Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running

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Update no:- 24
Mandir se nikal ker sabhi car me beth k nikal jate h. Car riya chala rahi thi or uske sath aage rohan betha tha. Piche karan radha or jyoti k bich m betha tha .
Ghar pahuchne m unko do ghante lagne wale the , tabhi karan dekhta h ki radha ko nind aachuki h to per wo comfortable ni h to karan riya ko ishara kerke gadi rukwata h or jyoti ko dhire se kuch bolta h to jyoti jaldi se jaker piche wali seat p beth jati h or karan radha ka sir apni god me rakhkar use leta deta h seat per.
Unki gadi suv 7 seater thi to unhe koi problem ni hui.
Fir wo karib do ghante m rohan k ghar pahuch jate h . Karan radha ko god m utha k ghar m lejata h or use rohan or riya k room aaram se sula
Deta h . Radha sote hue bahut cute lag rahi thi ek dam choti bachi jesi. Jise dekh karan uske gal chum ker.room se bahar nikal jata h.
Fir baki aker sofe pe beth jate h . Or aaj unhonne jo sab kiya wo anita ko batane lagte h.
Anita :- lagta h tum sab ne bahut masti ki h ,
Karan :- ha aunty.
Anita :- beta mane tumhe us din bhi kaha tha na ki tum mujhe aunty mat bolo. Ha tumhari mummy meri saheli hi ni meri bahan jesi bhi thi to tum mujhe mosi bol sakte ho .
Karan:- ok mosi maa.
Anita karan k muh se mosi sun ker bahut khush hoti h .
Rohan :- vese mummy karan ki mummy aapki best friend thi na to aap to unki family k bare m bhi janti hi hogi to kuch bataiye na . Karan or jyoti ko to apne nana nani k bare m kuch ni pata.
Anita:- beta mujhe jyada to kuch yaad ni but ha ashu ne ek baar bataya to tha ki uske parivar me do uska ek bhai ek bahan or uske mummy papa h or wo unke sath rajasthan k kisi shivpur gao m rahati thi.
Riya :- wah mummy kam se kam itna to pata chala aunty rahane wali kaha ki thi , (karan se) bhai hum sab waha chalenge vacation m ho sakta h tumhare nana nani hume mil jaye.
Sabhi us baat se sahmat the per abhi to vacation m bahut time h.
Fir ese hi bate kerte kerte raat ho jati h. Radha bhi jag chuki thi . Fir sabhi wahi dinner kerte h . Anita bahut rukne k liye bolti h karan or jyoti ko wahi aaj rat or karan or jyoti bhi rukna chahte the but apne pita k bure swabhav k kaaran ruk ni sakte the. Isliye unhe waha se jana padta h . Radha unhe waha unke ghar p chod deti h. Or driver ko bula ker waha se apne ghar ki or nikal jati h.
Karan or jyoti bhi apne kamre m ghus jate h.
Short flash back.
20 year ago
Ek bade se ghar k hal me ek aadmi betha hua tha apni patni k sath jo bahut pareshan tha .Uski bhi patni bhi .
Aadmi :- lagta h asha humare nasib santaan ka sukh likha hi ni h asha , shadi k itne salo baad bhi hum nisantan h or ager tum pregnant ho bhi jati ho to vo bacha garbh me tikta ni h . Arthat garbhpat ho jata h ab to doctors ne bhi jwab de diya h.
Orat :- ni ranbir esa mat boliye bhagwan pe bharosa rakhiye mujhe apne shiv ji per ki wo ek na ek din hamari prathna jarur sunenge .

Ji ha dosto ye or koi ni apne hero k mummy papa h ranbir or asha. Jinke pass kisi chij ki kami ni h , asha ne ranbir k sath bhag k shadi ki h . Inke pariwar k baki members k bare m aage pata chalega.

