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Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running

Kya story m threesome hona chahiye


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me hamesha aisi kahani ko dundta hu jisme insect,fantacy,thriller,horror,romance,thodi bahut shero shayari,ye sub or sath hi saath usme main charecter hero naa hoke heroine ho aisi story abhi tak dhund raha hu nahi mila shayad koi likha hi nahi ho per koi age jaker koi likh bi sakte hai koi kya aap hi likh sakte ho mere paas itni akal nahi ki me ek fantacy story likh saku isliye her writer se mera nivedan hai ki wo koi aisi story jaroor likhe
 

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me hamesha aisi kahani ko dundta hu jisme insect,fantacy,thriller,horror,romance,thodi bahut shero shayari,ye sub or sath hi saath usme main charecter hero naa hoke heroine ho aisi story abhi tak dhund raha hu nahi mila shayad koi likha hi nahi ho per koi age jaker koi likh bi sakte hai koi kya aap hi likh sakte ho mere paas itni akal nahi ki me ek fantacy story likh saku isliye her writer se mera nivedan hai ki wo koi aisi story jaroor likhe
Bhai is story m karan or jyoti dono equal hi to h , or kya kami lagi aapko story m
 

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Sham ho chuki thi , or karan or jyoti teyar ho rahi thi , per jyoti ka mood thoda ukhda hua tha. Karan ne usse baat kerne ki bhi koshis bhi ki , lekin jyoti ne use sidha sidha ignore ker diya.

Fir karib 8 baje tak 2no bhai bahan jane k liye teyaar ho gaye. Sonam bhi aana chahati thi , lekin achanak se uski tabiyat thodi kharab ho gayi.

Karan or jyoti sonam ko yu chod ker ni jana chahate the , per sonam boli.

Sonam :- bhaiya didi , aap dono please is party m jarur jaiye , m idher khud ko sambhal lungi.

Jyoti :- per gudia hum tere ko is halat m chod k kese ja sakte h, tumhari tabiyat bhi thik ni h

Karan :- ha gudiya , jyoti sahi bol rahi h, humare liye tu jyada important h , prize ni.

Sonam :- ni bhai , aapko jarur jana chahiye , aaj aap dono ki life ka bahut important day h , aap ager ni gaye to mujhe is baat ka dukh rahega ki , meri vajah se aap ni ja paye.

Karan :- par gudiya.

Sonam bich m tokte hue boli.

Sonam :- per ver kuch ni bhai , aap jaa rahe ho, aapko meri kasam.

Sonam ka itna hi kahana kafi tha , karan or jyoti se apni baat manwane k liye.

Jyoti :- thik h sonu , hum jayenge but tujhe khana khilakar , or hum jaldi hi wapas.

Or fir jyoti sonam k liye khichdi banati h , or use apne hatho se khilati h. Or fir use dawai deker sula deti h.

Karan use apni shakti se gahari or pyari nind m sula deta h . Ghar ki extra chabi leker ghar se bahar aate h .

Lekin jyoti bina kuch bole gadi m beth jati h or rukhe swar m

Jyoti :- ab chalo bhi.

Karan muskurata hua bola ,

Karan :- bas ek min .

Or ye bol karan ne apna hath ghar ki or bhadaya or uske hath se ek roshni nikal ker ghar k charo or fel ek kavach bana diya.

Karan :- ab sonu safe rahegi.

Fir karan car ki driving seat pe aake beth jata , h or gps set ker nikal jata h , party ki location ki or.

Per aaj jyoti kaa mood bilkul kharab tha ,or wo karan se baat hi ni ker rahi thi , or karan k chahare p bhi halki muskaan thi.

Karan :- wese gudiya , you looking so beautiful dear. Lagta h aaj waha sabhi ladko p bijliya girane ka irada h.

Karan ka kahana bilkul sahi tha , jyoti ne kuch ese kapde pahane the , or uper se uska halka se makup. Jo uski khubsurti ko 4 chand laga raha tha
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Jyoti pahale to thoda sharma k hasti h, per jaldi se khud ko sambhal k rukhe swar m boli.

Jyoti :- thanks , ab gadi jara tez chalao hume late ho raha h.

Uske bolne k andaaz se saf saf pata chal raha tha ki vo karan se naraj .

Per aakhir kyu aaiye jante h.

Short flash back.

Kal raat ko 3no bhai bahan ek sath hi soye the . Hamesha ki tarah karan or jyoti ki aankh khulti h or fir dono 3 ghante dhayan lagate h.

Fir karan sonam ko uthata h . Karan uske dono galo ko chumte hue bola.

Karan :- good morning gudiya.

Sonam bhi karan k galo pe kiss kerte hue boli.

Sonam :- good morning bhaiya.

Fir ese hi usne jyoti ko bhi wish kiya , fir 3no bari bari se nahaker teyar hote h.

Karan dekhta h , ki sonam kahi jane ki teyari ker rahi h to usne pucha.

Karan :- kya baat h gudiya, subah subah kaha ja rahi ho.

Sonam :- bhaiya wo m apne orphanage m jaa rahi hu , wo kya h na jin uncle ne mujhe orphanage m laye or mera Itna khayal rakha , m unse aksar milne jati rahati hu. Wo bahut hi nek dil insaan h , wo orphanage unhonne hi apne peso se khola , or orphanage k har bache ko achi education mile iska bhi dhayan rakhte h wo .

Isliye m apni har income ka ek part waha donate kerti hu , aaj bhi isiliye ja rahi hu.

Aap bhi chalna chaoge kya bhai.

Jyoti :- ha kyu ni choti.

Fir 3no bhai bahan nikal gaye orphanage k liye . Jaha pahunch k jese hi 3no orphanage m enter kerte h . Tabhi waha garden m khel rahe kuch bache sonam ko dekh k pahachan jate h. Or sonam didi sonam didi kerte hue bhagke unke paas pahunchte h.

Sonam sab bacho se gale milti h , sare bache bhi sonam ko dekh ker k bahut khush the . Aakhir kar ho bhi kyu na .

Orphanage ki ronak jo thi sonam , sonam k vyavahar or sab ke liye apne pan k chalte , orphanage ka har ek member chahe wo bache ho ya staaf sab sonam ko bahut pasand kerte the , or usse pyaar bhi.

Sonam(ek bachi ko god m leke ) :- kesi ho meri chutki .

Chutki :- m thik hu didi , per aapse naraj bhi hu.

Sonam :- wo kyu bhala.

Ek chota bacha jiska naam raju tha , wo bola.

Raju :- wo isliye didi , kyunki aap itne time baad humse milne aayi.

