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Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running

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Jese hi jyoti k jitne ki announcement hui , to pure stadium m tournament k pure hone ki khushi m pure auditorium m fire crackers chalu ho gaye.

Jyoti ring se nikalte hi karan ki or bhagi , karan ne bhi muskurate hue apni bahe fela di or jyoti apni full speed se karan k gale lag gayi or karan use gale lagaye hue hi thoda utha k gol gol ghum apni khushi jatane laga.

Jyoti :- dekha bhai , m jit gayi .

Karan (uske mathe ko chumte hue) :- ha meri gudiya jeet hi gayi , per mujhe koi hairani ni h tumhare jitne pe , tere p pura vishwas jo tha mujhe pura bharosa jo h tujh per.

Phir jyoti radha or sonam or radha se bhi gale milti h.

Radha:- congratulations di ,

Sonam.:- congratulations didu.

Jyoti dono k gaalo ko chum ker unhe thank u bolti h.

Fir karan or jyoti ek dusre ka hath pakad price distribution k liye jate h.

Tabhi ek announcement hoti h.

Anchor :- ladies and gentlemen rukawat k liye mafi chahata hu ki , lekin ek bahut hi jaruri announcement kerni h mujhe.

Aaj jo prize distribution ka program hona tha, wo kinhi kaarano se aaj postpone kiya ja raha h.

Or ab prize distribution aaj ni , balki parso hoga, or function ki location kal announce ker di jayegi.

Radha:- shit yaar , m kitni excited thi bhai ko di ko first prize milte hie dekhne k liye, chalo koi baat ni ek din or sahi hum kal ni parso wapas jayenge.

Sonam bhi ye sun ker khush ho gayi ki kam se kam use ek din or mil jayega ,apni saheli or apne bhai bhahan k sath rahane ka.

Per yaha karan tension m aagaya tha , usne garima se ek din pahale lotne ka wada jo kiya tha , kyunki garima ko waha radha ki jarurat thi.

Fir isi baare m sochte hue karan or apni bahano k sath , hotel ki or nikal jata h.

Wahi dusri or

Location :- thakur house.

Naina ne us pret ka ant kerti h , uske baad use thodi kamjori mahasus hoti h.

Tabhi uski najar pandit ji per padti h or wo dod k unke pass jati h jinki halat bahut kharab thi , unka pura sharir lahu luhan ho gaya tha , or wo behosh ho gaye the.

Naina(rote hue ) :- baba , uthiye baba kya hua aapko , are koi jaldi se ambulance ko bulao.

Thakur jaldi se pass k shahar se ambulance bulata h , or jab tak ambulance aaye , tab tak naina ne pandit ji ki first aid ker di.

Thodi hi der m ambulance aajati h ,or pandit ji ko usme letakar hospital ki or nikal jati h.

Naina ki nili ankho se ansu jhar jhar bah rahe the , jisko dekh to kisi ka bhi dil tadaf uthe.

Karib 20 min m ambulance hospital pahunch jati h, or ambulance se nikal ker do compounder unhe hospital me le jate h.

Or ek compounder jaldi se jaa ker doctor ko bula k lata h , doctor ko dekhte hi naina unke pero m gir k roti hui boli .

Naina:- please doctor mere baba ko bacha lo, m apke pao padti hu, mere baba k alawa is duniya m koi ni h.

Doctor(nanina ko uthate hue):- are beti ye kya ker rahi ho utho, m dekhta hu tumhare baba ko.

Ye bol doctor pandit ji ko examine kerta h or bolta h.

Doctor:- oh my god, inki condition bahut hi critical h , ye hua kese .
I m.sorry ye police case h , mujhe police ko info kerna hoga.

Tabhi piche se doctor k kano m ek aawaj padti h.

"Wo sab m dekh lunga doctor sahab , bas pandit ji ko kuch ni hona chahiye"

Ye awaaz thakur ki hi thi , jo ambulance k piche piche hi apni car m aagaya tha.

Doctor :- are thakur sahab aap yaha,

Thakur :- wo sab chodo doctor, abhi bas aap pandit ji ka ilaz kero , or unko kuch ni hona chahiye.

Thakur ek bahut hi powerful, lekin ek dil insaan tha, usko andaza tha ki doctor ye police case wala drama jarur karenge , isliye wo khud bhi unke sath aagaya tha.

Doctor turant pandit ji ko ot m leker jata h , or naina hath jod k thakur se boli.

