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Karan or uski sabhi bahane abhi baraf se khel hi rahe the ki radha ki najar waha kuch logo p padti h, jo waha p skeeying ker rahe the.radha unhe dekh k boli.
Radha :- bhai dekhiye , yaha sab skeeying ker rahe h , chaliye na hum bhi kerte h
Karan :- ni gudiya , bilkul ni . Humme se kisi ko skeeying ni aati yaha, or hum apne shahar m bhi ni h.
Bhagwan na kare tumhe kuch ho gaya to m aunty ko kya jwab dunga
Karan ne ye baat isliye boli ki use aaj subah se hi ek bade khatre ka anubhav ho raha tha , isliye use radha ki chinta thi , kyunki use dar tha ki radha k sath koi anhoni na ho jaye.
Radha :- please bhaiya man jaiye na , dekhiye na sab ker rahe h skeeying. Ager try ni karenge to sikhenge kese.
Sonam tu kuch bol na bhai ko.
Sonam :- ha bhai aap chinta mat kijiye ye jagah bilkul safe h , or rahi baat sikhne ki . To m hu na bhai .
Jyoti :- tumhe skeeying aati h , gudiya
Sonam :- ha di , mane skeeying sikhi h.akhir shimla ki hi to hu m. Yaha bache bache ko skeeying aati h.
Fir kya tha , sonam ki baat man ker karan or jyoti ko haa bolni hi padi.
Fir charo bhai bahan skeeying ka saman , pass ki hi ek shop se rent p lete h.
Fir sonam unhe sikhane lagti h , karan or jyoti to hamesha ki tarah bahut jaldi sikh k perfect ho jate h.
Sonam bhi ye dekh k heran ho jati h.
Sonam :- wow bhai so impressive , aap or di to kitni aasani se sikh gaye , kahi aap jhut to ni bol rahe na ki aapko skeeying ni aati.
Sonam ki last sun k radha hasne lagti h , or sath m karan or jyoti bhi . Kyunki unko wo din yaad aajata h , jab radha karan or jyoti ko dance sikha rahi thi , or same line usne bhi boli thi.
Or jab sonam unse hasne ka kaaran puchti h to , jyoti bolti h.
Jyoti :- manna padega choti , tu or radha sahi maine m achi saheliyan banogi , or banogi kya ban hi chuki ho kitna kuch common h tum dono m , bolne ka style , dressing sense .
Koi bhi tum dono ko dekh kah hi ni sakta ki tum dono abhi kuch dino pahale hi mile ho. Sab ye hi samjhenge ki tum kafi lambe time se ek dusre ko janti ho.
Jyoti ki baat bilkul sahi thi , dono m bahut kuch ya yu hi kah lo sab kuch hi common tha.
Sonam :- ha didi , Ap bilkul sahi bol rahi ho , is bandariya se jabse mili hu , ek baar bhi mujhe esa ni laga ki hum pahali baar mile h .
Radha :- ha bhaiya , mujhe bhi esa kabhi ni laga ki hum anjaan h , balki is moti k sath rahana to mujhe acha lagne laga h.
Fir ese hi thodi bate , hoti rahane k baad . Sab skeeying kerne lagte h, karan ka sara dhayan to sirf sonam or radha p tha.
Lekin yahi usse chuk ho gayi , wo radha or jyoti p najar rakhne k chakkar m uska dhyan jyoti se hat gaya.
Or jyoti thoda skeeying kerte hue aage nikal gayi , tabhi ek bahut tez aawaz hu jese baraf sarak rahi ho.
Jisse karan or baki 2no ka dhyan is taraf gaya ,
Sonam :- bhai ye to baraf sarakne ki aawaz h , hume yaha se chalna chahiye .
Karan :- ha tu sahi kah rahi h, chalo radha , chalo gudiya(jyoti)
Ye baat usne bina aaspas dekhe boli thi.
Radha(tez aawaz me) :- bhaiya mujhe aas paas di kahi ni dikhayi de rahi.
Karan (chonkte hue) :- kya ! Ab ye kaha chali gayi .
Tabhi karan k kaan m jyoti ki dari hui or madad mangti hui chikh sunayi di.
Karan turant us awaaz ki or doda.or uske piche piche hi radha or sonam bhi .
Karan or baki 2no jab pahuchte h to jo dekhte h to wo ghabra jate h.
Kyunki jyoti downhill ki or bhadti ja rahi thi. Or uske piche kayi tan snow sarakte hue bhad rahi thi.
Jyoti ko samjh ni aaraha tha ki wo kya kare, kyunki wo rukti to baraf k niche dab jati.
Or ager na rukti to aage khai thi usme gir jati .
Radha(rote hue):- bhai kuch kijiye , di ko bacha lo
Karan (jaldi se apne skiing equipment bandhate hue bola) :- tu ro mat gudiya , m apni jaan ko kuch ni hone ni dunga.
Or ye bol wo ek dusri side se jyoti ki or badh gaya, itne m sonam chilati h.
Sonam :- bhai ,ruk jaiye.