Sonam raju k galo p kiss kerte hue

Sonam :- oh ! Sorry babu I promise aage se esa ni hoga.

Raju :- pakka na .

Sonam :- ha pakka babu.

Fir chutki karan or jyoti ko dekh boli.

Chutki :- didu , ye apke sath kon h.

Sonam(majak kerte hue ) :- are ha m to bhul hi gayi , bacho inse milo ye tumhare jiju h.

Ye sun karan ka muh khula ka khula rah gaya. Fir kya tha sare bache karan se jiju jiju kerke lipat gaye.

Chutki bhi kam sharati ni thi wo sonam ka majak samjh k bhi karan k maje lene lagi

Chutki :- kya baat h jiju , pahali baar apni sali sahiba se milne aaye or khali hath aaye.

Raju :- ha jiju , that's not fare , hume gifts chahiye.

Karan bichare ko samjh ni aaraha tha , ki wo kya kare. Or idher jyoti or sonam pet pakad k hase ja rahi thi or karan k maje le rahi thi.

Sonam :- ha bacho baat to sahi bol rahe ho tum sab , ye to galat baat h , tumhare jiju pahali baar milne aaye wo bhi khali hath.

Ab tum sab dekho , tumhe inka kya kerna h , meri taraf se tumhe full permission h.

Isse pahale bache kuch kerte usse pahale hi karan bol pada .

Karan :- jiju ki bachi , ruk tujhe m batata hu.

Or ye bol wo sonam ko pakadne doda , or sonam bhi bhagi. Lekin karan ne use pakad liya , or uska kaan pakad k bola.

Karan :- kyu ab bol kya bol rahi thi tu moti.

Sonam :- aah bhai chodo dukhta h , bacho m to majak ker rahi thi.

Ye koi tumhare jiju ni h , ye tumhare bade bhaiya karan or ye jyoti didi h.

Fir sonam karan or jyoti se sabhi bacho ko ache se milvati h.

Karan or jyoti sabhi bacho m khub sari choclate or kuch khane ki chije batte h , jo unhonne raste m kharidi thi.

Tabhi sonam k kano m ek awaz padti h.

"Kya baat h sonu , jara humse bhi mil lo" .

Sonam piche mud k dekhti h to khush ho jati h , kyunki piche uski orphanage ki best friend rima jo khadi thi, rima yu to sonam se ek sal senior thi , per dono achi dost thi.

Sonam rima se gale milte hue ,


Sonam :- are rima , what a pleasant surprise, tum yaha.

Rima :- ha sonu . Abhi kuch dino pahale hi mujhe apne isi orphanage m , nursery teacher ki job mil gayi h.

Sonam :- are wah ye to bahut baat h,ab to humara milna hota rahega.

Rima :- hmm wo to h.

Sonam :- wese uncle kaha h.

Rima :- wo to kuch kaam se bahar gaye hue h , kal tak aajaayenge.

Fir vo karan or jyoti ki or dekh k boli

Rima ;- ye tumhare sath kon h sonu.

Sonam rima ka karan or jyoti se intro karwati h.

Pahale rima jyoti se hath milati h , fir karan se hath milate hue uske sath flirt kerte hue boli.

Rima :- hi , I m rima ,

Karan :- hi I m karan.

Rima :- nice name , apki personality ko suit bhi kerta h ye naam.

Karan :- thanks .

Or ye bol wo apna hath , Rima se chudata h , kyunki usne dekh liya tha ki ye sab dekh , jyoti ka para dhire dhire high ho raha .

Per fir karan ne thoda maje lene ki sochke , wo bhi rima se flirt kerne laga.

Karan :- by the way , aapka name bhi bahut pyara h , bilkul aapki tarah.

Rima (blush kerte hue ) :- thanks.

Fir thodi ese hi baat kerte h , fir rima puchti h.

Rima :- wese aapki koi gf h.

Karan :- hamari esi kismat kaha ji , koi mila hi ni aap jesa abhi tak.

Ye bol karan ne rima ko ankh mar di. Lekin karan ki is harkat ne aag me ghi ka kaam ker diya.

Jyoti ka ab apna gussa control kerna pal pal k sath mushkil hota ja raha tha. Isliye wo thodi tez awaz m boli.

Jyoti :- chal donu hume ab chalna chahiye , hume late ho raha h.

Or ye bol wo sonam ka hath pakad k le gayi.

Or ab karan ko bhi samjh aagaya ki ab kuch jyada ho gaya.

Rima haste hue boli :- lagta h aapki gf bura maan gayi.

Karan hakalate hue :-. Gggf

Rima :- ha ji , m sab janti hu aap mere sath flirt sirf majak k rup m kar rahe the. Jyoti ko chidane k liye.

Ab jaldi jaiye verna aapki kher ni .

Fir karan rima se vida le car k pas pahunchta h , or fir sabhi chupchap ghar lot jate h.

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Karan :- are gudiya m to majak ker raha tha yaar , ab thuk bhi de apna gussa.

Per jyoti gusse se apni gardan ghuma li.


Wahi dusri or

Location :- kajri house.

Kajri apne gulamo se bol rahi thi.

Kajri :- bas bahut hua , is ladki ko marne k liye chod do. Ye hamari baat to sun rahi h.

Kajri fir gusse se boli :- ek se bad ke ek kamchor pal rake h mane , 2 hafto m.tum ek ladki ni laa paye.

Kajri ka vafadar jiska naam simha tha vo bola.

Simha :- malkin humne to apne aadmi bheje the , per pata ni wo kaha gayab ho gaye.

Na hi hum unhe trace ker pa rahe h.

Kajri :- wo sab m ni janti simha , malik ne pahale hi hum per daya kerke , 2 ki jagah ek ladki k liye man gaye.

Per tum ek ladki tak na la sake ,m ni janti , mujhe aaj aadhi raat se pahale pahale ek ladki chahiye.

Simha :- ji malkin.

Back to the hero .

Karan or jyoti party wali location p pahunch gaye the.

Waha ki decoration kafi achi ki gayi thi. Samne ek stage laga hua tha.jaha p prize distribution hona tha.

Karan or jyoti ander hi gaye the , unhe john or hina mil jate h . Or sath me wo sare contestants jinhone participate kiya tha , raka ko chod .

Jo abhi hospital m admit tha or use apne karmo ki saja mil gayi thi, wo jindagi bhar k liye apahiz ho gaya tha.

John :- many many congratulations dost , competition jitne k liye .

Jab tumhara mujse mukabla hua tha , jab hi m samjh gaya tha , is baar tum hi jitoge.

Karan :- thanks bhai , and sorry kahi meri vajah se tumhe jyada to ni lagi.