Ese hi din pratidin inki pareshani or badhti ja rahi thi , lekin asha ka shiv ji per pura vishwas tha vo roj mandir jati mandir k piche hi ek rishi ki kutiya thi. Vo rishi roj subah jaldi dhyan m beth jate. Asha bahut hi ache dil ki orat thi to wo har roj unke dhayan wali jagah ki safai kerti rishi k dhyan m bethne k baad taki unhe koi kida n kaat le or roj unki kutiya ki saf safayi ker unke pine ka pani bhar k lati . Or pass k pedo se unke bhojan k fal tod ker unki kutiya me rakh deti or fir waha se apne ghar lot jati.
Rishi dhyan m avashya hote per unko asha ki niswarth seva k bare m gyat tha .
Ek din jab hamesha ki tarah asha rishiwer k sabhi karya kerke jane lagti h to rishiwer bolte h
Rishiwer:- ruko beti
Asha:- kahiye baba mujhse koi galti hui kya.
Rishiwer:- ni putri balki hum tumhari
Niswarth seva se prasan h beti mango jo icha ho mango beti.
Asha :- baba aapne hi to kaha abhi ki mane niswarth bhav se aapki seva ki h, to m niswarth seva k badle kese kuch mang sakti hu.
Baba ye baat sun ker or khush hote h or apni aankhe band kerke thodi der dhyan lagate h fir bolte h.
Rishi:- tum dhanya ho putri aaj k kaliyug m bhi tumme ye niswarth seva ka bhavna h , mujhe gyat ho gaya h tum santan k abhav se bahut dukhi ho putri , tumhare bhagya m abhi tak santan sukh ni likha tha ,
lekin tumne apne satkarmo se apne bhagya ko bhi parivartit ker diya h putri .Satya hi kaha h kisine bhagya se bada karm hota h.
m dekh sakta hu bhavishya m tumhe ek ni balki do do santano ka sukh praapt hoga .
Asha bhi khush ho ker apne ghar ki or nikal jati h .
Usi raat asha so rahi hoti h ki usko sapna aata h. Ek bahut hi tejasvi vyakti unke samne pragat hota h jike hatho m do shakti punj h .Or wo vyakti un shakti punj ko asha k ki taraf chod dete h jo uski garbh m sama jate h.
Or 1 mahine baad vo rishi k kahe anusaar pregnent ho jati h or thik 9 mahine baad .
Asha k pet m dard uthata tha h usko hospital m le jaya jata h . Or jese hi un bacho ki ankho m doctor dekhta h wo kho jata h . 5 min baad vo hosh m aata h
Fir doctor ot se bahar aata h or bolta h ki
Doctor:- congratulations mr sharma aapko ek ni balki judwa bache hue h .
Ranbir ye sun ker khushi se jhum uthata h or apni jeb se noto ki gadi nikal ker doctor ko deta h or bolta h.
Ranbir :- jaiye doctor meri taraf se pure hospital ko mithai khilwaiye , kya m apne biwi bacho se mil sakta hu .
Doctor :-abhi thodi der m hum unhe normal ward m shift mer denge tab aap unse mil sakte h.
Abhi asha or bacho ko ward m shift kiya hi gaya tha .
Ki tabhi sab kuch jaha tha vahi ruk jata h kyunki samay ruk chuka tha asha jo bilkul normal thi ye sab dekh ker heran thi .
Tabhi waha ek roshni fel jati h or ek divya purush prakat hote h.
Asha unhe pahachan jati h kyunki ye wahi the jo us raat asha k sapne m aaye the .
Asha:- hath jodker he divya aatma aap kon h or mujhe yu darshan dene ka aapka kya prayojan h .
Vyakti :- he devi hum bhagwan shiv k shishya kfd h .
Ji ha dosto ye kfd hi the jo mamta ko satya se avgat karwane aayi thi
Asha :- prabhu aap m dhanya ho gayi prabhu jo aaj aapke darshan hue .
Kfd :- putri m tumhe tumhare santaan k vishay m batane aay hu .
Tumhari santaane koi sadharan santane ni h putri apitu ye do mahan shaktiyo ka ek or janm h putri jinka janm jag kalyan k liye hua h .
Fir kfd asha ko karan or jyoti k pichle janmo ki katha or unke uddeshy k bare me batate h or fir wo apna ek hath aage badha ker karan or jyoti k uper roshni dalte h jisse unke gale m wo locket aajate h.
Kfd:- putri humne jo tumhe bate batayi h ye matr tumhare tak simit rahani chahiye or in dono k kanth se ye locket kabhi alag mat hone dena
or fir wo waha se anter dhyan gaye
Flashback end

To ye thi karan or jyoti k janm ki story janne k liye ki kfd ne asha ko kya kya bataya or kon h wo mahan shaktiya jinka karan or jyoti k roop m hua janne k liye sath bane rahiye
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[Zas23]

Update no :- 25
Wese to aaj monday tha but kal picnic ki thakan ki vajah se unsab ne aaj ka off kiya tha.

Per apne karan or jyoti to there apni maa ki tarah param shiv bhakt . Hamesha ki tarah aaj bhi jaldi uth jate h or nahaker jese hi karan keval towel m bahar aata h to khud ko mirror m dekh k chonk jata h

Kyunki karan ki body pahale se or bhi jyada mascular or akarshak ho gayi thi , uske face per hamesha jo tez rahata tha , aaj wo or bhi jyda bad gaya tha.

