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Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running

Kya story m threesome hona chahiye


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luv4sale696969

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So the battlefield for destruction of Vikral is all set....
Nice update... Keep it up...
 
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Rohan008

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Update no :- 56
Karan or jyoti dono hi select ho gaye the. Wo dono list dekh ker bahut khush the.

Jyoti to itni excited ho gayi wo ye bhi bhul gayi wo kaha h , or jhat se khushi k maare karan k dono gal chumke uske gale lag gayi.

Karan k ishara kerne per jab jyoti apne aaspas dekhti h to pati h sabhi use hi dekh rahe h, to jhat se alag ho jati h, or sharmane lagti h

Or fir karan or jyoti radha k pass pahuchte h or udaas hone ki acting kerte h.

Radha(tension se) :- kya hua di aap or bhaiya yu udaas kyu h, bataiye na kya hua.

Karan :- wo choti baat darasal ye h ki...

Radha:- kya baat h bhai boliye na

Karan :- wo baat darasal ye h ki hum.

Fir karan or jyoti ek sath bol uthe


Dono :- ki yahi gudiya ki hum select ho gaye.


Radha jese hi ye sunti h to khushi k maare uchal padti h.

Radha:- yahooooooooooooo.

Fir dono se gale milte hue.

Radha:- congratulations bhaiya,congratulations didi.

Fir 3no bhai bahan apne hotel ki or lot jate h . Or bari bari se fresh ho sab radha k room m milte h.

Radha:- bhai aapki fight to kal h na, kyu naa aaj hum thoda ghum le.

Karan :- ha gudiya nice idea.

Jyoti :- per bhai hum jayenge kaha .

Karan :- pahale yaha se to nikle gudiya , fir dekhenge.

Fir 3no bhai bahan nikal padte h shimla ghumne .

Abhi 3no bhai bahan shimla k hasin najaro ka aanand hi le rahe the ki tabhi karan ki najar road ki dusri side padti h

To wo dekhta h ki 17 18 saal ki ladki jo dikhne m pareshan lag rahi or kamzor bhi, wo road cross ker rahi h , or samne se ek gadi aarahi h , lekin uska dhyan hi kahi or h.

Gadi bas usse takrane hi wali thi ki karan apni lagbhag full speed se us ladki ki or doda or car se takkar hone se pahale hi karan jump maar us ladki ko le ker road ki dusri or jaha se wo aarahi thi waha girta h.

Lekin us ladki ko chot na lage isliye karan ne use khud k uper le liya tha.

Radha or jyoti to pahale ye sab dekh k jor se chikh padti h.

Bhaiii.

Fir jab vo dekhti h ki unka bhai sahi h to dod k dono ki taraf jati h.

Karan or wo ladki bhi ab uth gaye the.

Jyoti bhag k karan k gale lag ker boli .

Jyoti :- bhai aap thik to ho na.

Karan :- ha gudiya m thik hu

Fir karan us ladki ko puchta h.

Karan :- tum thik to ho nA, kahi chot to ni lagi , road dhayan se cross kerni chahiye na.

Karan ne ye baat itne pyaar or apnepan se boli thi , ki wo ladki bhi prabhavit ho gayi.

Ladki:- sorry sie, wo actually mera dhyan kahi or tha, wo ghar ki tension m, ji m bilkul sahi hu

Fir wo kuch soch k boli.

Ladki :- sir aap yaha wese yaha k to ni lagte .

Jyoti :- ha wo hum yaha ek tournament k liye hi aaye h ,to socha thoda ghum bhi le.

Ladki ki ankho m ek chamak aajati h or boli

Ladki :- mam fir to aapko guide ki bhi jarurat hogi na, aap chahe to m aapko ghuma sakti hu shimla , or mere charges bhi jyada ni h.

Karan :- ok ye to bahut achi baat h , hum isi bare m hi to soch rahe the , kyu jyoti .

Jyoti :- ha bhai .

Fir us ladki se

Jyoti :- wese tumhara naam kya h.

Ladki :- ji sonam.

Jyoti :- nice name sonam , wese ek baat puchu ager bura na mano to.

Sonam :- ji bekijk puchiye.