John :- tum jyada jor se lagne ki baat ker rahe ho , sala tumhari lato k baad m pura ek hafta sote hue chat p pankha ni dekh paya hu.

Ye baat usne apne pichwade ko sahalate hue itni funny way me boli , jise sun waha sabhi ki hasi chut gayi.

Hina :- ha sahi m jyoti , tum dono sach m first position deserve kerte ho .

Bina kisi experience k bhi tumne bade bade experienced contestants ko dhul jo chatayi

Abhi ese hi karan or jyoti , sabse yu hi baate ker rahe the ki piche se ek aawaz aayi.

" Are bhai apne dosto se milna ho gaya , to humse bhi mil.lo.

Karan or jyoti jese hi piche mud k dekhte h to khush ho jate h.

Kyunki piche aanand khada tha.

Karan or jyoti unke pas jaker aashirwad lete h.

Aanand :- khus raho mere bacho , ese hi aage badte raho , aaj tumne khud ka or maa baap k sath mera bhi naam roshan kiya h.

Mujhe garv h ki m tumhara guru hu.

Fir karan or jyoti se thodi der baat kerke , aanand apne sathiyo k pas chala jata h.

Fir shuru hoti h prize distribution ceremony.

Pahale 3rd or second position ki announcement hoti h.

Fir anchor boli.

Anchor :- ladies and gentlemen jis ghadi ka aap sab ko intezaar tha tha , wo achuki h.

The first prize goes to , mr karan sharma in male catagory

Fir karan stage p jata h , or use cheif guest jo shimla k mla the , wo use first prize dete h .

Jo ki ek trophy or ek packet tha . Jisko karan apne pas rakh leta h baad m dekhne ka soch.

Anchor :- friends , mujhe abhi abhi mr karan k coach aanand ji se pata chala h ki karan ji gaate bhi bahut acha h.

To kya kahate ho friends aap sab sunna chahenge karan ji ki aawaz m ek pyara sa song.

Audience :- yes...

Fir anchor kese n kese karan se request ker use mana hi leti h.

Karan :- friends , m ye gana use dedicate kerna chaunga , jiske bina m jine ki kalpna bhi ni ker sakta . Mera dil to sine m h , lekin us dil ki dhadkan wo h.

Per aaj wo mere se jara ruthi hui h , to m use manane k liye ye song gana chaunga.

Karan :-

तू आती है सीने में
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तू जो मुझे आ मिला
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Karan ne pura gana jyoti ki ankho m dekhte hue gaya tha, jise sun or apne bhai ka pyar dekh , jyoti ka sara gussa chu mantra ho gaya.

Sabhi audience karan ki surili aawaz m ye gana sun jor jor se clapping kerne lagte h.

Fir karan jese hi stage se uter k jyoti k paas aata h , jyoti karan k kaske gale lag jati h.

Karan :- mujhe maaf krr de gudiya , mera irada tumhe hurt Kerne ka ni tha.

Jyoti :- bhai aap mafi mat mango please , apki koi galti ni h , m hi kuch jyada react ker gayi thi.

Fir 2no bhai bahan alag hote h or fir jyoti k name ki bhi announcement hoti h or use bhi ek trophy or packet milta h.

Fir wahi p hi sab k liye dinner ka intezaam tha or uske baad dono nikal gaye sonam ki ghar ki or.

karan or jyoti ghar ki or lot rahe the , or wo dono usi jungle wale raste pe the.

Tabhi unki gadi apne aap band pad jati h waha, karan or jyoti gadi se niche utarte h.

Jyoti :- bhai , ye achanak se car ko kya hua.

Karan :- ruk choti m abhi dekhta hu.

Ye bol karan bonet khol k ,check ker hi raha tha , ki dono k kaano m.jungle ki or se ek ladki ki chikane ki aawaz aati h.

Awaaz :- bachaoooooo.

Jise sun dono bhai bahan chonk jate h.

Jyoti :- bhai lagta h koi ladki musibat m h ,hume uski madad kerni chahiye .

Karan :- ha gudiya , sahi boli tu.

Fir dono bhai bahan jungle ki or aane wale khatre se anjaan .

Per khatra kiske liye hoga , ye to next update m pata chalega.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi.

Stay tuned

jyoti jealousy ki wajeh se karan ka gussa thi per karan ne ek Mast sa gaana gakar use mana hi liya
prize ke saath saath packet me kya mila hai y abhi bhi suspense hai

aur lagta hai preto ka aaj akhri din hai
 
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Bhai is story m karan or jyoti dono equal hi to h , or kya kami lagi aapko story m
Or waise bi muje equal nahi chahiye ti fir bi iss story ne muje kabi niraash nahi kiya ab tak

Me bas ye chahta hu koi alag si hero heroine equal na hoke sirf heroine pe depend ho aisi koi naya story likhe ye jaroori nahi ke aap hi likhe koi bi likh le mere paas itna hunar nahi hai ki me fantasy story likh saku haan agar kabhi man hua to incest jaroor likhunga filaal iss story maje lene ki time hai bas me wahi le raha hu
 

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Karan or jyoti gadi ko chod us disha ki or nikal pade jaha se awaaz aayi thi.karan or jyoti jungle k ander ghus ker kuch dur pahunche to samne pate h ki 3 log ek orat ko ped se bandh rakha tha.

Admi 1 :- tere pati ko ab pata chalega ki , hume na kerne ka kya anjaam hota h.

Admi 2 :- ha sale ko kitni baar kaha tha ki , hume apni jamin bech de , per vo harami na mana.

Admi 3 :- ha aaj acha moka mila h , tera pati to , aaj bahar gaya hua h , aaj tujhe maar k teri lash ki wo halat karenge , jise dekh k wo khud hi mar jayega.

Lekin usse pahale teri jawani ka maza lutenge



Orat(rote) :- bhagwaan k liye mujhe chod dijiye , wo jamin hum ni bech sakte , usi per kheti ker k ham do waqt ki roti kha pate h.

Per un darindo per us bichari k rone ka koi fark ni pada . Or wo abhi uski or bhade hi the ki achanak ek bande ki gardan kisi ne piche se pakad k uska sir ek ped p de mara , jisse uska sir fat gaya , or wo vahi behosh ho gaya

Ye war karan ne hi kiya tha, bache 2no aadmi ye dekh ker heran ho gaye ki 1 bache ne unke hate kate pahalwan aadmi ki ek baar me hi ye halat ker di .

Aadmi 1 :- e ladke kon h tu sale , teri ye majal ki tune mere dost ko mara , ager jinda rahana chahata h to chupchap yaha se chala ja.

