends bhi ban jaye , fir to hum anjaan bhi ni rahenge.

Apka is bare m kya khayal h mohtarma ji.

Naina veer k is andaaz ko sun pahale to hasi fir boli.

Naina :- ha kyu ni ,veer ji

Veer hath aage badhate hue :- so friends.

Naina hath milate hue :- friends.

Jese hi naina veer se hath milati h , veer naina ki nili ankho m kho jata h.

Naina jab ye dekhti h to sharati muskan k sath boli.

Naina :- ab chale veer ji.

Veer hosh me aate hue :- ha ha chaliye na.

Naina :- chale kese , mujhe ek hath se driving kerna jamega ni

Veer :- ek hath se ?

Naina veer ko apne hath ki taraf ishara kerti h , jo abhi bhi uske hath me tha.

Veer apni bhul samjh jata h or jhat se naina ka hath chod bola.

Veer :- oops sorry.

Or ye bol samne dekhne laga , jese uski koi chori pakdi gayi ho.

Naina fir se hasi or wo nikal pade ganv ki or , fir naina verr ko drop ker nikal jati h , seth hiralal k ghar ki or.

Karib 45 min k safar k baad vo seth k ghar k saamne hoti h, or jese hi vo ghar m enter kerti h , use ek ajib si manhusiyat mahasus hoti h waha

Lekin jana bhi jaruri tha waha isliye wo ghar m enter kerti h, to pati h ki hall m sofe per ek 20 21 sal ki ladki or side wale sofe pe ek 55 60 sal ka bujurg betha hua tha , jiski bheshbusha se wo munim lag raha tha, kyunki uske hatho m hisab khato ki kitab thi. Dono k chahre p pareshani or dukh ki lakire saaf saaf dikhayi de rahi thi.

Ladki jese hi naina ko dekhti h to boli.

Ladki :- ji kahiye , kisse milna tha aapko.

Naina :- ji namaste , ji wo mujhe seth hiralal ji se milna tha, unse ek jaruri kaam tha.

Ladki apni pareshani ko chupate hue :- ji pitaji to kahi bahar gaye hue h, aap chahe to mujhe vo jaruri kaam bata sakti h.

Naina ko samjh ni aata ki wo us ladki se kya bole , kyunki wo apne maksad k baare m har kisi ko ni bata sakti thi.

Usne aas pas najar dodayi to , divaron p dekha ki , hiralal ji ko smaj seva k liye bahut se inam mile hue the, jise dekh use idea aaya or wo boli.

Naina :- wo m rampur se aayi thi , yaha , mane hiralal ji k bare m bahut suna h ,ki vo bahut daan punya kerte h , to usi silsile m milne aayi .

Actually humare ganv k school ki building ki condition bahut kharab h , ager hiralal ji kuch madad ker dete to, bahut bada upkaar hota unper.

ladki rampur ka naam sun khush ho jati h , or uske chahare p pareshani ki jagah ummid ki ek kiran milne ki asha najar aati h.

Ladki :- ji aap rampur se aayi ho , to to aap vaha k prasiddh kali mandir k pandit ji ko bhi janti hogi.

Naina udas man se :- ji , wo mere baba hi the , jinka hal hi me swargwas ho gaya .

Ladki ye sun fir udaas ho jati h ek baar k liye , per fir use kuch yaad aata h .

Ladki :- kahi aap naina to ni , jinhone thakur sahab ki beti ko us shetan se mukti dilvayi thi.

Naina pahale to apna naam sun thodi chonki , fir boli.

Naina :- ji ha , m hi naina hu.

Naina jese hi ye boli , wo ladki naina k pero ko pakadne ko hoti h.

Naina use rokte hue :- are are didi kya ker rahi h aap , kyu mujhe paap ka bhagidar bana rahi h.

Ladki :- naina ji , please aap hamari sahayata kijiye , mere pitaji khatre m h shayad , ab aap hi unki madad ker sakti h.

Naina :- pahali baat to aap mujhse badi h didi , to aap ji mat lagaiye , or bataiye to sahi hua kya , m kis prakar aapki sahayata ker sakti hu.

Ladki jiska naam lakshmi tha wo boli.

Lakshmi :- ji wo puri baat to aapko munim ji hi bata payenge.

Munim ji jo itni der chupchap khade the wo batana shuru kerte h ,

Short flashback.

Third person ki jubani.

Subah subah ki baat thi , hiralal ji apni kursi p bethe hue the , or side m munim ji bhi .

Hiralal ji kuch files check ker rahe the ,

Hiralal ji :- munim ji , is saal to pichle saal se kafi jyda munafa hua h.

Munim ji :- ha seth ji , ye to aapki mahanat or satkarmo ka fal h jo bhagwan aapko de raha h.

