Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running

[Vickey1211]

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[Zas23]

Waiting

 

[Spıdəɽmaŋ]

Nice Story waiting next

 

[Radhe]

Bro mujhe aap se ek complain hai
Aap har din update detw the mai aap ki story ka bahut bada fan hu.
Mai har din sirf aap ke update ka wait krta hu mujhe pata hai ki aur koi update de ya na de aap jarur dege upar pichale kuch dino se aap bhi dusre ya fir tisre din update dete hai bura lagta hai.
Ha pata hai time bahut kam milta hai par chote update de sakte hai na aap
Thanks

 

[Riya20]

Great work dear..
Acha kiya aapne ki ek he bade update mea ye situation ko khatam kari..
It takes a lot of hell time to write 7000+ word update n u did it dam good..
Har ek chij perfect thi..
Aman ko talwar milna then dracula ko marna jumki ki awaj ka lotna ho yaa karan or jyoti ka milan..
Or sabse jaruri kfd or karan jyoti ka amnaasamna..
Sabkuch badi he khubsurti se darsaya he tumne..
Great job..
Sayad kfd ko milne se kuch raaj b khule..
Yaa kuch nai pehli janm lea..
Jo b ho maja aayega agla update mea inki conversation padne mea..
Bich bichme kuch conversation out of box lagi..
Par aapki writing skills ne unsabi baato ko overshadowed kiya..
So super update..
Keep rocking..

 

[sonukale]

Waiting for next update

 

[Dark Devil]

Waiting for the next update

 

[Harry rocks]

Sorry friends ki aapko in dino bahut wait kerna pad raha h , per m bhi kya karu , ek to itna kam uper se thodi tabiyat bhi kharab h parso se , fir bhi aaj update dene ki koshish karunga , verna kal to 100 % aayega . Vese bhi ab kuch din or fir first part khatam ho jayega

 

[Stone cold]

Ok bhai intazar kar lenge Take ur time

 

[Zas23]

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