Karan :- moka to m tujhe deta hu , chup chap patli gali se nikal lo verna esi jagah p marunga sale, ki doctor ko dikhane m bhi sharm aayegi.

Admi 2 haste hue bola :- ye bacha hame marega.

Ja bache ja nikal le yaha se apni chamiya k sath , verna pahale tere hath per todenge, fir is orat or teri is londiya k sath.......

Abhi usne apni baat bhi ni ki thi ki ,karan ne ek jordar laat uske pet m de mari or wo bhi udte hue ped se takra k behosh ho gaya.

Karan :- mujhe dobara bolne ki aadat ni h.

Apne 2 sathiyon ki ye halat dekh aadmi 1 ne apni jeb se banduk nikal li ,

Admi 1 :- sale bahut badi galti ker di , tune mere aadmiyo ko maar k , ab marne k liye teyar ho ja.

Or itna bol ker usne karan p goli chalani chahi,side m khadi jyoti ne uske hath p ek jordar laat mardi.

Jisse uske hath se banduk chut k dur gir gayi, or karan ne isi baat ka fayda utha uski dhunayi shuru ker di.

Or usko bhi maar mar k behosh ker diya , fir unhone us orat ki rassiya kholi or jyoti ne usse pucha aap thik to h na.

Orat :- ji m thik hu , aapka bahut bahut dhanyawad aapne meri jaan or ijat dono bachai in hewano se.

Jyoti :- isme shukriya kesa , ye to humara farz tha.

Karan :- wese aap yaha kese , or ye sab aapke piche kyu pade the.

Orat :- kya batau sahab ,m or mere pati yahi thoda aage apne ek chote se ghar m rahate h , isi jungle m .

Or mere pati ek kisan h jo humari hi ek chote se jamin k tukde p kheti kerte h jisse hamara gujara chalta h.

Per ek din in kamino ki najar humari jamin pe pad gayi , jiski kimat main road k pas hone k kaaran bahut jyada h, inhone humse wo jamin kharidne ki bahut koshis ki , peso ka lalach diya , jaan se marne ki dhamki bhi di per mere pati ne inhe saaf saf mana ker diya.

Lekin aaj mere pati kahi bahar gaye hue the , to pata ni inko kese pata chal gaya , or ye mujhe ghar se utha ker yaha le aaye ,

Or ye bol vo rone lagi , jyoti ne use kese n kese shant karwaya , fir boli.

Jyoti :- aapka ghar kaha h aunty , aaiye hum aapko chod dete h.

Orat pahale to na kerti h , per fir maan jati h.

Karan(gundo ki or dekhte hue) :- per hame inka bhi kuch kerna ho

Ye bol wo police ko phone lagane ka try kerta h per signal ni tha waha pe.

Karan :- shit yaar , no signal . Ab kya kare.

Jyoti ko ek idea aata h or wo boli .

Jyoti :- bhai ek idea h , kyu na pahale hum gundo ko yahi bandh k , inko inke ghar tak chod dete h .

Fir aaker kuch soch lenge na.

Karan ko jyoti ki ye baat sahi lagti h or wo bola.

Karan :- acha idea h gudiya , esa ker tu inke sath aage chal , m tab tak inko bandh k aata hu.

Jyoti :- ok bhai.

Fir wo orat or jyoti dhire dhire aage bhadne lagi , or karib 10 min baad karan bhi unke pass bhag k pahunch gaya.

Jungle kafi darawana lag raha tha , har jagah andhera chaya hua tha,or dur kahi se bhediyon k rone ki aawaz aarahi thi.

Or achanak se vatavaran m thand bhi bad gayi thi, pee karan or jyoti ne is baat pe jyada dhyan ni diya tha .

Shayad isliye kyunki unhe bas jaldi se ghar pahunchna tha , kyunki sonam ghar p akeli thi ,or uski tabiyat bhi thik ni thi.

Wo orat un dono ko apne ghar le jati h , jo ek kacha makaan tha. Ander jaker wo unhe ek charpai p bitha thi h or boli.

Orat :- aapka ek baar fir meri jan bachane k liye dhanyawad.

Karan :- ji ab hume ab chalna chahiye.

Orat :- ji ab bahut raat ho chuki h , is samay aao kaha jayenge. Esa kijie aaj raat yahi ruk jaiye, kal subah nikal jaiyega.

Jyoti :- ji hum jarur rukte per hune jana hi hoga , hamari choti bahan ghar per akeli h or uski tabiyat bhi kharab h.

Orat bahut bolti h per karan or jyoti ni mante to wo boli.

Orat :- thik h ,per jane se pahale aapko mere sath ek - 2 cup chahe pini padegi.

Karan or jyoti us orat ko mana ni ker pate or wo orat chay banane chali jati h, or karib 10 min baad wo 3 glass chay lati h.

Fir 3no wahi beth k karan or jyoti chay pine lagte h, or sath m us orat se thodi thodi baate bhi kerne lage.

Per dhire dhire dono ko behoshi si chane lagi , tabhi karan ne ladkhadati aawaz se bola.

Karan :- kon ho tum or kya milaya tha tune chay me.

Ye sun wo orat haste hue apne asli rup me aagayi or boli.

Orat :- kajri hu m. Teri mot.

Or karan or jyoti abhi kuch bol pate itne m vo behosh ho gaye.

Ji haa dosto wo orat kajri hi thi z or ye usika mayajal tha, aakhiri ladki ko pane k liye.or wo gunde bhi kajri k hi pret gulam the.

Kajri(jor jor se haste hue) :- haha akhir kar mujhe 100vi ladki mil hi gayi, ab malik mujhe sabse shaktishali chudel bana denge.

Tabhi kajri ko kuch ahasas hota h or wo us ladki k kamre ki or jati h , jaha per bandhi hui thi wo.

Or jaa ker usko uske balo se pakad leti h. Ladki heran ho jati h ye achanak se kese ho gaya.

Kajri (haste hue) :- yahi soch rahi h na achanak se tera kavach kese tut gaya, lagta h tera wo bhagwan bhi dar k bhag gaya yaha se .

Ab malik to dugna khush ho jayenge , kyunki m unhe ek ni 2 2 ladkiya lake jo dungi.

Ladki :- ni ye ni ho sakta , bhagwan kabhi bhi shetan se ni har sakte.

Kajri :- ho sakta ni , ho chuka h murkh ladki. Ab chal mere sath.

Or kajri us ladki ko ghasitte hue bahar karan or jyoti jo behosh pade the.

Kajri :- pata ni ye sare kamchor kaha mar gaye, lagta h ab is ladke ko mujhe hi thikane lagana hoga.