Jyoti :- wo m ye puchna chahati thi , ki tumhari age to abhi kaafi kam h , tumhe to abhi apni studies p dhyan dena chahiye na, fir ye guide ki job kyu. Tumhare papa ya koi or bada tumhe rokta ni.

Sonam dono bhai bahan k bolne k andaaz jisme apnapan saf saf jhalak raha tha ko sun , khud ko rok ni payi or rone lagi.

Jyoti ye dekh ghabra gayi or sonam ko gale laga ke boli.

Jyoti :- kya hua choti mane kuch galat bol diya kya.

Sonam:- ni mam aapne to bilkul sahi sawal kiya , per kya karu mam , mujhe ye sab kerna padta h.

M ek anath hu , 18 sal ki hone tak to m rahi jaha mane 12 tak padhayi ki . Lekin uske baad mujhe rules k according orphanage chodna pada .

Mujhe ghumne firne ka khub shok tha or orphanage k pahale malik bhi bahut ache the jo hume aksar ghumane le jaya kerte the.to ese hi mujhe yaha ki har jagaho k raste or jankari mili .

Mane kuch or jagah job k liye bhi try kiya lakin ya to waha pe experience ki demand kerte ya kuch darinde ...

Or vo thodi der sisak sisak k wapas royi . Fir khud ko sambhalte hue boli.

Isliye orphanage ko chodne k baad kuch to kerna hi tha na, isliye m ye guide ka kaam kerna shuru ker diya
Or sath m private se studies bhi ker rahi hu.

Lekin kuch dino se mujhe koi tourist bhi ni mila. Isiliye m pareshan thi .

Lekin aapne aaj is anath ki na keval jaan bachai , balki itne apne pan se baat bhi ki , to m khud ko rok ni payi.

Karan jyoti

Jyoti or karan or radha ko sonam ki halat sun bahut dukh hota h.

Jyoti (use shant karate hue boli):- shant ho jao choti , shant ho jao. Tum aajse khud ko kabhi anath mat bolna , m hu na tumhari didi or ye tumhare bhaiya h.

Sonam (masumiyat se) :- kya sach .

Karan :- haa gudiya , aaj se meri 4 ni 5 bahane h.

Or karan apni bahe fela deta h or sonam karan k gale lag jati h . Or behosh ho jati h.

Wo shayad kamzori ki vajah se kyunki peso ki kami k chakkar m usne kal se kuch ni khaya tha.

Karan or jyoti ye baat samjh jate h or use pass k ek clinic m le jate h , jaha ye baat confirm ho jati h.

Pahale to karan or jyoti bas use hotel m khana khilate h . Or kuch pese dete h.

Sonam :- bhai ye pese kisliye.

Karan :- ye meri pyari gudiya ki fees h kuch advance , kyunki kal vo hame shimla jo ghumane wali h.

Sonam :- per bhai ye to bahut jyada h , m itne pese ni le sakti .

Jyoti :- rakh le gudiya , yu samjh le baki pese ek bhai ne apni bahan ko jeb kharch ki tarah diye h.

Sonam pahale to ni man rahi thi , kyunki wo ek swabhimani ladki thi.lekin jyoti k baar bar bolne p use manna hi pada.

Wahi dusri or

Patal lok m vp betha hua soch raha tha.

Vp :- aakhir kab tak m yu hi chup betha us rakshak ko yu shaktishali bante dekhta rahunga. Mujhe shigra hi kuch kerna hoga.

Tabhi vo kuch soch k muskurata h or gayab ho sidhe pahunch jata h vikral k kile m.

Vikaral jese hi vp ko dekhta h to vo uske aage jhuk jata h.

Vikral :- maha prabhu pranam, aapne yaha aane ki taklif kyu ki mujhe hi bula liya hota prabhu.

Vp :- ye sab chodo vikral, m yaha ek bahut hi jaruri kaam se aaya hu, aajse kuch dino baad tumhare is kile m ek ladka or ladki aayenge.

Or wo dono yaha se jinda bach k ni jane chahiye.

Vikral(haste hue) :- prabhu wo sadharan ladka ladki to yaha tak pahuchna to dur , is jungle ko hi paar na ker payenge,unko to mere gulam hi dekh lenge.

