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Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running

Kya story m threesome hona chahiye


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Harry rocks

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Main I know peete hai
But uske liye unhe kisi aur ki
Body mein ghusna padega
Nai to wo nai pi sakte kisi ka bhi khoon

Ghost ek spirit ek urja jaise hai
Koi physical body nai hai unki apni
Hmm but mane jinko mentioned kiya h yshs wo mamuli bhut ni h , shetan bhi h sath sath
 
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Update no :- 57 (Mega update)
Jese hi ye announcement hui to charo or auditorium m tarif kerne lage .

Kyunki john apni state level champion tha delhi ka. Or karan ka to ye first official match tha.

Judges bhi hairan the. Karan ko agle round m jagah mil gayi thi.

Karan khushi khushi apni 3no bahano ki or badhta h.yaha aaj sonam bhi mojud thi , kyunki karan or jyoti ne usse ye request ki thi ki , jab tak ki wo sab yaha h tab tak wo yahi rahe .

Kyunki wo chahate the ki , jitna ho sake or jab tak wo yaha h , wo sonam ko pyaar or apnapan de sake or usko peso ki koi dikkat na ho.

Sonam ne bhi apne naye bhai bahan ki baat man li . Karan ne usko radha k room m hi rahane ko bol diya.

Radha or sonam dono ki age almost same hi thi to , unme achi dosti bhi ho gayi thi.

Karan jese hi un 3no k pass pahuncha to sabse pahale jyoti aaker gale mili.

Jyoti :- congratulations bhaiya, aapne first round ker liya.

Karan :- thank you sweetie.

Radha ( gale milte hue) :- congratulations bhai , kya mast fight ki apne , wo bechara to ek min m dher ho gaya.

Radha k galo p kiss kerte hue.

Karan :- thank u chutki.

Sonam jo bas chup chap khadi hui in dab ko dekh rahi thi , to karan use bola .

Karan :- kya baat h bhai , meri pyari gudiya ne to mujhe wish hi ni kiya.

Or ye bol wo thoda udass hone ka natak kerta h. Jise dekh sonam jhat se karan k gale milte hue dono galo ko chum boli.

Sonam:- many many congratulations my sweetu bhaiya, m bhala khush kyu na houngi, mujhe to aap sab se jyada khushi hui h ye jaan k mere bhaiya jitne ache insaan h , utne ache hi sportsman bhi h.

Karan kuch ni bolta bas use kaske gale lagata h or fir bolta h.

Karan :- gudiya, tumhe koi pareshani to ni hui na raat ko kal koi, yaha sone m

Sonam:- ni bhai mujhe koi pareshani ni hui .

Radha(majak kerte hue) :- bhai ise kya pareshani hogi , balki pareshani to mujhe hui , is moti k kharato ne sari raat ni sone diya.

Sonam (jhuta gussa dikhate hue) :-
Acha ji ulta chor kotwal ko daate, m koi kharate ni le rahi thi ,balki ye bandriya hi puri rat hath per chalati rahi. 2 baar girte girte m bachi bhai.

Radha:- kya tune mujhe bandariya bola.

Sonam :- ha to tune bhi to mujhe moti bola na.

Karan or jyoti to apni choti bahano ki pyari nokjhok k maje le rahe the.

Fir sabhi apne apne room m fresh hone chale gaye. Karan or jyoti jese hi apne kamre m aaye , to jyoti boli

Jyoti :- bhai apko kahi chot to ni lagi na.dikhaiye jara.

Karan :- are ni gudiya m thik hu.

Per jyoti ni mani or jhat se karan ki t- shirt utaar k check kerne lagi. Karan ko koi chot to ni lagi thi , per jyoti to karan ki body dekh usi m kho gayi.

Jyoti (man me ) :- wow kya body h meri bhaiyu ki , jabhi aaj sari kamimiya(auditorium m mojud sabhi ladkiya jo karan ko ghur rahi thi) meri jaan ko ese ghur rahi thi, jese inhe kacha chaba jayegi.

Per wo ni janti ki ki mere bhaiya sirf mere h, kisi ne unki taraf ankh uthake bhi dekha , to m usko chodungi ni.

Jyoti ki tandra karan ki awaz se tuti.

Karan :- kya hua sweety kaha kho gayi ,

Jyoti :- kahi bhi to ni bhai , chaliye jaldi se teyar ho jate h , hume ghumne bhi jana h na.


Fir dono bhai bahan teyar hone lagte h.or karib aadhe ghante baad sabhi teyar ho niche pahuch gaye.

Radha ne ek car rent p leli thi waha jisse unhe koi ghumne firne me pareshani na ho.

Sonam or karan aage beth gaye or radha or jyoti piche.

Karan :- to bata gudia sabse pahale hum kaha chale.

Sonam :- bhai mere khayal se hume summer hills chalna chahiye , kyunki abhi dopahar ho chuki h , or waha ki hariyali or sunset ka najara dekhne layak h.

Karan :- ok .

Sonam karan ko direction batati h.gadi pahad p chadne lagi , or yaha apni radha ki halat kharab ho gayi , use uchai se thoda dar lagta tha. Wo to jyoti se chipak gayi thi.
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Fir aadhe ghante baad jab gadi uper pahunchi , to jab jaker radha ne rahat ki saas li.

Sonam ne sahi bola tha , waha ka najara sahi m dekhne layak tha. Charo or hariyali, samne prakarti k khubsurat najare .
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Samne bade bade pahad , thandi thandi havaye.esa najara tha ki shabdo m bayan ni kiya ja sakta.
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U to waha logo k liye har tarike ki sabhi suvidhaye thi, lekin karan ne hi ese area m sonam ko lane ko kaha tha jaha shanti ho.