Ladki(rote hue boli) :- ager tujhe ladki hi chahiye to mujhe hi leja na chudel, in bacho ko kyu marne p tuli h.

Kajri us ki taraf ghum jati h per uska hath , jiske nakhun chaku jese bade or thikhe the wo karan ki or lambe hote hue bad rahe the.

Kajri :- kyu ri manhoos , tujhe in logo ki itni chinta kyu ho rahi h, tu to jayegi tere sath me ye ladki bhi.

Or is ladke k maas ko to m shaktishali banne ki khushi m davat k tor p khaungi

Itna abhi kajri ne bola hi tha ki , achanak waha ek bhayanak chikh gunj uthi , jo kajri ki hi thi.

Hua yu tha ki jese hi kajri ka hath karan k sine p pahuncha to , jyoti ne ek bade chaku se uska hath hi kaat dala jo kuch esa tha.
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Ye foldable hunting knife jyoti ne kal hi kharida tha, aane wale khatre k liye, lekin ek khas baat or thi ki us knife se ek nili roshni se chamak raha tha , jo jyoti k hath se nikal rahi thi.

Kajri gusse or hairani se jhalate hue chikhi :- kon ho tum dono , koi aam insan mere banaye hue behoshi ki dawai se ni bach sakta .

Tum jo bhi ho mere hatho ni bachaoge , tumhare ye war mera kuch ni bigad sakte.ye dekho.

Itna bol wo apna kata hath aage kerti h, or apna hath wapis judne ka intezaar kerti h.


Tabhi kajri ko ek or shock lagta h , jab uska hath wapas ni judta .

Kajri ( gusse se pagal hote hue) :- namumkin , ye mera hath kyu ni jud raha , kon ho tum, kisne bheja h tumhe.

Karan :- tum jese dushto ka kaal hu m, or mujhe bhejne wale vahi ishwer , vahi mahabali hanuman ji h , jinki shakti k samne tumhari itni bhi okaat ni ki tum inhe(ladki ki or ishara kerte hue ) chu bhi ni payi dusht.

Or ha tera wo khas aadmi(pret leader jise karan ne us din sking k time mara tha) mil gaya kya.

Jyoti :- kesi baat kerte ho bhai , use to aapne hi to uske bhai ko pahunchaya tha.



Kajri(chonkte hue) :- acha to vo tha kamine jisne mere khas aadmi k bhai ko mara tha or jisse ladne k liye hi usne meri foz leke gaya tha , per abhi tak uska koi pata ni chala.

Tune use bhi mar diya , kamine ab tu ni bachega

Fir wo apne gulamo ko bulati h.

Kajri :- simha .

Per waha koi ni aata .

Karan haste hue :- jinko yamraj ka hi bulava aagaya h , wo tere bulave m thodi aayenge chudel.

Short flashback.

Karan or jyoti jese hi aawaz ko sun waha pahunche the , to unlogo ko dekhte hi karan or jyoti unko pahachan gaye the.

Karan (man me ) :- dekh rahi h gudiya , in paapio ki notanki.

Jyoti (man me hi) :- ha bhai , ye dusht ese hi masum logo ko fasate h , apne jaal m. Kya bolte ho bhai inka game baja dale.

Karan :- ni re gudiya , ese n hume maja aayega , n hi hamre readers ko , chalo inhi ka game inke sath hi khelte h , dekhte h aakhir ye sab ye ker kyu rahe h.

Fir karan or jyoti jaker un preton ko thikane lagate h , or jab karan jyoti ko aage bhadne ko kahata h , to unke thode aage hi nikalne k baad karan un 3no preton k pass jata h.

Karan :- bas kero notanki salo , ab apne asli rup m aabhi jao.

Pret ye sun buri chonk k uth jate h or unme se ek bola.

Pret 1 :- tu janta h hum kon h.

Karan :- abe itni bekar acting karoge to pahachanunga ni kya , salo tumse achi acting to krk hi ker leta h.

Pret :- ab pahachan hi liya h to marne k liye teyar ho ja.

Karan :- sorry guys , m tumhare sath jarur khelta , per kya h na mere pass time ni h.

So good bye guys , rest in hell.

Ye bol karan apna ek hath age kerta h , jinme se ek laal roshni nikal ker 3no ko jala deti h.

Fir karan jaldi se jyoti k pass pahunch jata h or man hi man jo abhi kiya wo bata deta h.

Fir karan jese hi kajri k ghar m enter kerta h , tabhi karan ko negative energy k sath sath , ek positive energy ka bhi ahasas hota h. Jise mahasus ker karan ko kuch samjh aajata h.

Fir kajri jese hi karan or jyoti ko chay deti h to uska hath karan k hath se touch ho jata h , jisse karan ko uske irado k bare m sab kuch pata chal jata h or ladki k baare m bhi.

Flashback end .

Ab chudel ka gusse k maare bura haal ho gaya tha. Or usne apne dono hatho se aag k gole fekne lagi .

Per karan ko vo apni or slow motion m hi aate hue dikh rahe the , to apni ankh band ker ker mantra bola ,or usi ke sath uske hatho m ek talvar aagayi.ye wahi mantra tha jo baba ne use yaha ane se pahale diya tha.
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Or karan ne bade aaram se wo gole us talvaar se rok diye , karan k paas jyada time ni tha , to usne apni ankhe band ker k kuch bola .

Fir apni talvaar kajri ki or ker di , jisse ek roshni nikal k kajri se takrayi, or kajri jo ki hava m udte hue war ker rahi thi uski sari shaktiya nasht ho gayi or wo jamin p aaker gir gayi.

Fir karan or jyoti uski or aage bhadne lage.

Karan :- tere paap ka ghada bhar chuka h kajri , aaj tak jitne bhi tune bure karm kiye h , uske katmfal pane k liye sajj ho ja.

Ye bol karan uski talvaar se uski gardan udani chahi wo bol uthi.

Kajri :- ruk jao , kya tum ek orat p hath uthaoge, kya ye tum jese veer ko shobha dega.

Karan :- sahi kaha , m ek orat pe hath ni utha sakta , per ye to utha sakti h na.

Ye bol k karan jara sa side hua , or uske piche se jyoti samne aayi.

Karan (talvar dete hue) :- le jyoti iski ye aakhiri khawaish bhi puri ker dete h.

Lekin tabhi wo jyoti bol uthi ,

Jyoti :- bhai , iski mot usike hath honi chahiye , jisse isne uska sab kuch chin liya.

Ye bol jyoti us ladki k pass jati h , or apna wo knife jissme abhi bhi wo roshni chamak rahi thi, dete hue boli.

