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Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running

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Zas23

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Jab tak karan or jyoti so rahe h tab tak aaiye dekhte h ki Hm ne karan ki call aane k baad kya kiya.



Hm ne apne sabse bharosemand aadmio ko bhejha un gundo or commissioner ki lasho ko thikane lagane k liye.



Or jab uske aadmi waha pahunchte h to jo dekhte h un gundo ki lasho ko to shock rah jate h.

Kyunki ek to un lasho ki jakar bahut hi buri thi , dusra ye ki jo sare gunde mare pade the wo koi mamuli gunde ni the , sare k sare bahut hi khatarnak or most wanted the.

Or thoda hi aage hi ek ladke ki lash padhi thi jo kisi or ki ni kunal ki thi jiske hath per or gardan tuti hui thi.

Akhir esa kesa hua aapko agle update m pata chalega.

Haha majak ker raha hu bhai log jyada Heran hone ki jarurat ni h dosto kunal to kab ka karan k prahar se bhasm ho gaya tha.

Short flashback.

Karan ne jab Hm ko phone kerke sari baat bata di thi or shivani ko car m leta ker jyoti ko aage chalne ko bol diya.

Wo khud bhi apni bike p nikalne ko hua ki tabhi uske man m ek baat aayi.

Karan :- are ye kya mane uncle ko bata to diya ki kunal mara gaya lekin jab wo kunal ki lash k bare m puchenge to m kya jwab dunga , kyunki uski lash ko to mane bhasm ker diya h.

Ye soch ker karan ko tension hone lagti h ki rishi pippalad dobara waha aate h.

Karan :- baba aap bilkul sahi samay per aaye ek duvidha h.

Rishiwer :- m janta hu putra tumhari duvidha kya h putra , lekin ye koi badi samsya ni h tum apni shaktiyo ka istemal kero putra samsya ka samadhan mil jayega.

Karan :- per kese baba mujhe to ye bhi gyaat ni h mere pas abhi kon kon si shaktiya h .

Rishiwer :- unka gyaat m tumhe karwata hu putra.

Itna bol rishiwer ne apna ek hath karan k sir p rakh diya or aankhe band kerke kuch mantra padhne lage or unke hath se nikal k ek roshni karan m samane lagi.

Fir rishiwer bole

Ab m rishi pippalad ko baba hi likhunga dosto.

Baba:- beta ab apni aankhe band kerke apni shaktiyo k bare m socho

Karan wesa hi kerta h or dhire dhire uske chahare p muskaan aajati h .

Fir karan apni aankhe khol k apna hath aage kerta h or uske hatho se ek roshni nikalti h or kuch hi second m waha padi kunal ki rakh wapas lash m badal jati h .

Baba:- adhbhut putra kya adbhut pratibha h tumme , tumhe to apni shaktiyo ka prayog kerne k liye mantra bolne ki bhi avashyakata ni h .

Karan :- ye sab to mere bhole nath ki kripa or aapke ashirwad ki badolat hi sambhav hua h baba .

Fir baba waha se chale jate h or sath m karan bhi waha se nikal padta h.

Flashback ends.

Hm k aadmi un gundo ki lash ko tikhane laga dete h or kunal or commissioner ki lash ko unke ghar pahuncha dete h ye bol ker ki in dono ko gundo ne kidnapped kerke mar dala , humne un gundo ko to mar diya encounter me per in dono ko ni bacha paye.

Or fir wo sab waha se nikal lete h , unka leader jo Hm ka khas dost bhi tha.wo pahunch jata h hm k pass uska naam ram tha.

New introduction

Ram:- age :-49 ye ek hm or radha k pita k kafi acha dost h , iske maa baap bachpan m hi mar gaye the ek bimari k chalte jo ki Hm k maa bap k ghar kaam kerte the. To hm k pita ne inke maa bap k marne k baad hi inhe pala bilkul apne dusre bete ki tarah or padhaya likhaya bhi , or ye aaj aarmy ke head h .





Ram :- yaar ek baat bata k insab ko kisne mara or tu us aadmi ko bachana kyu chahata h.

Hm:- bhai wo ladka jise m bacha raha hu wo bahut hi nek dil or bahut hi sanskari ladka h , yaha tak ki usne hamari radha beti ki jan or ijjat 2 baar bachai h.

Radha k pita, hm or ram 3no bahut hi khas hi dost the .




Ram:- kya radha beti ki ijjat ko bachaya kese.

Hm use sari baate bata deta h dono incidents ki.

Ram:- yaar tu to bilkul sahi bol raha h fir to ese bache ka hum kuch bi bura bhala kese hone de sakte h , per bhai kuch to khas h us ladke me.

Hm:- tujhe esa kyu lagta h.

Ram:- bhai is bache ne jise mara h uska nam sunega to tu bhi yahi bolega.

Hm :- tu yaar paheliya mat bhuja or saaf bata baat kya h.

Ram:- bhai us ne "biman khan" ko mar diya h

Hm:- (chok ker apni kursi se khada hote hue) kya !

Ram :- ha bhai.

Biman khan is shahar to kya pure state k sabse khatarnak criminals m se ek tha jisko har tarah ki fight magarath hasil thi or police bhi us per hath dalne se katrati thi. Usper deshdroh or kayi ladkiyo k rape ka case bhi chal raha tha.

Hm:- yaar fir to tu sahi bol raha h mujhe shighra hi usse milna hoga.

Location :-patal lok .

Kaal bhanu abhi tap jane hi wala tha ki use kuch yaad aata h or wo ruk jata h

Vp:- kya hua mere bache ruk kyu gaye ,

Kaal bhanu:- pitaji tap k liye to baad m bhi ja sakta hu ek mahatvapoorn kam mujhe yaad aaya jisko kerne se m abhi hi or shaktishali ho jaunga or koi devta mere tap ko bhang kerne ka dussahas kerne ka prayas bhi ni karega

Haha haha ha

Vp :- or wo kya karya h mere bache.

Kaal bhanu:- aap bas dekhte jaiye pitaji

Or itna bol vo gayab ho pahunch jata h talatal lok

Talatal lok ek esi jagah h jaha har koi ni aasakta kuch khas ko chod k devta bhi ni , yaha per keval raaj h to keval kuch atyant hi mayavi rakshas or bhut preto ka.

Or ye lok bahut hi bahayank h har taraf aag hi aag h, jese nark yahi ho,
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Kaal bhanu ko dekh vaha sabhi rakshas or bhut pret waha jhuk jate h uske aage .

Or unka leader kaalnemi bolta h.

Kaal nemi :- mahamahim aap yaha .
Aagya kijiye prabhu daas k liye kya aadesh h .

Kaal bhanu :- kaalnemi tum apne sabhi sathiyo or praja ko leker yaha se nikal jao kuch dino k liye or dhayan rahe jab tak m na bolu koi bhi is lok m kadam bhi na rakh paye . Yaha se nikal ker tum sab mere wapas aane tak patal lok me nivas kero

Kaal nemi :- jo aagya mahamahim.

Kaal nemi is sab ka kaaran puchna to chahata tha per uski itni himmat ni thi ki wo kaal bhanu se swal jawab ker sake .

Fir kaal nemi sabko leker talatal se gayab ho jata h or kaal bhanu aage badh ker apne kaam me lag jata h.

Wahi kfd kalash me bethe ye sab dekh rahe the or muskura rahe the , or mata parvati unhe bhojan kerwa rahi thi apne hatho se

Mata paravarti :- kya hua putra achanak itna muskurane kyu lage


Kfd:- guru maa satya hi kaha gaya h ki 'vinash kaale viprit budhi'. Murkh kaal bhanu ye soch raha h ki vo jo kerne ja raha h usse usko ek shaktishali kavach milega , parantu ye ni janta k uski yahi harkat uske vinash k mukhya kaarno me se ek hogi.

Mata parvati:- ha putra tum baat to sahi ker rahe ho , lekin khud bhi ek galat harkat ker rahe ho .

Kfd:- kya guru maa ?

Kfd k gaal khichte hue maata boli k

Mata parvati:- kyu bhul gaye , kya sikhaya tha mane bhojan kerte samay humara dhayan keval bhojan pe hona chahiye, chalo baki bate chodo or chup chap bhojan kero

Itna bol mata parwati phir se kfd ko khilane lagti h ,or jab tak kfd ko dakar ni aati unko waha se hilna bhi ni deti

Aaj k liye bas itna hi friends

Stay tuned.