Hiralal ji :- munim ji , wo factory k karcho ki file kaha h.

Munim ji :- maaf kerna seth ji , lagta h m car m bhul gaya , rukiye m abhi leker aaya.

Munim ji jese hi ghar se bahar jate h,to hiralal dekhte h ki unki divaron m darar aane lagti h. Or ek baar fir us darar me se wahi pret nikalta h.

Hiralal ji isse pahale kuch ker pate , wo pret unke sine m ghop diya , pret ki shakti se unki aawaz to ni nikal rahi thi , per wo abhi jinda the.

Pret abhi aage kuch kerta , ki uske kaano m kisi k aane ki aahat padi or wo gayab ho gaya.

Wo munim ji hi the , jo wapas aagaye the,jese hi wo seth ji ki ye haalat dekhte h to buri tarah dar jate h or wo unke pass bhage aaye .

Munim ji :- seth ji ,seth ji ye kisne kiya aapko , rukiye m abhi ambulance ko bulake lata hu, aap himmat rakhiye.

Munim ji ko kuch samjh ni aaya to wo ghar k bahar jake ambulance ko phone lagane lage , tabhi lakshmi bhi vaha aa pahuchi jo kisi kaam se bahar gayi hui thi.

Munim ji ko yu ghabraya dekh lakshmi ne pucha.

Lakshmi :- kya baat h munim ji , aap itne ghabraye hue kyu ho.

Munim ji sari baat lakshmi ko batate h , jise sun lakshmi rote hue seth ji k kamre ki or bhagi .

Wahi us pret ne isi bich seth ji ko bhi maar diya tha,

Preet :- hahaha 12 bachi 9.

Ye bol wo pret dhul ban lash k sath usi divar m samane laga , or us dhul ko divar m samate hue lakshmi ne dekh liya .


Flashback end

Lakshmi rote hue :- please mere pitaji ko bacha lijiye, mujhe ye kisi bhut pret ka kaam hi lag raha h , ab aap hi hamari aakhiri ummid ho, m aapke aage hath jodti hu.

Naina :- ji ye to bahut gambhir samasya h aap chinta mat kijiye m apni puri koshish karungi.

Naina lakshmi k sath us kamre m jaker , us kamre ka nirikshan kerti h , fir usne apne bag se ek chota sa equipment nikala , jo ek EDi meter tha , jo har paranormal expert use kerte h , ye pata lagane ko ki , kisi particular jagah negative energy h ya ni .





Naina ne shahar m rahate hue hi apne liye ye kharida tha.

Fir wo pure kamre me leker use ghumne lagi .Lakshmi boli.

Lakshmi :- naina ji , ye kya h aapke hatho m

Naina :- didi , ye ek edi meter h , jo hume ye batata h ki hamare aaspas koi shetani ya nakaratmak urja h ki ni , abhi jese isme ye nili light jag rahi h , iska matlab sab normal h .

Tabhi naina us darar wali divar k pass jati h to meter ki nili light band ho jati h or laal light jor jor se jhapakne lagi.

Fir kuch der bad band ho gayi

Naina :- aapka andaza sahi tha lakshmi di , yaha ek shetani saya tha to jarur ,lekin ab vo yaha se filhal k liye ja chuka h.

Lakshmi ghabrake :- mere pitaji

Naina :- di aap chinta mat kijiye , m aapke pitaji ka jald se jald pata laga lungi.

Abhi vo kuch der yu hi baate ker rahe the,ki aas pas se rone wagerah ki aawaz aane lagi.

Jab dod k sab bahar gaye to ek orat buri tarah roye ja rahi thi, sabne jab usko kese na kese sambhal k pucha kya hua to vo boli.

Orat :- wo wo shetan ne mere bache ko maar diya or apne sath usko le gaya or ye bol wo fir se rone lagi.

Us orat k bete k sath bhi vesa hi hua tha jesa seth ji or bakiyon k sath hua tha, wo orat 2 min k liye rasoi m kya gayi pani lane , apne khana khate hue bete k liye , ki itne m vo shetan ne us ladke ko mar diya or apne sath le gaya or usko le jate hue vo orat bichari dekhte rah gayi.

Or wo fir se buri tarah rone lagi.

Naina ko us ghar ki divaron p bhi vesi hi darare or miti farsh pe dikhti h.

Naina man me :- ye ho kya raha h, kon h wo shetan , kahi uska samraat se koi connection to ni,jo bhi ho mujhe us shetan ko rokna hoga isse pahale or masumo ki jaan jaye.

Shayad ghora baba ne isiliye mujhe yaha bheja ho.

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Karan or jyoti shivani ko school chod nikal gaye sonam k ghar ki or, lekin unke dimag m radha k badle behavior ko leke hi baate ghum rahi thi.