Jyoti :- lijiye , isko aapko hi.marna hoga

Ladki :- ji m kese maar paungi , m to ek sadharan si ladki hu or ye ek chudel.

Jyoti :- bas ladkiyo ki yahi soch use kamzor banati h , bhulo mat is sansaar ki har nari maa adishakti ki hi ansh h , or har ek ladki m hi mahakali mojud hoti h, isliye ye shanka chodo or ker do is dhushta ka ant .

Kyunki nari ager shanka tyag de to khud shankar ban jati h.

Bhulo mat yahi h wo , jisne tumhare pyaar ko berahami se mara tha , kya tum apne pyaar ka badla ni logi.

Jyoti ki ye baat sun ladki ko wo seen yaad aajata h , jab usiki aankho k samne in preto ne us ladke ko mar dala tha, jisse uski aankh se angare barasane lagte h or wo jyoti k hatho se chanku le kajri ki or dod k jati h or wo chanku uske sine m ghop deti h.

Or kajri ek bhayanak chinkh k sath narak ki yatra pe pahunch jati h.

Usko maarne k baad ladki wahi beth rone lagti h , usne apne pyaar ki mrityu ka badla le hi liya tha aakhir kar.

Kuch der rone dene k baad , jyoti us ladki k pas jaker use shant karwati h.

Ladki (hath jod k boli) :- aapka kese m shukriya ada keru , aapne na hi mujhe sirf is chudel se aajad krwa meri raksha ki, balki mere pyaar ki mot ka badla lene m bhi madad ki .

Aap sakshat bhagwan ho.

Ye bol ker vo karan k per pakdne wali hoti h ki karan use rokte hue

Karan :- are are ye kya ker rahe ho aap , aapki raksha humne ni balki , aapki himmat or bajrang bali k prati aapki shradha ne ki h , hum kon hote h unki barabri kerne wale .

Dhanyawad kerna h to un hanumanaji ka hi kijiye, jinhone hume aapki raksha k liye hume madhyam banaya.

Fir karan or jyoti use ye baat kisi ko na batane ka bolte h, jise wo khushi khushi man leti h.

Fir karan uska hath pakadata h or waha se teleport ho sidha us ladki k ghar k samne prakat ho jata h.

Karan :- jaiye ab aap surakshit h , lekin aapse please ye request h ki jo bhi hua aap kisiko mat bataiyega.

Ladki :- aap chinta mat kijiye karan ji , m wada kerti hu ye sab mujh tak hi simit rahega.

Ye bol wo karan k galo p ek kiss ker deti h or sharma k apne ghar m chali jati h .

Or karan bichara apna sa muh le wapas jungle pahunch jara h , or man hi man shukar manata h ki jyoti waha ni thi.

Jyoti :- bhai , ab aage kya kerna h.

Karan :- kal hume jana h gudiya , isliye hume aaj hi yaha se preto ka samrajya ka nash kerna hoga.

Jyoti :- wo kese bhai

Karan :- preto k raja vikral ka ant kerke.

Jyoti :- per bhai ,wo milega kaha.

Karan :- wo mujhe kajri se pata chal chuka h gudiya , yaha se 2 mile dur dakshin disha m ek kila h , vahi h vikaral ka thikana.

Jyoti :- to chaliye bhai der kis baat ki,

fir karan or jyoti nikal padte h us disha m.

Abhi unhone chale thodi der hi hui thi ki , karan ko kuch dhayan aaya or wo jyoti se bola.


Karan :- gudiya,ek baat yaad rakhna , ab thodi aage se tujhe apne piche se kayi tarike ki aawaze sunayi degi .Per kuch bhi ho jaye tu piche mud k mat dekhna , verna preto ki maya m hum fas jayege.

Jyoti :- ji bhai.

Karan or jyoti abhi kuch aage hi chale honge ki unhe , aawaz ani shuru ho gayi.

Tabhi karan k kano m rohan ki aawaz padti h.

Rohan :- bhai bacha mujhe , ye bhut mujhe mar dalenge.

Per karan janta tha ki ye sab preto ki maya h , isliye wo aage badhta chala gaya .

Tabhi jyoti ko radha ki aawaz aati h.

Radha :- di bachao mujhe , ye bhut mujhe mar dalenge.

Lekin jyoti bhi khud ko samjha leti h. Tabhi ab undono k kano m asha ki awaz aati h.

Asha :- karan jyoti beta mujhe bachao , m jinda hu . Ye pret yaha mujhe pakad k le aaye the.

Ab jyoti se raha ni jaraha tha , wo mudne wali hi hoti h karan use rok leta h.

Karan :- ni gudiya , ye sirf un preto ki chal h, hume fasane ki.

Ab karan jyoti ko aage chalne ko bolta h or wo uske piche chal raha hota h.

Tabhi jyoti k kaano m karan ki chilane ki aawaz padti h.

Karan :- gudiyaaaaaaa

Karan ki awaz sun jyoti akhir piche mud hi jati h , lekin ye bhi un aatmao ka chal hi tha.

Karan :- ye kya kiya gudiya tune !

Or usike sath aas pas ki pedo ki jade nikal jyoti ko jakadne lagti h , karan unhe apni talvar se katne ki koshis kerta to wo wapas jud jati .

Tabhi karan ko ek idea aata h or wo apni ankhe band ker, apni talvar hava m uthata h , jiske sath uski talvar se aag nikalne lagti h .

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Fir karan dobara war kerta h , or is war wo kamyab hota h or jade jal jati h.

Jisse jyoti aajad ho jati h or jamin p gir k hafne lagti h , karan uske pass jake .

Karan :- tu thik to h na jyoti .

Jyoti :- ha bhai and sorry mane aapki bat ni mani.

Karam :- koi baat ni gudiya , m janta hu tune esa sirf meri chinta k mare kiya.

Wahi dusri or

Vikral apni aasuri sadhna m laga hua tha, or 100 vi ladki k intezaar m tha, per use abhi tak karan or jyoti k ane or kajri ki mot ka pata ni chala tha.

Ye karan or jyoti k locket ki ek or khasiyat thi, jiske kaaran koi bhi unki ki mojudgi ka pata ni laga sakta tha.

Or dusrA kaaran ye bhi tha ki, use apni sadhna se fursat hi ni mili thi.

Back to the hero.

Karan or jyoti aage bad hi rahe the ki , unhe ek ghayal bhudha aadmi dikhayi deta h.

Karan or jyoti unke pass jate h or puchte h ,

Jyoti :- baba aapki ye halat kese or aap is jungle m kese .