Naina:- aapka bahut bahut dhanyawad thakur sahab , aapne mere pe bahut bada upkaar kiya h

Thakur :- esa bol k mujhe lajjit mat kero beti , upkaar to tumne pure thakur khandan p kiya h beti , meri bachi ko us shaitan se bacha ker ,
Tum sach me hamare liye masiha ban k aayi ho.

Or ye bol thakur naina k per pakadne ko hota h to naina unhe ro k boli .

NainA:- are thakur sahab ye aap kya ker rahe h, aap mujhse umra , pad or har chij m mujhse bade h , esa kerke mujhe pap ka bhagi na banaye.

Or m kon hoti hu kaha kuch kerne wali, kerne wali to mere bholenath or meri maa jagdamba kali h, unhi ki kripa se m us shaitan ko maar payi.

Aapko dhnyawad kerna h , to un maa jagat janni ko kijiye.

Thakur :- tum sach me mahan ho beti , maa tum.per apni kripa sadev banaye rakhe

Tabhi thakur ki najar naina k sharir per padti h , chote to usko bhi aayi thi , or uske kapde bhi kuch side se fat gaye the.

Thakur jaldi se ek lady doctor ko bulata h or use naina k ilaaz kerne ko bol naina ko bhej deta h uske sath.

Or ek nurse ko kuch pese deker naina k liye ek jodi kapde mangwata h.

Thodi der m naina ki marahm pati ho jati h, or wo thakur k mangwaye hue kapde pahan k ot k bahar beth jati h , or doctor k bahar aane ka intezaar kerne lagti h.

Karib 2 ghante baad doctor bahar aata h or bolta h.

Doctor :- I m sorry thakur sahab , unki halat bahut hi jyada critical h or hum ab kuch ni ker sakte .

Unke paas ab jyada samay ni h , yahi koi 5 6 ghante ka samay h , aap chahe to unhe ghar le ja sakte h.

Naina ye sun k buri tarah tut jati h , use bahut bada jhatka laga tha.

Naina(rote hue) :- kya m apne baba se mil sakti hu.

Doctor :- ha beti , hum abhi thodi der m unhe genral ward m shift kar denge , tum tab unse mil lena.

Thodi der baad pandit ji ko general ward m shift ker diya jata h, or naina pandit ji k side m beth rone lagti h.

Tabhi pandit ji k sharir m halchal hoti h , jise dekh naina apne ansu puch leti h .

Pandit ji ko jese hi hosh aata h , pahale to wo bahut ghabra jate h or unhe naina ki chinta hone lagti h per jab unki najar naina p padti h to unhe rahat pahunchti h.

Pandit ji :- tu thik to h na beti or hum yaha kese pahunche .

Fir naina pandit ji ko sari baat batati h or boli .

Naina:- baba aap chinta mat kijiye ,ap jaldi thik ho jaoge .

Pandit ji :- beti m janta hu ki mera ant samay nikat aachuka h , kyu yu jhut bol ke khud ko taklif de rahi ho.

Ab naina k sabar ka bandh tut jata h or wo jor jor se rote hue pandit ji k gale lag k boli.

Naina:- ni baba , aapko kuch ni hoga , m aapko kuch ni hone dungi , aapko kahi ni jane dungi.

Pandit ji :- beta ye to jindagi ka katu satya h , jiska janm hua h uski mrityu bhi nishchit h . Or tum kabse sach se darne lagi .

Naina:- ni baba m aapko kuch ni hone dungi , m duniya k sabse ache se ache doctor ko dikhaungi, aap jald hi swasth ho jaoge .

Pandit ji :- beta ab iska koi fayda ni h,meri bachi m apne pran is hospital m ni tyagna chahata , mujhe mere ghar , meri maa k pass le ja meri bachi.

Meri ye aakhiri khawaish h ki , m apne praan maa k charno m hi tyagu.

Naina ne bahut koshis ki pandit ji ko samjhane ki or bade doctor k pass le jane ki , lekin pandit ji ni mane , shayad unhe ab apne ant samay k ane ka ahasas ho chuka tha.

Isliye wo wapas ma k mandir jane ko bol rahe the , unhonne sari umra maa ki seva ki thi , or unki yahi khawaish thi , ki wo apne pran maa k charno m tyag.

Akhir m naina ko pandit ji ki jid manni hi padi or usne thakur ki madad se pandit ji ko apne mandir le ker pahunchi .