Per karan ni rukta , ye dekh sonam karan k piche bhagne ko hoti h per radha use pakad leti h.
Radha(chillate hue) :- kya ker rahi h tu , sonam pagal ho gayi h kya tu.
Sonam (rote hue) :- mujhe jane de radha , di k sath sath bhai ki jaan bhi khatre m h.
Is disaster m kisi bhi tarah hum di ko bachaya ni ja sakta , hume special force ko hi bulana padta ,
Lekin ab bhai ki bhi jaan khatre m h.
Or wahi karan tezi se jyoti k pass pahuch gaya tha or karan jyoti ki or apna hath ker bola.
Karan :- gudiya , jaldi se mera hath pakad.
Jyoti :- bhai aap yaha kyu aaye , ab aapki jan ko bhi khatra aachuka h.
Karan (chillate hue ) :- to kya m apni ankho k samne apni jaan ko mot k muh m jate hue dekhta ,jaldi se mera hath pakad gudiya .
Jyoti apne hath m liya hua equipment chod karan k hath pakad leti h.
Wahi sonam special force se contact kerne ki koshis kee rahi thi.
Per hairani ki baat ye thi ki , unse koi contact uska ni ho pa raha tha network problem ki vajah se shayad.
Tabhi wo dono dekhti h ki , karan or jyoti ek dusre ka hath pakde niche ki or badhe hi jaa rahe h , ki tabhi wo dono piche se aarahi snow k lapete m aajate h or dikhayi dena band ho jate hue.
Radha or sonam ek sath chillati h.
Radha :- bhaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
Sonam :- diiiiiiiiiiiiiii
Ab unki halat wo ho gayi thi ki kato to khun ni , dono apni sudh budh kho ghutne k bal vahi beth rone lagii.
Dono ki rote rote halat bahut buri ho gayi thi . Ki tabhi waha thahako ki hasi chutne lagi.
Ye kuch ladke the , jo dikhne m hi bahut bhayanak the . Ankho m putliya ni thi, or dant bahar ki or nikale hue the.
Yani ki wo sabhi pret(ghost) the.un preton k group ka leader bola.
Pl(pret leader) :- hahaha, bahut uchal rahe the sale , thodi bahut mayavi shaktiya sikh ker .
Unhone humare sathiyo ko marne ka jo dussahas kiya tha aakhir uska badla humne le hi liya.
Ye unhi sathiyo ki baat ker rahe the ,dosto jinko jyoti ne downhill pe mara tha.
Ha sahi samjhe aap sab dosto wo ladke bhi sabhi pret hi the.or unhi ladko ka ek sathi jo , us time kahi or shikar kerne gaya hua tha , or jab wo lota , to usne karan or jyoti k hatho apne sathiyon ko marta dekh use gussa to bahut aaya per wo akela kuch ker ni sakta tha.
To wo pet apne baki sathiyo k pass aaker , planning kerne laga.
Or aaj unhe moka mil hi gaya , unhone jese hi jyoti ko akele dekh , apni shaktiyo se unhonne baraf ko sarka diya. Yahi plan tha unka ki wo jyoti or karan ko yu Mar denge or fir radha or sonam ko le jayenge apne sath.
Pl :- inhi ladkiyo k liye hi un kamino ne mere sathiyo or mere bhai (l1) ko mara tha na, ab vo dono to rahe ni , ab inhe koi ni bacha sakta .
Ek pret bola:- sardar dikhne m dono mast maal h, kyu na hum inke sath maje kare.
Pl :- ni , inhe to m maharaj vikral k hawale karunga , taki unka kaam pura ho jaye.
Or ager maraj khush ho gaye to hume esi ladkiyo ki koi kami ni hogi.
Ye bol vo wo radha or sonam ki or bhadne lage , lekin radha or sonam ko to kuch hosh hi ni tha.wo to karan or jyoti ki mot k sadme m ja chuki thi.
Lekin isse pahale ek pret radha ko chu pata , use ek bahut hi bhayanak jhatka lagta h. Or wo bahut dur jaa ker girta h.or girte hi mar jata h.
Or ek pret jese hi sonam ko chune ki koshish kerta h to , uska sharir jalne lagta h. Or wo wahi rakh ho jata h.
Pl (chillate hue) :- kiski ye majal , jisne mere aadmi ko marne ki koshis ki , himmat h to samne aa.
Or apne sare aadmiyo ko bolta h .
Pl:- dekh kya rahe ho , nikamo dhundo usko.
Abhi baki sab dhundne k liye ja hi rahe the ki tabhi sabke kano m aawaz gunjati h.
"Mujhe dhundh rahe ho ".
Ye awaz jese hi radha or sonam k kano m padti h to unhe khat se hosh aata h or jese hi wo us aawaz ki or us shaks ko dekhti h to unki khusi ka koi thikana ni rahata.
Dono(jor se) :- bhaiya , didi .
Ye bolte hue unki or dodi.
Ji ha ye awaz karan ki thi , or uske sath jyoti bhi thi.