Bhuda :- beti m musafir hu , yaha se gujar hi raha tha , ki ek bhediye ne hamla ker diya .Usse m bach to gaya kese n kese , per ghayal ho gaya.

Wo samne ped dekh rahi ho aagar uski patiya pis ker mere ghav per laga di jaye to mere ko aaram milega.

Karan(man me ) :- ye sale ni sudharenge, dhyan se gudiya , ye ek special type ka pret h .

Chahe bade se bada tantrik hi kyu na ho ager ise chu le to jal pal bhar m jal jaye. ruko m dekhta hu ise.

Karan :- rukiye baba m lagata hu aapke oshadhi.

Bhudha ye sun muskurane laga.

Ye bol karan ped per chad k patiya todta h or nich utarte hue janbujhker wo pate niche gira deta h.

Karan :- are ye to gande ho gaye , chalo koi baat ni .

Mere pas ek choti pani ki bottle h or karan apni jeb se ek choti si botel nikal ker patiyo ko dhota h or unhe pis kar us bhude k ghavo p lagata h.

Bhudha apne asli rup m aajata h jo jo ek aag se bana shetan tha or gusse m chilaya

Fire devil :- ye kese ho sakta h , tum bach kese gaye, kher chodo ab ni bachoge.

Ye bol vo abhi karan or jyoti ki or bharne laga tha ki , uska sharir achank se pathar ka hone laga.

Devil chikhte hue :- ye kya kiya tune , kya lagaya tha tune mere sharir pe .

Karan :- kuch khas ni , wahi patiya jo tune boli thi , bas un patiyo ko mane gangajal se dhoya tha.

Devil :-. Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.

Bas itna hi chila paya or uke baad devil pathar ka ban gaya .

Ji ha dosto karan ne apni shaktiyon se gangajal hi mangwa liya tha or usse pattiyo ko dho ker us shetan k laga diya , jisse uski ye halat ho gayi.

Ab karan or jyoti ese hi sab preto ka safaya kerte kerte aakhir vikral k mahal pahunch hi gaye .

Karan k dimag m ek idea aaya or usne jyoti ko bhi vahi man hi man bataya .

Wahi dusri or

Vikral ka ab sabra jwab dene laga tha

Vikaral :- kaha rah gayi ye nikami , ek ladki na la saki 2 hafto m.

Tabhi uske kano m ek aawaz padti h,

Ladki mil gayi malik .

Vikral :- aao kajri , sahi samay per tu pahunch gayi yaha.

Heran hone ki jarurat ni h dosto , ye kajri ni apna hero tha , jisne kajri ka rup dharan kiya tha or sath m jyoti thi , jo behosh hone ka natak ker rahi thi.unhone esa kyu kiya tha vo aage pata chal jayega.

Vikral :- jao kajri ise bhi bakiyo k sath bali kaksh m le jao , hum kuch der m vaha pahunchte h.

Ji haa doston sabhi ladkiya jinda thi jinhe kajri ne pakda tha, vikral shetan ko khush kerne k liye 101 ladkiyo ki bali dena chahata tha , pee vaad m wo 100 p aagaya.

Karan jese hi waha pahunche , to sab ladkiyo ki halat dekh usko rona aagaya or jyoti ko bhi.

Sabki halat bahut kharab thi , sab ka sharir sukh gaya tha. Sab ko dekh ker esa lag raha tha , ki vo aaj yaha ni pahunchte to vo bichariya vikral k hatho marne se pahale hi dam tod deti , sab bediyon m bandhi hui thi.

Sabhi kajri ko dekh k rone lagi or ek boli.

Ladki :- maar kyu ni deti tum hame , kyu tarfa rahi ho yu hume . Kya bigada h humne tumhara.

Karan ab asli rup m aajata h or bola .

Karan :- aap sab please mat roiye, m aap sab ko yaha se chudane hi aaya hu.

Ladki 2 :- hum.kese man le ki , tum un bhuto k sath ni ho

Karan apna hath aage kerta h jisse sab aajad ho jati h or sath ki sath swasth bhi.

Ladki 2 karan k pero m gir ker mafi mangne lagi per karan ne use samjha diya.

Jyoti :- bhai hume in sab ko ek safe jagah bhejna hoga.

Karan baba ko yaad kerta h or sabhi ladkiyo ko gahari nind sula deta h .

Baba jese hi waha aaye karan kuch bolne ko hua per pahale hi baba bol uthe.

Baba :- kuch bolne ki aavashyakata ni h putra , m janta hu tumne mujhe kisliye yaad kiya h.

Or baba sabhi ladkiyo ko apne sath apne aashram m lejate h.

Tabhi vikaral bhi vaha aajata h or ladkiyo ko gayab dekh gusse se pagal ho jata h .

Vikral :- kon h tu , tu pahuncha kese yaha, or kaha gayi wo sabhi ladkiya.

Karan :- tere liye bas itna janna hi kafi h vikaral m tera kaal hu.

Vikral haste hue :- acha to tu h vo , jiske baare m mahaprabhu ne bataya tha. Tu aato gaya....


Karan bich me tokte hue :- per jina wapas ni jaunga , yahi ghisa pita dialogue marne wala tha na tu , ge backchodiya chod or yudh ker dusht.

Vikaral apni talvaar leker karan ki or bhada , or karan vikral ki or.

Fir shuru hua dono k bich bhayanak yudh , jisme kabhi karan bhari pad raha tha to kabhi vikaral.fir karan ne uski talvar ko kaat diya .

Fir shuru hua unme dvand yudh , dono m hi apaar bal tha , dono hi ek dusre ko kadi takker de rahe the

Per jald hi karan ne usko pachad diya, per usne apne jese kayi mayavi roop bana liye.

Or apni sena ko bhi vaha bula liya jisme lakho ki sankhya me pret the.

Tabhi jyoti ne socha

Jyoti :- lagta h ab mera yudh m pravesh ka samay aagaya h.

Or itna soch usne ankhe band ki or baba ne jo use mantra diya tha , usko bola or ek hath uper kiya, tabhi uske hath me ek divya dhanush aagaya.

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Jyoti ne furti se us dhanush ko sena ki or kiya , jese hi pratyncha khichi dhanush per tir apne aap agaya . Or jyoti ne wo tir chod diya.

Or wo tir jake jese hi sena p gira , uske sath hi ek visfot hua or kayi pret mare gaye, fir jyoti ese hi tiro se un preto ki sena p tut padi.

Jyoti :- bhai ap us dusht ka ant kijiya , iske in chirkuto ko to m dekh lungi.


