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Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running

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Update no :- 62.
Jese hi ring baji, to karan or raka satark ho gaye. Karan ne wade k mutabik pahala attack raka ko kerne diya.

Raka ne moke ka pura fayda utha ker ek jordar punch karan k pet m mara.

Yu to karan ko usse koi fark ni pada tha, lekin dikhane k liye halke se dard k impression chahare p late hue bola.

Karan :- bas itna hi dam h tujhme , bol to ese raha tha jese , koi bahut badi top ho.

Chal m tujhe batata hu ki asli punch kise kahate h . Ye bol karan thodi takat se raka k pet m de mara, or raka lagbhag udte hue ring k pole se takraya.

Karan(haste hue) :- are are tum to itne m hi fuss ho gaye, kya bol rahe the , ki m haar man lu, kyu kaha gaya tera dam .

Karan k yu achanak badle is style or ravaiye ko dekh heran hone ki jarurat ni h dosto.

Bat darasal ye hui ki , jab fight se pahale karan or raka ne ek dusre se hath milaya tha.

Tab raka ne karan ka hath daba ker use dard pahuchane ki koshis ki thi , karan ko koi khas farq ya yu kahlo koi farq ni pada.

Ulta karan ki ek shakti jagrit(active) ho gayi , jisse use raka k bare m apne aap hi sab kuch pata chal gaya.

Ye karan ki wo shakti thi , jo kfd ne hi di thi , jisme ye hoga ki , karan jo koi bhi hani pahuchane ki koshis karega to , is shakti ki badolat karan ko us admi k bare m sab kuch pata chal jayega. Jese uska past , present , uski khasiyat or kamjori bhi. Isi shakti k karan ki help se hi to karan ne khan brother ki band bajayi thi.

Or esa hi raka k sath hua , jisse karan ko jo raka k bare m pata chala , uske baad karan ka gussa bhadak gaya.

Kyunki raka ek ghatiya or criminal insan tha. Chori , lut , murder ese kayi bure kaam kiye hue the usne.
Kitni masum ladkiyo ki jindagi kharab ki hui thi usne.

Yaha tak ki wo is had tak gir chuka tha ki usne ek 7 sal ki bachi ko bhi ni choda apni havas k chakkar me.

Karan (dahadte hue ) :- kyu bas itna hi dam tha kya tujhme , namard . Kya teri mardangi bas choti bachiyo p hi chalti h.

Raka khada hua or karan ki or doda or ek bar fir usne ek jordar punch marna chaha , lekin karan ne use dodge ker diya.

Or ek or jordar mukka uske muh pe de mara or haste hue bola.

Karan :- beta ! Tumse na ho payega.

Karan ka ye dialogue sun stadium m mojud sabhi log hasne lagte h.

Karan :- chal tu bhi kya yaad rakhega , ek moka or deta hu tuje , 10 min h tere pass , ager mujhe hara sakta h to ker le koshis ker le.

Ye mera wada h ki 10 min pur hone tak m kuch ni karunga.

Ye sun raka k chahare per ek chamak aajati h or wo jaldi se uth karan p attack kerna shuru ker deta h.

Usne jaker ek jordar laat karan k pet m mari , jisse wo apni jagah se jara sa piche ghisak gaya. Lekin koi khas fark na pada.

Ab raka pura pagal ho gaya tha , usne karan p lato or ghuse ki barsaat ker di , jisse karan thoda bahut ghayal hua.

Wese to karan ki m heel power thi , lekin usne janbhujkar uska prayog ni kiya, ki ager achanak se ghav bharne lage to logo ko shak hoga.

Fir raka ne karan ne karan ko niche gira diya. Lekin karan fir khada ho gaya.

Raka:- sale tu kis mitti ka bana h , itni mar k baad to ache se acha wrestler bhi na uth paye .

Per aaj tu raka k hatho ni bachega sale, tu aaj yaha se 4 kandho p hi jayega bhenc.........


Aaaahhhhhhhhhhh

Raka ne abhi apni baat puri bhi ni ker paya tha ki ek jordar punch uske muh p pada , jisse uske aage 7 8 daat sahid ho gaye. Jo ki karan ka tha, jiski ankhe gusse se lal ho chuki thi

Karan(tez awaaz me) :- tune abhi ek ni apni jindagi ki 2 sabse badi galtiya ker di h.

1 . Baato m ulajh k apne 10 min gava ker.

2 . Or sabse badi galti teri ye h kute ki , tune meri bahan ko gali di. Jo tu ab apne jindagi ki aakhiri galti hi samjh.

Bas ab tera time over ho gaya h, ab apne sare bure kamo ka dand bhugatne ko teyar ho ja.

Raka ne fir ek baar use punch marne ki koshis ki , lekin karan ne uske punch ko bich m hi pakad , uske ek second m ghuma k tod dala

Raka dark mare karahane laga , lekin ab karan rukne k mood m ni tha. Or karan ek jordar puch raka k pet p de mara , jiske dard k raka apne ghutne p aagaya .

Fir karan ne ek jordar lat uske muh p mari jisse wo gir kar tadapne laga.

Karan :- uth na kute , kaha gayi teri mardangi , kyu dard ho raha hai h na. Lekin ye dard un masumo k dard k aage kuch bhi ni h, jinke tumne ghar ujade .

Soch kya bit rahi hogi , un logo k uper jinke ghar k chirag tumne chand peso k liye bhujaye.kya gujrai hogi us maa p, jiske bhudape k sahare ko tune berahami se maar dala.

Fir karan raka ko jabardasti khada kerta h or bola .

Karan:- kya hua sale namard , lad na . Kyu ab kya hua.

Or karan ne ek spin kick uske muh pe jad di or raka fir se gir pada.

Or fir karan uskl ulta ker uska ek per utha ker karan bola.

Karan :- inhi pero ki juti samjhta h na tu har nari ko.

Or ye bol karan ne raka k pero k joint pe jordar laat marke uska per bhi tod diya.

Fir karan ne uska dusra hath pakad k bola .

Karan :- isi hath se tune , un masum ladkiyo ki aabru luti thi na hevan .

Or karan itna bol raka ka dusra hath bhi tod deta h jisse raka ki chikh pure stadium m gunj jati h.

Sabhi karan k is roop ko dekh k heran the.

Or karan ne apne aap ko aakhiri attack k liye teyar kerte hue raka ki tango k bich aate hue bola.

Karan :- or ye us haiwaniyat k liye jo tune us masum bachi k sath ki thi.

Or ye bol karan ne ek jordar laat uske main point p de mari , jisse raka behosh ho gaya.

Refree ne isi ke sath karan ko vijeta ghoshit ker diya gaya. Prize distribution jyoti ki flight k baad hone wala tha.

Karan fir ring se nikal ker nikal ker apni bahano k pass pahuncha , to sabse pahale radha or sonam karan k gale mili.

Radha(khusi se fule na samati hui boli):- many many many congratulations bhai , aakhir aap jit hi gaye.m to kabse bol rahi thi ki aap hi jitoge.


Ye moti to yakin hi ni ker rahi thi mera,man hi ni rahi thi.

Sonam :- congratulations bhaiya , I knew it ki aap hi jitoge.

E bandariya kyu jhut bol rahi h. Mane kab bola .

Karan :- are bas bas ab ladne mat lag jana , khushi ka moka h . Party kis kis ko chahiye.

Dono :- ek sath party , yahooooo.

Fir karan jese hi jyoti ki or bhadta h to , jyoti dod k aake karan k gale lag jati h , or pyaar se uske mathe ko chum boli.

Jyoti :- congratulations my champion bhaiya.

Or ye bol wo karan ko kas k gale laga leti h , jisse karan ki chot dab jati h, jiski uski halki chikh nikal jati h.

Jyoti chikh sun sab samjh jati h or karan ka hath pakad sonam ko boli .

Jyoti :- choti jaldi se hume ek ache doctor k yaha le chal.

Karan :- are gudiya m thik hu.

Jyoti bich m tokte hue .

Jyoti :- aap jara chup hi rahiye , bolte ho thik hu, kitna lag gaya h aapko.

Sonam :- ha bhai , di bilkul sahi bol rahi h.

Or fir wo 3no karan ko clinic leke jati h.

Wahi dusri or naina pandit ji k sath pados k gav apne pahunch gayi apni jeep m.


Thakur jese hi pandit ji ko dekhta h to bhag ke aaker unke pero m gir k bola.

Thakur :- pandit ji , kripya meri bachi ko bacha lijiye , pata ni konsi bala meri bachi k gale pad gayi h.

Jisko koi tantrik ya koi ojha ni bhaga paya , ab aap hi mera antim sahara ho , pandit ji meri bachi ko bacha lijiye.