Dono bhag ke karan or jyoti k gale lag jati h.
Radha(rote hue):- bhaiya aap thik to ho na. Pata h hum kitna dar gaye the.
Sonam:- ha didi hume to laga ki humne aap dono ko kho diya.
Karan or jyoti pyar se unhe shant karane lage. Or jab wo dono shant hui to karan ne dono k sir ko sahalate hue unhe gahari nind m sula diya.
Pl:-ni , ye ni ho sakta , tum dono bach kese gaye , mane khud apni ankho se tumhe us baraf k niche dafn hote hue dekha tha.
Karan(haste hue bola ) :-
Akaal mrityu wo mare jo kaam kare chandal ka.
Kaal bhi uska kuch bigad na sake jo bhakt ho mahakal ka.
Flashback.
Aaj subah karan or jyoti ko isi ghatna k hone ka , purva anuman hua tha , dhyan me .
To karan ne pahale hi aaj , radha or sonam k charo or ek kavach bana diya tha.isiliye un preto ka ye haal hua.
Or jyoti ko yu khatre m dekh karan samjh gaya tha ki ye bhi unhi ka plan h . Isliye jab wo.jyoti k pass pahunch ker uska hath pakda .
Or man hi man usne mahadev ki prathna ki.
Karan:- ॐ नमः शिवाय।
Or isike sath wo dono teleport ho ek safe jagah pahuch gaye . Per un preto ko samne lane k liye wo itni der samne ni aaye , apni bahano k.
Pl:-tum , barf k tufan se to bach gaye . Per ab mujhse ni bach paoge
Ye bol wo apna hath uper kerta h or uske hatho m ek talvaar aagayi or apne sabhi sathiyo ko bola .
Pl:- aakraman .
Unko apni or aata dekh jyoti aage bhadne lagi to karan ne uska hath pakad ke majakiya andaaz m bola.
Karan :- are thand paa ,meri babbar sherni thand paa . Are meri jaan kuch mujhe bhi kerne de. yaar is story ka hero hu m yaar.
Verna reader kya bolenge , ki heroin ne to apne hero ko to side character bana k rakh diya h.
Jyoti kuch ni boli or halka sa haste hue piche ja ker radha or jyoti k pass beth gayi.
Ab baari thi karan k action ki , pahale 2 pret hatho m talvaar liye hue ,karan ki or aaye or ek sath war kerna chaha ,
Per karan ne unke hath ko bich me hi apne hatho se pakad liya, or unke hath hi ukhad dale.
Or unke hatho k jamin per fek ek jabardast spin kick mar di.or usi k sath unka ram nam satya h ho gaya.
Or fir karan ne dono ki talvaro ko ek sath dono m leliya.
Pl gusse se chillate :- aaj tu jinda ni bachega.
Karan:- abe bol bachan band ker , or sabhi ko ek sath bhej , mere pass jyada time ni h vele.
Abki wo pret kul 50 the . Abki bar 20 pret ek sath karan ki or dode.
Karan apni ankhe band kerta h or jor se hava m kudta h or pata hi ni kaha gayab ho jata h hava me.
thodi der baad un preto k jhund k bich ek aag ka gola girta h or wo 20 ke 20 pret jal k rakh ho jate h.
Per ye kya , wo koi aag ka gola ni apna karan tha , jiske pure sharir se aag nikal rahi thi , per herani ki baat to ye thi ki usko usse koi fark ni pad raha tha.
Yaha tak ki uski hatho m jo talvare thi wo bhi jal rahi thi.
Ab karan baat k mood m bilkul ni tha , or wo baki preto ki or doda .
Jate hi ek pret ko jordar laat de mari , jiske sath sath 4 pret usse takra k piche ki or gire or jal k rakh ho gaye.
Or fir karan ne apni talvaro ka kamal dikhana shuru ker diya , wo dono hatho se talvar chala raha tha.
Or jis disha m karan ki talvar chalti usi disha m khade pret , ghayal ho jal rahe the.
Fir karan ne bhag ker hava me chalang lagayi , jiski vajah se jo uske sharir se aag nikal rahi thi , uski lapte preto p girne lagi or wo rakh hone lage, jese thor ne ragnrok movie m kiya tha .
Ab sir pl bacha tha, karan or pl ab ek dusre ki or dode, pl bhi acha talvar baz tha , usne karan ko kaafi takar di .
Per wo bhi jyada der tik ni paya, or karan ne ek war kerke , uski talvaar gira di.
Karan :- marne se pahale ya baat samjh lo dusht , burayi chahe jitni takat war ho lekin achai se kabhi ni jit sakti . Aaj jese tera ant hone jaa raha h, shighra hi tere us raja vikral k pap karmo ka dand milega.
Ye bol karan ne pl ki khopdi uda di .
Or wo bhi jal k rakh ho gaya.
Fir karan apne aap ko normal kerke apni bahano ki or bhadta h.
Location :- raampur .
Jis din karan or jyoti k sath ye sab ghatna hui usi din ki subah k time tha.