Vp :- murkh un dono ko sadharan samjhne ki bhul mat kerna, unme deviya shaktiya h , per vo purn rup se jagrit ni hui h.

Isliye m chahata hu ki isse pahale unki puri shakti jagrit ho usse pahale hi tum undono ko maar do.

Vikaral:- jesi aapki aagya prabhu.

Ye bol vp antardhyan ho gaya.

Next day


Aaj karan ka pahla match tha or same jo tha wo free martial art m mahir tha.

Har taraf darshako ki bhari sankhya m bhid thi.

Karan or wo john (dusra banda) je ring m aaker ek dusre se hath milate h .

Tabhi ghanti bajati h.

Ring bajte hi john attack kerna shuru ker deta h , kabhi lato to kabhi muko se.wo aggressive tha.

Karan sirf dodge kerte hue bas uski chal ko samjh raha tha or uski kamjori dhund raha tha.

John jese hi dekhta h ki uska ek bhi vaar karan ko chu bhi ni paya to or gusse se attack kerne laga . Or yahi uski galti thi.

Isse wo jaldi thak gaya or karan ne iska fayda utha ker uspe speed se mukko ki barsaat start ker di.

Or uski tango p war kerke use gira diya. Karan k waro ko john jyada der sah ni paya or usne haar man li.

Or first round ka vijeta karan ko ghoshit ker diya gaya.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

Stay tuned
Haha dekh bhai baat aisi h
Update bht acha jaa rha tha jab tak sonam naam nhi aaya
Ye saala jitne bhi ache writer h is naam ko zarur dalenge
Or ye meri ex ka naam h
Isko dekh k main jal bhun jata hun:bike::beer: :what::roflol:

Chalo koi na ab aa hi gya h to shna pDega

Baaki ek baat manna padega
Or stories mein ye hota h
Jo ladki aayi seedha hero ki lover add
Ye phli story dekhi h
Jo ladki aayi seedha hero ki bhn add :tongue::DD::roflol:


Shi h bhai sonam k saath shiml k tour k tour ka intzaar rhega

Brilliant update
Keep rocking :)
 

Harry rocks

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Haha dekh bhai baat aisi h
Update bht acha jaa rha tha jab tak sonam naam nhi aaya
Ye saala jitne bhi ache writer h is naam ko zarur dalenge
Or ye meri ex ka naam h
Isko dekh k main jal bhun jata hun:bike::beer: :what::roflol:

Chalo koi na ab aa hi gya h to shna pDega

Baaki ek baat manna padega
Or stories mein ye hota h
Jo ladki aayi seedha hero ki lover add
Ye phli story dekhi h
Jo ladki aayi seedha hero ki bhn add :tongue::DD::roflol:


Shi h bhai sonam k saath shiml k tour k tour ka intzaar rhega

Brilliant update
Keep rocking :)
Hahaha:DD::DD::roflol::roflol:
Are fir to sorry bhai :tongue:
Ab kya kare apne hero ka swabhav hi esa h. Wo har kisi ko apne ki najar se dekhta h.
Or ha koi or bhi lafde hue h to pahale hi bata do,kahi fir se esa na ho jaye:DD:
 

Aj1980

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बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई


करें जब पांव खुद नर्तन, समझ लेना की होली है...
हिलोरें खा रहा हो मन, समझ लेना की होली है....
इमारत इक पुरानी सी, रुके बरसों से पानी सी ....
लगे बीवी वही नूतन,समझ लेना की होली है
तरसती जिसके हों दीदार तक को , आपकी आंखें...
उसे छूने का आये क्षण, समझ लेना की होली है...
कभी खोलो हुलस कर आप , अपने घर का दरवाजा.....
खड़े देहरी पे हों साजन, समझ लेना की होली है ...
हमारी ज़िन्दगी है यूं तो, इक कांटों भरा जंगल...
अगर लगने लगे मधुबन, समझ लेना की होली है..
अगर महसूस हो तुमको, कभी जब सांस लेते हो ..
हवाओं में घुला चन्दन, समझ लेना की होली है ....
बुलायें पास जब तुमको , धुनें मेरी मुहब्बत की ...
जब गाये ताल पे धड़कन , समझ लेना की होली है
......समझ लेना की होली है.....