Pandit ji use uthate hue bole :- are thakur sahab esa mat kijiye, m apni puri koshis karunga.

Fir pandit ji or naina haveli k us kamre m jate h , jaha per thakur ki beti ko bandh k rakha tha.

Kyunki wo bahut hi khunkhar ho chuki thi , wo kisi ko bhi dekhti to marne dodti, usne abhi tak 15 aadmiyon ko buri tarah ghayal ker diya tha .

Wo dikhne m bahut bhayanak lag rahi thi,uske ankho ki putliya sikud k itni choti ho gayi thi , jo use or bhi drawana bana rahi thi.

Pandit ji ne naina ko thakur or uske parivar k pass rahane ko bol , us ladki k pass gaye.


Pandit ji ko dekh wo aatma bahut bhadak gaya.

Ladki(pret) :- pandit tu mera khuch ni bigaad sakta , tu bhi bakiyon k jese khali hath hi jayega yaha se.

Pandit ji uspe gangajal phekte hue bole :- bata kon h tu , kyu pada h is masum k piche.

Ladki :- kyu bhude , kya karega jan ke , tere ye chote mote totke mera kuch ni bigad sakte .

Pandit ji bar bar usper mantra bol k gangajal dalte rahe , us pret ko taklif to bahut ho rahi thi per , koi khas asar bhi ni ho raha tha.

Ladki :- kyu kya hua bhude , bas itna hi jor tha tujhme , ab meri baari h , tu ab bachna to h ni , isliye teri aakhiri khawaish samjh k bata raha hu.

Ye ladki mujhe pasand achuk h pandit or ab yahi meri dulhan banegi .

Pandit ji :- murkhta mat ker dusht , tu ek pret h or ye ek insan , chod de iske sharir ko , mujhe majbur mat ker.

Ladki :- to dikha apni takat budhe m bhi dekhu, kitni takat h tujhme .

Pandit ji apni ankhe padh jal uspe maarte h , is baar us pret ko bahut kasht hota h, per ye kya wo jald hi normal ho jata h.

Pandit ji :- asambhav mere is mantra se to shaktishali se shaktishali pret bhi ni bach sakta.

Tu koi sadharan pret ni ho sakta kon h tu.

Ladki :- m usi prajaati ka hu pandit , jisne tujhe pahale bhi haraya tha, or aaj bhi tu marega.

Ye bolte hue us ladki ne apne full sleeve suit k hath wali side se fad diya. Or us ladki k hatho p ek nishan ubhara hua tha. Kuch esa.






Pandit ji uske nishan ko dekh saham gaye , or wo ladki ne ab apni rasiya tod di, or hava m udte hue , pandit ji k pas aayi or unka gala pakad liya.

Naina(chilate hue ):- babaaa

Pandit ji achanak se tadafte hue bole , beti tu bhag yaha se, teri jan ko khatra h.

Naina :- ni baba m aapko yu chod k kahi ni jaungi.

Ladki :- bhude , uski ni tu apni chinta ker

or ye bol usne bol k pandit ji ko divar p de mara gale se utha k.

Naina :- babaaa.

Ab naina ka krodh badhne laga tha, or yaha wo ladki pandit ji ko baar bar utha utha k idher se udher fek rahi thi.

Pandit ji lahu luhan ho chuke the, per wo bar bar naina ko waha se bhagne ko hi bol rahe the.

Abhi wo ladki kuch or kerti to use achanak se jhatke lagne lage or pandit ji uski pakad se chut gaye.

Esa isliye hua kyunki ab naina se ruka ni gaya or usne apna yantra nikal liya jisse nikalti divya kirne us pret per padne lagi.




Naina gusse se :- bas bahut ho gaya tera dhust aatma , tujhe mere baba ko.marne ka hisab chukana hi hoga.

Lekin wo pret kuch jyada hi shakti shali tha or usne apni shakti se ek gamla hava m utha ker naina k hath pe de mara or naina k hath se wo yantra chut gaya.

Pret :- ladki ab tu or tera baap dono maroge or tumhare sath sath marega ye pura thakur khandan .

Itna bol wo ladki hava m udti hui naina ki or bhadi or naina ko usne apni shaktiyo se dhaka de divar se chipka diya.

Ladki :- ab tujhe koi ni bacha sakta ,

itna bol wo jese hi naina ki gardan pakdni chahi , or jese hi usne naina k gale ko chua .

Tabhi ek jordar current usko laga or wo jaker dur gir pada.

Jab naina ne apne gardan k pass dekha to usne paya , ki uske gale m mojud wo locket chamak raha tha , jo uske gale m bachpan se hi tha.

Ladki :- asambhav ye kese ho sakta h , ki mera tere chune bhar se hi , mane apni adhi shakti kho di.

Naina jaldi se khud ko sambhalti h or jaldi se acha sa moka samjh apna yantra utha leti h.

Per ye kya uske locket se ek laal rang ki roshni nikal ke , uske yantra m sama jati h.

Itne me wo ladki wapas naina ki or bhadti h or fir ek baar naina apna yantra aage ker deti h .

Or is bar nilli roshni ki jagah purple roshni us yantra se nikal k us ladki p padne lagti h.

Or is baar us pret ki halAt kharab hone lagti h, or wo chilate hue bola.

Ladki :- dusht ladki , tune esi kya maya ker di h jo mujhko tak jala rahi h

Naina:- ye maya ni dusht achai ki shakti h , or burayi chahe kitni bhi takat war ho jaye achai k aage ni tik sakti.

Or fir naina ek mantra bolti h jisse us shetan ki chikhe gunj uthati h .

Ladki m mojud shetan ek saye k roop m bahar aagaya jo jal raha tha.

Or wo marte hue bola .

Shetan :- tune mujhe , yani ki ek "trittya" ko marker , bahut badi bhul ki h ladki . Ab tu lambe samay tak jinda ni bachegi. Hamare maharaj jarur badla lenge tere se.

Naina :- tritiya ?

Usne ye shabd dobara is andaz m bola jese puch rahi ho ki ye tritiya kya h.

Lekin ye bol wo saya jal ker gayab ho jata h or wo ladki sahi ho ker behosh ho jati h.

Back to the hero .

Karan apne kamre m shirt less betha tha , or jyoti uske sharir per dava laga rahi thi.

Karan :- aah , gudiya dhire .Or ye kya laga rahi h tu jo itni jalan ho rahi h


Jyoti :- aap to chup hi rahiye , kya jarurat thi bekar m mar khane ki , dekhiye kitni chot lagi h apko.

Ye bolte hue uski ankho m pani aagaye or karan ne use gale se laga k bola .

Karan :- are gudiya ab tu kyu rone lagi , m thik to hu mera bacha, ye dekh

Or karan ne apni ankhe band ker healing power se khud ko thik ker liya.

Tab jaker jyoti ko thodi rahat hui or wo boli.

Jyoti :- per bhai aapko wo sab kerne ki kya jarurat thi. Or ap match k doran aggressive kyu ho gaye the.

Karan use raka k bare m sari baate batata h jise sun jyoti ko raka p gussa bhi aata h or apne bhai p garv bhi hota h.

Jyoti karan ko gale lagate hur :- I really proud of u bhai , aapne bilkul sahi kiya esa hevan ko to esi hi saja milni chahiye.

Fir ese hi dono bhai bahan baate kerte hue so jate h . Agle din kuch khas ni hota or wo din yu hi ghumne firne m nikal jata h.

Aaj jyoti ka final match tha or samne wali opponent ek black belt thi or pichle saal ki winner bhi.

Jyoti or wo ladki pahale to ek dusre se hath mila k all the best bolte h or fir ghanti bajte hi mukabla shuru ho jata h.

Wo ladki aggressive nature ki thi or usne ghanti k bajte hi , attack kerna shuru ker diya.

Lekin apni jyoti uske har ek war ko block kerte hue uske sath khel rahi thi. Or jab laga bahut hua uska khel to ab usne attack shuru ker diye .

Wo us ladki se dugni speed m attack ker rahi thi. Ladki ne khub dat ker jyoti ka mukabla kiya or use achi khasi takkar bhi di .

Lekin akhir kar jyoti ne bazi maar hi li. Or jyoti ko is saal ka winner ghoshit ker diya gaya.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

Stay tuned.