Aaj mata mahakali ki puja pandit ji ni , naina ker rahi thi. Usne apne hatho se maa ka bhog, unki phulo ki mala banayi thi.
Mandir ki saaf safayi se leker , har ek kaam wahi ker rahi thi.
Pandit :- are meri bachi tumhe ma ki seva kerni hi h to khushi se kero na , per mujhe kyu rok rahi ho beti kam se kam apni madad to kerne do.
Naina:- ni baba , jab tak m yaha hu chutiyo m, tabtak aapko koi kaam ni kerne dungi m . Mane aapko kitni baar bola ki aap bhi shahar aajaye or mandir ki dekhbhal k liye kisi or ko rakh lijiye.
Per aap h ki meri sunte hi ni ho , ab m bhi aspki kuch ni sungi.
Pandit ji:- are meri pyari bachi , mujhe to maa ki seva kerne m aanand milta h . Or wese bhi meri sari jindagi isi ganv me hi gujari h to , beta is jagah ko chod k jane ka man ni kerta beta.
Naina:- wo sab m ni janti baba, ab aap aaram kijiye.
Pandit ji ko naina ki baat manni hi padi, fir naina ne sari teyari puri kerne k baad maa ki aati gana shuru kiya.
Naina :-
अम्बे तू है जगदम्बे काली, जय दुर्गे खप्पर वाली,
तेरे ही गुण गायें भारती, ओ मैया हम सब उतारे तेरी आरती
अम्बे तू है जगदम्बे काली, जय दुर्गे खप्पर वाली, तेरे ही गुण गायें भारती,
ओ मैया हम सब उतारे तेरी आरती
[तेरे भक्त जनों पे माता भीड पड़ी है भारी दानव दल पर टूट पड़ो माँ करके सिंह सवारी] x२ सौ-सौ सिहों से भी बलशाली, है दस भुजाओं वाली, दुखियों के दुखड़े निवारती
ओ मैया हम सब उतारे तेरी आरती अम्बे तू है जगदम्बे काली, जय दुर्गे खप्पर वाली, तेरे ही गुण गायें भारती
, ओ मैया हम सब उतारे तेरी आरती
[माँ-बेटे का है इस जग में बड़ा ही निर्मल नाता पूत-कपूत सुने हैं पर ना माता सुनी कुमाता] x२ सब पे करूणा दर्शाने वाली, अमृत बरसाने वाली दुखियों के दुखड़े निवारती
ओ मैया हम सब उतारे तेरी आरती अम्बे तू है जगदम्बे काली, जय दुर्गे खप्पर वाली, तेरे ही गुण गायें भारती,
ओ मैया हम सब उतारे तेरी आरती
[नहीं मांगते धन और दौलत, न चांदी न सोना हम तो मांगें माँ तेरे मन में एक छोटा सा कोना] x२ सबकी बिगड़ी बनाने वाली, लाज बचाने वाली सतियों के सत को संवारती ओ मैया हम सब उतारे तेरी आरती अम्बे तू है जगदम्बे काली, जय दुर्गे खप्पर वाली, तेरे ही गुण गायें भारती, ओ मैया हम सब उतारे तेरी आरती ओ मैया हम सब उतारे तेरी आरती ओ मैया हम सब उतारे तेरी आरती ओ मैया हम सब उतारे तेरी आरती..
Naina ki madhur awaaz sun sabhi bhaktagan , mantra mugdh ho gaye.
Fir aarti k baad , sabhi bhaktagan naina ki tarif ker rahe the.
Fir naina ne jo bhog rupi halwa banaya tha, naina use sabhi ko prasad k rup m.batane lagi.
Or jese hi sabne wo prasad chakha , to unhe esa pratit hua , jese khana sakshat maa annapurna ne hi apne hatho se banaya ho.
Sabhi log 3 -4 baar prasad lekker khane lage. Fir dopahar k time jab maa ka vishram ka samay hota h or mandir k dwar band hote h.
Us time naina pandit ji k sath m bethi khana kha rahi thi . Ki tabhi ek aadmi dodta hua waha aaya, kyunki ghar ka main darwaza khula tha.
Pandit ji use pani pilate h or bole
Pandit ji :- kya hua bhai , tum ese ghabraye hue kyu ho .
Aadmi hath jod k pandit ji ko pranam kerke bola .
Aadmi :- pandit ji, mujhe pados k ganv se thakur sahab ne bheja h , unki badi beti m ek bahut hi shaktishali pret ghus gaya h.hamare yaha ka koi ojha tantrik, unhe thik ni ker paya , ab aap hi hmari aakhiri ummid h , kripya hamari sahayta kijiye.
Pandit ji man jate h , tabhi naina boli
Naina:- baba m bhi aapke sath chalti hu
Pandit ji :- are beti tumhe aane ki kya jarurat h, tum.yahi ruko m aata hu.
Per naina ni mani ,or pandit ji k sath chal padi. Kyunki use khatre ka ahasas ho raha tha.
Aaj k liye itna hi.