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kya hua friends last wale update per bahut hi kam review aaye h kya hua dosto update pasand ni aaya to please bataiye

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Sham ko 4 baje karan alarm ki awaj se uth jata h or jaldi se alarm ko band ker deta h taki jyoti jag naa jaye .
Or fir wo shivani k room ki or badh jata h,jaha pe shivani bhi so rahi hoti h , uski ankho k pass ansuo k nishan the, jise dekh ker hi samjh aaraha tha ki , shivani bahut ro rahi thi or rote rote hi so gayi h.
Karan ko ye dekh ker bahut dukh hota h ki vo shivani ko to bhul hi gaya, usko sambhalne k liye to aaj k incident k baad jyoti thi or uske liye wo khud tha, lekin bichari shivani to akeli hi roti rahi.
Karan ki ankhe halki nam ho jati h.or wo bathroom m ja ker ek saaf kapda ko gila kerke lata h or shivani k chahare ko saaf kerne lagta h halke hatho se.
Isse shivani ki nind bhi khul jati h or karan ko dekh khush ho jati h. Karan bhi jese dekhta h ki shivani jag gayi h to wo uske galo ko chum k bolta h.
Karan:- good evening my princess uth gayi aap.
Shivani bhi karan k galo pe kiss kerke.
Shivani :- same to u bhaiyu, aap yaha ?
Karan:- kyu m apni princess k room m ni aasakta.
Shivani :- ni ni bhaiya mera wo matlab ni h , mujhe laga ki aap mujhse gussa hoge.
Karan:- wo kyu bhala
Shivani :- wo meri vajah se aapko mummy ne itna sunaya na or mara bhi .
Ye bol ker wo fir se rone lagi .Karan ne use gale laga liya or chup karane laga.
Karan :- are betu aap fir rone lagi , shant ho jao mera bacha , tumhari mummy k sath wo meri bhi to choti maa h na, to kya ho gaya unhonne mujhe kuch bol diya to ya mara to wo humse badi h unka hak banta h ,
Or princess meri ek baat manogi .
Shivani:- kya bhaiya .
Karan:- yahi ki betu tum jald hi jaker choti maa se sorry bol dena , princess wo aapki maa h unko aapki chinta h isliye unhone esa kiya.apne bhaiya ki baat manogi na.
Shivani :- ok bhaiya jesa aap bolo or ap sahi hi bol rahe ho mujhe mummy se ese baat ni kerni chahiye thi.
Karan itna sun use pyar se gale laga leta h.
Lekin unka dhayan darwaje k pass ni jata . Waha adhkhule darwaje k pass kabya khadi ye sab dekh or sun rahi thi.
Kabya waha se sidha apne kamre m jati h or rone lagti h or khud se bolne lagti h.
Kabya(man me rote hue) :- kitna saaf man h mere bache ka , mere kiye gaye itne hatyacharo k bavjood aaj bhi uske man m apni choti maa k liye utna hi pyar or utna hi sneh or sman h, ab m kese samjhau un sab ko ki mera man to bahut kerta h apne bacho karan or jyoti ko ek baar fir se gale lagau umpe apni mamta lutau or apne kiye gaye har hatya char k liye unke per pakad k maafi mangu , per kya keru majboor jo thahari , ho sake to apni choti maa ko maaf ker dena mere bacho tumhari choti maa jo bhi ker rahi h tumhare liye hi ker rahi h.
Or fir jor jor se rone lagti h.
Wahi shivani k gaal per padti h to wo puchti h.
Shivani:- bhai ye aapke gaal ko kya hua .
Karan :- ye sab teri didu ne kiya
Or fir karan ne jo bhi hua sab bata deta h .
Shivani :- bilkul sahi kiya didu ne kya jarurat thi esi manhoos baat kerne ki .
Karan :- wo sab chod gudiya mane ek plan socha h jyoti ko ek badiya sa surprise dene ka.
Shivani :- wao bhaiya di k liye surprise , or mere liye .
Karan :- jald hi aapke liye bhi kuch special ho ga hamari princess .
Shivani :- sach thank you so much bhaiya. Wese surprise kya h or plan kya h.
Karan use sab kuch batata h
Shivani :- wao bhaiya di to bahut kush ho jayegi , aap chinta mat kero bhaiya m aapki puri help karungi.
Phir karan or shivani market jate h bike p or kuch shopping kerke wapas aate h.
Thodi der baad jyoti bhi uth jati h or shivani or karan k paas aaker tv dekhne lagti h .
Thodi der baad shivani jyoti se bolti h
Shivani :- di ek chij to m bhul hi gayi .
Jyoti :- kya betu
Shivani jaldi se kamre m bhag k jati or ek packet lati h or bolti h
Shivani:- di ye aapke liye ye m hostel se Lotte hue aapke liye pasand ki thi per yaha aake kya hua aap to janti hi ho.
Jyoti us packet ko kholti h to dekh k bahut khush hoti h kyunki usme ek bahut hi sunder dress thi.
Jyoti :- wow so pretty thank u so much betu.
Itna bolke jyoti shivani ko gale lagake uske dono gaal chum leti h .
Shivani :- didu ab pahan k bhi dikhao na.
Jyoti :- ok betu .
Ye bol wo dress pahanne chali jati h or jab wo wapas aati h to bahut sunder lag rahi hoti h jese koi apsara dharti pe aagayi ho.kuch esi dikh rahi thi
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Karan to jyoti ko dekhta rah jata h or uski khubsurti m kho jata h . Or ekaek uske muh se ye shabd nikal jate .
Karan:-
Jis din aap jami par aaye,
Woh Asman bhi khub roya tha,
Akhir uske ansu thamte bhi kaise,
Usne Hamare liye
Apna Sabse payara sitara jo khoya tha...!

Jyoti to tarif sun buri tarah sharma gayi , uske gore gore gal sharma k lal ho gaye.
Shivani :- kya baat h bhai kya mast shayari boli aapne.
Karan :- ek tere liye bhi choti kahe to sunau .
Shivani excited hote hue:- ha bhai sunao na.
Karan:-

Khuda ne tumhe banaya hoga to
Confusion ka moment aaya hoga
Kabhi monkey to kabhi donkey
Banana chaha hoga .
Or end me dono ka mixture pasand aaya hoga.:tongue::DD::roflol:

Shayri sun jyoti jor jor se hasne lagti h or karan bhi .
Shivani ko pahale to kuch samjh ni aata or jab samjh aata h to samjh jati h ki uska popat ho gaya h or wo karan pe jhapat padti h.
Shivani karan p mukko ki barsaat ker deti h.or bolti h
Shivani :- bhai aap bahut gande ho bhala koi ese apni princess ka majak udata h or didu aap bhi.jaiye m aap dono se baat ni kerti.:angrywife::angry:
Or wo muh fula ke beth jati h,
Karan :- ale ale mela babu mujhse naraj ho gaya.
Shivani ko hasi to bahut aati h per wo control ker leti h.
Jyoti :- ha bhai ye to gussa ho gayi ab hum kya karenge .
Karan :- ha gudiya m to soch raha tha ki next week hum sab milke amusement park jayenge , but lagta h ab , plan cancel kerna padega.
Jese hi shivani ye sunti h to apna natak band kerke bol padti h
Shivani :- ni ni bhaiya m naraj ni hu ,m bhala apni bhaiyu or didu se kese naraj ho sakti hu,apko plan cancel kerne ki jarurat ni h.
Shivani ki is cute harkat pe karan or jyoti phir hasne lagte h , or shivani samjh jati h ki uska phir se popat ho gaya or sath me wo khud bhi hasne lag jati h.
Tabhi jyoti ki najar ghadi p padti h to vo bolti h .
Jyoti :- bhai dinner ka time ho gaya h .aap bate kijiye m itna m dinner banati hu itna.
Karan shivani ko kuch ishara kerke sanjhata h or bolta h
Karan :- rahane de gudiya chal aaj hum bahar khana khayenge.
Jyoti :- bhai iski kya jarurat h m abhi bana deti hu na .
Lekin karan kese n kese mana hi leta h jyoti ko.
Jyoti :- choti tu bhi jaker teyar hoja sath me chalenge .
Shivani :- oh sorry di m aapko batana bhul gayi thi ki aaj meri best friend ki birthday party h , ager m na gayi to use bahut bura lagega, to sorry di , next time pakka chalungi.
Jyoti :- it's ok choti.
Karan bhi jaker teyar hota h or ghar se bahar nikal ker jyoti jese hi bike ki or jane lagti h to shivani fir bol padi.
Shivani :- di bike rahane do aap meri car le jayiye or enjoy kijiye
Shivani k pass bhi uski personal gadi thi jo uska driver chalata tha.
Jyoti ko bhi ab thoda thoda kuch shak hone lagta h per wo kuch bolti ni .
Fir karan or jyoti nikal jate h restaurant ki or jese hi wo dono restaurant m enter kerte h sabhi ladkiya karan ko or ladke jyoti ko hi dekhte rah jate h. Dono lag hi itne sunder rahe the.sab unko couple samjh rahe the.
Fir wo dono waha jaker dinner kerte h . Or jese hi restaurant se bahar nikalte h to karan bolta h
Karan :- gudiya thoda piche ghumna.
Jyoti jese hi ghumti h karan apni ke se ek pati nikal ke uski ankho pe bandh deta h .
Jyoti :- ye sab kya h bhai .
Karan uske hotho p ungli rakhte hue .
Karan :- tumhare liye ek surprise h gudiya isliye please kuch mat bolna jabtak m na bolu.
Jyoti kuch ni bolti or karan use lejaker gadi m bitha tha h or nikal jata h apne ghar ki ulti disha m.
So friends next update m pata chalega ki surprise kya hone wala h so stay tuned
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Friends aaj Hamare writer Sahab Harry rocks ki tabiyat kuch kharab hai isliye Aaj Yahan Par update nahi aayega.

Get well soon bhai:flowers2::flowers:
Get well soon harry :flowers2::flowers:
 
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Update no :- 34 mega update.
Location :- talatal lok

Sab k jane k baad kaal bhanu bhi talatal lok m aage ki or bhadne laga .

Or kuch dur chalne k baad wo jaha pahuncha us jagah ko dekh uske chahare pe ek shetani muskurahat aagayi.