Note :- sorry friends jyoti k final battle ko short m nipta diya , per m is tournament ko lamba ni khichna chahata tha.
Superrrb update bhaii....:respekt:
Aakhir karan ne competition jit hi liya...:smile: Wse v use rokta kon...:hspin
Raka k sath accha kia karan ne..:chair:.
Yarr...orr sb crime tk jyada kch nii lgta...bt..yarr..rape...ye asa word h jo khun khaula deta h....yha to masoom bacchi k sath....:angry:
Wse to mane aaj tk jhagda v nii kia kisi se...bt...agr mere bs m hota n to rapists ko asi sza deta k nrk wale yatnaye v km pd jaye...:chop:.sorry bhaii thoda emotional ho gya..
.Jyoti n v final jit hi liya. :cool1:
Naya wala ghost to bht powerful tha...:evilgrin::evilgrin:
Naina k kawach ne bacha lia...
Waiting for next update to know about (trittya)....:hump:
 
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Karan preto ka safaya ker jyoti k pass pahucha , jo waha par bane ek rest cabin k darwaje k pass beth karan ki fight ka aanand le rahi thi.

Karan uske pass jaker style se apni hatho se talvaro ko gayab kerte hue bola.

Karan :- kyu bhana , kesi rahi meri performance.

Jyoti (muskurate hue) :- achi thi ,I mean not bad , but speed slow thi apki.

Koi baat ni mere sath rah ker wo bhi seekh jaoge.

Or ye bol wo hasne lagi or karan ka fir ek baar popat ker diya.

Karan :- slow ki bachi , ruk tujhe m batata hu.

Ye bol wo jyoti ko pakadn k liye uski or lapka, per jyoti uske liye teyar thi.

Or wo karan se bach ker bhagi.

Jyoti (jibh nikalke chidati hui) :- kya hua ,pakdo na mujhe mere slow golu bhaiya.

Karan :- ruk badmash , aaj tu ni bachegi ,

Fir shuru ho jati h karan or jyoti ki pakdam pakdai, lekin snow hone ki vajah se , jyoti jyada der tak bhag ni payi . Or karan ne use pakad k snow m gira diya.

Or karan khud bhi niche beth jyoti k uper Aagaya , apne pero ko jyoti ki dono side kerke.

Karan :- ab aayi na utni , pahad k niche, kyu kya bol rahi slow golu bhaiya.

Ab tera kya hoga chipkali.

Jyoti :- are bhaiya m to majak ker rahi thi, please bhai wo mat kena .

Per karan kaha manne wala tha , usne jyoti ko gudgudi kerna start ker diya. Jyoti to haste haste pagal hue ja rahi thi.

Jyoti :- bhai , sorry sorry , hahaha , please chod do, aage se esa ni bolungi

Tabhi wo thoda side m dekhte hue boli.

Jyoti :- are radha , tu uth gayi.

Karan ne jese hi piche mud ker dekhne k liye apna dhyan jyoti se hataya ,

Tabhi jyoti ne moke ka fayda utha karan ko dhaka mara , jisse wo side m gir gaya. Or ab bari thi jyoti ki or wo karan k uper aaker use gudgudi kerne lagi.

Karan :- e chipkali ye to cheating h,

Jyoti :- kyu bhai apna hi dialogue bhul gaye, everything is fair in lover nd war.

Or karan ko gudgudi kerne lagi , or karan ki jab tak hava tight na ho gayi , tab tak use na choda.

Or fi wo baraf m hi karan k uper let gayi.or fir dono bhai bahan apni bacho jesi harkat pe hasne lage.

Jyoti karan p lete lete hi boli.

Jyoti :- bhai ,shimla kitni sunder jagah h na, ji kerta h yahi rah jaye .

Per ab humara tournament bhi jaldi khatam hone wala h. Fir hume yaha se wapas jana hoga na.

Jyoti ye baat bolte hue udas ho gayi thi, kyunki ab vo dono hi lagatar compitition jitte hue semifinals m pahunch gaye the.

Karan pyaar se jyoti k sir ko sahalate hue bola.

Karan :- na na, ese udaas ni hote mera bacha , fir hum yaha wapas aayenge na vacation m , sabhi k sath.

Jyoti :- kya sachi bhai.

Karan(uske gaal chumte hue) :- muchi meri gudiya.

Jyoti bacho ki tarah khush hote hue karan k galo ko chum thank u bolti h. Or karan apni jan ki is masum or bacho jesi harkat p bas muskurata rah jata h.

Esa ni tha ki jyoti mature ni thi , isliye ese bacho jesi harkate kerti rahati thi , balki use apne bhai k sath ese hi ek choti bachi yani apne bhai ki gudiya ban k rahana hi acha lagta tha.

Fir thodi der yu hi rahane k baad , wo dono uthate h or wapas usi cabin m jaker sonam or radha ko nind se jagate h.

Radha or sonam jese hi uth ker karan or jyoti ko sahi salamat dekhti h to fir se unke gale lag ker rone lagti h.

Karan :- are shant ho ja gudiya(sonam) . Dekh m bilkul thik hu.

Jyoti :- ha choti (radha) shant ho ja, tum to meri bahadur gudiya ho na.

Fir karan or jyoti dono ko shant karate h .

Sonam :- bhai , aap thik to hona , aap bach kese gaye , humne apni ankho se dekha tha wo sab.

Karan ne pahale hi is baare m socha hua tha , to usne ek jhuti kahani banate hue bola .

Karan :- Hum jab niche ki or jaate hue kafi dur pahuch gaye the, tabhi mane dekha ki barf hamare bahut pass pahunch gayi h.

To mane jhat se jyoti ka hath pakad apni or khicha or pura jor lagate hue apni left side ki or kud gaya , kyunki mane notice kiya tha ki use side baki taraf k mukable bahut kam barf aarahi h.


Or hum dur ja ker gire or barf humare uper bichne lagi , per kismat se special force wale waha pass m hi the , unhone hume dekh liya or unhone jaldi se hume bacha liya.

Karan ki ye kahani sun dono santusht ho jati h or jyada is baat p gor bhi ni kerti , wo to bas khush thi k unke bhaiya or didi bach gaye .

Or fir wo 4ro bhai bahan wapas apne lot gaye

Wahi dusri or

Location :- kajri house.

Us ladki ki halat din pratidin kharab hoti ja rahi thi. Kyunki kajri ne use khub torcher kerne ki koshis ki.

Shuru shuru m use apni bhutiya shaktiyo se darane ki koshis ki thi.use chu na pane k kaaran use sharirik kasht to de ni pa rahe the.

Per use mansik kasht deker todana chaha rahe the wo dusht. Or pichli raat se use khana bhi ni de rahe the.

Bechari bas pani piker hi kaam chala rahi thi , per uska hanumanaji pe se vishwas bilkul kam ni hua tha.

Wo abhi bhi apni baat pe adig thi.

Kajri jhalate hue :- kis mitti ki bani h tu akhir , chod kyu ni deti apni jid. Fek de us locket ko or shetan ki gulami swikar ker le.

Yaha koi bachane ni aane wala tujhe , na koi masiha , na tera wo bhagwan.

Wo bas ek pathar ki moorat h murt .

Ladki(muskurate hue) :- or us murat k aage bhi tumhari kya haisiyat h , wo bhi dekh lo. Isi murti k kaaran tum chu bhi ni pa rahi ho. Tum murkh shetan bhala kya samjhoge mere balaji ki mahima, tum chahe kitni koshish ker lo , meri bhakti ki shakti ko ni hara paoge. Mujhe apne bajrang bali p pura bharosha h.

Kajri :- to sad idhar , m bhi dekhti hu kitne din tu is pani k sahare rahegi.

Ye bol kajri waha se chali jati h.

Back to the hero.

Agle din karan ne apni semifinals ki fight bhi jit li or sath m jyoti ne bhi.

Or uske baad 4 ro bhai bahan , puri sham bahar ghumte rahe or jab sabhi thak gaye to hotel m pahunch apne apne kamre m chale gaye sone

Karan yu hi mobile chala raha tha, or jyoti naha rahi thi .

Or jese hi wo bahar aayi , or jese hi karan ki najar jyoti p padi to wo use dekhta hi rah gaya


Kyunki jab jyoti bahar aayi to , usne ek bahut hi cute baby doll nighty pahani thi. Kuch esi
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Karan to bas jyoti m khoye hua use dekh raha tha,Jyoti jab apne bhai ko kyu use ghurta hua pati h to pahale to sharma jati h fir jyoti bade is andaaz se uske paas aayi or uska muh band ker bolti h.

Jyoti :- ise band karo , verna makhi ghus jayegi , itni bhi achi ni lag rahi m.

Karan pahale to sakpaka jata h jyoti ki harkat se , fir uske muh se apne aap ye shayari nikal jati h.

Karan :-

Dekh kar tumko yakin hota hai,
Koi itna bhi haseen hota hai,
Dekh paate hai kaha hum tumko,
Dil kahi or hosh kahi hor hota hai...!!