Fir wo 4ro bhai bahan waha khub ghume, khub masti ki. Radha ko abhi bhi dar lag raha tha . Hight p
Wo to jyoti se hi chipki hui thi.

Lekin karan or jyoti ne uska hosla bhadaya or hath pakad ker kinaro p le jaker uska dar nikalne ki koshis kerne lage. Or wo dhire dhire kamyab bhi hone lage.

Kuch der baad radha boli .

Radha:- bhaiya bhuk lag rahi h, kuch khane k intezaam kijiye na.

Karan sonam se waha aaspaas kisi dhabe k bare m puchta h or unhe waha chod k khana lane chala jata h

Thodi der baad jab karan waha lotta h to dekha . Ki jyoti bahut hi gusse m h or usne 4 5 ladko ki halat buri ker di thi mar mar k ,or jyoti bahut jyada gusse m h.

Uska locket bhi chamak raha tha , per kyu iska karan aage ki updates m pata chalega.

Short flashback.

Hua yu tha karan jab khana lene gaya tha , to tabhi ye manchale ladke bhi vaha aagaye.

M in ladko ko l 1 , l 2 ,l 3 likhunga.

L 1 jo unka leader tha usse l 2 bola.

L 2:- bhai aaj to kismat hi khul gayi apni dekho to kya mast maal aaye hue h.

L 3 :- ha bhai 3no hi kachi kaliya lag rahi h , ek raat k liye mil jaye to maja aajaye.

L1:- baat to tum sahi bol rahe ho salo, lekin m kuch or hi soch raha hu. Inme se ek wo(jyoti ki taraf ishara kerte hue) use kuch mat kerna salo , use to hum boss k pass leker jayenge, jisse khush ho k boss Hume malamal ker denge

L 3:- sahi h bhai, ek boss k lie , baki 2no k sath apan maje karenge.


Ye bol wo sab ladkiyo ki or bhadte h. Per inhe ye ni pata tha , ki vo un ladkiyo ki taraf ni , apni mot ki or bad rahe h.

Unme se ek ja ker sonam ka hath pakad leta h.

Sonam :- ye kya badtameezi h , chodo mera hath.

L2 :- chodne k liye thodi na pakda h janeman hath, akeli akeli yaha kya ker rahi ho , chalo na hamare sath puri raat maje karenge.

Radha(gusse se) :- e mister apni had me raho , or chup chap yaha se nikal lo verna.

L 2 :- verna kya fulzadi hume marogi.

Ye bol k sabhi hasne lagte h or L 3 bola.

L 3 :- are kesi baat ker rahe ho bhai , ye thodi na hume marengi, marenge to hum , wo bhi inki mast mast ga......

Aaahhhhh


Ladka 3 apni baat puri ker bhi ni paya tha ki ek jor dar laat uske sine p padi, or wo dur jaker gira.or ye lat jyoti ne mari thi.

Jab se sabne radha or sonam k sath badtameezi kerna start ki thi to jyoti ka bhayanak gussa jagrit hone laga tha. Uska chahra thoda kala or ankhe lal hone lagi thi .Wo apne gusse k bhayanak parinam ko jan chuki thi , apne chakro ko jagrit kerne k pashchat. Isliye wo koi bada lafda na ho jaye, isliye khud ko control kerne ki koshis ker rahi thi.

Per l 2 ki akhiri line ne aag m petrol ka kam ker diya or jyoti k gusse ko or bhadka diya. Or ab vo gusse m pagal ho gayi thi.

Jyoti ne jese hi l 2 ko laat mari , wo kayi dur jake gira , or laat itni jordar thi ki l 2 ki pasaliya ( chest ki hadiya) tak tut gayi. Or wo behosh ho gaya . Uske muh se khun nikal raha tha. Baki ladko ki ankhe to fati ki fati rah gayi , unhe yakin ni ho raha tha , ki ek mamuli si ladki ne ek hi laat me unke dost ki ye halat ker di.

Jyoti dhire dhire unki or bhadti h or ghurate hue boli.

Jyoti :- bhaut badi galti h tumne meri bahano k sath badtamiji krr ke kuto, m itni der se isliye chup thi, ki m dekhna chahti thi , ki tum gandi nali k kide kis had tak gir sakte ho.

Tumhe radha ki baat maan ker chupchap yaha se chala jana chahiye tha, lekin ni tum ni mane.

Lekin ab tum sab maroge , tumko to aaj tumhara khuda bhi ni bacha payega.

Jyoti ye sab bolte hue dhire dhire un ladko ki or badh rahi thi , uske bolne k andaz or laal ankhe itna drawani thi. Ki koi kamzor dil wala dekh leta tha, to use wahi heart attack aajaye.

Ek baar to un ladko ki bhi fat gayi . Lekin fir l1 bol utha.

L 1 :- salo namardo dar kya rahe ho wo sirf ek ladki h or hum 5, jao or sali ki akkal thikane lagao or ballo se ghasitate hue lao .

Hum mard h mard or wo sirf ek abla naari .


L1 ki baat sun 2 ladke l4 or l5 jyoti ki or dode .Or jese hi l4 ne aaker ek mukka jyoti ko marna chaha. To jyoti ne bade aaram se hi uske muke ko bich m hi rok diya ,apne hath se use pakad k.

Or jyoti ne ek shaitani muskan dete hue , us ladke ki band muthi per apni pakad ko majbut kerne lagi.