Kyunki wo apni manzil pe pahunch gaya tha. Ab aap log soch rahe honge ki kaal bhanu ko jo chahiye tha wo itni aasani se kese mil gaya to , iske 2 kaaran h.

Pahala ki talatal lok shetano or bhut pret or asuro ki hi rajdhani h , or kaal bhanu in sab ka raja to uske liye ye koi badi baat ni thi.

Dusra or sabse mahatvapoorn kaaran ye h ki , ye talatal lok h yaha har karya har chij baki duniya se bilkul ulti hoti h, isliye jaha baki duniya m bhut pret agni or roshni se darte h , wahi yaha wo sab aaram se rah sakte h . Isliye ager ye jagah kahi bahar ki duniya me hoti to yaha pahuchna lagbhag namumkin hota , wahi yaha pe kaal bhanu yaha bilkul aasani se pahuch gaya.

Ab aap soch rahe honge ki esi kya chij h yaha jiske liye kaal bhanu ko yaha aane ki jarurat padhi jabhi ye kaam wo kisi or se bhi kerwa sakta tha or pure talatal ko usne khali kyu karwaya , to zyada sochiye mat aayiye jante h wo vajah .

Kaal bhanu jaha khada tha uske thik samne ek khai numa kua tha jisme keval vish(poison) tha or wo bhi koi mamuli vish ni sakshat mahavinashkari "Hala hal vish" tha.

Ji ha dosto wahi halahal jo samudra manthan k samaya samudra se nikla tha.

Parantu aap sab soch rahe honge us wish ko to mahadev ne pi liya tha . Fir wo yaha kese .

Hua yu tha jab mahadev ne vo vish piya tha . Tab kuch bunde unke hath se niche gir gayi thi jinhe snake bichu aadi ne pi liya jisse wo jaharile ho gaye, lekin fir bhi 4 bunde rah gayi thi jinme se do bund to yaha is talatal k kue me aa giri or baki do bundo ka kya hua wo aage pata chalega.

Kaal bhanu:- adhbhut to ye h wo halahal jiske baare me sunta aaraha hu yugo se, yahi h wo vish jisne devo m bhi hadkamp macha diya tha.

Haa haa haa ab yahi vish meri shakti or kavach banega. Or itna bol kaal bhanu apni aankhe band kerke apne hath aage kue ki or ker deta h or us kue se ek nila dhua(smoke) roopi roshni nikal ker kaal bhanu m samane lagi jisko dekh ker hi pata chal raha tha ki vo murkh halahal ko apne ander sokhne ki koshis ker raha h , shuruaat m to use ashaniya dard hota h , jiski vajah se devtao ko jo swarg me bethe ye sab dekh rahe the , unhe lagta h ki kaal bhanu aaj maara jayega.

Parantu ye kya ab uska dard ek dam se khatam ho gaya tha or vo badi aasani se halahal ki shaktiyo ko apne ander samahit kerne laga.

Devaraj:- asambhav jis vish ko pine k baad swayam mahadev k bhi kadam dagmaga gaye the , jiske kaaran mata parvati ko devi tara ka roop le ker unhe sambhalna pada tha , us halahal ko ye dusht itni saralta se apne ander samahit ker raha h, aakhir kese .

Devaraj k aashcharya ki koi sima na thi . Wahi talatal me charo or halahal fel chuka tha kue se nikal ke jise dhire dhire kaal bhanu apne ander samahit ker raha tha. Shayad isliye hi usne sabhi ko waha se chale jane ka aadesh diya tha kyunki esa hoga wo janta tha or wo apni vishal sena ko khona ni chahata tha, lekin sawal ye tha ki wo is mahabhayanak vish ko kese jhel raha tha itni saralta se or itna hi ni ise apni shakti bhi bana raha tha.shayad ye talatal ka asar ho , ya kuch or .

Chaliye chalte h karan ki or


karan ki gadi shahar se nikal ker jangal me ek kache raste p chalne lagti h or thodi der m karan gadi rokta h or jyoti ko bhi hath deker gadi se nikalta h.


Thodi sa chalne k baad karan jyoti se bolta h .

Jyoti :- gudiya ab m pati khol raha hu apni aankhe dhire dhire kholna .

Karan jyoti ki ankho ki patti hatata h or jyoti ko ankhe kholti h or samne dekhti h ki vo ek bahut hi khub surat jagah pe h ek lakdi se banaya chota sa ghar tha or jiske aas pass ek har tarah k phul or phalo k ped phodhe se saja hua garden tha or in dono ko charo or se ghere hue ek talab tha jise paar kerke yaha ane ka ek pool numa rasta tha jisse karan or jyoti aaye the.

Jyoti :- thoda khush hote hue bhai kitnini khubsurat h ye jagah ye konsi jagah h or kiski h.na jane kyu mujhe ye jagah kafi jani pahachani lag rahi h jese is jagah se mera koi bahut purani yade judi ho.

Jyoti ne is jagah ko pahachanane ki koshis kerte hue boli.

Karan is baat ko sun thoda udaas ho gaya or bola .

Karan :- gudiya kya tumhe sach me yaad ni h ye konsi jagah h or hamare liye ye kya importance rakhti h.

Jyoti na me sir hila deti h . Karan abhi udas ho ker kuch soch hi raha tha ki usko ek aawaj sunayi deti h jo ki baba ki thi

Baba :- putra udaas mat ho tumhari shaktiyo k jagrit hone k kaaran tumhari itni purani yade bhi tumhe yaad aagayi h , per jyoti ki shaktiya abhi jagrit ni hui h, isliye putra udas mat ho or tum jante hi ho ki ab tumhe kya kerna h.

Karan ye sun ker muskurata h or baba ko man hi mam pranam kerta h or jyoti ko gale laga leta h or uske sir ko pyar se sahalne lagta h or uske hatho se ek roshni nikalne lagti h jo jyoti m samane lagti h , jisse uski purani bachpan ki yade wapis aane lagti h.

Karan:- choti ab dobara is jagah ko dekh or bata ki ab bhi tujhe ye jagah yaad ni h.

Jyoti jese hi us jagah ko dobara dekhne lagti h to use dhire dhire sab yaad aane lagta h or uske chahre pe khushi or ankho m pani aane lagta h or wo turant hi karan ko gale lagaker uske chahare ko chum chum ke gila ker deti h.

Jyoti :- thank thank thank you so much bhai aao duniya k best bhaiya ho , m bhi pagal is jagah ko kese bhul gayi thi .

Uski anko me khushi or gam dono k mile jule ansu the . Aakhir esa kyu tha aaiye jante h.


Darasal baat yu thi ki ye jagah kisi or ne ni khud asha yani karan or jyoti ki maa ne specially banwai thi, jiske baare m asha jyoti or karan k alawa kisi ko ni malum tha , yaha tak ki ranvir ko bhi ni. Yaha asha apne dono bacho k sath har hafte aati thi , or unke sath khub khelti thi.unke sath khud bhi bachi ban jati ,
Lekin asha ki mot k baad karan or jyoti sadme me chale gaye , us sadme se to dhire dhire kabya ne unhe nikal diya , lekin ab unka yaha ana ni hota ya yu kahe ki maa ke bina aane ka man ni hota or dhire dhire dono is jagah ko bhul hi gaye.

Lekin jab karan ki shaktiya wapas jagrit hui to use sab kuch wapas yaad aagaya or usne socha ki thoda bahut jyoti ko bhi yaad hogi yaha ki isliye usne ye sab kiya.

Jyoti or karan itne salo baad yaha aane pe bahut khush the or unhe apni maa k sath bitaye har pal ko yaad ker khush ho rahe the.

Tabhi jyoti karan ka hath pakad k ek or lagbhag bhag k jati h sath m karan bhi uske sath hath pakde rahata h .

Or jab jyoti ek jagah jaa ker rukti h to uske chahare pe bahut hi pyari muskan or ankho m pani hota h or sath m karan k bhi .

Ye jagah us ghar k piche ki thi jaha ek special bed numa jhula bana hua tha . Kuch esa
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Jyoti jese hi usko dekti h to usko wo pal yaad aane lagta h ke kese uski maa usko or karan ko is jhule pe bitha ker jhulati thi . Or jab vo dono thak jate to unhe isi per lori gate hue sulati thi.

Ye sab yaad aate hi vo jaldi se us jhule p jaker beth jati h or karan use jhulane lagta h .

Jyoti :- bhai sach me aap duniya k best bhaiya ho , aaj ki ye raat meri jindagi ki sabse yadgar raat ban gayi h ise m jindagi bhar ni bhul sakti.


Karan bas uski baato ko sun muskura raha tha tha or jyoti ko jhula raha tha. Usne yaha aate hi yaha ki har chij ko apni shaktiyo se bilkul saaf suthra or jo chij jaha or us time jesi thi wese hi banadi.

Kuch der baad karan bhi jyoti k sath wahi beth jata h tabhi uski nazar us bed per rakhi ek khubsurat bansuri pe padhti h.

Karan :- ye dekh jyoti kuch yaad aaya .

Jyoti :- nam aankho se :-ha bhai ise kese bhul sakti hu kash is bansuri ki dhun dobara hum sun sakte .

Darasal ye bansuri asha ki thi or jab bhi vo karan or jyoti k sath aati to ye bansuri baja ke unhe jarur sunati .

Karan :- ha jyoti aaj mummy ki kami bahut hi kasht de rahi h .

Jyoti :- ha bhai kash hum apni mummy se fir mil pate or unki anchal ka sukh fir se le pate .