Jyoti apne bhai k muh se ye shayri sun , or jyada sharma jati h or pass m hi lage aaiye k samne jaker khud ko thoda sawarne lagti h.

Tabhi karan bhi bistar se uth ker jyoti ko piche se baho m bhar leta h. Or uske galo ko chumne lagta h or sath m chusne bhi laga, jese kisi mithe aam ko chus raha ho.

Jyoti :- kya ker rahe ho bhai.

Karan :- apni gudiya ko pyaar.

Jyoti :- acha ji , aaj mere bhaiyu ko bahut pyaar aaraha h apni gudiya per.

Karan ( dusre gal ko chumte hue) :- aaj to kya mujhe to roj hi apni gudiya p itna ya yu kaho isse bhi jyada pyaar aata h.

Jyoti karan ki or mud uske sine p apne dono hath rakhke boli.

Jyoti :- acha, to phir mere pyare bhaiyu, jara bataiye aap apni gudiya se kitna pyaar kerte h.

Karan:-

Tum ni janti tum
mere liye kya ho
Bas itna samaj lo
Sas jisse chalti h
Meri wo hava ho tum.


Ab to jyoti k gaal sharam se laal ho gaye the . Or wo karan k sine se lag gayi .

Or isse pahale wo karan se kuch or bolti , unke kaano m sitti k sath taliyo ki aawaz sunayi deti h.

Or aaj fir ek baar , wo koi or ni apni radha hi thi.

Radha:- kya baat h bhai , aaj to bada shayrana mood ho raha h aapka, 4 line humare liye bhi bol do.


Karan :-
Tumko dekha to khayaal aaya,
Tumko dekha to khayaal aaya,
Tumko dekha to khayaal aaya,
Bandaro ke stock mein naya maal aaya


Karan ki ye shayari sun jyoti khil khila ke hasne lagi or radha bichari ka muh dekhne layak ho gaya.

Karan (majak kerte hue) :- sonam bilkul sahi bolti h , tu ek no ki bandariya hi h.

Yaar jab bhi apni itni soni gf k sath 2 min k liye romantic hone ka sochta hu, tu bich m kawab me hadi ban jati h.

Jyoti ye sun sharmate hue ek mukka karan k sine p mara or boli.

Jyoti :- kahi bhi kuch bhi bol dete ho,

Jyoti ki is harkat pe ab radha pahale to hasi fir bich m ruk gayi or budu jese react kerte hue boli.

Radha:- ek min , ek min , kya bole bhai aap , apne fir se mujhe bandariya bola.

Aaj to aap gaye , ye bol wo karan ki or dodi, or jyoti bhi radha ka sath dete hue boli.

Jyoti :- ha choti , chodna mat bhai ko aaj bilkul bhi , bahut badmash ho gaye h ye.

Fir wo bhi karan k piche pad jati h ,radha ki madad k liye. Or dono bahane karan ko bed p patak ke us per chad jati h or uski takiyo (pillows) se marne lagti h.

Karan :- are bas kerro motiyo(fat),niche utro mujh pe se. kyu bichare najuk aadmi ko marne pe tuli ho.

Jyoti :- kya kaha hum or moti , ab to aap gaye .

Ye bol dono uski dhulayi k sath sath , gud gudi bhi kerne lagi.jisse karan ki halat kharab ho gayi.

Karan :- are shama ker do deviyon , is nadan balak se bhul hui jo aapka apman kiya.

Radha(funny way me ashirvad k jese hath aage kerte hue) :- tathastu bacha, jao tumhe maaf kiya

Or isi k sath 3no hasne lagte h.

Fir karan puchta h radha se.

Karan :- kya baat h gudiya , tu yaha is waqt koi kaam tha kya.

Radha:- are ha bhai , m to bhul hi gayi . Wo mummy ka phone aaya tha , wo aapse bhi baat kerna chahati h.

Karan jhijakte hue :- aunty ko mujhse kya baat kerni h.

Radha:- wo to aapko mummy hi bata sakti h bhai.

Or ye bol wo garima ko phone laga deti h.

Radha:- ha , hello mummy , aap karan bhaiya se baat kerna chahti thi na lijiye wo yahi pass m h.

Or ye bol wo karan ko phone pakda deti h.

Karan jese hi phone kaan p lagata h to usko garima ki aawaz sunayi deto h.

GarimA:- ha , hello karan beta.

Karan jese hi garima ki aawaz sunta h , najane kyu esa pratit hota h ki , garima se uska kuch to sambhand h , use garima ki aawaz sun hi , ye ahasas sa ho raha tha ki jarur garima se uska koi n koi nata jarur h.

Karan :- hello , namaste aunty , ha m karan hi bol raha hu.

Garima bhi jab karan ki aawaz sunti h , to usko karan ki awaaz kuch jani pahachani si lagti h, or use bhi bilkul karan jesa abhas hota h.

Garima :- ha namaste beta , first of all congratulations aapko beta final
M pahunchne k liye or ha final jit ker aana beta.

Karan :- thank u aunty , bas aunty aapka aashirwad chahiye uske liye to.

Garima:- wo to tumhare sath hamesha h beta , or ha meri radha ki jaan bachane k liye bahut bahut shukriya beta , mujhe to samjh ni aata , m kese tumhara aahsan chukau.

Karan :- aunty ye kesi baat kerti ho aap , beta bhi bolti ho or ahasan ki bhi baat kerti ho .

Or radha to meri gudiya , meri pyari choti bahan h , uski m raksha ni kerta to or kon kerta.

To isme aahasan kesa hua , wo to mera farz tha.

Garima :- radha bilkul sahi hi kahati h beta , tumhara vyaktitv chutkiyo m hi kisi ko prabhavit kerne k liya kaafi h.I really impressed with u beta.

Tumse baat kerke to tumse milne ki meri iccha or bhi jyada bhad gayi h beta . Kabhi aao na ghar beta , tumhare sabhi friends aate h bas tum or jyoti beti hi ni aate .

Karan :- ji jarur aunty , m jald hi aaunga ,

Garima:- promise.

Karan :- ha promise aunty m jarur aaunga or apke hatho ka khana pet bhar k khaunga bhi.

Garima :- ha ha bete kyu ni, radha ne mujhe bataya tha ki tumhe mere hatho ka khana bahut pasand h , tum aao to sahi , m apne hatho se khana khilaungi apne bache ko.

Karan :- ji aunty .

Garima:- are ha beta ek jaruri baat to bolna hi bhul gayi. Beta tum radha ko kese n kese samjha ker wapas yaha jaldi se bhej do na.

Wo actually mujhe or radha ko kuch legal kaam se bahar jana h, 5 din baad. Meri to wo sunegi ni , tum hi bolo use.

Karan :- aunty aap chinta mat kijiye , 3 din baad hamara vese bhi tournament khatam ho jayega . Or 4the din hum sab vaha pahuch jayenge.

Garima. :- thank you beta.tumne to meri sari problem hi dur ker di.

Fir garima jyoti se bhi baat kerti h or jyoti ko bhi vesa hi ahasas hota h.

Fir kuch der baad sab sone chale jate h.

Agle din.

Aaj karan ka final match tha, or aaj ki fight free wrestling thi . Jiska matlab opponents ko kese bhi kerke jitna h.

Ya to samne wale ko knowk out kerke ya dono m se koi haar man le.

Tabhi ring me sabse pahale karan k opponent ki entry hoti h jiski hight 6.5 feet thi or uski body kafi bhari bharakam thi.

Ya yu kah lo dikhne m bilkul rakshas jesa hi tha. Jise dekh kisi ki hava tight ho jaye.

Uska naam raka tha. Fir karan bhi ring m gaya .Jise dekh use hairani to hui , ki ek 20 sal ka ladka yu final m pahunch gaya fir wo bola.

Raka:- kyu mujhse bhid ker apne aao ka dushman ban raha h bache, ja tujhe ek moka deta hu , haar man le , m tujhe bina kuch kiye chod dunga.

Karan muskurate hue bola :- moka to m tujhe deta hu raka , pahale war ka.

Raka :- kahi tera dimag to kharab ni hogaya h , meri baat man le ager apni bhalayi chahata h to

Karan :- tu bAr bar ladayi rokne ki baat kyu ker raha h , kahi dar to ni lag raha na .

Raka ye sun gusse se pagal ho gaya or dahadte hue bola

Raka:- apne bhagwan ko akhiri baar yaad kerle , kyunki aaj tu yaha se jinda wapas ni jayega.

Karan :- yaad to m apne bhagwan ko jarur karunga raka , lekin aakhiri baar ni , is ghante m pahali baar .