Or uski pakad majbut itni majbut hoti gayi ki us ladke ki chinke nikalne lagi . Or jyoti ne band muthi m hi uski sari ungliyon samet puri hatheli tod dali, or ek kas ke mukka uske muh pe de mara.

uske aage k sare daat tut gaye , or jyoti ne ek jor dar lat uske left per k ghutne mar di.jisse uski per ki hadi bhi tut gayi . Or dard k mare vo bhi behosh ho gaya.

L5 ne jab l4 ki ye halat dekhi to wo bhi jyoti ki or doda . Lekin wo jyoti ko isse pahale chu bhi pata , usse pahale hi jyoti khud uski or badhi , ek jordar spin kick jyoti ne uchal kuske muh per de mari.

Jisse wo dhul chatne laga jamin per,or jyoti ne usko uthne ka moka bhi ni diya , or uske ek hath ko pakad k pura marod k tod diya.

Fir jyoti l 3 ki or badhi , or usse boli.


Jyoti :- tu hi h na wo kuta , jisne meri bahan k liye itni ghatiya baat boli thi , kamine.

L3 ne apne dono hatho se ek sath war kerna chaha. Lekin jyoti ne uske dono hatho ko hawa m hi pakad liya. Or dono ko ek sath marodne lagi.

Jyoti :- kyu inhi hatho se tu mujhe balo se ghasithne wala tha na, kyu ab kya hua. Pakad na mere bal ruk kyu gaya.

Or ye bol jyoti ne ek jhatke k sath uske hath tod diye. Or ek jordar lat mar di , jisse wo bhi apne sathiyo k pass jaker gira or behosh ho gaya.

Ab bari thi l1 ki , wo to bas ankhe fade jyoti ki bhayanakta ko dekh raha tha.

Jyoti l 1 k pass jese hi pahunchi to l 1 thar thar kapne laga.

L 1(gidgidate hue bola) :- please muje maaf ker do , mujhse bahut badi galti ho gayi, bas ek moka dedijiye mujhe , m apni ma ki kasam kha ker bolta hu , m ye sare bure kam chod dunga.

Aap jisse sabse jyada pyaar kerti ho aapka uska wasta , please mujhe chod do.

Jyoti jese hi ye sunti h to uski ankho k samne karan ka chahara aajata h.or karan k waaste ko vo bhala kese tal sakti thi.

Isliye wo use chod k wapas ghum gayi or mud k radha or sonam ki or jane lagi.

Jese hi l1 ne ye dekha uski ankho m ek chamak aagayi or us kayar ne apni chal chal di , usne pass m hi pade ek moti lakdi ko uthaya or jyoti k uper pith piche war kerna chaha, lekin shayad jyoti pahale se hi satark thi.

Ladke ne jese hi jyoti p war kiya , jyoti furti se uski or ghum uske war ko rok liya or ek uske hath se wo lakdi chin li.

Jyoti :- mujhe pata tha, ki kute ki dum kabhi sidhi ni ho sakti, tu kitna ghatiya or kayar kism ka aadmi h tune dikha hi diya .

Maa ki jhuti kasam khake , pith piche war kerne wale kayar teri ab wo halat hogi ki yamraj bhi kamp jayenge tere pran lete hue ab.

Ye bol jyoti ne uske uper lato ghuso ki barsat shuru ker di , or use adhmara kee diya.

Jyoti :- apne us pile ko tune kya bola tha ki mujhe balo se ghasit k laye , murkh ye bhul gaya , yahi galti us duryodhan or dushasan ne ki thi ek naari ko bhari sabha m apmanit kerne ki , janta h na uska kya haal hua , uska uske vansh sahit nash ho gaya. Sirf ek nari k apman k kaaran

Or kya bola nari kya hoti h.

L1 kuch ni bola

Jyoti (tez aawaz me) :- mane pucha or kya bola tha tune.

L 1 (kampte hue ) :- ki nari to abla or kamzor hoti h.

Jyoti :- to usi abla shabd se a shabd hata do to wahi nari bala bhi ban jati h.

Or ye bol ker ek jor dar laat jyoti ne us ladke k main point p mar di.

Jisse l 1 ki dardnak chikh pur watawaran me gunj uthi.or jyoti fir use balo se ghasite hue uske baki sathiyo k pass lake patak diya.

Itne m hi waha karan bhi aapahucha.

Flashback end .

Jese hi karan ne ye sab dekha , wo buri tarah chok gaya . Sonam or radha to jyoti k is bhayanak rup ko dekh k dar k mare saham gayi thi , unki najar jese hi karan p padti h to vo bhag k karan k pass pahuch karan k sine se chipak gayi or rone lagi. Karan ne kese na kese undono ko shant kerwa k sari baat pata ki.

Or karan ko laga ki ab bahut ho gaya h. To wo dod k jyoti k pass pahuncha or bola.

Karan :- shant ho ja gudiya , itna kafi h inko inke karmo ka dand mil chuka h , ab please ruk ja.

Jyoti :- ni bhai , ye kamine jine k layak ni h , inke jese log sirf ladkiyo ko havas mitane ki chij samjhte h bas . Inka jinda rahana sirf dharti ka bojh hi bachayega

Karan ne bahut baar bola , lekin jyoti ruk hi ni rahi thi, per fir aakhir m karan ko ek hi rasta dikha .

Usne jhat se jaker jyoti ko apni or khich apne sine se laga ker uske sir per hath firane laga. Jisse dhire dhire jyoti shant hone lagi.