Karan jyoti ko gal laga leta h or khud bhin yahi soch udaas ho raha hota h.

Ki tabhi achanak se uske kano me ek awaj gunjanti h .

Awaj :- karan beta .

Karan us awaj ko sun k chonk jata h ,or tabhi jyoti k kano me bhi ek awaj aati h

Awaj :- jyoti beti.

Dono us awaj ko sun ek dam se chonk jate h.

Dono ek sath nam ankho se :- mummy !

Or wo us awaj ki disha m dodte h per waha unhe kuch ni milta , abhi vo udas ho hi rahe the ki .Dobara wo aawaj aati h.

Awaj :- karan beta or jyoti beti .

Dono fir dusri disha me dodte h per waha bhi kuch ni milta h, esa do tin baar hota h .

Aakhir me jyoti rote hue chilati h

Jyoti:- mummy kaha ho aap !
Or jor jor se rone lagti h or karan bhi

tabhi ek baar fir se wahi awaj aati h lekin is baar aawaj us jagah pe mojud ek chote se mandir se aati h.

Karan or jyoti is baar apni full speed se bhagte h jese is baar vo late hue to apni maa ko fir se kho denge.

Or jese hi wo mandir m ghuste h to dekh ker chok jati h ki , sahi m unki maa waha mojud thi or uski pith karan or jyoti ki or thi.

Karan unki taraf badhte badhte ruk jata h or bolta h.

Karan :- ni ye satya ni h kahi ye mera bhram to ni.

Itna karan ne bola hi tha ki asha ghum ker undono ko muskurate hue dekhne lagi.ansu uski aankho m bhi the

Asha:- ha mere bache ye satya ni h , per ye bhram bhi ni h mere bache, ek maa kabhi bhi apni santan ko akela ni chod sakti, m bhale hi yaha sharirik roop se upasthit ni hu lekin mera prem mera sneh or mera ashirwad sadaiv tum dono k sath rahega mere bacho.

Itna bol wo apni bahe fela deti h or karan or jyoti dod k uske gale lag jate h.

Wo kafi der tak un dono ko gale laga ke rakhti h . Or fir un dono k hath pakad ker wo fir wahi us jhula numa bed k pass aajati h or us bed per beth jati h or karan or jyoti dono uski god m sir rakh k let jate h.

Asha :- karan beta puchna ni chaoge m yaha kese , wo bhi bina sharirik roop k.

Karan :- ni maa mujhe aapke sath samay vyatit kerne ka avsar jo aaj mahadev ne diya h m use vyarth ni kerna chahata sawalo me.

Jyoti :- ha mummy ,

Or rote hue

Jyoti :- ha mummy aap hume chod k kyu chali gayi janti ho aapke bina hum bilkul akele ho gaye or papa to jese hame bhul hi gaye .

Asha nam aankho se :- ro mat meri bachi m kaha tum dono se dur hui mera pyar mera man to hamesha se tumhare sath hi to , or wese bhi to tumhare bhai k roop m hamesha tumhare sath hi rahi hu , kyunki karan bhi to mera hi ansh h.sach sach batao kabhi tumhe esa laga ki m tujhse door hu.

Jyoti :- apne sahi kaha ma bhai ne mera bahut ache se khayal rakha mujhe bhai maa baap sabka pyaar diya , sahi kaha aapne , bhai bhi mere sath or mere liye wese hi h jese ki aap.

Karan bhi esa hi bolta h .

Asha:- ha mere bacho m sab janti hu ki tumne kya kya jhela h or kese ek dusre ko sambhala h , aage bhavishya m bhi ese hi ek dusre ki shakti bane rahana mere bacho, or mahadev ne tum dono ko karya sompa h usko ache se pura kerna , mera ashirwad hamesha tumhare sath h.

Karan :- maa kya aap phir se hume chod k jaa rahi ho .

Asha :- ni mere bache mane kaha na m hamesha tumhare sath hu ,

Lekin karan or jyoti udass ho jate h tabhi asha ki najar bansuri pe padhti h .

Asha us bansuri ko utha ker bajane lagti h, jise sun karan or jyoti kushi se jhum uthte h or apni sari udasi bhul jate h .

Karan :- maa itne saal ho gaye apni lori sunao na

Jyoti :- ha mummy lori sunao .

Asha kush hote hue :- kyu ni mere bacho


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Lori sunte sunte dono bhai bahan vahi so jate or asha unhe ek chaddar udha deti h or kuch der unhe dekhti rahati h.

Or fir ek baar matha chumke waha se gayab ho pahuch jati h kfd k pass. Or waha pahunch ke unka roop bilkul hi badal jata h yaha tak ki shakal bhi.wo ab apne alsi roop m aagayi thi

Kfd jese hi unko dekhta h wo khushi k maare jhum uthte h or unke per chukher gale lag jate h , unki ankho m bhi khushi k aansu the or unke muh se bas itna nikalta h

Kfd :- mata !


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Location :- kfd lok

Kfd jese hi mata ko dekhte h to dod ker unke gale lag jate or bolte h.

Kfd :- mata !

Khushi k aansu to mata ki ankho m bhi the.or unhone kfd ko or bhi kaske gale se laga liya. Or un ke muh se sirf itna nikla.

Mata:- putra

Bas itna sun hi kfd ka chahara khil utha , jese kisi bache ko uski sabse pasandida khilona mil gaya ho jese , kisi lambe samay se bhuke ko 56 bhog mil gaya ho .

Or esa hota bhi kyu naa jin kfd k liye unki mata ka sthan swayam mahadev se bhi uncha h aaj itne varsho baad unse kfd ki mulakat hui.dono mata putra hi vidhata dwara sope gaye apne kartvyo k kaaran itne vivash or vayasth ho chuke the ki milne ka samay hi na mila.

Kfd :- mata aap aagayi , m bata ni sakta mata m kitna khush hu ,lekin
Aapse naraj bhi hu.

Mata(kfd k dono gaal khichte) :- acha or m jan sakti hu mera pyara bacha apni mata se kyu naraj h.

Kfd(muh fulate hue) :- aapka putra aapse isliye rusht h kyunki itne varsho aap mujhse milne aana to dur aapne to mujhse sampark kerna bhi jaruri ni samjha.

Mata:- hmm baat to tumhari uchit h , ab galti to hui h tumhari mata se,to maafi to mangni padegi, ( apne kano ko pakdte hue) lo ab to maaf ker do mere pyare babu.

Per kfd tas se mas ni hote , asal me vo bilkul naraj ni the apni mata se bas wo unse thodi si masti ker unhe tang ker rahe the . Ab kare bhi kyu na sabhi bhai bahano m sabse ladle jo thahare apni maa ke.

Ye baat unki mata bhi samjh jati h or bolti.

Mata:- are baap re itna gussa , ab maaf bhi ker do na putra.

Kfd bacho ki tarah naa m sir hilate h jise dekh mata ko hasi to khub aati h per khud ko kabu kerte hue.

Thoda udasi ka natak kerte hue

Mata;:- acha mane to socha tha ab kuch samay k liye m apne putra k pass hi rukungi or apne hatho se roj khir banake khilaungi or lori gake sulaungi. Per ab rukne ka kya labh jab mera pyara putra hi mujhse baat ni kerna chahata.
Or wo jane k liye mud jati h.

Or jese hi kfd ye sunte h to chote bache jese jor se bol uthte h .

Kfd:- (chote bacho jese unka hath pakad k) ni mata m aapko kahi ni jane dunga.

Mata:- mere rukne ka bhi kya labh jab tum mujse baat hi ni ker rahe to.

Kfd(josh josh me) :- are ni ni mata kis bevkoof ne kaha m aapse naraj hu vo to m bas aapko thoda tang ker raha tha.

Kfd ne josh josh me bol to diya , per jab unhe samjh aaya ki unki chori pakdi gayi , to unka chahara dekhne layak tha.

Mata (pyar se kan pakdte hue ) :- kyu bachu pakdi gayi na chori , bhulo mat mata hu tumhari or apni putra ki har ek baat or har ek shararat ache se samjhti hu.bolo ab esi masti karoge.

Kfd (dard ka natak kerte hue.) :- aah aah mata pida ho rahi h , shama ker do na , aage se esa ni hoga.wese aap samay k sath or bhi sunder hoti ja rahi ho , aap to yaha aagaye ab waha pitaji ka man kese lagega.


Mata :- (kaan chodte hue or thoda sharmate hue) hat badmash tum ni sudharne wale.

Or wo hasne lagti h. Or sath m kfd bhi or bolte h.

Kfd:- ab jesa bhi hu , hu to aapka ladla putra hi na.

Mata pyar se puchkarte hue:- ha bilkul mere pyara or natkhat putra.

Itna bol wo kfd k dono gaal khich kee ek baar fir gale lagati h or unke dono gal or mathe ko chumti h.

Fir kfd mata ka hath pakad ker apne singhasan per bethathe h or khud niche ghutne k bal beth ker apna sir unki god me rakh ker baate kerne lagte h.