Or unse yahi prathna karunga ki wk tujhe budhi or meri mar khane ki takat dono de.

Ab raka k sir p khun sawar ho gaya tha. Tabhi ring bajti h or fight shuru ho jati h.

Is update m bas itna hi .

Stay tuned.

Note :- friends 80 % chance h ki mee aaj raat ko second update dene ka , to yu hi sath bane rahiyega.
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Update no :- 62.
Jese hi ring baji, to karan or raka satark ho gaye. Karan ne wade k mutabik pahala attack raka ko kerne diya.

Raka ne moke ka pura fayda utha ker ek jordar punch karan k pet m mara.

Yu to karan ko usse koi fark ni pada tha, lekin dikhane k liye halke se dard k impression chahare p late hue bola.

Karan :- bas itna hi dam h tujhme , bol to ese raha tha jese , koi bahut badi top ho.

Chal m tujhe batata hu ki asli punch kise kahate h . Ye bol karan thodi takat se raka k pet m de mara, or raka lagbhag udte hue ring k pole se takraya.

Karan(haste hue) :- are are tum to itne m hi fuss ho gaye, kya bol rahe the , ki m haar man lu, kyu kaha gaya tera dam .

Karan k yu achanak badle is style or ravaiye ko dekh heran hone ki jarurat ni h dosto.

Bat darasal ye hui ki , jab fight se pahale karan or raka ne ek dusre se hath milaya tha.

Tab raka ne karan ka hath daba ker use dard pahuchane ki koshis ki thi , karan ko koi khas farq ya yu kahlo koi farq ni pada.

Ulta karan ki ek shakti jagrit(active) ho gayi , jisse use raka k bare m apne aap hi sab kuch pata chal gaya.

Ye karan ki wo shakti thi , jo kfd ne hi di thi , jisme ye hoga ki , karan jo koi bhi hani pahuchane ki koshis karega to , is shakti ki badolat karan ko us admi k bare m sab kuch pata chal jayega. Jese uska past , present , uski khasiyat or kamjori bhi. Isi shakti k karan ki help se hi to karan ne khan brother ki band bajayi thi.

Or esa hi raka k sath hua , jisse karan ko jo raka k bare m pata chala , uske baad karan ka gussa bhadak gaya.

Kyunki raka ek ghatiya or criminal insan tha. Chori , lut , murder ese kayi bure kaam kiye hue the usne.
Kitni masum ladkiyo ki jindagi kharab ki hui thi usne.

Yaha tak ki wo is had tak gir chuka tha ki usne ek 7 sal ki bachi ko bhi ni choda apni havas k chakkar me.

Karan (dahadte hue ) :- kyu bas itna hi dam tha kya tujhme , namard . Kya teri mardangi bas choti bachiyo p hi chalti h.

Raka khada hua or karan ki or doda or ek bar fir usne ek jordar punch marna chaha , lekin karan ne use dodge ker diya.

Or ek or jordar mukka uske muh pe de mara or haste hue bola.

Karan :- beta ! Tumse na ho payega.

Karan ka ye dialogue sun stadium m mojud sabhi log hasne lagte h.

Karan :- chal tu bhi kya yaad rakhega , ek moka or deta hu tuje , 10 min h tere pass , ager mujhe hara sakta h to ker le koshis ker le.

Ye mera wada h ki 10 min pur hone tak m kuch ni karunga.

Ye sun raka k chahare per ek chamak aajati h or wo jaldi se uth karan p attack kerna shuru ker deta h.

Usne jaker ek jordar laat karan k pet m mari , jisse wo apni jagah se jara sa piche ghisak gaya. Lekin koi khas fark na pada.

Ab raka pura pagal ho gaya tha , usne karan p lato or ghuse ki barsaat ker di , jisse karan thoda bahut ghayal hua.

Wese to karan ki m heel power thi , lekin usne janbhujkar uska prayog ni kiya, ki ager achanak se ghav bharne lage to logo ko shak hoga.

Fir raka ne karan ne karan ko niche gira diya. Lekin karan fir khada ho gaya.

Raka:- sale tu kis mitti ka bana h , itni mar k baad to ache se acha wrestler bhi na uth paye .

Per aaj tu raka k hatho ni bachega sale, tu aaj yaha se 4 kandho p hi jayega bhenc.........


Aaaahhhhhhhhhhh

Raka ne abhi apni baat puri bhi ni ker paya tha ki ek jordar punch uske muh p pada , jisse uske aage 7 8 daat sahid ho gaye. Jo ki karan ka tha, jiski ankhe gusse se lal ho chuki thi

Karan(tez awaaz me) :- tune abhi ek ni apni jindagi ki 2 sabse badi galtiya ker di h.

1 . Baato m ulajh k apne 10 min gava ker.

2 . Or sabse badi galti teri ye h kute ki , tune meri bahan ko gali di. Jo tu ab apne jindagi ki aakhiri galti hi samjh.

Bas ab tera time over ho gaya h, ab apne sare bure kamo ka dand bhugatne ko teyar ho ja.

Raka ne fir ek baar use punch marne ki koshis ki , lekin karan ne uske punch ko bich m hi pakad , uske ek second m ghuma k tod dala

Raka dark mare karahane laga , lekin ab karan rukne k mood m ni tha. Or karan ek jordar puch raka k pet p de mara , jiske dard k raka apne ghutne p aagaya .

Fir karan ne ek jordar lat uske muh p mari jisse wo gir kar tadapne laga.

Karan :- uth na kute , kaha gayi teri mardangi , kyu dard ho raha hai h na. Lekin ye dard un masumo k dard k aage kuch bhi ni h, jinke tumne ghar ujade .

Soch kya bit rahi hogi , un logo k uper jinke ghar k chirag tumne chand peso k liye bhujaye.kya gujrai hogi us maa p, jiske bhudape k sahare ko tune berahami se maar dala.

Fir karan raka ko jabardasti khada kerta h or bola .

Karan:- kya hua sale namard , lad na . Kyu ab kya hua.

Or karan ne ek spin kick uske muh pe jad di or raka fir se gir pada.

Or fir karan uskl ulta ker uska ek per utha ker karan bola.

Karan :- inhi pero ki juti samjhta h na tu har nari ko.

Or ye bol karan ne raka k pero k joint pe jordar laat marke uska per bhi tod diya.

Fir karan ne uska dusra hath pakad k bola .

Karan :- isi hath se tune , un masum ladkiyo ki aabru luti thi na hevan .

Or karan itna bol raka ka dusra hath bhi tod deta h jisse raka ki chikh pure stadium m gunj jati h.

Sabhi karan k is roop ko dekh k heran the.

Or karan ne apne aap ko aakhiri attack k liye teyar kerte hue raka ki tango k bich aate hue bola.

Karan :- or ye us haiwaniyat k liye jo tune us masum bachi k sath ki thi.

Or ye bol karan ne ek jordar laat uske main point p de mari , jisse raka behosh ho gaya.

Refree ne isi ke sath karan ko vijeta ghoshit ker diya gaya. Prize distribution jyoti ki flight k baad hone wala tha.

Karan fir ring se nikal ker nikal ker apni bahano k pass pahuncha , to sabse pahale radha or sonam karan k gale mili.

Radha(khusi se fule na samati hui boli):- many many many congratulations bhai , aakhir aap jit hi gaye.m to kabse bol rahi thi ki aap hi jitoge.


Ye moti to yakin hi ni ker rahi thi mera,man hi ni rahi thi.

Sonam :- congratulations bhaiya , I knew it ki aap hi jitoge.

E bandariya kyu jhut bol rahi h. Mane kab bola .

Karan :- are bas bas ab ladne mat lag jana , khushi ka moka h . Party kis kis ko chahiye.

Dono :- ek sath party , yahooooo.

Fir karan jese hi jyoti ki or bhadta h to , jyoti dod k aake karan k gale lag jati h , or pyaar se uske mathe ko chum boli.

Jyoti :- congratulations my champion bhaiya.

Or ye bol wo karan ko kas k gale laga leti h , jisse karan ki chot dab jati h, jiski uski halki chikh nikal jati h.

Jyoti chikh sun sab samjh jati h or karan ka hath pakad sonam ko boli .

Jyoti :- choti jaldi se hume ek ache doctor k yaha le chal.

Karan :- are gudiya m thik hu.

Jyoti bich m tokte hue .

Jyoti :- aap jara chup hi rahiye , bolte ho thik hu, kitna lag gaya h aapko.

Sonam :- ha bhai , di bilkul sahi bol rahi h.

Or fir wo 3no karan ko clinic leke jati h.