Lekin ab usse kamzori si bhi ane lagi thi, lekin karan ne use sambhal liya.

Fir karan ki najar un ladko p padi , to use kuch gadbad lagi , or karan ne ek baar apni aankh band ki or fir unhe dobara dhayan se dekha.

Or fir karan ko bhi dhire dhire gussa ane laga . Wo sonam se bola.

Karan :- sonam tum radha or jyoti ko leker dhabbe pe pahucho, m abhi aaya thodi der m

Radha:- ni bhai m aapko chod k ni jaungi .

Karan (thode gusse se tez awaz me bola) :- suna ni mane kya bola,tum jao radha sonam k sath, har baat m jid sahi ni h.

Karan ki gusse bhari tez aawaz sun radha dar gayi , aaj pahali baar karan ne usse yu tez aawaz me baat ki thi.

Karan sonam ko dobara wahi baat bola , or sonam jyoti or radha ko leker car m waha se nikal gayi.

Karan ka locket bhi ab jyoti wale ki tarh chamakne laga thaOr jese hi wo sab waha se dur chali gayi to karan l1 k pass pahuncha or bola.

Karan :- m achi tarah jan gaya hu kamino tum kon or kiske aadmi ho or yaha kis niyat se aaye the.

Lekin tum yaha se ja ni paoge jinda .

Itna bol pahale to karan dono l 1 k hath per tod deta h.

Or fir apni ankhe band kerke man hi man ek mantra bola

Karan :- ॐ अग्नि देवाय नमः

Or fir apni ankhe khol , apna ek hath aage kerta h , jisse agni nikalne lagti h or un sabhi ladko ko jalane lagti h.

Or wo sare ladke us agni m tadaf tadaf k jal ke mar gaye or ab un ladko ki jagah . Un ladko ki lash ki rakh hi bachi thi.

Fir karan nikal pada apni bahano ki or apni raftar se usne aadhe ghante ka rasta 10 min m hi paar ker liya.

Or jab karan dhabbe p pahuncha to , uski bahane use waha sahi salamat dekh k khush ho uske pass bhagti hui aake , uske gale lag gayi.

Jyoti :- bhai aap kaha rah gaye the , or aap waha kyu ruke .

Karan :- sweety un ladko ka kuch to intezam kerna hi tha na , werna problem ho jati , wo hi kerke aaya hu.

Or wo sab ko ek jhuti kahani suna deta h. Fir sabhi wahi dhabbe p beth k khana order kerte h.

Per radha abhi bhi thodi dari hui thi , shayad karan ki daat sun k, karan jab ye dekhta h to use khud p bahut gussa aata h ki use apni najuk si bahan ko danta .

Or wo radha k pass ja ke uske pero m ghutno k bal beth or kaan pakad ke bola.

Karan :- mujhe maaf ker do meri gudiya , ki mane tumhe data or tum p chilaya

Ye bolte hue uski ankhe nam ho gayi . Jise dekh radha ka dil taraf utha or usne jhat se karan ko uthaya or sine se laga ke boli .

Radha :- are bhai ye aap kya ker rahe ho , aap mere bade bhai ho , or bada bhai pita samman hota h , aapka to ye hak h bhai ,ki m galti keru to mujhe aap dato . Please bhai aage se mujhse koi galti ho to chahe mujhe thapad bhi mar lena , lekin please ese mafi mang ke apni gudiya ko sharminda mat kijiye.

Or fir ese hi dono bhai bahan apne gile shikve dur karte h or khana kha ker sabhi summer hill k shandar sunset ka anand lete h .

Or fir sabhi apne hotel ki or nikal jate h . Or sab thake hue hone k karan apne apne room m jaker aaram kerne lagte h.

Raat ko dinner k time kuch khas ni hota , wahi hasi majak or pyar bhari bhai bahan ki mastiyaa bas . Fir sab jaldi sone chale jate h.

Kyunki kal jyoti ka first match tha.

Location :- haryana ka ek ganv.

Rampur ek haryana ka chota sa ganv h jaha k log kheti kerke jivan vyapan kerte h. Yaha aaj bhi jyada sukh suvidhaye ni h.

Usi ganv ka Ek bacha school se ghar lot raha tha. Tabhi raste m ek falo ka bagicha aaya . Jisme tarah tarah k fal lage hue the. Jise dekh bache ka ji lalchane laga , usne aaspas dekha to paya ki bagiche ka rakhwala waha ni h, shayad khana khane gaya hoga. Ye soch wo bagiche m ghus gaya.

Or ek keri (kache aam) ke ped pe chad k keriya todne laga . Lekin tabhi pata ni use kya hua. Wo achanak se behosh ho ke gir pada wo to shukar h wo jyada uper ni chada tha or niche pato ka dher tha

Jiski vajah se use koi khas chot ni lagi . Thodi der m jab bagiche ka rakhwala waha pahuncha to usne jese hi behosh bache ko dekha to sara mamla samjh gaya or use utha ker uske ghar chod aaya.

Chota sa ganv hone k kaaran waha k sare log ek dusre ko jante the.

Ghar walo ne jese hi apne bache ko behosh dekha wo ghabra gaye. Or ladke ka pita jadi se bhag ke pass k kasbe se doctor ko le aaya.

Doctor ne ladke ko check kiya fir bola.

Doctor :- ghabrane ki jarurat ni h, shayad dhup ki vajah se ise chakkar aagaya or ye behosh ho gaya.

Mane ise injection de diya h , sham tak ise hosh aajayega. Or ye bol ke doctor waha se chala gaya.