Sonam k ghar pahuch pahale to 3no bhai bahan vaha nashta kerte h ,kyunki karan ne sonam ko promise kiya tha , ki din m ek baar har roj wo dono khana sonam k yaha hi uske sath khayenge.

Karan :- chal sonu , aaj tera admision bhi karwana h na , college m .

Sonam udas man se :- bhaiya radha ni aayi .

Karan ek jhuta bahana bana deta h

Karan :- wo gudiya , radha ko ek jaruri kaam yaad aagaya tha, isliye hume wo wahi college m milegi.

Fir karan or jyoti sonam k sath college pahunch gayi. Karan college m jese hi pahuchte h to heran ho jate h .

Kyunki karan or jyoti k tasvir k sath , bade bade banner lage hue the, jisme unka national level champion banne ki badhayi thi.

Karan or jyoti ko dekh waha kayi ladke or ladkiya unhe gher lete h , jo unke fans ban chuke the.

Ladki 1 :- congretulations for winning sir .hum to aapki first fight se fan ho gayi thi , kya shandar fight kerte h ap.

Ladka :- ha sir many many congratulations, or mam aapko bhi , aapne bhi bahut shandar fight ki thi .

Ladka 2 :- sir mam kya hum aapke sath ek selfie le sakte h.

Ese hi kayi ladki ladke karan or jyoti k piche pad gaye , undono ne kese na kese apna picha chudaya sabse or ek se in banner k bare m pucha to pata chala ki ye sab principal ne kiya h.

Fir karan sabko waha se bhej jyoti or sonam k sath principal k office pahuch jata h.

Karan gate k pas ja ker

Karan :- may I come in sir

Princi :- oh karan or jyoti beta , aao na beta betho.

Karan or jyoti ander aate h or sath m sonam bhi.

Principal :- bacho aapne ye compitition jit , apne mata pita ka hi ni , apne pure college ka naam roshan kiya h.i proud of u bacho.

Karan :- thank you so much sir , per in banners ki kya jarurat thi.

Principal :- ese kese ni thi beta , mane esa isliye kiya ki baaki bache bhi tum se motivate ho or apni life m esa kuch kare.

Jyoti :- aapka bahut bahut shukriya sir aapne hume is layak samjha , per please ab inhe hatva dijiye.

Kyunki esa raha to students hame hamesha ghere hi rahenge , ese to wo khud study p dhayan denge na hum de payenge.

Or wese bhi hume koi bhi vip treatment ni chahiye sir.

Principal :- thik h beta ,m aaj hi jata dunga .

Fir karan principal ko sonam se milvata h or use apni choti bahan hi introduce karwata h .

Karan :- sir ye meri choti bahan h , ye isi hafte shimla se yaha shift hui h , ab m iska yahi admision karwana chahata hu sir , please kuch ho sake to.

Ye bol karan principal ko sonam k sare document deta h , sonam bhi ek brilliant student thi , usne 12 m pure himachal m top kiya tha.

Principal sonam se :- very good beta , aapke to bahut ache marks h or aap state topper bhi ho.or upper se scholarship bhi , excellent beta.keep it up.

Principal karan se :- beta tum tension mat lo , sonM ka admission m ker dunga , kal.se sonam college join ker sakti h


Fir karan or jyoti sonam k sath canteen m jate h or karan sonam se bola

Karan :- sonu , tum yahi wait kero ,aaj humare 2 hi lecture h to hum jaldi hi aaj ayenge.

Sonam ;- ok bhai.

Fir karan or jyoti apni class m chale jate h,or lecture attend kerne lagte h , waha bhi unhe sabhi teacher or student gher lete h.

Fir kese n kese karan or jyoti apne lecture nipta k canteen m pahunche to waha jo usne dekh , uska khun khol gaya , uski ankhe gusse se laal ho gayi.

Location ;- kfd lok.

Narad ji :- prabhu karan or jyoti k jivan p bahut bada sankat aane wala h , hume shighra hi kuch kerna hoga.

Kfd :- ni devrishi, ye karan or jyoti ki pariksha ki ghadi h , humara hastakshep kerna uchit na hoga isme.

Narad ji :- parantu prabhu , jo hone wala h, uske liye karan or jyoti ko kisi ki sahayata ki aavashyakata to avashya padegi .

Kfd :- aapka ye kathan bhi uchit h narad ji , ab samay aagaya h uska is sansaar k saamne aane ka , jo rakshak ki is pariksha ki ghadi m sahayak bhi hoga.
Parantu kese vo bhavishya m gyaat hoga

Ye bol kfd muskurane lage or narad ji bhi unka ishara samjh gaye.

Narad ji kfd k aage hath jod :- narayan narayan ! Aapki lila to keval aap hi samjh sakte h prabhu.


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