Or wahi thakur ne mandir k ander ek gada or takiya lagwaya or pandit ji ko uspe leta diya gaya.

Naina wahi side m bethe royi ja rahi thi , or pandit kuch sochte hue bole.

Pandit ji :- beti .

Naina:- ha baba boliye.

Pandit ji :- beti mera ant samay nikat achuka h , lekin m jane se pahale tumhe tumhare satya or tumhare jivan k prayojan se avgat kerwa dena chahata hu .

Taki mrityu k baad meri aatma ko shanti mil sake .

Naina:- kesi sachai baba.

Pandit ji thakur ki or dekhte h or thakur pandit ji ka ishara samjh mandir se bahar chala jata h.fir pandit ji bole.



Pandit ji :- beta , sabse pahale to m tujhse shama chahata hu ki mane tujhse aajtak ye sachai chupayi.

Fir pandit ji bole.

Pandit ji :- beti , satya ye h ki m tumhara , sach m pita ni hu.

Naina ko ye sun bahut bada sock lagta h.

Naina :- ni baba ye satya ni h , kah dijiye , apne jo bola wo jhut h.

Pandit ji (rote hue ) :- ni beti , mane jo bola h wo purntah satya h.mane to bas tumhe ek putri ki tarah pala h . Lekin tumne mujhe kabhi ahasas hi ni hone diya ki tum meri beti ni ho na hi mere man me esa kabhi vichar aaya.

Naina(rote hue boli) :- ager ye satya h to kon h mere pita , kon h wo maa , jisne apni beti ko yu asahay chod diya.

Mujhe janm dene wale bhale hi koi or ho baba , parantu mere liye mere pita mere baba aap hi rahoge.

Naina (gusse me)Mujhe ni janna us maa k bare m , jisne apni bachi ko janm to diya , per use marne chod diya.

Pandit ji :- ni beta , esa ni bolte . Tumhari maa ki bahut badi majburi thi , or abhi bhi vo khatre m.

Naina:- kya ?

Pandit ji :- ha beti , m tumhe batata hu kya kaaran tha , tumhari maa ka tumhe mere pas chodne ka.


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Sham ho chuki thi or karan ki tension or bhi bad gayi thi , kyunki use msg mila tha .

Jiske according prize distribution ceremony parso raat ko thi , pahale to usne socha hua tha , ki ceremony din m ho jayegi or wo sham ko yaha se nikal k raat tak apne ghar pahunch jayenge , per yaha to sab ulta ho raha tha.

Karan radha ko apne room m bulata h or use wo sab bat batata h or bolta h.

Karan :- gudiya , tum kal ki flight se wapas ghar lot jao , aunty ko tumhari bahut jarurat h .

Radha:- nahi bhai m apke bina yaha se kahi ni jane wali , or ek din m koi fark ni padne wala.

Jyoti :- baat ko samjhne ki koshis ker choti , aunty ko waha jarurat h tumhari.

Radha:- ni di mane kaha na m kahi ni jane wali , m aapki prize ceremony dekh ker hi jaungi.

Karan or jyoti use bahut samjhate h per radha man hi ni rahi thi.

Radha(rote hue) :- m samjh gayi , aap ni chahate na m yaha ruku or wo bacho jese rote hue kamre se bhag gayi.

Karan :- are gudiya ruk to.

Tabhi sonam kamre m enter kerti h or boli.

Sonam:- kya hua bhaiya , aap itna pareshan kyu ho or ye radha yu rote hue kyu gayi.

Karan ko sonam ko dekh ek ummid ki kiran najar aati h or karan use sari baat batata h.

Karan :- gudiya ab tu hi radha ko samjha sakti h , kyunki jaha tak m samjh raha hu , prize distribution to bahana h , asal m to uska tumhe chod k jane ka man ni h.

Please choti ab tu hi kuch ker .

Sonam bhi ye baat sun udaas ho jati h , chahati to wo bhi ni thi ki radha jaye , per uska jana jaruri tha, ye soch ker boli.

Sonam :- thik h bhaiya, m radha se baat kerti hu.

Karan sonam ko gale laga ke bola

Karan :- thank you so much gudiya hamari majburi samjhne k liye , m janta hu ki tu bhi bahut udaas h radha k jane se .

Per meri gudiya tu chinta mat ker , hum dobara jald hi aayenge , tumse milne.