Sham ko jab ladke ki maa uske kamre m aayi to usne paya ki uske bete ko hosh aagaya h or wo palang p chup chap betha h.

Ladke ki maa uske pass jake pyaar se boli.

Maa:- uth gaya mera bacha. Bhuk lagi hogi na tumhe , bolo beta kya khaoge.

Ladke ki ankhe achanak lal hogayi or ek bhayanak awaaz me bola.

Ladka :- mujhe maas (meat ) khana h.

Ladke ki maa ye sun ker buri tarah chonk gayi , pahli baat wo pure vegetarian the sari family to unka beta maas kyu mang raha h.

Dusra ladke ki aawaz ka badlna.

Maa :- beta te kya bol raha h, tu to janta hi h na hum pure shakahari h , hum maas ni khate.

Ladka(usi bhayanak awaz me) :- suna ni bhudiya , m kya bola mujhe maas chahiye.

Maa(chillate hue):- ni is ghar m bhagwan ki puja hoti h, yaha maas n to banega or na m tujhe khane dungi.

Ladka:- tu mujhe rokegi bhudiya. Ab to m tera hi maas khaunga vo bhi kacha.

Ye bol ladke ne apni maa ka gala pakad liya. Or use marne ki koshis kerne laga.

Ladke ki maa ki tez aawaz sun k ghar k sabhi log waha aagaye or ye najara dekh sabhi hairan ho gaye .

Kyunki ladke ne apni maa ko ek hath se gale se pakad k hava m utha diya tha.

Sab hairan the ki ek 14 saal k bache m itni taakat kaha se aagayi. Ladke ka baap jese hi uske pas pahuch rokne ki kosis ki ,ladke ne ek muka apne baap k pet m maar diya or uska baap udta hua diwar se takraya.

Shor sharaba sun aaspas k padosi bhi waha pahunch gaye or sab ne kese na kese mil k ladke ko pakda or uski maa ko bachaya or us ladke ko chapayi se bandh diya uspe usko leta ker.

Kisi ko kuch samjh ni aaraha tha ki aakhir us bache ko aakhir hua kya , usme itni takat aayi kese.

Tabhi ek bujurg ne ladke k baap se bola

Bujurg :- beta m samjh gaya hu ise kya hua h, mera anubhav bata raha h ki jarur is bache ko kisi pret aatma ne jakda hua h.

Bujurg ki ye baat sun sab dar jate h or ladke ka baap gidgidate hue bola.

Baap :- chacha kripya mere bache ko bacha lo , m aapke aage apne bache ki jaan ki bhik mangta hu.

Bujurg :- beta tumhare bache ko m ni bacha sakta , usko to sirf ek hi insan bacha sakte h.

Baap :- vo kon chacha

Bujurg:- beta ganv k bahar , utter disha (North) me ek maa kali ka ek chota sa , lekin ek jagrit mandir h. Uske pujari ji ko jake apni samasya batao , wahi kuch ker sakte h bas ab.

Ladke ka baap bujurg ki baat man nikal padta h , pandit ji ko lane .


Aaj k liye bas itna hi
Stay tuned.
Note :- sorry for late update friends , kal time hi ni mila tha update likhne ka isliye aaj din m hi update de raha hu.

Or ha next update ab 23 march ko aayega kyunki kal or paso mera exam h.

Isiliye ye bada update diya h aaj
And
Happy holi friends
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Aaj jyoti ka match tha . Jyoti to kafi excited thi fight k liye , lekin karan ko thodi tension bhi ho rahi thi , kahi uski gudiya koi badi chot na lag jaye.

Halaki karan janta tha ki uski bahan bhi koi sadharan ladki ni h , sakshat ek shakti h , per kya kare tha to bhai hi na, or bhai bhi vo jisne apni judwa bahan ko bhi , ek bhai k pyaar k sath , ek pita ka sneh bhi diya, ek pita ki tarah use pala bhi.

Karan(apni tension jatate hue) :- gudiya apna dhayan rakhna , or jyada aggressive mat hona ,or jese mane tumhe sikhaya tha , vesa hi kerna.

Kal raat sone se pahale karan ne kuch moves sikhaye the jyoti ko , aaj k match k liye

Jyoti(pyaar se gaal khichne hue) :- off o mere golu bhaiya , kya aap bhi itni tension le rahe ho , aapki bahan kisi se kam ni h .

Radha :- ha bhaiya , kal dekha ni kya mast dhulayi ki un gundo ki di ne , bina ticket k wwe live dekhne mil gaya .

Kya mast fight ki thi di ne , ekdam jhakas.

Karan :- chup ker jhakas ki bachi , kya jarurat thi tum logo ko unse bhidne ki , ignore ker deti un logo ko ya mujhe phone ker deti.

Jyoti :- aree koi meri bahano ko chedega to unhe dhoungi ni kya m

Karan :- ha bhai , bahut badi gundi h na tu , jo dho diya.

Jyoti :- acha chodo baba, aage se esa ni hoga

Karan :- kha meri kasam.

Jyoti (aaliya bhat style m majak kerte hue boli) :- mar jayega re tu.

Ye sun jyoti samet 3no bahane hasne lagti h , or karan ka popat ho jata h , or kuch seconds baad wo bhi hasne lagta h.

Fir ese hi hasi majak k sath jyoti apni wrestling k liye teyar hoti h.

Aaj jyoti k samne opponent thi , hina , jo ki haryana ki ek kushti champion thi.

Jese hi jyoti ring m aaker usse hath milaya , to hina haste hue boli .