Stay tuned.
Karan or uski sabhi bahane abhi baraf se khel hi rahe the ki radha ki najar waha kuch logo p padti h, jo waha p skeeying ker rahe the.radha unhe dekh k boli.
Radha :- bhai dekhiye , yaha sab skeeying ker rahe h , chaliye na hum bhi kerte h
Karan :- ni gudiya , bilkul ni . Humme se kisi ko skeeying ni aati yaha, or hum apne shahar m bhi ni h.
Bhagwan na kare tumhe kuch ho gaya to m aunty ko kya jwab dunga
Karan ne ye baat isliye boli ki use aaj subah se hi ek bade khatre ka anubhav ho raha tha , isliye use radha ki chinta thi , kyunki use dar tha ki radha k sath koi anhoni na ho jaye.
Radha :- please bhaiya man jaiye na , dekhiye na sab ker rahe h skeeying. Ager try ni karenge to sikhenge kese.
Sonam tu kuch bol na bhai ko.
Sonam :- ha bhai aap chinta mat kijiye ye jagah bilkul safe h , or rahi baat sikhne ki . To m hu na bhai .
Jyoti :- tumhe skeeying aati h , gudiya
Sonam :- ha di , mane skeeying sikhi h.akhir shimla ki hi to hu m. Yaha bache bache ko skeeying aati h.
Fir kya tha , sonam ki baat man ker karan or jyoti ko haa bolni hi padi.
Fir charo bhai bahan skeeying ka saman , pass ki hi ek shop se rent p lete h.
Fir sonam unhe sikhane lagti h , karan or jyoti to hamesha ki tarah bahut jaldi sikh k perfect ho jate h.
Sonam bhi ye dekh k heran ho jati h.
Sonam :- wow bhai so impressive , aap or di to kitni aasani se sikh gaye , kahi aap jhut to ni bol rahe na ki aapko skeeying ni aati.
Sonam ki last sun k radha hasne lagti h , or sath m karan or jyoti bhi . Kyunki unko wo din yaad aajata h , jab radha karan or jyoti ko dance sikha rahi thi , or same line usne bhi boli thi.
Or jab sonam unse hasne ka kaaran puchti h to , jyoti bolti h.
Jyoti :- manna padega choti , tu or radha sahi maine m achi saheliyan banogi , or banogi kya ban hi chuki ho kitna kuch common h tum dono m , bolne ka style , dressing sense .
Koi bhi tum dono ko dekh kah hi ni sakta ki tum dono abhi kuch dino pahale hi mile ho. Sab ye hi samjhenge ki tum kafi lambe time se ek dusre ko janti ho.
Jyoti ki baat bilkul sahi thi , dono m bahut kuch ya yu hi kah lo sab kuch hi common tha.
Sonam :- ha didi , Ap bilkul sahi bol rahi ho , is bandariya se jabse mili hu , ek baar bhi mujhe esa ni laga ki hum pahali baar mile h .
Radha :- ha bhaiya , mujhe bhi esa kabhi ni laga ki hum anjaan h , balki is moti k sath rahana to mujhe acha lagne laga h.
Fir ese hi thodi bate , hoti rahane k baad . Sab skeeying kerne lagte h, karan ka sara dhayan to sirf sonam or radha p tha.
Lekin yahi usse chuk ho gayi , wo radha or jyoti p najar rakhne k chakkar m uska dhyan jyoti se hat gaya.
Or jyoti thoda skeeying kerte hue aage nikal gayi , tabhi ek bahut tez aawaz hu jese baraf sarak rahi ho.
Jisse karan or baki 2no ka dhyan is taraf gaya ,
Sonam :- bhai ye to baraf sarakne ki aawaz h , hume yaha se chalna chahiye .
Karan :- ha tu sahi kah rahi h, chalo radha , chalo gudiya(jyoti)
Ye baat usne bina aaspas dekhe boli thi.
Radha(tez aawaz me) :- bhaiya mujhe aas paas di kahi ni dikhayi de rahi.
Karan (chonkte hue) :- kya ! Ab ye kaha chali gayi .
Tabhi karan k kaan m jyoti ki dari hui or madad mangti hui chikh sunayi di.
Karan turant us awaaz ki or doda.or uske piche piche hi radha or sonam bhi .
Karan or baki 2no jab pahuchte h to jo dekhte h to wo ghabra jate h.
Kyunki jyoti downhill ki or bhadti ja rahi thi. Or uske piche kayi tan snow sarakte hue bhad rahi thi.
Jyoti ko samjh ni aaraha tha ki wo kya kare, kyunki wo rukti to baraf k niche dab jati.
Or ager na rukti to aage khai thi usme gir jati .
Radha(rote hue):- bhai kuch kijiye , di ko bacha lo
Karan (jaldi se apne skiing equipment bandhate hue bola) :- tu ro mat gudiya , m apni jaan ko kuch ni hone ni dunga.
Or ye bol wo ek dusri side se jyoti ki or badh gaya, itne m sonam chilati h.