Sonam ye sun thoda khush hote hue boli:- per bhai meri ek shart h, ki radha k jane k baad aapko mere ghar p rukna hoga.

Jyoti :- are gudia , tu kyu bina bajah pareshan ho rahi h.

Lekin sonam karan or jyoti ko mana hi leti h or bad jati h radha k kamre ki or .

Jaha radha takiye m muh chupaye roye ja rahi thi.

Sonam uske pass jake uske sir ko sahalate hue boli .

Sonam :- e bandriya kyu ro rahi h or
Ye m kya sun rahi hu tune bhai ki baat ni mani.

Radha sonam ko dekh jhat se uske gale lag rome lagi or boli

Radha :- dekh na sonam , bhai mujhe yaha rukne ni de rahe , m bhai ki prize distribution ceremony dekhna chahati hu.

Sonam :- acha , to ye mote mote aansu , ceremony k liye .

Udaas hone ki acting kerte hue .

Sonam :- or m soch rahi thi , meri saheli mujse dur hone pe udass h .

Radha uski baat ko samjh gai or usko gale lagate hue boli.

Radha:- ha sonu(radha sonam ko pyar se kabhi kabhi sonu bolti h) , sach yahi h ki m tujhe chod k ni jana chahati , jindagi m pahali baar to ek sachi saheli mili muje , ab m usse bichdna ni chahati


Sonam:- m bhi kaha khush hu radhu aap sab k jane se , m jab aap logo se jab pahali baar mili thi , tab m kitni khush hui thi ,m bata ni sakti , bhagwan ne karan bhaiya or jyoti didi itna pyar kerne wale k rup m bhai bahan or tere rup me itni achi saheli jo di bhagwan ne .

Mujhe to pata hi nk chala , kab 2 hafte nikal bhi gaye. M to khud ni chahati ki tum jao , per aunty ko bhi vaha tumhari jarurat h na. Tum hi batao Aunty mere bare m kya sochegi ki kesi saheli mili tumhe , jo usko apni maa. Se hi dur ker rahi h.
Tum chahti ho esa ho .

Radha ne na m sir hilaya.

Sonam :- to fir meri baat maan radhu or kal tum apni mummy k pas chali jao.

M tumhe promise kerti hu , ki jald m tumse milne aayungi, or hum dono fir khub ghumenge. Ghumaogi na mujhe.

Radha sonam k samjhane p maan jati h or boli .

Radha :- thik h sonu , tu bolti h to m jarur jaungi.

Per moti apna wada yaad rakhna , ager tu hamare jane k baad ni ayi humse milne jald or hume bhul gayi to yaha aaker tujhe pitungi .

Sonam:- ha jarur.

Or uske galo ko khichte hue boli

Sonam :- or tu bhi koi bhulne wali item h kya meri bandriya.

Ye bol dono hasne lagti h or dono jake ye baat karan or jyoti ko batati h ki radha man gayi h .Or radha bhi apne behavior k liye karan or jyoti se mafi mangti h.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi .

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Sonam radha ko mana chuki thi, to ab sonam or jyoti radha k room m chali jati h , uski packing k liye madad kerne.

Or karan abhi apne room m hi betha tha,tabhi kuch soch vo ankh band ker baba ko yaad kerta h.

Tabhi usko baba ko awaaj aati h.

Baba:- kaho putra , aaj kese yaad kiya.

Karan :- pranam baba.

Baba:- aayushman bhavah putra , aivam prityogita m vijayi hone k liye tumhe bhahut bahut bhadhai .

Karan :- dhanyawad baba.baba wo mere man m kuch shankaye h , usike nivaran k liye aapka avahan kiya.

Baba :- pucho putra.

Karan :- baba aap to jante hi h ki yaha preton ne aatank machaya hua h , masum logo ki jan le rahe h.to m aapse isi vishay m baat kerna chahata tha.

Baba :- hmm m samjh gaya putra tum kya kahana chahate ho. Ha putr in dusht aatmao k paap ka ghada bhar chuka h. Ab inke vinash ka samay aagaya h , or ye karya tumhe or jyoti ko hi kerna hoga putra.

Karan jyoti ka naam sun ker thoda tension m bola.

Karan :- baba , kya jyoti ka mere sath jana anivarya h, ye karya kya m akela ni ker sakta.

Baba :- m janta hu putra tumhe apni bahan se bahut prem h or uski chinta bhi , per putra ye bhi mat bhulo ki jyoti k jivan ka bhi vahi priyojan h jo tumhara h .