Hina :- re tu single pasli chori mahare se ladegi, kath m haryana ki kushti ki champion kath tu .

Kath ki h re tu.

Jyoti :- apne hunar p vishwas hona achi baat h hina , per ati har chij ki kharab hoti h. Or rahi baat size ki to ye baat tujhse bahatar kon samjh sakta h ki ladayi m size ni , hosla maine rakhta h

Or rahi baat m kaha ki hu to m waha ki rahane wali hu jiska haryana bhi ek chota sa hissa h .

M bharat mata ki beti hu

Or ye bol jyoti " bharat mata ki jai ka nara lagati h" . Or jyoti ki baate sun hina ko gussa aajata h or use ye apni bejati samjhti h.

Fir bell ring hoti h or fight shuru ho jati h.

Ring shuru hote hi hina war kerna shuru ker deti h . Wo jhuk ker jyoti ki kamar pakd k use piche dhakelne ki koshis kerti h, per jyoti iske liye teyar thi .

Jyoti apni kohni ko hina ki pith p marti h ,per jyada jor se ni , werna ye na ho , ki uski kamar tut jaye.

Kohni k war se hina ko dard hota h or uski pakad dhili ho jati h , or isi baat ka fayda utha jyoti uske ek hath ko pakad k piche ki tarf le jake uski pith se touch kera ke lock ker deti h or uski tango m tang ada k use gira deti h.

Wo is fight ko jaldi khatam kerne k mood m thi isliye usne hina k girte hi , let ker uski gardan ko hatho se daboch liya piche se or apne pero se uske pero ko jakad liya.

Or aavashyakata anusaar apni pakad majbut ker li .

Hina jyoti k is dohre war ko jhel ni payi or usne ring k floor p 3 baar jor se hath mar ke apne aap ko hara hua declare ker diya.

Or refree ne aake jyoti ko winner ghoshit ker diya.hina jo abhi bhi giri hui thi, jyoti usko jaker uthati h or bolti h.

Jyoti :- kyu meri dost , mane kaha tha na ki kabhi kisi chij ki ati ni honi honi chahiye . Tumhe mane ni haraya , balki tumhare over confidence or opponent ko kamjor samjhne ki galti ne haraya.

Lekin koi baat ni , tumne bahut badiya performance di .

Jyoti ne ye baat hina se bahut saralta se or bina jit k ahankar k boli , jisse hina bhi bahut prabhavit hui or usne jit ki badhayi dete hue . Aage k liye congratulations kaha.

Fir jyoti jaldi se bhagte hue karan ki or dodi , karan ne jese hi jyoti ko yu aate dekha , to usne bhi apni bahe fela di or jyoti bhagte hue aake karan k gale lag gayi .

Jyoti bahut khush thi , kyunki ye uski first official fight thi , or usne first fight m hi ek record bana diya tha.

Sabse kam time m wrestling jitne ka , jiski announcement bhi hui.

Jyoti(bacho ki tarah khushi se boli) :- dekha na bhaiya , m jit gayi , mane ek record bhi bana diya,aap yuhi dar rahe the

Karan (pyar se gale lagaye hue uske sir ko sahalate hue bola) :- ha dekha na gudiya kesi meri bahadur gudiya ne minutes m hi use dhul chata di, or m budhu bekar m hi dar raha tha.

Fir jyoti karan se alag hote hue radha or jyoti se gale mili .

Radha:- wow di kya mast fight ki aapne , us moti ko acha sabak sikhaya apne , bahut jyada hi uchal rahi thi.

Jyoti :- galat baat choti , ese kisi ka majak ni udaate or vo aapse badi bhi h na. Aapne unki burayi to dekhi, lekin aapne unki ye achai ni dekhi ki unhonne apni galti ko mana or apni haar ko swikaar kiya.hume to unke is gun k liye tarif kerni chahiye .

Radha(sharminda hote hue) :- sorry didu, aapne bilkul sahi kaha , aage se m aapki bato ko dhyan m rakhungi.

Jyoti (radha k gaal chumte hue) :- that's like my good girl.

Fir sabhi bhai bahan hotel ki or Lotte h , hotel ki chat p bhi khane pine ka special intezaam tha to sonam kuch soch k boli.

Sonam :- chaliya na bhaiya , terrace p hi aaj lunch kerte h. Waha se shimla k hasin najare bhi aaram se dekh paoge aap log.

Karan :- nice idea gudiya.

Or karan room service ko phone ker apna order chat pe hi mangwa leta h.

Or 4ro bhai bahan terrace p jaker table p beth jate h , or karib 15 min m unka khana bhi aajata h. Hamesha ki tarah karan or jyoti dono ek hi plate se ek dusre ko khana khila rahe the.

Tabhi karan ki najar radha or sonam p padti h , jo use hi tarasti nigaho se dekh rahi thi . Karan unki dil ki baat samjh jata h . Or roti ka ek tukde pe sabji laga ker sonam ki or bhadata h , ye dekh sonam khushi se jhum uthi or jaldi se wo kha liya, jese koi usse chin raha ho. Fir ese hi karan radha ko khilata h .

Or fir 3no bahane karan ko apne hatho se khana khilane lagti h. Ese hi thodi der m sab khana finish kerte h or terrace p ghum shimla dekhne lagte h .

Tabhi jyoti ki najar ek or padti h or wo excited ho karan ko boli.

Jyoti :- bhai vo dekhiye .

Karan jab us taraf dekhta h to samne pata h ki 1 bahut badi hanuman ji ki murti waha se dikh rahi h. Kuch esi

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Karan sonam se puchta h.