Yu hi wo abhi baate ker hi rahe the ki kfd ko bhuk lagne lagti h , wo to kuch ni bolte .Per mata ko is baat ka abhas ho jata h ,

Mata :- putra mane tumhe kitni baar kaha h ki jab tumhe bhuk lagi ho to bata diya kero , mana ki mahadev k sath rah ker tumne wo vidhya sikhi h jisse bhuk tumhe prabhavit ni kerti , per jab m tumhare sath hu jab to is vidya ka prayog mat kiya kero

Kfd:- mata m isliye esa kerta hu taki aapko kasht na ho , kyunki devi hone k bavjood bhi aap kisi dasi ko bolne k bajaye khud hi bhojan banate ho, vo bhi bina ki shaktiyo ka bhi prayog ni kerte .

Mata :- mera bacha sabse jyada ek maa ko aanand hi apni santan k liye bhojan banane m aata h , tum wo sab chodo ye batao k kya khaoge.

Kfd:- bhole pan se :- wahi jo aapne thodi der pahale bola tha .
Unka ishara kheer ki or tha.

Mata masti kerte hue

Mata :- hmm mane kya bola tha mujhe to yaad ni aaraha.

Kfd bacho jese chidte hue ;:- mata !

Mata haste hue:- are banati hu baba gussa kyu hote ho, khane pine k mamle me bilkul apne guru (mahadev) or apne guru bhai (ganesh ji ) pe gaye ho tum

Fir mata mahal k paak shala (kitchen) m jaa kee khir bana k lati h or jese hi khilane wali hoti h.

Kfd :- yaha ni mata

Mata :- fir kya putra .

kfd :- hamare ghar m mata .

Fir kfd apni mata k hath pakad k gayab ho pahunch jate h usi van me jaha unki mulakat narad ji se hui thi.

Ye jagah bilkul vesi thi jese ki karan or jyoti ka vo dusra ghar jo asha ne banwaya tha, wese hi ek jhula numa bed , pass m kal kal kerti bahati hui nadi , wo van itna ghana tha ki surya ka prakash bhi vaha ni pahuchta tha , parantu mata ki divya shakti ki vajah se ye jagah prakashaman thi. Or jhule k sameep hi ek chota sa gufa numa ghar tha.

Kfd mata ka hath pakde jhule ki or jate h or apne sath hi bitha lete h or mata unhe apne hatho se bhojan karwane lagti h .Or bhojan karwane k baad jhule se uth unhe jhula jhulate hue boli.

Mata:- putra itne yug bit gaye parantu is sthan se tumhara prem aaj bhi vese ka vesa hi h.

Kfd :- ha mata or rahe bhi kyu na , is sthan ki hamare liye kya mahatvta h vo keval aap or m hi samjh sakte h

(Is jagah k bare m aapko age flashback m pata chalega)


Mata :- uchit kaha putra or tumhe to itna prem h is sthan se ki tumhare ansh karan or jyoti m bhi yahi pasand yahi ruchi janm se aagayi jiske chalte , tumne janm k samay hi asha ko , ek esa sthan hi banwane ka nirdesh dena pada.or yaha tak ki jo lori m tumhe sunati hu vahi asha ko bhi bata diya dono ko sulane k liye.


Kfd muskurate h or bolte h

Kfd:- ha mata apne uchit kaha or ha mata apka dhanyawad ki aapne uchit samay pe jaker , karan or jyoti ko apni mata ko khone k dukh se durbal hone se bacha liya.

Mata :- kesi bate ker rahe ho putra karan or jyoti tumhare ansh h or tum mere , is prakar wo meri bhi santaan hui , or ek mata apni santan ko dukh me kese dekh sakti h.


Kfd :- uchit kaha mata aapne.

Mata:- chalo putra ab ratri bahut ho chuki h ab so jao .

Or mata unhe apni god m lori ga ke sula deti h or side m hi khud so jati h.

Wahi subah karan or jyoti ki ankh subah surya ki roshni se khulti h

Karan :- good morning gudiya .

Jyoti :- good morning bhai.

Tabhi vo dekhte h ki unki maa to h hi ni unke pass , jisse ek baar to vo dukhi hote h , per fir apni maa ki baato ko yaad kerke , normal ho jate h

Jyoti :- chaliye na bhai ab jaa ker ghar bhi dekh lete h , ki kis halat me h vo.

Karan bina kuch bole chal deta h .

Ghar ki har chij aaj bhi bilkul vese ki vesi thi jese pahale hua kerti thi. Bas electricity ni thi kyunki yaha kisi ke itne salo se naa aane se connection cut ho gaya tha.

Lekin karan ne agle hafte yaha wapas aaker sab problem sahi karwane ka soch filhaal k liye is baat ko taal diya . Dono bhai bahan thodi der yu hi ghar m ghum k apni yade taza kerte rahe .

Tabhi ek kamre m jyoti ko kuch milta h jise wo jaldi se utha ker gadi m rakh aati h. Karan ko bina bataye.

Fir karan bolta h

Karan :- gudiya chal ab ghar chalne ka time ho gaya h.

Ye sun jyoti ka chahra latak jata h wo yaha se jana ni chahti thi , per karan ne use agle hafte firse aane wali baat batayi , jise sun vo khush ho gayi.

Fir dono waha ghar me baari bari fresh h ker nahate h, kapde karan apne sath pahale hi le aaya tha , fir dono waha dobara aane ka soch waha se nikal pade .

Or jese hi wo ghar pahunchte h shivani unhe hall m hi mil jati h

Shivani :- kya baat h bhai di or apke chahre ki ronak to dekne layak h aaj. Kya baat h bhai lagta h aapki date successful rahi .

Ye sun karan to jor jor se hasne lagta h or jyoti jhute gusse k sath

Jyoti :- kya boli ruk tujhe m batati hu shivani ki bachi , bahut bigad gayi h tu.

Ye bol wo uski or dodti or shivani bhi bhagne lagti h, or thodi der unki ye pakdam pakdayi chalti h .

Tabhi karan ko apne phone ka dhayan aata h jo ki vo kal raat switch off ker ke ghar p hi chod gaya tha.


Wo apna phone laker use on kerta h to dekhta h radha , rohan or riya tino ki kayi miss call aayi hui thi.

Karan ye dekh jaldi se radha ko phone kerta h . Phone 2 ring baad hi pick hota h or dusri taraf radha hi hoti h.

Radha:- hello bhaiya , kaha the aap , apka phone kyu ni lag raha tha aap thik to hona . Pata ni kyu mera dil parso se kyu ghabra raha tha.

Radha ki awaz me karan or jyoti k liye pyar or chinta saf saf najar aarahi thi, jise dekh karan ko us per bahut pyaar aata h.

Karan :- are are meri barbie doll m bilkul thik hu , sorry aapko batana bhul gaya m aapki di k sath kahi bahar gaya hua tha , or waha battery khatam ho gayi thi phone ki abhi hi thodi der pahale aaya.

Radha ye sun relax ho jati h .

Radha :- bhaiya aap abhi kaha ho , aapse milne ka bahut man ker raha h.

Karan :- man to mera bhi bhi apni choti gudiya se milne ka ho raha h , esa kerte h 2 ghante baad rohan k ghar p milte h .

Radha:- ok bhaiya , love u

Karan :- love u to sweety .

Fir wo rohan or riya ko bhi phone kerta h or unke ghar aane ki baat bata deta h .

Karan :- choti jaldi se teyar ho ja hume abhi rohan k ghar jana h .

Shivani :- bhai m bhi chalu aapke sath .

Jyoti :- ha chal na choti kyu ni

Karan :- to tum dono jaldi se teyar ho jao .

Jyoti :- lekin bhai abhi to 2 ghante h na , waha jane m . Fir abhi se kyu

Karan:- are yaar tum ladkiya abhi teyar hone bethogi jab jaker hum time se pahunchenge na.kyunki duniya janti h ki ladkiyo ko teyar hone m kitna time lagta h. Isliye bola
Or karan hasne lagta h.

Jyoti or shivani ek ek mukka pyar se uske sine pe laga ker

Dono :- kya bhai aap bhi.

Fir 3no thodi der yu hi ese baate kerte rahate h fir 3no nikal jate h rohan k ghar ki or.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi
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Location :- talatal lok.

Kaal bhanu abhi pure vish ko lagbhag samahit ker hi chuka tha ki tabhi uske kano m ek awaj gunjati h.

Awaj :- ruk jao kal bhanu .

Kaal bhanu ruk ke jese hi awaj ki disha m dekhta h to, waha ek roshni fel jati h.or jab roshni hatati h to samne wale ko dekh kaal bhanu ko bilkul herani ni hoti.

Kaal bhanu k samne swayam bhagwan vishnu khade the.

Lekin kaal bhanu ne unka jara bhi saman na kiya or sidhe bola.

Kaal bhanu :- aao vishnu aao mujhe pata tha ki koi badha bane na bane per tum avashya mere karya ki badha avashya banoge .

Hum danvo k yugo se shatru jo thahare , per tum bhul rahe ho ki tum mujhe na to maar sakte ho na hi rok sakte ho.

Bhagwan vishnu :- murkhta mat kero kaal bhanu , abhi bhi samay h ruk jao , tum ek samay mahadev k bhakt rah chuke ho or mahadev mere aaradhya h, is naate m tumhe ek antim avsar dene aaya hu , adharm ka marg tyag do , ye jo tum kerne jaa rahe ho isse bhavishy me tumko to sankat hoga hi sath sath tum apne kul apne jati ka hi vinash ker bethoge.