Wahi dusri or naina pandit ji k sath pados k gav apne pahunch gayi apni jeep m.


Thakur jese hi pandit ji ko dekhta h to bhag ke aaker unke pero m gir k bola.

Thakur :- pandit ji , kripya meri bachi ko bacha lijiye , pata ni konsi bala meri bachi k gale pad gayi h.

Jisko koi tantrik ya koi ojha ni bhaga paya , ab aap hi mera antim sahara ho , pandit ji meri bachi ko bacha lijiye.

Pandit ji use uthate hue bole :- are thakur sahab esa mat kijiye, m apni puri koshis karunga.

Fir pandit ji or naina haveli k us kamre m jate h , jaha per thakur ki beti ko bandh k rakha tha.

Kyunki wo bahut hi khunkhar ho chuki thi , wo kisi ko bhi dekhti to marne dodti, usne abhi tak 15 aadmiyon ko buri tarah ghayal ker diya tha .

Wo dikhne m bahut bhayanak lag rahi thi,uske ankho ki putliya sikud k itni choti ho gayi thi , jo use or bhi drawana bana rahi thi.

Pandit ji ne naina ko thakur or uske parivar k pass rahane ko bol , us ladki k pass gaye.


Pandit ji ko dekh wo aatma bahut bhadak gaya.

Ladki(pret) :- pandit tu mera khuch ni bigaad sakta , tu bhi bakiyon k jese khali hath hi jayega yaha se.

Pandit ji uspe gangajal phekte hue bole :- bata kon h tu , kyu pada h is masum k piche.

Ladki :- kyu bhude , kya karega jan ke , tere ye chote mote totke mera kuch ni bigad sakte .

Pandit ji bar bar usper mantra bol k gangajal dalte rahe , us pret ko taklif to bahut ho rahi thi per , koi khas asar bhi ni ho raha tha.

Ladki :- kyu kya hua bhude , bas itna hi jor tha tujhme , ab meri baari h , tu ab bachna to h ni , isliye teri aakhiri khawaish samjh k bata raha hu.

Ye ladki mujhe pasand achuk h pandit or ab yahi meri dulhan banegi .

Pandit ji :- murkhta mat ker dusht , tu ek pret h or ye ek insan , chod de iske sharir ko , mujhe majbur mat ker.

Ladki :- to dikha apni takat budhe m bhi dekhu, kitni takat h tujhme .

Pandit ji apni ankhe padh jal uspe maarte h , is baar us pret ko bahut kasht hota h, per ye kya wo jald hi normal ho jata h.

Pandit ji :- asambhav mere is mantra se to shaktishali se shaktishali pret bhi ni bach sakta.

Tu koi sadharan pret ni ho sakta kon h tu.

Ladki :- m usi prajaati ka hu pandit , jisne tujhe pahale bhi haraya tha, or aaj bhi tu marega.

Ye bolte hue us ladki ne apne full sleeve suit k hath wali side se fad diya. Or us ladki k hatho p ek nishan ubhara hua tha. Kuch esa.






Pandit ji uske nishan ko dekh saham gaye , or wo ladki ne ab apni rasiya tod di, or hava m udte hue , pandit ji k pas aayi or unka gala pakad liya.

Naina(chilate hue ):- babaaa

Pandit ji achanak se tadafte hue bole , beti tu bhag yaha se, teri jan ko khatra h.

Naina :- ni baba m aapko yu chod k kahi ni jaungi.

Ladki :- bhude , uski ni tu apni chinta ker

or ye bol usne bol k pandit ji ko divar p de mara gale se utha k.

Naina :- babaaa.

Ab naina ka krodh badhne laga tha, or yaha wo ladki pandit ji ko baar bar utha utha k idher se udher fek rahi thi.

Pandit ji lahu luhan ho chuke the, per wo bar bar naina ko waha se bhagne ko hi bol rahe the.

Abhi wo ladki kuch or kerti to use achanak se jhatke lagne lage or pandit ji uski pakad se chut gaye.

Esa isliye hua kyunki ab naina se ruka ni gaya or usne apna yantra nikal liya jisse nikalti divya kirne us pret per padne lagi.




Naina gusse se :- bas bahut ho gaya tera dhust aatma , tujhe mere baba ko.marne ka hisab chukana hi hoga.

Lekin wo pret kuch jyada hi shakti shali tha or usne apni shakti se ek gamla hava m utha ker naina k hath pe de mara or naina k hath se wo yantra chut gaya.

Pret :- ladki ab tu or tera baap dono maroge or tumhare sath sath marega ye pura thakur khandan .

Itna bol wo ladki hava m udti hui naina ki or bhadi or naina ko usne apni shaktiyo se dhaka de divar se chipka diya.

Ladki :- ab tujhe koi ni bacha sakta ,

itna bol wo jese hi naina ki gardan pakdni chahi , or jese hi usne naina k gale ko chua .

Tabhi ek jordar current usko laga or wo jaker dur gir pada.

Jab naina ne apne gardan k pass dekha to usne paya , ki uske gale m mojud wo locket chamak raha tha , jo uske gale m bachpan se hi tha.

Ladki :- asambhav ye kese ho sakta h , ki mera tere chune bhar se hi , mane apni adhi shakti kho di.

Naina jaldi se khud ko sambhalti h or jaldi se acha sa moka samjh apna yantra utha leti h.

Per ye kya uske locket se ek laal rang ki roshni nikal ke , uske yantra m sama jati h.

Itne me wo ladki wapas naina ki or bhadti h or fir ek baar naina apna yantra aage ker deti h .

Or is bar nilli roshni ki jagah purple roshni us yantra se nikal k us ladki p padne lagti h.

Or is baar us pret ki halAt kharab hone lagti h, or wo chilate hue bola.

Ladki :- dusht ladki , tune esi kya maya ker di h jo mujhko tak jala rahi h

Naina:- ye maya ni dusht achai ki shakti h , or burayi chahe kitni bhi takat war ho jaye achai k aage ni tik sakti.

Or fir naina ek mantra bolti h jisse us shetan ki chikhe gunj uthati h .

Ladki m mojud shetan ek saye k roop m bahar aagaya jo jal raha tha.

Or wo marte hue bola .

Shetan :- tune mujhe , yani ki ek "trittya" ko marker , bahut badi bhul ki h ladki . Ab tu lambe samay tak jinda ni bachegi. Hamare maharaj jarur badla lenge tere se.

Naina :- tritiya ?

Usne ye shabd dobara is andaz m bola jese puch rahi ho ki ye tritiya kya h.

Lekin ye bol wo saya jal ker gayab ho jata h or wo ladki sahi ho ker behosh ho jati h.

Back to the hero .

Karan apne kamre m shirt less betha tha , or jyoti uske sharir per dava laga rahi thi.

Karan :- aah , gudiya dhire .Or ye kya laga rahi h tu jo itni jalan ho rahi h


Jyoti :- aap to chup hi rahiye , kya jarurat thi bekar m mar khane ki , dekhiye kitni chot lagi h apko.

Ye bolte hue uski ankho m pani aagaye or karan ne use gale se laga k bola .

Karan :- are gudiya ab tu kyu rone lagi , m thik to hu mera bacha, ye dekh

Or karan ne apni ankhe band ker healing power se khud ko thik ker liya.

Tab jaker jyoti ko thodi rahat hui or wo boli.

Jyoti :- per bhai aapko wo sab kerne ki kya jarurat thi. Or ap match k doran aggressive kyu ho gaye the.

Karan use raka k bare m sari baate batata h jise sun jyoti ko raka p gussa bhi aata h or apne bhai p garv bhi hota h.

Jyoti karan ko gale lagate hur :- I really proud of u bhai , aapne bilkul sahi kiya esa hevan ko to esi hi saja milni chahiye.

Fir ese hi dono bhai bahan baate kerte hue so jate h . Agle din kuch khas ni hota or wo din yu hi ghumne firne m nikal jata h.

Aaj jyoti ka final match tha or samne wali opponent ek black belt thi or pichle saal ki winner bhi.

Jyoti or wo ladki pahale to ek dusre se hath mila k all the best bolte h or fir ghanti bajte hi mukabla shuru ho jata h.

Wo ladki aggressive nature ki thi or usne ghanti k bajte hi , attack kerna shuru ker diya.

Lekin apni jyoti uske har ek war ko block kerte hue uske sath khel rahi thi. Or jab laga bahut hua uska khel to ab usne attack shuru ker diye .

Wo us ladki se dugni speed m attack ker rahi thi. Ladki ne khub dat ker jyoti ka mukabla kiya or use achi khasi takkar bhi di .

Lekin akhir kar jyoti ne bazi maar hi li. Or jyoti ko is saal ka winner ghoshit ker diya gaya.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

Stay tuned.