Jyoti ko apni kamzozi ni apni shakti mano putra, kyunki jyoti or tum dono 2 deh ek praan ho . Or tum dono ka sath hi tumhari shakti h.

Karan :- dhanyawad baba meri shankao ka samadhan kerne k liye .

Baba m aapse ek karya k liye aagya chahta hu.

Or karan unhe vo baat batata h jiske liye wo permission mang raha tha.

Baba :- hmm , thik h putra , tumne jesa socha h wo kero . M tumhe is karya k liye apni swikriti deta hu.

Karan muskurate hue :- dhanyawad baba.

Fir karan baba ko pranam ker unse vida leta h or dhayan se bahar aata h .

Itne m jyoti bhi aajati h or karan jese hi usko dekhta h to bed p lete lete hi apni bahe fela deta h or jyoti kud k karan ki baho m sama jati h or chipak k uske uper let jati h.

Jyoti :- bhai , ek baat bolu.

Karan :- tumhe kabse mujhse kuch bolne k liye permission lene ki jarurat padne lagi meri jan.

Jyoti halka sa muskurati h pahale to fir thodi udaa ho ke boli.

Jyoti :- dekha na bhai aapne ki radha kitnu jyada dukhi ho gayi sonam ko chod k jane k naam se.uska sonam se bahut hi lagav ho gaya h.

Karan :- ha gudiya uska hi kya hum sab ka hi sonam se bahut lagav ho gaya h, 2 hafte pata hi ni chala kab nikal gaye.bahut hi pyari bachi h sonam .

Jyoti :- wahi to bhai , ap hi sochiye jab usse dur hone ka soch hamara ye haal h to us bichari p kya gujar rahi hogi.

Wo bechari to shuru se hi yu akele rahi , bichari ne itni kam umar m kya kya ni jhela, hamesha se parivar k liye tarsi .

Aapne uski ankhon m wo khushi dekhi thi na , jab wo hamse mili thi or humne use apni bahan banaya .

Or wo hume wo kis condition m mili thi wo hum kese bhul sakte h bhai , hamari gudiya ne peso ki problem
K kaaran 2 din se kuch kha bhi ni payi thi, wo to time rahate aapne use bacha liya werna ....

Ye bolte bolte jyoti ki ankho m ansu aagaye the

Jyoti :- ni bhai ni , mera dil ni maan raha hamari sonu ko yu chod k jane ka. In dino to humne uski help ker di , but kya gurantee h bhai , aage usko yaha koi dikkat ni hogi. Hume kuch kerna hi hoga bhai. Please kuch kijiye.

Ye bol jyoti sisak sisak k rone lagi , ansu to karan ki ankho m bhi the, uska to khud sonam se bahut lagav ho gaya tha.

Karan :- tu sahi bol rahi h choti , hume kuch to kerna hi hoga , tum chinta mat kero gudiya m is bare m jarur kuch sochunga.

Jyoti :- kya sachi bhai .

Karan :- muchi sweetie ,wo sirf teri hi ni meri bhi to pyaari gudiya h , m jarur kuch karunga.

Jyoti ye sun khush ho jati h or karan k dono gal chum apni khushi jatati h.

Tabhi unke darwaze p knok hota h. Or jab jyoti darwaja kholti h to bahar radha or sonam khadi hoti h.

Jyoti :- are meri dono gudiya yaha is wakt ,

Radha :- haa di , kya aaj hum aapke or bhai k sath so sakte h please.

Karan :- are kyu ni meri pyari gudiya ,

Bed king size tha to sab aaram se so gaye ek side , radha , ek side jyoti or apni sonam to kahi jagah n mili to wo karan k uper hi so gayi .


Location :- rampur

Pandit ji mrityu shaiya p the or wo aaanaina se bole ,

Pandit ji :- beti m jitna janta hu utna tumhe bata raha hu ,

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Ye baat 18 saal pahale ki h tab pandit ji . Pandit ji ne brahmachary liya hua tha , isliye unka sath or koi ni tha .Pandit ji din raat maa ki bhakti bhav se seva kerte or apni vidya se janseva bhi.

Tabhi ek din pandit ji subah uth ker snaan ker maa ki seva k liye mandir ki dwaar kholne jaa hi rahe the ki unki najar ek orat per padti h , jo mandir k darwaze p behosh padi thi.