Karan muskuraya or ab asli vikral ko dhundne laga.Karan ne apni ankh band ker man ki anko se asli vikral ko dhunda or ek jordar prahar uske sine p kiya.

Fir karan ne uski gardan uda di , per ye kya wo wapas pahale jese jud gayi, esa baar bar hota raha.vikral mar hi ni raha tha.

Karan ko kuch samjh ni aaraha tha ki vo kya kare , tabhi uske man me baba ki aawaz aayi .

Putra isne apne pran ek esi vastu m dal diya h jo isika prati rup darshati h. Or wo isi kamre m mojud h , pahale tumhe use nasht kerna hoga.

Karan baba ki baat samjh jata h or pass m rakhi vikral ki ek murti jo bilkul vesi dikhti thi , use nasht ker diya per kuch ni hua , ab karan ko samjh ni aaraha tha ki vo konsi vastu h.

Tabhi jyoti ka dhyan kamre m rakhe ek aaine pe jata h ,

Jyoti :- is aaine ka yaha kya kaam ho sakta h.

Tabhi jyoti ko puri baat samjh aajati h or wo karan se man me boli.

Jyoti :- bhai, is aaine ko nasht ker dijiye, kyunki aaina hi ek esi vastu h jo , kisi k bhi pratirup ko darsha sakta h aasani se.

Karan vesa hi kerta h or aaine p ek shakti prahar kerta h jisse uske tukde tukde ho jate h or ek kali roshni usse nikal vikaral m sama jati h.

Vikaral chilaya :- niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.

Karan :- ab apni mritu k liye saj ho ja vikral.

Vikaral :- itni jaldi ni ladke .

Or vikral aankhe band kerke kisi ko yaad kerte hue bola

Vikral :- raksha kijiye prabhu , apne is bhakt ki raksha kijiye.

Tabhi vaha tez tez havaye chalne lagi , or ek tez roshni k sath ek shaks karan or vikral k bich m prakat hua. Jise dekh vikral ki sena or jyoti bhi ruk gaye.

Jise dekh karan unhe pahachan gaya or asmanjas fas gaya ki ab vo kya kare.

Kyunki samne preto k devta , shri pret raj sarkaar khade the, jo preton k sath sath insano k bhi pujniya h, rajasthan k mahendipur balaji k mandir m inki bhi hanumanaji k sath puje jate h

Karan ne unhe pranam kiya , or bola.

Karan(man me) :- he prabhu , ye m kya dekh raha hu , aap ish dusht ki raksha krr rahe h , jisne najane kitne masumo ki bali di h , esa mat kijiye bhagwan , m aap per prahar ni ker sakta , kripya mujhe dharm sankat m na dale.

Pret raj (vivashata k bhav se man me bole) :- m vivash hu putra , vikral mera bhakt h or bhut kal m mane ise ek baar vachan diya tha ki , m iske prano ki raksha kerne ek baar jarur aaunga.

Putra m janta hu iske apradh , or m swayam bhi iska ant chahata hu, parantu m apna vachan bhi ni tod sakta , ab tumhe hi kuch kerna hoga putra.

Karan sochne laga ki ab kya kiya jaye , pahale to use kuch samjh ni aaya , fir usko kuch yaad aya jisse uske chahare pe ek muskan aagayi.

Karan(man me) :- vachan to apne kisi or ko bhi diya tha bhut kal m prabhu. Aapki aagya ho to .

Pret raj karan ka ishara samjh jate h or karan ko vesa hi kerne ko kahate h.

Karan ab hath jod ankhe bandh ker ek mantra bolne laga.

Karan:-

अतुलितबलधामं हेमशैलाभदेहं
दनुजवनकृशानुं ज्ञानिनामग्रगण्यम् ।
सकलगुणनिधानं वानराणामधीशं
रघुपतिप्रियभक्तं वातात्मजं नमामि

Or isi k sath karan k sharir se ek roshni nikalne lagi or dhire dhire us roshni ne jo aakar liya , usko dekh sabhi preto included vikral ki fat k hath m aagayi

Kyunki us roshni ne sakshat mahabali hanuman ji ki shape leli thi.
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Pretraj ne hanumanaji ko vachan diya tha ki , jaha unka vaas hoga ya koi unka nam bhi lega to koi bhi bhut pret us bhakt ka kuch ni bigad sakega.

Pret raj ko ye moka sahi laga or wo jese hi jane lage.to vikral bol utha.

Vikral :- mujhe yu chod kaha ja rahe h prabhu , aapne mujhe vachan diya tha.

Pret raj :- vachan diya jarur tha vikral per ye ni bola tha ki tumhari raksha m har kisi se kar paunga or yaha to ab is ladke ne hanuman ji ki pratikriti ko le aaya h , ab m bhi kuch ni ker sakta , mujhe jane do .

Or ye bol pret raaj waha se gayab ho gaye.

Yahi to karan ka plan tha , usne sach m hanuman ji ko ni bulaya tha , bas ek hava m hanumanaji ki shape bana di thi.

Karan :- ab to tumhara antim sahara bhi ni raha vikral , or pret raj ko yaha bula tune apne paap ka ghada pura bhar diya h .

Kyunki tune ek dev ko burayi ki taraf kerne ka prayas jo kiya .

Vikral ab bhagne laga , tabhi jyoti boli.

Jyoti :- bhai ye lo.

Or ye bol usne apna dhanush karan ki or feka , or karan ne furti se catch ker , ek tir vikaral k pero m mara , jisse vo vahi gir gaya.

Karan :- tu to bahut bada kayar nikla vikral , yudh m pith dikha ker bhag raha tha.

Per kisi ne kaha h na ki

" mot se bhi bhala koi bach paya h "

Baat to vo bilkul sahi h , per mot se bhi jyada ager kuch khatarnak h jisse koi bhi ni bach sakta , wo h vyakti ka karmfal.

Or tumhe to abhi dono milne wale h , fir tune soch bhi kese liya tu bhag jayega.

Ye sab karan ne vikral ki or bhadte hue bola.

Vikral :- mujhe maf ker do , bas ek ek moka dedo , m sab bure kam chod dunga.

Karan ;- ni vikral , tum ab shama k layak ni ho, ab apna dand pane k liye saj ho jao.

Ye bol karan ne uska sir apni talvar k ek hi vaar se uda diya or vikral k marte hi uski sena m bhagadad mach gayi.

Per vo isse pahale bhagte , jyoti ne ek mantra bol tir unki or choda , jisse sab k sab vahi bandh gaye.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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kajri ki chatorai bhari notanki karan aur jyoti bhali bhati samjh ker uska khatma kar diya aur ab toh vikral ka bhi end hone wala hai

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