Esa hi kuch hal jyoti ka tha , wo bhi pahale se jyada aakarshak ho gayi thi. Uske chahare ki lalima or nikhar gayi thi .

Dono ko hi apne ander ek nayi urza ka abhas ho raha tha. Fir wo dono is baat k baare m baad m sochne ka soch Ker mandir ki or nikal gaye ,

per aaj vo sirf dono hi the , radha to ana chahti thu per karan ne hi mana ker diya tha , kyunki wo kal ki picnic k baad bahut thaki hui thi to karan ne rest kerne ko hi bola tha.

Hamesha ki tarah wo mandir me pahunch ker mahadev ki puja me lag jate h .Or fir mandir ki safayi kerne m lag jate h .
Jyoti mandir m jhadu laga rahi hoti ki Tabhi jyoti ka man me achanak kya hota h ki wo apni madhur awaj me gane lagti h.
Jyoti:-

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राधा मोहन शरणम
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Jyoti k dwara gaye gaye is sunder bhajan ko sun karan samet sabhi mantra mugdh ho gaye.

Yaha tak ki apne lok me bethe kfd samet narad ji bhi jyoti ki k madhur geet ko sun mantra mugdh ho gaye the , or kfd to ankhe band kiye hue jyoti dwara gaye ja rahe is madhur bhajan ka anand le .

Or jab jyoti ne gana band kiya to narad ji bhi bol uthe .

Narad ji :- narayan narayan ! Kya madhur awaj h jyoti ki prabhu use sun ker esa pratit ho raha h, jese jyoti ni sakshat mata saraswati ga rahi ho.

Satya hi to kaha tha narad ji ne, Jyoti k muh se nikle ek ek shabd ko sun esa pratit ho raha tha ki jese jyoti k gale m sakshat maa sarswati ka was ho , itni madhur wani jo thi jyoti ki . Sabhi jyoti ki bahut tarif kerte h .

Tabhi karan ki najar pandit ji per padti h jo kafi udas or pareshan dikh rahe the.

Karan jakar pandit ji se puchta h

Karan:- kya hua pandit ji m kabse dekh raha hu aap bahut hi pareshan ho.

Pandit ji :- ha beta mahashivratri aane wali h , or jesa ki tum jante ho ki har sal mandir me maha utsav hota h, jo ki mandir m aaye chadawe se hota h , per beta is sal itna chadawa ni ikatha ho paya h.lagta h is saal maha shivratri ka utsav ni ker payenge bas yahi soch ker udas hu beta .

Karan:- ni baba esa mat boliye maha shivratri, yani mere mahadev k vivah ki k din ko utsav na ho esa ho hi ni sakta , aap chinta mat kijiye pandit ji m is mamle me kuch karunga.

Or karan or jyoti pandit ji ko kisi tarah samjha ker ghar ki taraf nikal jate h.

Abhi vo ghar k bahar hi pahunche the ki jyoti bol uthi .

Jyoti :- bhai chaliye na aaj ice cream khane ka bahut man ho raha h chaker ice cream khate h.

Jyoti kuch mange or karan mana ker de kabhi esa ho sakta h.

Karan :- thik h gudiya chal chalte h .

Itna bol ker karan or jyoti bike pe nikal padte h or wo ice cream parlour se ice cream kha ker bahar nikle hi the to karan ki najar ek road pe jati h jaha per ek choti si bachi apne hatho m bahut sare gulab liye hui thi .

Or waha signal pe ruke hue sabhi logo ko bechne ki koshis ker rahi thi, per koi bhi us bichari k gulab kharid ni raha tha to karan jyoti ko wahi rukne ka bol uski or bad jata h

Tabhi achanak chalte chalte uska per fisal jata h or wo gir jati h or rone lagti h , ye dekh karan uski taraf dod k jata h or use chup karata h pyar se.usko gale laga ker bolta h.

Karan :- bas bas beta chup ho jao , ache bache rote ni h, acha aapka nam kya h

Bachi :- priya ,

Karan :- are wah kitna pyara naam h bilkul aapki tarah ,

Priya bahut masumiyat se bolti h

Priya :- bhaiya aap to ye gulab kharid lijiye , m aapko saste me de dungi , aaj to subah se ek gulab bhi kisi ne ni liya , mujhe bahut bhuk bhi lagi h. Mane kal se kuch ni khaya.