Pandit ji ye dekh thoda ghabra gaye , lekin unhonne khud ko sambha k jaldi se pani leker aaye or unke chahare p chinte mare .

Orat ko dhire dhire hosh aane laga ,or puri tarah jab us orat ko hosh aajata h to pandit hi usse puchte h.

Pandit ji :- aap kon ho bahan , or aap is halat m yaha.

Pandit ji k muh se bahan sun or unki vinamrata dekh wo orat boli.

Pandit ji :- bhaiya , m ek abhagin hu , jisne apna sab kuch kho diya h or ab mere pass kuch ni bacha h sivay meri is ajanmi santaan k .

Ye baay wo orat apne pet per hath rakh k boli , jese wo bata rahi thi ki vo garbhvati ho.

Orat :- bhaiya , m aapke aage hath jodti hu , aap is abhagin maa ki sahayta kijiye , m kuch bhi kerne ko teyaar hu . M aapke ghar ka har ek kaam kar diya karungi , badle m bas aap muje or meri santan ko rahane ka aashray or 2 wakt ka khana de dijiye , ya kahi kaam dilva dijiye.

Or ye bol wo pandit ji k per pakadne ko hoti h , to pandit ji use rokte hue bole.

Pandit ji :- are are bahan , ye aap kya ker rahi ho , aapne mujhe bhaiya bola h , or mane aapko bahan .

Or abse ia bhai k hote hue aapko hue koi chinta kerne ki jarurat ni h , m wese bhi is ghar m akela hi rahata hu , or bachpan se hi meri ek bahan ki khawaish thi jo aaj maa ne sun hi li.

Aapko koi karya kerne ki jarurat ni h bahan , aap bas apne is bhai k sath aaram se rahiye .

Per ek shart h .

Orat (tension se) :- wo kya bhaiya .

Pandit ji :- are are bahan ghabrao mat , m to bas itna hi chahata hu ki aap apne hatho se ache ache pakwan bana ker mujhe or meri maa ko karwaye .

Orat khush hote hue :- ha kyu ni bhaiya , aapki maa kaha h bhaiya , kya mujhse ni milwaoge unhe

Pandit ji :- ha kyu ni bahan , aao mere sath .

Fir pandit ji mandir kholte h or maa ki pratima ko pranam kerke bole ,

Pandit ji :- bahan yahi h meri maa , meri hi kya is pure sansar ki maa hi to h ye , kya inke liye aap bhojan banayegi.

Orat :- kesi baat kerte ho bhaiya , ye to mera sobhagya hoga ki m maa ki seva ker saku.

Pandit ji :- bahan aapne apna naam to bataya hi ni.

Orat kuch soch k boli :- bhaiya mera naam megha h.

Or isi tarah megha ko pandit ji ne megha ko apni dharm ki bahan bana ker apne yaha aashry diya.

Fir pandit ji or megha sukh purvak rah ker din raat maa ki seva m lage rahe.

Fir wo din bhi aagaya jab megha ki delivery hui or naina ka janm hua.

Pandit ji naina ko god m leker megha k pas aaye.

Pandit ji :- bhadhai ho bahan , sakshat lakshmi ne janm liya h.

Megha :- aapko bhi bhaiya , aap bhi to mama jo ban gaye aap, aapse ek vinati h bhaiya , aap hi iska naam karan kijiye.

Pandit ji ne khushi khushi ye baat man li , or unhonne naam karan ki sabhi vidhi aarambh ki.

Jab pandit ji ne naina ki kundali banayi to unhe bahut hairani or khushi hui.

Pandit ji :- beti tumhari ye beti sakshat , bhagwan mahakal or maa parvati ka vardaan h . Iska janm ek mahan udeshy ko purn kerne ko hua h.

Ye bahut hi gunvan, shalin or param kali bhakt hogi.

Iski in sundar nain (ankho ) ko kisi ka bhi man moh le, isliye iska naam naina hi hona chahiye.

Megha apni beti ka itna acha naam sun bahut khush hoti h . Or yu hi kuch din nikal gaye .

Ek din megha ne pandit ji se bola..

Megha :- bhaiya m aapko kuch batana chahati hu.

Pandit ji :- ha bolo bahan .

Megha :- baat darasal ye h bhaiya ki m yaha apni or naina k prano ki raksha k liye yaha pahunchi thi.