Kaal bhanu:- m tumhare kisi bhi prakar k chal me ni aane wala vishnu, m tujh chaliye ko or tere har chal ko ache se janta hu, tere hi kaaran aaj mere pita ki esi dasha h , ek baar m bas tere or tere priya dev kfd k bheje us rakshak ka ant ker du , fir m amar ho jaunga , or mera agla lakshay tera baikunth hi hoga.

Bhagwan vishnu :- satya hi h krodh or badle ki bhavna budhi or vivek ko har leta h. Tumhare pita k sath jo hua vo unke karmo ka fal hi tha kaalbhanu. Or jo tum ab kerne jaa rahe ho uska karmfal bhi bhavishya m tumhe milega. Or wo muskurate hue nikal gaye.kyunki unka karya ho chuka tha.

Kaalbhanu fir se apne kaam p lag gaya parantu jaha pahale wo apne karya kerte hue bilkul shant tha , ab wo krodhit man se halahal ko apne bhitar samahit ker raha tha .

Or karib ek ghante baad uska karya purn ho chuka tha , ab uski ankhe jo pahale bhure rang ki thi , lekin ab puri nili ho chuki thi , uska sharir ab or balshali ho chuka tha.

Kaal bhanu :- hahaa ab m sarvashaktiman ho chuka hu mera mukabla koi ni ker sakta. Yaha tak ki wo rakshak bhi ni.

Itna bol vo vaha se gayab ho pahunch gaya vp k pass .

Vp :- shabas mere bache bahut khub , parantu is halahal ko apne vash m kerne k liye tap to kerna hi hoga.anyatha ye tumhe hi nigal jayega.

Kaal bhanu :- janta hu m isliye hi to pahale ye karya kiya h , ab m koi bacha ni raha hu jo har baat m aap mujhe salah dete fire.

Vp ko kaal bhanu k is tarah baat kerne se bahut herani hoti h , bhale hi kaal bhanu shetan ho lekin usne aaj tak kabhi usse ese baat ni ki thi per wo is baat ko andheka ker deta h.

Kaal bhanu:- 9 mahine keval 9 mahine or h tere pass h rakshak jitna ji sakta h ji le , uske baad

Haha hahaha

Wo jor jor se hasne lagta h .

Location :- ranvir office.

Ranvir abhi office me betha apne kaam me laga hua tha ki uska phone ring hota h .

Ranvir :- hello ha bol pakia

Pakia :- boss ek buri khabar h ,

Ranvir :- gusse m kya hua pakia.

Pakia:- boss aapki choti beti shivani karan or jyoti ki side ja chuki h.

Ranvir (dant bhichte hue ) :- kya uski ye himmat

Or gusse me phone kaat deta h .

Ranvir :- ager esa hi chalta raha to m apne maksad me kese kamyab hounga ,kuch to kerna hoga mujhe.

Or wo gusse m phone chala ker marta h .

Wahi karan jyoti or shivani 3no shivani ki gadi m nikal gaye rohan k ghar .

Jyoti :- bhai mujhe ni lagta ki hume waha pe in do din m hamare sath jo bhi hua vo batana chahiye.werna sab bewajah pareshan ho jayenge .

Karan :- ha gudiya tum bilkul sahi bol rahi ho, hum unhe sach ni batayege , mane sab soch liya h ki , unhe kya batana h.

Jyoti :- ok bhai

Shivani :- bhaiya, mujhe aapko ek baat batani h.

Jo piche ki seat pr bethi ye sab bate sun rahi thi vo boli,

Karan :- ha bolo na princess ,

Shivani :- bhaiya mujhe lagta h ki mummy ko apke uper kiye gaye unke hatya charo ka pachtava h,

Jyoti jese hi ye sunti h uska para chad jata h, kyunki usko kal wali baat yaad aajati h , jab kabya ne karan ko thappad mara tha or uski ankhe lal ho chuki thi.

Jyoti :- pachtava or unko ye bhala kese ho sakta h , tumhari ye galat fahmi h shivani , unko koi fark ni padta hum jiye ya mare , unhe sirf khud se matlab h.

Jyoti ka ye rup dekh ker shivani to bechari dar gayi , aaj usne pahali baar jyoti ka gusse wala roop dekha tha . Jyoti ko gusse m dekh k karan ne gadi side m rok li ,or jaldi se use gale lagake bola .

Karan:- shant ho ja meri gudiya shant ho jao , tum to meri pyari gudiya ho na , please apne bhai k liye shant ho jao.

Karan shivani ko ishare se is baat k baare m baad m baat kerne ko bol deta h.

Or fir wo chal padte h rohan k ghar ki or.

Or wo gadi park kerke ghar ki bell bajate h , darwaja anita kholti h.karan or jyoti dono anita k per chute h.

Anita karan or jyoti ko gale lagate hue .

Anita:- jug jug jiyo mere bacho , rohan or riya tumhara hi wait ker rahe h or radha bitiya bhi aayi hui h.

Karan:- ji masi ma m janta hu mane hi phone kerke bulaya tha usko.

Tabhi anita ki najar shivani pe padti h .

Anita :- are ye pyari si bachi kon h.


Jyoti :- masi ma ye shivani h , hamari choti bahan ,

Fir jyoti anita ko shivani k bare m batati h or shivani bhi anita k per chuke ashirwad leti h .

Abhi ye baat ker hi rahe the ki koi karan k piche se aaker pith se lipat jata h.

Pahale to karan chok jata h per fir muskurate hue us shaks ko piche se hata ker sine se lagata h or bolta h.

Karan :- kesi ho meri barbie doll.

Radha :- hamesha ki tarah ek dum first class bhaiya . Aapne do din se mujhse baat kyu ni ki pata h mane aapko kitna miss kiya, ek to aapne mujhe apne ghar ane se bhi mana kiya hua tha or upr se aapka phone bhi ni laga.

Ha dosto karan ne apne sabhi dosto ko ghar pe aane se mana kiya hua tha , kyunki wo ni chahate the ki unki choti maa ya papa unke friends ko bhi unke chakkar m kuch bura bhala bolde .

Karan:- sorry betu , mane apko phone pe bataya tha na ki m or tumhari di urgently kahi bahar gaye hue the , dekho tumhare liye m kya laya hu , or apni jeb se wo kuch choclate nikal ker de deta h .

Radha chocolate dekh k kush hoti h or usse jyada khush is baat se hoti h ki uske bhaiya ko uski har ek pasand k bare m malum, uske liye wese to ye chocolate koi badi baat ni thi, per ye chocolate uske bhai ne pahali baar use gift k tor pe di thi , jiski value uske liye kayi lakho rupaye se bhi jyada thi.

Or wo thank you bolte hue karan k chahare ko gila ker deti h or sabse najre chura k jara sa hoto ko bhi chum leti h, lekin uske dil m koi galt bhavna ni thi , usne to apne bholepan se apne bhai ko apna pyar dikhaya.or fir wo jyoti k bhi gale lag ker mili



Tabhi piche se riya ki awaj aati h .

Riya :- are gudiya ab bas bhi ker tera ho gaya ho to , ab mujhe bhi to mil lene de mere bhai or bahan se sara pyaar tu hi lelegi kya bhai ka kuch hamre liye bhi chod.

Radha(bura sa muh banate hue) :- ha to milo na , mane kaha roka .

Usne ese react kiya jese kisi bache se koi uska favorite khilona le mang raha ho.

Jise dekh sab haste h .

Fir riya or rohan bhi ka
ran or jyoti se bari bari gale milte h or unhe bhi karan or jyoti wo hi bahana batate h.

Tabhi sab ki najar shivani pe padti h

Riya :- bhai ye kon h

Karan :- ye shivani h di aapko bataya tha na mane .

Riya :- per ye to .

Karan bich me tokte hue .

Karan :- di room m chalke ye sab bate kerte h .

Riya :- ok

Fir sabhi riya or rohan k room m chale jate h.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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Sabhi rohan or riya k kamre m jate h. Or riya apna sawal firse repeat kerti h.

Karan :- di , baat darasal ye thi ki shivani humse bas yu hi naraj thi ki hum kabhi usse milne ni gaye hostel or na hi usse na hi baat ki .

Or dusri baat ki hamare hi papa ne hamare khilaf is bachi k dimag m jahar gholne ki koshis ki thi. Jab bhi wo ya choti maa hostel jate shivani se milne to isko hamare khilaf bhadkate , ki hum isse nafrat kerte h or isse jalte bhi h or yaha tak iske man me ye bol ker bhi jahar bharne ki koshis ki ki hum iske sotele bhai bahan h or future m iska hak bhi chin sakte h .

Lekin wo apne is maksad m puri tarah kamyab na hue , wo unke samne humse nafrat ka natak kerti or ek din moka dekh ker isne ye sab baate clear ker li, jisse shivani ko bhi unki asliyat malum ho gayi h.

Karan ne yaha tak jo baat batayi hi h wo bilkul sach h, kyunki shivani ne aaj subah hi ye sab baate karan or jyoti ko bata di thi. Wo puri sachai ko pata kerna to chahata tha per do vajaho se chup betha tha , pahali vajah ki wo chahta tha ki uske pita ya choti ma sachai khud bataye to hi sahi rahega , or dusri vajah abhi bhi uski jagrit kuch shaktiyon ko niyantran kerna baki tha , jiske liye use dhyan lagana padega jesa ki baba ne bataya ,

Riya :- mujhe to yakin hi ni hota bhai ek pita apne hi bacho k sath esa kese ker sakte h.