Karan :- are gudiya , wo samne itni badi hanuman ji ki murti yaha kese .

Sonam :- bhai wo jhaku hanuman ji ka mandir h , or ye murti duniya ki sabse badi hanuman ji ki murti h.
Iski height puri 108 feet h or ye pure shimla m aapko kahi se bhi najar aayegi.

Aap bole to aaj yahi ghumne chale

Jyoti :- ha kyu ni sweety.

Radha:- ha to der kis baat ki to chalo na , e moti jaldi se hume waha leker chal na.

Sonam:- are bas bas chal rahe h , thodi shanti to rakh bandariya, hamesha uchalti hii rahati h.

Or ese hi nokjhok k sath 4ro bhai bahan nikal jate h . Karib ek ghante baad . Sabhi hanuman ji k us pavitra dham pahunch jate h.

Jaha ka najara dekhne layak tha , ye mandir bhi ek pahadi p bana hua tha , per summer hills se iski uchayi kam thi.

Waha bandar dekh k apni bandaria, oh sorry matlab apni radha unki pics lene lagti h to sonam use chedte hue boli .

Sonam :- radha tu jara bandaro se dur hi rah.

Radha:- kyu.

Sonam :- are bhai kahi wo tumhe apna rishtedar samjh k utha ker le gaye to hamara kya hoga bhai , hamare pass to bas ek single piece hi to h tu.

Ye bol sonam hasne lagti h or sath m karan or jyoti bhi.

Radha:- moti ruk tujhe m batati hu.

Or fir shuru ho gayi unki pakdam pakdai.fir karan unhe kese na kese rok k mandir m ja ker bajrang bali k darshan kerte h.

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Fir sonam ek esi jagah leke jati h mandir ki jaha bahut bade pero k nishan the or boli.

Sonam :- bhai ye pero k nishan kisi or k ni swayam mahabali hanuman ji k h.

Karan :- kya sach m ,

or fir sabhi bhai bahan un nishan ko chu ker hath mastak se lagate h, jese kisi se aashirwad le rahe ho.

Fir sab us badi murti k pass uske bhi darshan kerte h , jo bahut hi vishal thi.

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Jyoti :- choti jara is jagah k bare m kuch bata na, yaha hanumanaji k pero k nishan kese.

Sonam :- di ye us samay ki baat h , jab bhagwan shri ram or rawan ka yudh chal raha tha or lakshman ji meghnath k prahar se murchit ho gaye the.

Tab hanuman ji jab sanjivani lane drongiri parvat ki or ja rahe the , tab raste m yaha unki najar ek rishi pe padi jo bahut tejashvi the. To unhe dekh hanumanaji yaha utre , unse aage ka rasta puchne .

Lekin hanumanaji k bhar se ye pahadi aadhe jyada dharti m sama gayi . Isiliye ye pahadi itni choti h.

Un rishi ka nam jhaku tha . Unhonne hanuman ji ko pranam ker apne tapobal se rasta pata kerke bata diya. Lekin hanumanaji se jate hue unhonne wada manga ki vo aate time unse jarur mile. Lekin kalnemi rakshas ki vajah se unka kafi time waste ho gaya . Or wo bina ruke hi , lanka chale gaye.

Rishi jakhu bahut udas hue , lekin balaji apne bhakto ko kese nirash ker sakte h .

Unhone baad m rishi ko darshan deker sari baat batayi . Or jab vo yaha se gaye to ek swayambhu murti apne ap pragat hui . Or rishi ne yaha p ek mandir ka nirman karwaya.

Ye badi wali murti to kuch salo pahale hi yaha lagwayi gayi bhai , jiska udghatan abhishek bachan ne kiya tha.

Karan :- wow nice , shukriya gudiya hume itni sunder katha sunane k liya.

Sonam.:- isme shukriya kesa bhai , ye to mera farz h.

Fir sabhi thoda bahut ghum ker apne hotel ki or lot gaye.

Wahi dusri or

Location :- rampur.

Us ladke ka pita , bujurg ke kahe anusar us disha m chal pada .

Thodi der m use ma kali ka wo mandir mil gaya. Pahale to jaker usne maa kali k darshan kiye .

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Fir usne pandit ji ko awaz di , thodi der baad ek 18 sal ki ladki waha aayi jisne ek normal suit pahana hua tha.

Ladki :- ji kahiye chacha , kese aana hua.

Ladke ka pita :- beta pandit ji kaha h, or aap kon ho.

Ladki :- ji mera naam naina h, or m pandit ji ki beti hu, baba to bahar gaye hue h or wo to kal hi lotenge

Kahiye kuch kaam tha kya chacha ji.

Jese hi ladki ka pita ye baat sunta h , wo farsh p beth k rone lagta h.

Naina(ghabra ker ) :- kya hua chacha , aap ro kyu rahe ho.

Ladke ka pita naina ko sari baat batate h ,jise sun naina boli.

Naina:- aap dariye mat chacha , aapke bete ko kuch ni hoga. M aapki madad karungi , baba ne apni sari vidhyaye mujhe bhi sikhayi h. Aap yahi rukiye .

Ye bol naina mandir k pas bane hi apne chote se makan m jati h or 5 min baad apne sath ek bag lake boli

Naina:- chaliye chacha.

Ladke k pita :- beta kya tum sach m ye ker paogi na.

Naina:- ha chacha ,aap bas mujh p bharosa rakhiye.

Ladke k pita k pass yahi akhiri ummid thi, to wo naina k sath chup chap chal pada.