Sonam :- bhai ,ruk jaiye.
Per karan ni rukta , ye dekh sonam karan k piche bhagne ko hoti h per radha use pakad leti h.
Radha(chillate hue) :- kya ker rahi h tu , sonam pagal ho gayi h kya tu.
Sonam (rote hue) :- mujhe jane de radha , di k sath sath bhai ki jaan bhi khatre m h.
Is disaster m kisi bhi tarah hum di ko bachaya ni ja sakta , hume special force ko hi bulana padta ,
Lekin ab bhai ki bhi jaan khatre m h.
Or wahi karan tezi se jyoti k pass pahuch gaya tha or karan jyoti ki or apna hath ker bola.
Karan :- gudiya , jaldi se mera hath pakad.
Jyoti :- bhai aap yaha kyu aaye , ab aapki jan ko bhi khatra aachuka h.
Karan (chillate hue ) :- to kya m apni ankho k samne apni jaan ko mot k muh m jate hue dekhta ,jaldi se mera hath pakad gudiya .
Jyoti apne hath m liya hua equipment chod karan k hath pakad leti h.
Wahi sonam special force se contact kerne ki koshis kee rahi thi.
Per hairani ki baat ye thi ki , unse koi contact uska ni ho pa raha tha network problem ki vajah se shayad.
Tabhi wo dono dekhti h ki , karan or jyoti ek dusre ka hath pakde niche ki or badhe hi jaa rahe h , ki tabhi wo dono piche se aarahi snow k lapete m aajate h or dikhayi dena band ho jate hue.
Radha or sonam ek sath chillati h.
Radha :- bhaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
Sonam :- diiiiiiiiiiiiiii
Ab unki halat wo ho gayi thi ki kato to khun ni , dono apni sudh budh kho ghutne k bal vahi beth rone lagii.
Dono ki rote rote halat bahut buri ho gayi thi . Ki tabhi waha thahako ki hasi chutne lagi.
Ye kuch ladke the , jo dikhne m hi bahut bhayanak the . Ankho m putliya ni thi, or dant bahar ki or nikale hue the.
Yani ki wo sabhi pret(ghost) the.un preton k group ka leader bola.
Pl(pret leader) :- hahaha, bahut uchal rahe the sale , thodi bahut mayavi shaktiya sikh ker .
Unhone humare sathiyo ko marne ka jo dussahas kiya tha aakhir uska badla humne le hi liya.
Ye unhi sathiyo ki baat ker rahe the ,dosto jinko jyoti ne downhill pe mara tha.
Ha sahi samjhe aap sab dosto wo ladke bhi sabhi pret hi the.or unhi ladko ka ek sathi jo , us time kahi or shikar kerne gaya hua tha , or jab wo lota , to usne karan or jyoti k hatho apne sathiyon ko marta dekh use gussa to bahut aaya per wo akela kuch ker ni sakta tha.
To wo pet apne baki sathiyo k pass aaker , planning kerne laga.
Or aaj unhe moka mil hi gaya , unhone jese hi jyoti ko akele dekh , apni shaktiyo se unhonne baraf ko sarka diya. Yahi plan tha unka ki wo jyoti or karan ko yu Mar denge or fir radha or sonam ko le jayenge apne sath.
Pl :- inhi ladkiyo k liye hi un kamino ne mere sathiyo or mere bhai (l1) ko mara tha na, ab vo dono to rahe ni , ab inhe koi ni bacha sakta .
Ek pret bola:- sardar dikhne m dono mast maal h, kyu na hum inke sath maje kare.
Pl :- ni , inhe to m maharaj vikral k hawale karunga , taki unka kaam pura ho jaye.
Or ager maraj khush ho gaye to hume esi ladkiyo ki koi kami ni hogi.
Ye bol vo wo radha or sonam ki or bhadne lage , lekin radha or sonam ko to kuch hosh hi ni tha.wo to karan or jyoti ki mot k sadme m ja chuki thi.
Lekin isse pahale ek pret radha ko chu pata , use ek bahut hi bhayanak jhatka lagta h. Or wo bahut dur jaa ker girta h.or girte hi mar jata h.
Or ek pret jese hi sonam ko chune ki koshish kerta h to , uska sharir jalne lagta h. Or wo wahi rakh ho jata h.
Pl (chillate hue) :- kiski ye majal , jisne mere aadmi ko marne ki koshis ki , himmat h to samne aa.
Or apne sare aadmiyo ko bolta h .
Pl:- dekh kya rahe ho , nikamo dhundo usko.
Abhi baki sab dhundne k liye ja hi rahe the ki tabhi sabke kano m aawaz gunjati h.
"Mujhe dhundh rahe ho ".
Ye awaz jese hi radha or sonam k kano m padti h to unhe khat se hosh aata h or jese hi wo us aawaz ki or us shaks ko dekhti h to unki khusi ka koi thikana ni rahata.
Dono(jor se) :- bhaiya , didi .
Ye bolte hue unki or dodi.
Ji ha ye awaz karan ki thi , or uske sath jyoti bhi thi.