Itna bol ker wo fir se rone lagti h ,

Karan usko kisi tarah chup karwata h.

Karan :- beta aap ro mat acha batao kitne ka diya ek gulab

Priya:- bhaiya wese to 15 ka h but aap 10 bhi de doge to koi baat ni .

Karan priya ko dhyan se dekhta h to bahut use bahut dukh hota h itni pyari bachi h or khelne kudne ki umer m bichari phul bech rahi h or kapde bhi uske fat chuke h.

Karan(usko 2000 ka note dete hue)
Lo beta or ye sare gulab mujhe de do .

Priya :- khush hote hue:- bhaiya mere pass chute ni h .

Karan :- koi baat ni beta baki aap rakh lo .

Priya gulab dete hue use jhukne ko bolti h or jese hi karan jhukta h to uske galo p ek pyari si kiss ker deti h . Tabhi karan ki najar uske hath pero p padhti h jaha pe girne ki vajah se chil chuka tha.

Karan usko god m leta h or use gulab ke sare phool deker kuch samjhata h or use sath le ker jyoti ki taraf badhta h.

Or jese hi karan priya ko leker jyoti k pass pahuchte h , to priya jyoti ki or gulab bhadate hue bolti h.

Priya:- didi ye aapke liye "happy rose day "

Jyoti (gulab lete) :- oh so sweet , thank you so much .

Or itna bol ker jyoti pyar se priya k galo ko chum leti h .

Jyoti :- ek gulab priya ko dete hue , :- lo beta ye aapke liye meri taraf se aapko bhi happy rose day.

Priya :- (bahut hi masumiyat se):- didi kya mujhe ek gulab or milega .

Jyoti use ek gulab or deti h or priya wo gulab karan ko dete hue

Priya :- bhaiya ye aapke liye aapko bhi happy rose day .

Karan ko priya ki is masoom harkat pe bahut pyar aata h or wo uske dono galo ko chum ker

Karan :- thank you so much beta.

Tabhi jyoti ki bhi najar uske hath pero p padhti h

Jyoti :- bhai ise to chot lagi h chalo ise doctor k pass le chalte h.

Phir karan or jyoti pahale priya ko doctor k pass leke jate h . Uski bandages wagerah karwate h fir , pass ki hi shop se ek achi si dress dilwaker use pahanate h .

Or fir karan ko dhyan aata h ki priya bechari bhuki bhi h to use khana bhi khilwate h.

Fir karan usse puchta beta aapka ghar kaha h.

Priya:- bhaiya m khud chali jaungi aap kyu taklif kerte ho m khud chali jaungi , wese bhi aapne is garib k liye jo kiya h wo bahut h verna aajke jamane m hum garibo ko to sab dutkarte h.
Itna bolte bolte uski ankho m pani aagaye the.

Karan or jyoti ki bhi ankho m aansu aagaye the ki itni pyari bachi jo ki itni kam.umer m bhi itni samjhdar h wo bichari kin halato se gujer rahi h .
Priya unko dekh ker khud chup ho jati h , or apne nanhe hatho se karan or jyoti k aansu poochte hue bolti h.

Priya:- bhaiya didi aap please mat ro na.

Usne wo baat itne pyar se boli thi ki karan or jyoti dono uske dono galo ko pyar se chum lete h .

Or phir usko uske ghar chod dete h , jo ki ek chota sa ek kacha makan tha .

Ghar k bahar priya ki maa ka intezar ker rahi thi , wo kafi pareshan thi kyunki priya ko aaj bahut late ho gaya tha .

Itne m priya apni ma k pass bhag k jaker uske gale lag jati h or piche karan or jyoti bhi hote h

Priya ki maa unko dekh ker ghabra jati h.or bolti h

Priya ki maa ( gita) :- kya hua sahab meri bachi se koi galti ho gayi kya ager esa h to kripaya use maaf ker dijiye .

Or ye bol wo karan k per pakad ne lagti h to karan rok leta unhe or bolta h

Karan:- are are masi ye aap kya ker rahi h , esa kerke mujhe pap ka bhagi mat banaiye . Or aapki beti se koi galti ni hui h balki ye to itni pyari h iski to lakho galtiya bhi iski ek muskan ke samne koi bhi maaf ker du.

Priya :- ha maa ye bhaiya or didi to bahut ache h.
Or wo apni maa ko sari bate batati h jise sun ker gita bolti h

Gita :- apka bahut bahut dhanyawad beta jo aapne hum garibo k liye itna kiya hum aapka ahasan kese chukayenge.