Note :- sorry friends jyoti k final battle ko short m nipta diya , per m is tournament ko lamba ni khichna chahata tha.
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Jese hi jyoti k jitne ki announcement hui , to pure stadium m tournament k pure hone ki khushi m pure auditorium m fire crackers chalu ho gaye.

Jyoti ring se nikalte hi karan ki or bhagi , karan ne bhi muskurate hue apni bahe fela di or jyoti apni full speed se karan k gale lag gayi or karan use gale lagaye hue hi thoda utha k gol gol ghum apni khushi jatane laga.

Jyoti :- dekha bhai , m jit gayi .

Karan (uske mathe ko chumte hue) :- ha meri gudiya jeet hi gayi , per mujhe koi hairani ni h tumhare jitne pe , tere p pura vishwas jo tha mujhe pura bharosa jo h tujh per.

Phir jyoti radha or sonam or radha se bhi gale milti h.

Radha:- congratulations di ,

Sonam.:- congratulations didu.

Jyoti dono k gaalo ko chum ker unhe thank u bolti h.

Fir karan or jyoti ek dusre ka hath pakad price distribution k liye jate h.

Tabhi ek announcement hoti h.

Anchor :- ladies and gentlemen rukawat k liye mafi chahata hu ki , lekin ek bahut hi jaruri announcement kerni h mujhe.

Aaj jo prize distribution ka program hona tha, wo kinhi kaarano se aaj postpone kiya ja raha h.

Or ab prize distribution aaj ni , balki parso hoga, or function ki location kal announce ker di jayegi.

Radha:- shit yaar , m kitni excited thi bhai ko di ko first prize milte hie dekhne k liye, chalo koi baat ni ek din or sahi hum kal ni parso wapas jayenge.

Sonam bhi ye sun ker khush ho gayi ki kam se kam use ek din or mil jayega ,apni saheli or apne bhai bhahan k sath rahane ka.

Per yaha karan tension m aagaya tha , usne garima se ek din pahale lotne ka wada jo kiya tha , kyunki garima ko waha radha ki jarurat thi.

Fir isi baare m sochte hue karan or apni bahano k sath , hotel ki or nikal jata h.

Wahi dusri or

Location :- thakur house.

Naina ne us pret ka ant kerti h , uske baad use thodi kamjori mahasus hoti h.

Tabhi uski najar pandit ji per padti h or wo dod k unke pass jati h jinki halat bahut kharab thi , unka pura sharir lahu luhan ho gaya tha , or wo behosh ho gaye the.

Naina(rote hue ) :- baba , uthiye baba kya hua aapko , are koi jaldi se ambulance ko bulao.

Thakur jaldi se pass k shahar se ambulance bulata h , or jab tak ambulance aaye , tab tak naina ne pandit ji ki first aid ker di.

Thodi hi der m ambulance aajati h ,or pandit ji ko usme letakar hospital ki or nikal jati h.

Naina ki nili ankho se ansu jhar jhar bah rahe the , jisko dekh to kisi ka bhi dil tadaf uthe.

Karib 20 min m ambulance hospital pahunch jati h, or ambulance se nikal ker do compounder unhe hospital me le jate h.

Or ek compounder jaldi se jaa ker doctor ko bula k lata h , doctor ko dekhte hi naina unke pero m gir k roti hui boli .

Naina:- please doctor mere baba ko bacha lo, m apke pao padti hu, mere baba k alawa is duniya m koi ni h.

Doctor(nanina ko uthate hue):- are beti ye kya ker rahi ho utho, m dekhta hu tumhare baba ko.

Ye bol doctor pandit ji ko examine kerta h or bolta h.

Doctor:- oh my god, inki condition bahut hi critical h , ye hua kese .
I m.sorry ye police case h , mujhe police ko info kerna hoga.

Tabhi piche se doctor k kano m ek aawaj padti h.

"Wo sab m dekh lunga doctor sahab , bas pandit ji ko kuch ni hona chahiye"

Ye awaaz thakur ki hi thi , jo ambulance k piche piche hi apni car m aagaya tha.

Doctor :- are thakur sahab aap yaha,

Thakur :- wo sab chodo doctor, abhi bas aap pandit ji ka ilaz kero , or unko kuch ni hona chahiye.

Thakur ek bahut hi powerful, lekin ek dil insaan tha, usko andaza tha ki doctor ye police case wala drama jarur karenge , isliye wo khud bhi unke sath aagaya tha.

Doctor turant pandit ji ko ot m leker jata h , or naina hath jod k thakur se boli.

Naina:- aapka bahut bahut dhanyawad thakur sahab , aapne mere pe bahut bada upkaar kiya h

Thakur :- esa bol k mujhe lajjit mat kero beti , upkaar to tumne pure thakur khandan p kiya h beti , meri bachi ko us shaitan se bacha ker ,
Tum sach me hamare liye masiha ban k aayi ho.

Or ye bol thakur naina k per pakadne ko hota h to naina unhe ro k boli .

NainA:- are thakur sahab ye aap kya ker rahe h, aap mujhse umra , pad or har chij m mujhse bade h , esa kerke mujhe pap ka bhagi na banaye.

Or m kon hoti hu kaha kuch kerne wali, kerne wali to mere bholenath or meri maa jagdamba kali h, unhi ki kripa se m us shaitan ko maar payi.

Aapko dhnyawad kerna h , to un maa jagat janni ko kijiye.

Thakur :- tum sach me mahan ho beti , maa tum.per apni kripa sadev banaye rakhe

Tabhi thakur ki najar naina k sharir per padti h , chote to usko bhi aayi thi , or uske kapde bhi kuch side se fat gaye the.

Thakur jaldi se ek lady doctor ko bulata h or use naina k ilaaz kerne ko bol naina ko bhej deta h uske sath.

Or ek nurse ko kuch pese deker naina k liye ek jodi kapde mangwata h.

Thodi der m naina ki marahm pati ho jati h, or wo thakur k mangwaye hue kapde pahan k ot k bahar beth jati h , or doctor k bahar aane ka intezaar kerne lagti h.

Karib 2 ghante baad doctor bahar aata h or bolta h.

Doctor :- I m sorry thakur sahab , unki halat bahut hi jyada critical h or hum ab kuch ni ker sakte .

Unke paas ab jyada samay ni h , yahi koi 5 6 ghante ka samay h , aap chahe to unhe ghar le ja sakte h.

Naina ye sun k buri tarah tut jati h , use bahut bada jhatka laga tha.

Naina(rote hue) :- kya m apne baba se mil sakti hu.

Doctor :- ha beti , hum abhi thodi der m unhe genral ward m shift kar denge , tum tab unse mil lena.

Thodi der baad pandit ji ko general ward m shift ker diya jata h, or naina pandit ji k side m beth rone lagti h.

Tabhi pandit ji k sharir m halchal hoti h , jise dekh naina apne ansu puch leti h .

Pandit ji ko jese hi hosh aata h , pahale to wo bahut ghabra jate h or unhe naina ki chinta hone lagti h per jab unki najar naina p padti h to unhe rahat pahunchti h.

Pandit ji :- tu thik to h na beti or hum yaha kese pahunche .

Fir naina pandit ji ko sari baat batati h or boli .

Naina:- baba aap chinta mat kijiye ,ap jaldi thik ho jaoge .

Pandit ji :- beti m janta hu ki mera ant samay nikat aachuka h , kyu yu jhut bol ke khud ko taklif de rahi ho.

Ab naina k sabar ka bandh tut jata h or wo jor jor se rote hue pandit ji k gale lag k boli.

Naina:- ni baba , aapko kuch ni hoga , m aapko kuch ni hone dungi , aapko kahi ni jane dungi.

Pandit ji :- beta ye to jindagi ka katu satya h , jiska janm hua h uski mrityu bhi nishchit h . Or tum kabse sach se darne lagi .

Naina:- ni baba m aapko kuch ni hone dungi , m duniya k sabse ache se ache doctor ko dikhaungi, aap jald hi swasth ho jaoge .

Pandit ji :- beta ab iska koi fayda ni h,meri bachi m apne pran is hospital m ni tyagna chahata , mujhe mere ghar , meri maa k pass le ja meri bachi.

Meri ye aakhiri khawaish h ki , m apne praan maa k charno m hi tyagu.

Naina ne bahut koshis ki pandit ji ko samjhane ki or bade doctor k pass le jane ki , lekin pandit ji ni mane , shayad unhe ab apne ant samay k ane ka ahasas ho chuka tha.