M aapko jyda kuch to ni bata sakti , per itna m aapko bata du ki mere piche tritiya ka maharaj " samraat" pada h, wo mujhe ked kerna chahata h, lekin is pavitra dhage (jo megha k hath per bandha hua tha ) ki vajah se mujhe dhund ni pa raha , per m janti hu bhaiya ki wo mujhe ek na ek din jarur dhund lega.

Pandit ji :- ye trittya kya h bahan , or wo tumhare piche kyu pada h.

Megha :- bhaiya ye to m ni janti ki trittya kya hota h , bas itna hi janti hu ki wo ek dusht shaitani pret hote h.

Or wo mere piche kyu pada h ye to m ni bata sakti , per kaaran niji h bhaiya.

Megha :- isliye m aapse ye vachan chahati hu bhaiya ki vo shaitan kabhi mujhe dhund le to, aap meri beti ka khayal apni beti ki tarah hi rakhe .

M janti hu bhaiya ki meri beti koi sadharan kanya ni h , ager mujhe wo shaitan kabhi le gaya to meri beti hi sahi samay aane per mujhe bachane jarur aayegi , jiske liye aapko hi use prashikshit kerna hoga.

Aap mujhe vachan dijiye ki aap esa jarur karenge .

Pandit ji :- m vachan deta hu bahan , m esa hi karunga .

Fir kuch din ese hi gujar gaye or aakir wo manhus din aahi gaya .

Ek din sham k samay mega kuch kaam ker rahi thi ki tabhi galti se uske hath ka wo dhaga tut gaya.

Jise dekh megha ghabra gayi , or pandit ji k pas ja ker sari baat bata di.

Pandit ji :- tum daro mat bahan , jab tak tumhar ye bhai jinda h , tumhe kuch ni hoga .

Tum isi mandir m raho bahan , kyunki dusht aatma chahe kitni shaktishali ho , maa ki shakti k aage wo kuch bhi ni hoti , wo is mandir m pravesh bhi ni ker payegi.

Or ye bol pandit. Ji apna yantra or sabhi saman le samrat se bhidne ki teyari m lag jate h

Or thodi der m tez havaye chalne lagti h or mosm bhi bigadne lagta h.

Or tabhi ek kaale dhue k sath , waha samrat prakat hota h , jo dikhne m ek insaan jesa hi tha lekin tha wo shaitan .

Pandit ji ko dekh samraat bola.

Samrat :- dekh pandit , mujhe samay nasht kerne ka koi shok ni h chupchap us orat ko mere hawale ker de.

Pandit ji :- mere hote tum meri bahan ko chu bhi ni sakta dusht .

Samrat :- m janta hu pandit , tu ek tantrik bhi h , or kayi bhut pishachon or dayano ko tune haraya h , per wo sab mere aage kide makode h.

Tu ni janta pandit tera samne kon khada h

Pandit ji :- burai kabhi achai se ni jit sakti.

Samrat :- chal tujhe m burai ki takat dikha hi deta hu , per usse pahale tu jo ker sakta h ker le pandit.

Pandit ne apne mantra padh k usper jal dala lekin jara se dard k alawa use kuch ni hua .

Pandit ji ne apni har koshis ker li , per samraat ka kuch ni bigad paye .

Samraat ka ab sabar jwab de gaya or wo bola .

Samraat :- bahut ho gaya tera pandit , mane tunhe pyar se samjha k ek moka bhi diya , jo ham shetano ki pravati m ni h , lekin tu ni mana .

Ab tu marega or ye bol usne pandit ji ki or ek ungali ki jisse pandit ji hava me udne lage or apni ungali se hi vo ishara kerte hue pandit ji ko idher udher patakne laga.

Or jab pandit ji ghayal ho gaye to unko wo chod megha ki or bada jo mandir k darwaje p khade ho sab dekh rahi thi.

Samraat ne jese hi , mandir k main gate ki dahleez per per rakhna chaha, wo jhataka kha k bahut dur jaa ke gira.

Kyunki shetan chahe kitna bhi takatwar ho per maa ki shakti k samne kya okaat h.

Samraat ab gusse se pagal ho gaya or wo chilaya ,

Samrat : - m janta hu tu yahi h , chupchap mere sath chalne k lie teyar ho ja ni to.

Wo pandit ji ko gale se utha leta h or bola.

Samraat :- werna , ye mere hatho ni bachega.

Megha ab buri tarah ghabra jati h or khud se boli.