Dono bhag ke karan or jyoti k gale lag jati h.
Radha(rote hue):- bhaiya aap thik to ho na. Pata h hum kitna dar gaye the.
Sonam:- ha didi hume to laga ki humne aap dono ko kho diya.
Karan or jyoti pyar se unhe shant karane lage. Or jab wo dono shant hui to karan ne dono k sir ko sahalate hue unhe gahari nind m sula diya.
Pl:-ni , ye ni ho sakta , tum dono bach kese gaye , mane khud apni ankho se tumhe us baraf k niche dafn hote hue dekha tha.
Karan(haste hue bola ) :-
Akaal mrityu wo mare jo kaam kare chandal ka.
Kaal bhi uska kuch bigad na sake jo bhakt ho mahakal ka.
Flashback.
Aaj subah karan or jyoti ko isi ghatna k hone ka , purva anuman hua tha , dhyan me .
To karan ne pahale hi aaj , radha or sonam k charo or ek kavach bana diya tha.isiliye un preto ka ye haal hua.
Or jyoti ko yu khatre m dekh karan samjh gaya tha ki ye bhi unhi ka plan h . Isliye jab wo.jyoti k pass pahunch ker uska hath pakda .
Or man hi man usne mahadev ki prathna ki.
Karan:- ॐ नमः शिवाय।
Or isike sath wo dono teleport ho ek safe jagah pahuch gaye . Per un preto ko samne lane k liye wo itni der samne ni aaye , apni bahano k.
Pl:-tum , barf k tufan se to bach gaye . Per ab mujhse ni bach paoge
Ye bol wo apna hath uper kerta h or uske hatho m ek talvaar aagayi or apne sabhi sathiyo ko bola .
Pl:- aakraman .
Unko apni or aata dekh jyoti aage bhadne lagi to karan ne uska hath pakad ke majakiya andaaz m bola.
Karan :- are thand paa ,meri babbar sherni thand paa . Are meri jaan kuch mujhe bhi kerne de. yaar is story ka hero hu m yaar.
Verna reader kya bolenge , ki heroin ne to apne hero ko to side character bana k rakh diya h.
Jyoti kuch ni boli or halka sa haste hue piche ja ker radha or jyoti k pass beth gayi.
Ab baari thi karan k action ki , pahale 2 pret hatho m talvaar liye hue ,karan ki or aaye or ek sath war kerna chaha ,
Per karan ne unke hath ko bich me hi apne hatho se pakad liya, or unke hath hi ukhad dale.
Or unke hatho k jamin per fek ek jabardast spin kick mar di.or usi k sath unka ram nam satya h ho gaya.
Or fir karan ne dono ki talvaro ko ek sath dono m leliya.
Pl gusse se chillate :- aaj tu jinda ni bachega.
Karan:- abe bol bachan band ker , or sabhi ko ek sath bhej , mere pass jyada time ni h vele.
Abki wo pret kul 50 the . Abki bar 20 pret ek sath karan ki or dode.
Karan apni ankhe band kerta h or jor se hava m kudta h or pata hi ni kaha gayab ho jata h hava me.
thodi der baad un preto k jhund k bich ek aag ka gola girta h or wo 20 ke 20 pret jal k rakh ho jate h.
Per ye kya , wo koi aag ka gola ni apna karan tha , jiske pure sharir se aag nikal rahi thi , per herani ki baat to ye thi ki usko usse koi fark ni pad raha tha.
Yaha tak ki uski hatho m jo talvare thi wo bhi jal rahi thi.
Ab karan baat k mood m bilkul ni tha , or wo baki preto ki or doda .
Jate hi ek pret ko jordar laat de mari , jiske sath sath 4 pret usse takra k piche ki or gire or jal k rakh ho gaye.
Or fir karan ne apni talvaro ka kamal dikhana shuru ker diya , wo dono hatho se talvar chala raha tha.
Or jis disha m karan ki talvar chalti usi disha m khade pret , ghayal ho jal rahe the.
Fir karan ne bhag ker hava me chalang lagayi , jiski vajah se jo uske sharir se aag nikal rahi thi , uski lapte preto p girne lagi or wo rakh hone lage, jese thor ne ragnrok movie m kiya tha .
Ab sir pl bacha tha, karan or pl ab ek dusre ki or dode, pl bhi acha talvar baz tha , usne karan ko kaafi takar di .
Per wo bhi jyada der tik ni paya, or karan ne ek war kerke , uski talvaar gira di.
Karan :- marne se pahale ya baat samjh lo dusht , burayi chahe jitni takat war ho lekin achai se kabhi ni jit sakti . Aaj jese tera ant hone jaa raha h, shighra hi tere us raja vikral k pap karmo ka dand milega.
Ye bol karan ne pl ki khopdi uda di .
Or wo bhi jal k rakh ho gaya.
Fir karan apne aap ko normal kerke apni bahano ki or bhadta h.
Location :- raampur .
Jis din karan or jyoti k sath ye sab ghatna hui usi din ki subah k time tha.