Isliye wo wapas ma k mandir jane ko bol rahe the , unhonne sari umra maa ki seva ki thi , or unki yahi khawaish thi , ki wo apne pran maa k charno m tyag.

Akhir m naina ko pandit ji ki jid manni hi padi or usne thakur ki madad se pandit ji ko apne mandir le ker pahunchi .

Or wahi thakur ne mandir k ander ek gada or takiya lagwaya or pandit ji ko uspe leta diya gaya.

Naina wahi side m bethe royi ja rahi thi , or pandit kuch sochte hue bole.

Pandit ji :- beti .

Naina:- ha baba boliye.

Pandit ji :- beti mera ant samay nikat achuka h , lekin m jane se pahale tumhe tumhare satya or tumhare jivan k prayojan se avgat kerwa dena chahata hu .

Taki mrityu k baad meri aatma ko shanti mil sake .

Naina:- kesi sachai baba.

Pandit ji thakur ki or dekhte h or thakur pandit ji ka ishara samjh mandir se bahar chala jata h.fir pandit ji bole.



Pandit ji :- beta , sabse pahale to m tujhse shama chahata hu ki mane tujhse aajtak ye sachai chupayi.

Fir pandit ji bole.

Pandit ji :- beti , satya ye h ki m tumhara , sach m pita ni hu.

Naina ko ye sun bahut bada sock lagta h.

Naina :- ni baba ye satya ni h , kah dijiye , apne jo bola wo jhut h.

Pandit ji (rote hue ) :- ni beti , mane jo bola h wo purntah satya h.mane to bas tumhe ek putri ki tarah pala h . Lekin tumne mujhe kabhi ahasas hi ni hone diya ki tum meri beti ni ho na hi mere man me esa kabhi vichar aaya.

Naina(rote hue boli) :- ager ye satya h to kon h mere pita , kon h wo maa , jisne apni beti ko yu asahay chod diya.

Mujhe janm dene wale bhale hi koi or ho baba , parantu mere liye mere pita mere baba aap hi rahoge.

Naina (gusse me)Mujhe ni janna us maa k bare m , jisne apni bachi ko janm to diya , per use marne chod diya.

Pandit ji :- ni beta , esa ni bolte . Tumhari maa ki bahut badi majburi thi , or abhi bhi vo khatre m.

Naina:- kya ?

Pandit ji :- ha beti , m tumhe batata hu kya kaaran tha , tumhari maa ka tumhe mere pas chodne ka.


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Sham ho chuki thi or karan ki tension or bhi bad gayi thi , kyunki use msg mila tha .

Jiske according prize distribution ceremony parso raat ko thi , pahale to usne socha hua tha , ki ceremony din m ho jayegi or wo sham ko yaha se nikal k raat tak apne ghar pahunch jayenge , per yaha to sab ulta ho raha tha.

Karan radha ko apne room m bulata h or use wo sab bat batata h or bolta h.

Karan :- gudiya , tum kal ki flight se wapas ghar lot jao , aunty ko tumhari bahut jarurat h .

Radha:- nahi bhai m apke bina yaha se kahi ni jane wali , or ek din m koi fark ni padne wala.

Jyoti :- baat ko samjhne ki koshis ker choti , aunty ko waha jarurat h tumhari.

Radha:- ni di mane kaha na m kahi ni jane wali , m aapki prize ceremony dekh ker hi jaungi.

Karan or jyoti use bahut samjhate h per radha man hi ni rahi thi.

Radha(rote hue) :- m samjh gayi , aap ni chahate na m yaha ruku or wo bacho jese rote hue kamre se bhag gayi.

Karan :- are gudiya ruk to.

Tabhi sonam kamre m enter kerti h or boli.

Sonam:- kya hua bhaiya , aap itna pareshan kyu ho or ye radha yu rote hue kyu gayi.

Karan ko sonam ko dekh ek ummid ki kiran najar aati h or karan use sari baat batata h.

Karan :- gudiya ab tu hi radha ko samjha sakti h , kyunki jaha tak m samjh raha hu , prize distribution to bahana h , asal m to uska tumhe chod k jane ka man ni h.

Please choti ab tu hi kuch ker .

Sonam bhi ye baat sun udaas ho jati h , chahati to wo bhi ni thi ki radha jaye , per uska jana jaruri tha, ye soch ker boli.

Sonam :- thik h bhaiya, m radha se baat kerti hu.

Karan sonam ko gale laga ke bola

Karan :- thank you so much gudiya hamari majburi samjhne k liye , m janta hu ki tu bhi bahut udaas h radha k jane se .

Per meri gudiya tu chinta mat ker , hum dobara jald hi aayenge , tumse milne.

Sonam ye sun thoda khush hote hue boli:- per bhai meri ek shart h, ki radha k jane k baad aapko mere ghar p rukna hoga.

Jyoti :- are gudia , tu kyu bina bajah pareshan ho rahi h.

Lekin sonam karan or jyoti ko mana hi leti h or bad jati h radha k kamre ki or .

Jaha radha takiye m muh chupaye roye ja rahi thi.

Sonam uske pass jake uske sir ko sahalate hue boli .

Sonam :- e bandriya kyu ro rahi h or
Ye m kya sun rahi hu tune bhai ki baat ni mani.

Radha sonam ko dekh jhat se uske gale lag rome lagi or boli

Radha :- dekh na sonam , bhai mujhe yaha rukne ni de rahe , m bhai ki prize distribution ceremony dekhna chahati hu.

Sonam :- acha , to ye mote mote aansu , ceremony k liye .

Udaas hone ki acting kerte hue .

Sonam :- or m soch rahi thi , meri saheli mujse dur hone pe udass h .

Radha uski baat ko samjh gai or usko gale lagate hue boli.

Radha:- ha sonu(radha sonam ko pyar se kabhi kabhi sonu bolti h) , sach yahi h ki m tujhe chod k ni jana chahati , jindagi m pahali baar to ek sachi saheli mili muje , ab m usse bichdna ni chahati


Sonam:- m bhi kaha khush hu radhu aap sab k jane se , m jab aap logo se jab pahali baar mili thi , tab m kitni khush hui thi ,m bata ni sakti , bhagwan ne karan bhaiya or jyoti didi itna pyar kerne wale k rup m bhai bahan or tere rup me itni achi saheli jo di bhagwan ne .

Mujhe to pata hi nk chala , kab 2 hafte nikal bhi gaye. M to khud ni chahati ki tum jao , per aunty ko bhi vaha tumhari jarurat h na. Tum hi batao Aunty mere bare m kya sochegi ki kesi saheli mili tumhe , jo usko apni maa. Se hi dur ker rahi h.
Tum chahti ho esa ho .

Radha ne na m sir hilaya.

Sonam :- to fir meri baat maan radhu or kal tum apni mummy k pas chali jao.

M tumhe promise kerti hu , ki jald m tumse milne aayungi, or hum dono fir khub ghumenge. Ghumaogi na mujhe.

Radha sonam k samjhane p maan jati h or boli .

Radha :- thik h sonu , tu bolti h to m jarur jaungi.

Per moti apna wada yaad rakhna , ager tu hamare jane k baad ni ayi humse milne jald or hume bhul gayi to yaha aaker tujhe pitungi .

Sonam:- ha jarur.

Or uske galo ko khichte hue boli

Sonam :- or tu bhi koi bhulne wali item h kya meri bandriya.

Ye bol dono hasne lagti h or dono jake ye baat karan or jyoti ko batati h ki radha man gayi h .Or radha bhi apne behavior k liye karan or jyoti se mafi mangti h.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi .

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Note :- I m very disappointed friends , kal mane ek ni 2 updates diye , fir bhi koi acha response ni aaya , ulta pahle se bhi kam response mila, please friends ager mujhse story m koi romance ya sex ko abhi add ni ker raha abhi ye soch k alawa bhi aapki najar m koi galti h to jarur bataiye .
Ese likhne m maja ni aata.or ha m un writer jesa ni hu ko response na ane ka bahana ker story adhuri chod dete h.
Mane ye pyari story shuru ki h to complete bhi jarur karunga friends , per please apne review jarur diya kijiye
 

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Shi kiya bhai lamba na khich k
Behtareen update
Jyoti ki bAat shi h ki hero ko bina baat maar khake drame nhi karne chaiye maar k khatam karta
Lekin fight thi entertaining
Lekin main mazza naina waali ladai meim aaya
Ye locket ka suspence kya daal diya bhai
Or tetri kya h
Mujhe lagta tha Pandit ji ko to pta hoga apni beti ki takto k baare mein
So usne usko bhagne ki q boli?


Mast update
Keep rocking bhai :)
Thanks for your support bhai
Stay tuned and keep reading
New update on page no :- 319
 
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