Or jese hi wo waha pahunche to dekhte h ki ki wo bhut jo bache k ander tha , usne rasi tod di h. Or wo ek admi ko gala dabake marne ki koshis ker raha h.

Ladke ka baap gidgidate hue bola:- beta kuch kero.

Naina jaldi se apne bag se ek yantra nikalti h or jor se mantra bol

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Us ladke ki or ker deti h , us yantra se ek nili roshni nikal , ladke pe girti h jisse usko ek jhatka lagta h or wo uchal k wapas charpahi p girta h.

Fir naina ek aadmi ko 4 kile dete hue boli ki ise ladke k charo or jamin m thok do.

Admi ne wesa hi kiya , lekin naina ne wo yantra ni hataya tha. Jese jese kile ek ek kerke us ladke k charo or thok raha tha , wese wese ladke k ander mojud us pret aatma ki chiknkhe nikal rahi thi. Kilo k thokne k baad naina ne yantra hatate hue bola.

Naina:- kon h tu , or kyu is masum k sharir p kabza kiya h , chhod de ise.

Ladke k muh se ab ek orat ki awaz aati h jo bhayanak aawaz m boli.

Ladka:- ni chodungi , ise or iske sath sab ko mar dalungi.

Ye bol k ladka uthne ki koshis kerta h per vo hil bhi ni pata , ye un abhimantrit kilo ka kamal tha, jisne use bandh diya tha.

Naina:- tu meri marji k yaha se hil bhi ni sakti dusht aatma , tujhe batana hi hoga kon h tu

Ye bol naina apne purse se gangajal nikal us per dalti h , jisse wo ladka or tadafne lagta h.

Aakhir m us pret ko baat manni hi padi .Or wo boli.

Ladka :- mera naam shila h or aajse 3 sal pahale m isi ganv ki bahu thi , lekin mera pati mujhe dahej k liye marta or pese mangta . Lekin mere ghar wale bahut garib the to m kese pese lati .

Ek din usne meri hatya ker di chaku mar k or aatmhatya dikhane k liye meri lash ko , usi ped se latka diya , jispe ye bacha chada tha. M us time garbhvati thi.

Ab mane kasam khai h ki is ganv k kisi insan ko ni chodungi m. Kyunki kisine bhi meri madad ni ki , sab mujhe mar khate hue dekhte rahe.

Ek bujurg :- kahi tum sukhiya ki bivi , shila to ni ho .

Ladka ha bolta h.

Bujurg :- beti usko uske karmo ka fal mil chuka h, uski mot ek bahut hi bhayanak bimari se hui h , jisme skin galne lagti h . Or hum bhi apne raviye k liye sharminda h.
Sab bujurg ki ha me ha milate h


Naina :- ha shila , tumhare gunehgar ko saja ishvar ne dedi h . Ab tum is bache ko chod do .

Tum bhi ek maa thi , tum to samjh sakti ho na ki ek olad ko taklif m dekh ma ki kya halat hoti h.

Jara dekho is bache ki maa ko , kya halat ho gayi h uski.

Shila jab uski or dekhti h to sahi m maa ki halat bahut kharab thi , ab shila ko bhi us per taras aagaya. Akhir wo koi buri aatma to thi ni , bas ek dukhi yari thi.

Shila:- dhanyawad beti tume mujhe itna bada paap kerne se rok liya .

Or hath jod k boli .

Shila:- beti bhagwan k liye mujhe mukti dedo , m is pret yoni se tang aachuki hu.

Naina uski baat man leti h or gangajal hath m le ek mantra bol us ladke pe dal diya.

Ladka fir se behosh ho gaya.

Naina:- chacha aapka beta ab bilkul thik ho chuka h . Shila ko mukti mil gayi.

Bujurg:- beta tumne uski baate sun itna samay nasht kyu kiya or to or use mukti bhi dedi .

Tumne use bhasm kyu ni kiya.

Naina(muskurate hue):- karuna m jo shakti h , wo krodh m kaha , baba.


Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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Nice update...

Ye to acha hua ki Sonam abhi s hi Karan jyoti k sath thi aur raat M Radha k sath rahi. Uske liye acha h ab akeke ni rehna hoga ..

Karan n first fight to aram s Jeet Lia .
Room m aake Jyoti n jaise behave kia usse uska pyar saaf Nazar aata h Karan k liye Jo shyaad lovers Wala h ..

Kher , us din sab ghumne nikle jaisa Sonam n bataya but wahan to kaand hi hogaya . Karan thodi der ki gayab Kya hua itna drama hogahav.

Jyoti n us paancho ki akele hi halat kharab krdi Jo unhe chedne aaye the . Waise un ladko k irade to bahut gande the shayad isliye hi Karan n unhe jala k bhasm krdia warna wo to khud Jyoti ko rok Raha thaunsabko jaan s Marne s . Ab aisa Kya dekha Karan n ki uska b gussa badh gaya aur jaan s mrr dia ye to aage pata chalega..
Well jyoti ka ugr Roop aaj b dekhne ko mil gaya..


Dusra scene to direct harayana ka aagya.
Yahan to kahani kuchvaur hi chal rahi h.
Is gaon m ek Bache k upar kisi bhut pret ka saya pad gaya h isliye uska behavior itna jyda change hogaya h..
Baba n bola to h pujari a baat krne ko shyaad wo is Bache ko bacha le ..

Well lagta h ab chudial k baad in bhoot ka b number lagne Wala h .. but Kya Karan yaha aaega Kya ???


Let's see Kya hotah h..
Thanks for your support bhai
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