Jyoti (thoda guse m):- kyu ni ker sakte di , jis baap ko ye bhi parwah ni ki unke bache kesi halat m or bina maa baap k pyaar k kese ji rahe h unko bhala in baato ki kya parwah .

Jo baap ek choti si baat pe apne bete ko itni buri tarah mare ki uski chamdi udhed jaye , or baad m bilkul esa behave kere jese usko koi parwah ni to unke liye isme kya badi baat h.
Or fir jyoti sabko sari baat batati h usdin kavya k birthday wali

Riya :- omg bhai aap log kese jhel lete ho ye sab, tumhare papa insaan h ya hevan

Jyoti :- wo hevan hi ban chuke h di bahut ho chuka h di , mane or bhai ne to apna fesla le chuke h ki final year k hote hi hum ye ghar chod denge.

Jyoti ese hi gusse m boli jaa rahi thi bahut kuch jiske chalte karan ko use shant kerna padha wapas .


Karan :- (man me) ye jyoti ko akhir hogaya h , meri gudiya to ek dam shant swabhav ki thi , achanak se itna krodh kyu or kaha se .Mujhe baba se shighra hi is vishay m vartalap kerni hogi.

Fir karan sabka mind divert kerne kerne k liye bolta h .

Karan (radha se) :- are gudiya do din se humari dance practice bhi ni hui h bhul gayi kal competition ka din h.

Radha:- are ha bhai m to bhul hi gayi thi. Per hum practice kere kaha.

Riya :- usme konsi badi baat h choti tu shayad bhul rahi h ki sham ko 6 baje tak college k practice hall ko use kerne ki permission di hui h principal ne.

Shivani :- konsa dance competition bhai ,

Karan :- are ha sorry tumhe to m batana hi bhul gaya tha, wo mane
Or teri di ne vakantie day k competition m part liya h
Or karan use sari baat bata deta h.

Shivani :- wao bhai 100 % aap hi competition jitoge or m bhi aap dono ka dance dekhne jarur aayungi.

Radha:- jitne k liye practice to kerni padegi na per. Chalo chalo bhai jaldi se college chalte h .


Fir sabhi college pahunch ker practice m lag jate h , karan or jyoti ki sikhne ki speed pahale se jyada fast ho chuki thi, ye dekh ker sab heran the siwaye ek shaks ko chod ker jo usdin ki tarah hi muskura raha tha.

Lekin inke alawa char ankhe or bhi thi jo unhe dekh rahi thi. gussa or jalan unki ankho m saf saf dikh rahi thi .

Unknown :- hame kuch kerna hoga sohail werna ese to hum competition har jayenge. or m is baar bilkul bhi ni harna chahati

Sohail:- Tu sahi bol rahi h sana hame kuch kerna hoga, is karan or jyoti k chakkar m hamari har baar bejati hoti h.

Sohail or sana ye dono isi college ka ek bigda hua couple h or sohail ka bhai is shahar ka don h. Or ye bhi apne bhai k nakshe kadam pe chal raha h, isne college k kayi students ko drug addict bana diya h

Or kayi ladkiyo ko drugs ki lat lagake apni havas ka shikar ka shikar bhi banaya h, or in kamo me sana hi iski help kerti h. Ye bhi ek bigdi hui ladki h or sohail se iska rishta sirf peso k liye hi h.

Sach hi kahate h insaan jis marg pe chalta h usko sathi bhi vese hi milte h sana bhi sirf havas or pese k liye inke sath thi.

Sohail :- sun mere pass ek idea h

Or wo sana ko batane lagta h.

Karib 4 ghante ki practice k bad wo sab apne apne ghar k liye nikal jate h.

Unko ghar aate ate late sham ho gayi thi. Jese hi karan or jyoti ghar k bahar pahunchte h to dekhte h ki kabya gate pe hi khadi h ,usko dekh ker lag raha tha ki wo kisi ka chinta ker rahi h.

Or wo jese hi 3no bhai bahano ko dekhti h to rahat ki sans leti h.

Kavya(shivani se) :- kaha thi tu subah se , janti h m kitna pareshan ho gayi thi , ager late hone wali thi to kam se kam.ek phone to ker sakti thi na.

Kavya baat to shivani se ker rahi thi but , chupke chupke karan or jyoti ko bhi dekh rahi thi , jese ye sawal unke liye bhi h.

Shivani :- sorry mumma wo m aapko batana bhul gayi , m bhaiya or di k sath unke friends k ghar gayi thi . Aage se esa ni hoga.

Or ye baat bolke wo apne kan pakad leti h.

Kavya:- koi baat ni mera bacha , Age se dhyan rakhna.

Or usko gale lagati h or ek baar karan or jyoti ki taraf ek bar dekh waha se shivani ko leker ander chali jati h.


Karan ko ye dekh ker wo din yaad aajate h jab Wo bhi sham ko dono bhai bahaMn sham ko khel k aate the , tab unki choti maa yani ki kavya unka bhi yuhi intezaar kerti thi .Or ese hi pyar kerti ghar lotne per or apne hatho se khana khilati.

Jyoti to abhi bhi gussa thi kavya se per jyada ni. Dono ghar m aaker apne kamre m jaker let jate h , karan jyoti ko apne uper leta leta h or pyar se uske balo ko sahalate hue bolta h.

Karan :- kya baat h gudiya aaj achanak se tere ko kya ho gaya tha, aaj se pahale to tujhe yu gusse m ni dekha itna .

Jyoti ka man ab bilkul shant ho gayi tha apne bhai ki baho aaker, ab uske dil m krodh or dvesh jesi koi bhavna ni thi . Jyoti ka dil to vese bhi bahut hi shant komal or kisi bhi burai gussa ya dvesh se rahit tha .Per aaj pata ni use kya ho gaya tha.

Jyoti :- pata ni bhai mujhe aaj kya ho gaya tha, lekin mere dil ko ab laga ki ab bahut ho gaya h aakhir kab tak hum bina vajah papa or choti maa k atyachar sahenge . Isliye mera krodh mujh per havi ho gaya.sorry bhai aapko mere is tarah k behavior se bura laga to.


Karan :- are kesi bat ker rahi h gudiya tu to meri jaan h , teri kisi baat ka m bhala bura man sakta hu kya . M to bas bol raha hu gudiya tu hamesha ese hi khush raha ker.

Jyoti baat ko badalte hue side m beth jati h or boli

Jyoti :- vese partner ji kal k competition k liye teyar ho na.

Karan bhi uth k beth jata h.

Karan :- ha ji madam ji hum to bahut excited h kal k liye.

Jyoti :- or wo kyu bhala ji.

Jyoti k hoto ko halka sa chumte hue .

Karan :- are bhai ab jiski itni sunder gf ho wo bhala excited kyu na hoga couple dance k liye . Kal sabhi ladko ko jalane m maja aayega.

Jyoti (sharmate hue) :- kya bhai aap bhi or
Jyoti blush kerne lagti h

Karan dil p dono hath rak ke piche ki taraf girte hue majakiya andaj m awara romeo ki tarah bolta h.

Karan :- uff ye adaye .

Jyoti karan ki is harkat pe khil khila ker hasne lagti h , or karan bhi man hi man khush ho raha tha ki uski jaan ab bilkul shant or khush thi.

Ese hi vo thodi der baate kerte rahate h fir dono hamesha ki tarah mil ker khana banate or ek sath khane lagte h ,or jese hi sone ki teyari kerte h ,

Shivani room m aati h , jise dekh ker karan bolta h .

Karan :- are princess aap yaha is wakt soye ni abhi tak.

Shivani :- ha bhaiya wo actually mujhe nind ni aarahi thi , kya m aapke pass so sakti hu.


Karan :- kya ni betu ,
or bed pe lete lete hue hi bahe felaker bolta h .

Karan :- aajao mera bacha .

Shivani bhi kud ker karan k uper aajati h or karan use apne uper hi sula leta h.

Or jyoti bhi ek side se karan se chipak k so jati h.

Agle din karan or jyoti subah 5 baje uth ker dhayan m beth jaate h , aaj karan apne ander ki jagrit aadhi shaktiyo per kabu pa chuka tha.

Karib do ghante baad vo dhyan se uthte h . Fir shivani ko bhi utha ker ready hone ko bolte h.


Karan ek three piece suit m bahut handsome lag raha tha.

Or fir jyoti bhi teyar ho ker aati h rad colour ki dress m vo bahut beautiful lag rahi thi.
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Fir 3no bhai bahan college pahunchte h jaha baki sab bhi mil jate h .

Sabhi karan or jyoti ki khub tarif kerte h. Fir karan or jyoti back stage pe chale jate h .

Tabhi vaha sanna aati h

Sana:- hi jyoti looking so beautiful yaar.

Jyoti:- hi sana and u tooo.

Sana :- thanks wese tera partner bhi bahut handsome h lagta h compitition tum hi jitoge.

Jyoti kuch ni bolti or muskurati h bas ,

Sana:- chal na jyoti abhi teri bari m time h to kyu na canteen m ek ek coffee ho jaye .

Jyoti :- ok ruko m karan ko bata du jara.

Jyoti sana ya college m.kisi ko bhi karan se khud ka rishta ni bataya tha aaj tak.

Karan:- kaha jane ki baat ho rahi h sana ji.

Jyoti sari baat bata deti h.

Karan :- are ye kya baat hui jyoti ko coffee or hume pucha bhi ni.

Sana:- are are esi baat ni h tum bhi chalo na karan .