Megha :- ni m itni swarthi ni ho sakti , jin bhaiya ne bina kisi swarth k mujhe sahara diya,itna sneh diya .

M apne swarth k liye unhe sankat m ni daal sakti .

Fir wo naina ko god m leke boli

Megha:- mujhe maaf ker de meri bachi , m tujhse dur jaa rahi hu , per kya karu meri bachi , teri maa majbur h beti niyati k khel k aage.

Per m janti hu beti bhavishya m tu apni ma ko bachane jarur aayegi .

Fir megha yu hi kuch or baate bol , samrat k pas ja ke boli.

Megha :- mere bhaiya ki chod do samraat , m tumhare sath jane ko teyar hu.

Samrat pandit ji ko chodte hue bola


Samrat :- samrat apni baat ka pakka h pandit , ja maaf kiya tujhe .

Pandit ji :- bahan ye tune kya kiya , kyu aayi tu mandir se bahar.

Megha:- ni bhaiya m aapki jaan ko khatre m ni dal sakti , apni is bahan ko maaf ker dena bhaiya .

Or apna vachan yaad rakhna

Or ye bol megha ek baar pandit ji ko gale laga leti h.

Samrat :- ab chalne k liye tu teyar ho ja ,

ye bol wo jese hi megha ka hath pakdne hota h to use ek or jhatka lagta h.

Megha :- m ek pativrata nari hu samraat , tujh jesa dusht mujhe chu bhi ni sakta.

Ye sun samraat apni ankhe band ker kuch budbudata h or apna hath aage kerta h , jisme se ek kali roshni nikalti h.

Or ek bada sa spare banate hue wo kali roshni megha ko ked ker leti h or samrat us gole k sath waha se gayab ho gaya.

Flashback end.

Back to the hero.

Aaj subah karan or jyoti dhyan lagane k liye beth the h to karan bola.

Karan :- gudiya m tumhe kuch dena chahata hu.

Jyoti :- kya bhai.

Karan :- tum apni ankh band ker sapta chakra jagrit kero , tumhe pata chal jayega.

Jyoti :- ok bhai.

Fir jyoti vesa hi Kerti h , or karan bhi dhayan m beth k apne sapta chakra jagrit kerta h.

Thodi der m karan k ander se ek shakti punj nikal ker jyoti m sama jata h.

Or 10 min baad jyoti aankh khol k boli.

Jyoti :- bhai , ye sab kisliye .

Karan :- kyunki gudiya aage ane wale sankat ya yu kah lo hamari pariksha ko paar kerne k liye tumhe iski jarurat hogi .

Jyoti :- jesa aapko sahi lage bhai.

Fir karan or jyoti fresh ho ker breakfast k liye jate h apni 2no bahano k sath hotel k restaurant m .

Aaj k liye bas itna hi.

Stay tuned

 

Harry rocks

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Haha veere review ka kya h aate jaate rhenge
Aap bas mast hoke story likho sab acha hoga
Naina ka raaz lag hi rha tha aisa kuch hoga lekin ye mazboori ka suspence kya daal diya ye samajh nhi aaya
Is suspence k khulne ka intzaar rhega
Sonam ne radha ko mna liya or ab radha wapas going
Lagta h un pisacho ki watt lagne ka waqt pass aagya h
Brilliant update
Keep rocking bhai :)
Thanks for your support bhai
Stay tuned and keep reading
New update on page no :- 326
 

Harry rocks

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Mast update h bhai
Maza aa gya
Sorry bhai kal ka 2nd update nhi padh paya tha so gya tha
But aaj padha 2no update
Kaafi acche the
Apne hero ki fight ek dum mast thi
Accha kia us gumde ko jinda chod kar
Is halat m jinda rhna hi saza h
Bechara main point m kick se behosh ho gya
Lagta h Naina apne hero ki sister hi h
Aur lagta h uski Maa jinda h
Jo khatre m h
Khair jo bhi ho aane wale updates me pta chal hi jayga
Thanks for your support bhai
Stay tuned and keep reading
New update on page no :- 326
 

Harry rocks

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Excellent update bhai bahut hi Shandar aur lajawab mind blowing
Wah Bhai bahut hi badiya update tha maza aa gaya aise hi badiya updates dete Raho Aage Ka Intezar rahega

Keep going
We will wait for next update

:yourock:
Thanks for your support bhai
Stay tuned and keep reading
New update on page no :- 326
 
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