शुभ प्रभात . . . . .

दूसरे इंसान से नफ़रत करने का मतलब है ख़ुद से मोहब्बत में कमी l

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भूल जाओ अब सारे ग़म,
खेलो होली के अब सब रंग।। होली की मंगलमय कामना
 

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Update no - 1
Karan aaj subah bahoot jald hi utha gaya kyoki aaj uska college khulane wala tha uske bagal mei jyoti soyi
huyi thi. Usne jyoti ki taraf dekha wo bahoot hi masoom bilkul ek choti bachi ki tarah so rahi thi.
Karan ne jyoti ke mathe ko dhire se chum liya tabhi jyoti ne dhire se apni ankhe khol di.
Jyoti:- good morning bhaiya
Karan:- Good morning didi
Karan ki baat sunkar jyoti khilkhilakar huns di phir jyoti ko husta dekh karan bhi husne
laga.. Kuchh der ke baad karan ne jyoti se bola chal jyoti bahoot huns liye jaldi uth tabtak mai fresh hokar
aata hu..karan tauliya lekar bathroom mei guss gaya or jyoti idhar phir se so gayi..............................
..............................
Karan or Jyoti ek hi room mei sote hai inke room mei ek common bathroom hai.
kyoki wo dono ke maa bachpan mei hi mar gayi tab ye dono bilkul chote the.. Uske baad inke papa ne
dusra saadi kar li jo karan or jyoti se thoda bhi matlab nahi rakhati thi in dono bhai-behan mare ya jiye use
Karan ke sauteli maa ko koi matlab nahi tha waise bhi karan ke papa bhi koi matalab nahi rakhte the. Bas har
mahine karan or jyoti ko 10 hazar rupee mil jate the. Lekin peyar nahi mil pata tha..
Isi karan dono bhai behan ek hi room mei sote the koi bhi problem ho dono ek dusre ko bata dete the
apas mei bahoot frenk the bas inke beech bhai behan ka hi pyar tha.. karan or Jyoti dono ek dusre ke pran
the dono bhai behan ke beech bahoot hi peyar tha.. karan ke papa ka apna khud ka buisnuiss hai karan ke
pass ek bike hai ishi se dono bhai behan college jate hai .............................................
Karan jaise hi bathroom mei se fresh hokar jab room mei aaya to dekha ki jyoti fir se so gayi hai. Karan ish
samay kewal underwear or uske uper ek tauliya lapeta huya tha. Karan ne jyoti ko bahoot hi dhire se apne
mazboot baho mei uthaya or jyoti ko lekar bathroom mei ghuss gaya. tabhi jyoti ki nind khul gayi lekin
wo sant rahi ye dekhne ke liye ki uska bhai kya karta hai abhi jyoti yehi soch rahi thi ki tabhi karan ne usko
bhathtub mei phenk diya. Bhathtub mei pehle se hi pani bhara huya tha. Jyoti ke pure kapde gile ho
gaye. Karan khhi khhi karke husne laga. Karan ko husta dekh jyoti ne bhi karan ke uper pani pekhne lagi karan husta
huya room mei chala gaya jyoti bhi fresh hoker nikal aayi tabtak karan kapde pehan chuka tha jyoti ne
kapde pehne or nasta banane chali gayi dono bhai behan ek dusre ke samne hi kapde pehan lete the.
Udhar uske sauteli maa or papa abhi so rahe the nukal gaye. Jyoti nasta bana rahi thi karan uske pass hi
baitha huya tha. Lagbhag aadhe ghante mei hi nasta ban kar taiyar ho gaya.. Dono bhai-behan ne nasta
kiye or college ki wor nikal gaye.
College mei aaj kuchh khas nahi huya karan or jyoti jab ghar aaye to pata chala ki aaj unke sauteli maa ka janmdin hai
So friendsdekhte h ab aage in dono bhai bahan ki life m kya hota h aaj please aap sab comments kerke bataiyega kesa laga first update or kuch kami ho to jarur batana

Nice update !!!!!
 

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