Fir 3no canteen pahunchte h or sana coffee leker aati h , lekin usme kuch mila deti h or jese hi wo karan or jyoti k pass leker aati h , karan ek chutki bajaker jyoti or sana k cup ki coffee apni shakti se change ker deta h ,

Or jese hi sana coffee piti h usko bahut ajib lagne lagta h or wo waha se baad m milne ka bahaana kerke nikal jati h .

Actually usne jyoti ki coffee m drug milaya tha jo turant asar kerta h , lekin karan ki vajah se usne khud hi vo drug le liya tha.

Sb uski halat kharab ho gayi thi or vo jaldi se college se bhag gayi kyunki use is drugs k symptom k bare m pata tha.

Hua yu tha ki kal jab ye dono hall m hi planning ker rahe the tab inki baate karan ne bhi sun li thi , kyunki powers jagrit hone k baad uske sunnne ki shamta 100 guna bad chuki thi.

Or is tarah inka plan fail ho gaya tha.

Fir karan or jyoti ka no bhi aahi jata h .

Karan or jyoti bahut sunder dance kerte h is song per
O karam khudhaya h
Tujhe mujhse milaya hai
Tujhpe marke hi toh
Mujhe jeena aaya hai

O tere sang yaara
Khushrang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitara

O tere sang yaara
Khushrang bahara
Main tera ho jaun
Jo tu karde ishara

Kahi kisi bhi gali mein jaaun main
Teri khushbu se takraun main
Har raat jo aata hai mujhe
Woh khwab tu..

Tera mera milna dastoor hai
Tere hone se mujhme noor hai
Main hoon soona sa ek aasmaan
Mehtaab tu..

O karam khudaya hai
Tujhe maine jo paaya hai
Tujhpe marke hi toh
Mujhe jeena aaya hai

O tere sang yaara
Khush rang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitara

O tere sang yara
Khush rang bahara
Tere bin ab toh
Na jeena ganvara

Karan or jyoti ki performance itni shandar thi ki audience k sath judge bhi khade ho ker taliya bajate h.

Or kuch der baad result announce hota h, jiske winner karan or jyoti hi hote h.





Sorry friends aaj meri tabiyat thik ni h to ye wala seen short m niptaya h kyunki is seen m kuch esa khas tha bhi ni

Ab dekhte h kon h wo shaks jisko karan or jyoti ki adbhut kabiliyat se herani ni hoti, kyu jyoti ka krodh baar bar bhadak raha h, or sohail ab kya karega , janne k liye sath bane rahiye
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Karan or jyoti ka name jese hi announce hota h , to unke sabhi dost bahut khush hote h, radha to itni excited ho jati h ki josh josh me siti maar deti h, or usko samjh aata h usne kya kiya , to wo sharma k beth jatti , kyunki aaspas bethe sabhi student use ghurne lagte h.

Fir unko ek trophy milti h ,jispe ek couple bane hue the dance kerte hue.kuch esi .
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Fir program khatam hone k baad sabhi karan or jyoti un dono k pass aate h.

Riya :- wow bhai kya dance kiya tum dono ne koi bhi ni kah sakta k tumne dance itni jaldi sikha h or ye tumhara pahala compitition h.

Radha :- aakhir bhai kiske h.

Karan (majak me riya k gale lagte hue) :- apni riya didu ka .

Jisse sun sabhi hasne lagte h or radha ka popAt ho jata h. Or wo muh fula leti h.

Karan :- ale meri gudiya to mujhse gussa ho gayi , are pagli m to majak ker raha tha , teri vajah se hi to m ye competition jita hu , ab apne bhaiya ko maaf ker ke ek pyari si kisi ni dogi congratulations ki.

Radha:- ha kyu ni bhaiya.

Or ek sath uske pure chahare pe kayi kiss ker deti h.


Rohan :- bhai aaj to party banti h akhir tum dono first jo aaye ho.

Jyoti :- ha kyu ni bhai , aaj sham ko hum sab ek ache se restaurant m dinner karenge.

Lekin riya kuch soch ker bich m hi bol uthi.



Riya :- ji ni aaj party m dungi apne bhai bahan k jitne ki khushi m.


Or ye bol ke riya karan or jyoti k mathe ko bari bari se chumti h.

Karan :- di aap kyu

Lekin riya bich me bol uthi

Riya :- mane kaha na , m badi hu or tum dono se bhi jyada khushi mujhe h tumhare jitne ki , isliye party m hi dungi or m kuch ni sunne wali

Fir karan bhi kuch ni bolta or wo bhi chupchap baat man leta h. Or fir sab apne apne ghar ki or nikal padte h .

Rohan or riya apni car me ghar ki or jaa rahe the , ki tabhi rohan bolta h.

Rohan :- didu kya m aapse kuch puchu.

Riya:- betu pahali baat ye ki aapko kab se mujhse kisi baat ki permission lene ki jarurat padne lagi , or dusri baat m janti hu k aap kya puchna chahate ho. Yahi na ki yu achanak se ye party m dungi ye decision kyu liya.

Rohan :- ha didu.

Riya :- betu tum bhul gaye kya , abhi karan or jyoti kis situation m h , unke papa unki bilkul parwah ni kerte or jaha tak mujhe lag raha h unki financial condition bhi thik ni h , tum hi batao dono bhai bahan kese na kese 10000 hajar rupaye m apne sare expanses nikalte h,unke uper ye party ka kharcha dalna sahi hota kya.
Isliye mane ek badi bahan hone ka farz nibhate hue indirectly unki help ki , m sidha unko pese dene ki baat kerti to bilkul bhi ni lete.


Riya ka andaza bilkul sahi tha , karan or jyoti ki financial condition bilkul thik ni thi.

Rohan :- aapne bilkul sahi kaha di or (udas hote hue ) or m bevkoof apne hi dosto ko or pareshani m dal raha tha.

Riya car ko side m rok ke rohan ko gale laga ke bolti h .

Riya :- koi baat ni betu , galti sabse hoti h, ese udas mat ho , tujhe pata h na betu m tumhe udas ni dekh sakti.

Or riya use kuch hi minute m normal ker deti h .Karan or jyoti ki tarah rohan or riya m bhi bahut pyaar h ,dono ek dusre ko bilkul dukhi ni dekh sakte .

Wahi karan jyoti shivani bhi ghar pahunch jate h or shivani apne room m chali jati h. Karan or jyoti bhi apne room m aaker fresh hote h , or bed p let jate h.

Karan:- aaj bahut maza aaya na jyoti .

Jyoti :- ha bhai aaj meri life k best moments me se ek tha.per bhai

Karan :- per kya gudiya bolo , ruk kyu gayi .

Jyoti :- bhai m ye soch rahi hu ki ham yaha kab tak yu ghut ghut ker jite rahenge, ab mujhse or nafrat ni jheli jati bhaiya , apne suna na shivani kya bol rahi thi hamare papa ne kese jahar bhar rahe the . Mujhe ni chahiye unki ye 10000 ki bhik.

Or itna bol ker wo rone lagti h. Uska rona ka kaaran bhi uchit hi tha , ek pita hamesha ye chahata h ki uske bacho m hamesha pyaar bana rahe .Lekin yaha to bilkul ulta tha, ek beti k liye uska pita uska hero hota h , or ek beti ko sabse jyada pyar bhi apne pita se hota h or wo apne pita se hamesha pyaar or sneh hi expect kerti h . Per yaha to uska baap hi is bechari ka dushman bana hua tha.

Karan ko bhi aaj bahut thes pahunchi thi , lekin usne khud ko sambhala ye soch ker ki ager wo hi tut gaya to uski jyoti uski gudiya ka kya hoga

Karan :- shant ho ja mera bacha shant ho ja , ese rote ni h tu to meri bahadur gudiya h na , or humne kya decide kiya thi ki ek baar hamari graduation ho jaye fir hum ye ghar chod denge . Ab jyada time h hi kya hamari graduation m.

Jyoti (bikul bacho ki tarah ) :- ha bhaiya aap sahi bol rahe ho ab ham jaldi is ghar ko chod denge or yaha kabhi wapas ni aayenge or shivani ko kabhi kabhi bahar hi mil liya karenge.

Karan kuch ni bolta or muskurata h or uske sir ko god m rakh ke sula
Deta h.

Karan (apne aap se gusse m):- sohail ab tere or tere bhai k paap ka ghadha bhar chuka h . Ab tum dono ko apne karmo ka dand milega.

Itna bol karan muskurata h or kuch der k liye ankhe band kerta h or kuch der baad apni ankhe khol ke ghar ki chat pe jaker kisi ko phone laga deta h.

Or wapas aaker so jaata h .

Or sham ko sare friends mil ker ek ache se restaurant m dinner kerte h.
Or wapas ghar aajate h .Fir kuch khas ni hota . Or karan or jyoti aaker so jate h , lekin karan k chahare pe ek muskaan thi.

Agli subah college ka kisi karan off tha to karan or jyoti ghar pe bethe tv dekh rahe the , tabhi ek news dekh ker jyoti chonk jati h or karan muskurane lagta h.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

Stay tuned.

Sorry for short update friends wese to m aaj update ni deta tabiyat kharab hone ki vajah se lekin bina yaha update diye mera bhi man ni lagta jitna aaplogo ko ye story padhne m aaraha h usse jyada mujhe likhne me aaraha h dosto , isliye yuhi sath bane rahiye.
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