Aaj mata mahakali ki puja pandit ji ni , naina ker rahi thi. Usne apne hatho se maa ka bhog, unki phulo ki mala banayi thi.
Mandir ki saaf safayi se leker , har ek kaam wahi ker rahi thi.
Pandit :- are meri bachi tumhe ma ki seva kerni hi h to khushi se kero na , per mujhe kyu rok rahi ho beti kam se kam apni madad to kerne do.
Naina:- ni baba , jab tak m yaha hu chutiyo m, tabtak aapko koi kaam ni kerne dungi m . Mane aapko kitni baar bola ki aap bhi shahar aajaye or mandir ki dekhbhal k liye kisi or ko rakh lijiye.
Per aap h ki meri sunte hi ni ho , ab m bhi aspki kuch ni sungi.
Pandit ji:- are meri pyari bachi , mujhe to maa ki seva kerne m aanand milta h . Or wese bhi meri sari jindagi isi ganv me hi gujari h to , beta is jagah ko chod k jane ka man ni kerta beta.
Naina:- wo sab m ni janti baba, ab aap aaram kijiye.
Pandit ji ko naina ki baat manni hi padi, fir naina ne sari teyari puri kerne k baad maa ki aati gana shuru kiya.
Naina :-
अम्बे तू है जगदम्बे काली, जय दुर्गे खप्पर वाली,
तेरे ही गुण गायें भारती, ओ मैया हम सब उतारे तेरी आरती
अम्बे तू है जगदम्बे काली, जय दुर्गे खप्पर वाली, तेरे ही गुण गायें भारती,
ओ मैया हम सब उतारे तेरी आरती
[तेरे भक्त जनों पे माता भीड पड़ी है भारी दानव दल पर टूट पड़ो माँ करके सिंह सवारी] x२ सौ-सौ सिहों से भी बलशाली, है दस भुजाओं वाली, दुखियों के दुखड़े निवारती
ओ मैया हम सब उतारे तेरी आरती अम्बे तू है जगदम्बे काली, जय दुर्गे खप्पर वाली, तेरे ही गुण गायें भारती
, ओ मैया हम सब उतारे तेरी आरती
[माँ-बेटे का है इस जग में बड़ा ही निर्मल नाता पूत-कपूत सुने हैं पर ना माता सुनी कुमाता] x२ सब पे करूणा दर्शाने वाली, अमृत बरसाने वाली दुखियों के दुखड़े निवारती
ओ मैया हम सब उतारे तेरी आरती अम्बे तू है जगदम्बे काली, जय दुर्गे खप्पर वाली, तेरे ही गुण गायें भारती,
ओ मैया हम सब उतारे तेरी आरती
[नहीं मांगते धन और दौलत, न चांदी न सोना हम तो मांगें माँ तेरे मन में एक छोटा सा कोना] x२ सबकी बिगड़ी बनाने वाली, लाज बचाने वाली सतियों के सत को संवारती ओ मैया हम सब उतारे तेरी आरती अम्बे तू है जगदम्बे काली, जय दुर्गे खप्पर वाली, तेरे ही गुण गायें भारती, ओ मैया हम सब उतारे तेरी आरती ओ मैया हम सब उतारे तेरी आरती ओ मैया हम सब उतारे तेरी आरती ओ मैया हम सब उतारे तेरी आरती..
Naina ki madhur awaaz sun sabhi bhaktagan , mantra mugdh ho gaye.
Fir aarti k baad , sabhi bhaktagan naina ki tarif ker rahe the.
Fir naina ne jo bhog rupi halwa banaya tha, naina use sabhi ko prasad k rup m.batane lagi.
Or jese hi sabne wo prasad chakha , to unhe esa pratit hua , jese khana sakshat maa annapurna ne hi apne hatho se banaya ho.
Sabhi log 3 -4 baar prasad lekker khane lage. Fir dopahar k time jab maa ka vishram ka samay hota h or mandir k dwar band hote h.
Us time naina pandit ji k sath m bethi khana kha rahi thi . Ki tabhi ek aadmi dodta hua waha aaya, kyunki ghar ka main darwaza khula tha.
Pandit ji use pani pilate h or bole
Pandit ji :- kya hua bhai , tum ese ghabraye hue kyu ho .
Aadmi hath jod k pandit ji ko pranam kerke bola .
Aadmi :- pandit ji, mujhe pados k ganv se thakur sahab ne bheja h , unki badi beti m ek bahut hi shaktishali pret ghus gaya h.hamare yaha ka koi ojha tantrik, unhe thik ni ker paya , ab aap hi hmari aakhiri ummid h , kripya hamari sahayta kijiye.
Pandit ji man jate h , tabhi naina boli
Naina:- baba m bhi aapke sath chalti hu
Pandit ji :- are beti tumhe aane ki kya jarurat h, tum.yahi ruko m aata hu.
Per naina ni mani ,or pandit ji k sath chal padi. Kyunki use khatre ka ahasas ho raha tha.
Aaj k liye itna hi.
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