Jyoti :- masi beta bhi bolti ho or dhanyawad bhi bolte ho , bhala koi bache apni ma pe ahasan kerta h kya .

Karan :- ha masi ager aapko kuch dena hi h to hume bas apna aashirwad de dijiye
Or itna bol dono bhai bahan gita k per chute h.

Gita:- jug jug jiyo bacho tumhe bhagwan duniya ki har khushi de.

Fir karan or jyoti unse dobara milne ka bol ghar ki or nikal jate h .

Kfd bhi apne lok me bethe ye sab dekh rahe the or unki ankho m bhi pani tha

Kfd :- adhbhut kitna adhbhut vyaktitv h karan or jyoti ka , ve swayam bhi aarthik samsyao se jhujh rahe h parantu phir bhi niswarth bhav se jaruratmand jano ki sahayata ker rahe h , dhanya h karan or jyoti . Aaj hume garbh ho raha h apne nirnay per , aaj koi sandeh ni raha hume apne bhut kal me liye hue nirnay per.

Vahi karan or jyoti jese hi ghar pahunch ker jese hi ghar m enter kerte h or kuch esa dekhte h ki buri tarah ghabra jate h.

Esa kya dekh liya karan or jyoti ne ki itna ghabra gaye janne k liye sath bane rahe

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[Zas23]

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Update no :- 26 (maha mega update)
Ghabrane ki vajah hi thi , kyunki pura ghar uthel puthal hua pada tha, or farsh pe kabya behosh padi thi or uske sir se khun bah raha tha.

Karan bhag ker kabya k pass jate h or karan use utha ker bed p letata h.

Jyoti jaldi se bhag ker pani lati h or uske chahre pe pani dal ke hosh m lati h

Karan :- kya hua choti maa ye sab kisne kiya aapki ye halat kisne ki .

Kabya (dari hui boli):- wo kuch gunde aaye the wo tumhe dhund rahe the oe tum na mile to wo shivani ko.

Karan :- kya kya hua shivani ko , shivani kaha h choti ma


Tabhi karan ka phone ring hota h or karan jese hi phone pic kerta h to samne se awaj aati h.

Unknown:- kya hua apni bahan ko dhund rahe ho wo mere kabje me h pahachan to gaye hi hoge tum mujhe .

Karan (gusse me) :- kunal, teri ye majal tune meri bahan ka kidnapped kiya kute , ager use ek kharoch bhi aayi na haramjade to tujhe esi maut dunga ki , yamraj bhi tere pran lete hue kamp uthega .

Kunal :- chila or chila kamine teri ye tadaf dekh mujhe bahut maja aaraha h.or ab kaam ki baat sun ager apni bahan ko sahi salamat dekhna chahata h na aaj raat 9 bache city k bahar wale khandhar k piche wale medan m aajana wo bhi akele. Werna m apne sare aadmi k sath teri bahan ka, samjh to gaya hi hoga tu .
Or wo jor jor se hasne lagta h

Speaker on hone ki vajah se ye baat jyoti or kabya ne bhi sun li thi .

Kabya ko to kuch hosh ni tha kyunki usko sirf apni beti ki parwah thi.

Jyoti :- bhai m apko akele waha ni jane dungi m bhi aapke sath chal rahi hu.

Karan :- ni gudiya m tujhe waha ni le ja sakta waha bahut khatra h.

Jyoti :- khatra h tabhi to bol rahi hu bhai .Itne bade khatre m m aapko m akele ni jane de sakti.

Per karan ni manta or jyoti ko apni kasam deker rok leta h.





Udher patal lok me vp bahut gusse m tha ,

Vp :- is murkh manav ne sari yojana ko barbaad ker diya h , kaha tha ise ki grahan wali ratri tak pratiksha kerna per ni is murkh ne aaj hi hamla ker diya h , isse pahale ki wo murkh kuch or bevkufi kare mujhe rokna hoga use.

Or jese hi vp apne mahal se nikalane k liye mukhya dwar pe jata h to use ek bahut bada jhatka lagta h or kafi dur jaa ker girta h.

Wo wapas ja ker iski vajah pata kerta h to wo pata h ki ek adrishy diwar mahal ko charo or se ghere khadi h .

Vp apni ankhe band ker ke apna hath aage kerta h or uske hatho se ek kali roshni nikalne lagti h jo us diwar ko todne ki koshis kerti h jo ki na kamyab rahati h

Vp:- ye tumne acha ni kiya "KFD"

Ji ha ye diwar kfd ne hi khadi ki thi patal lok k dwar pe.


Apne lok m bethe hue kfd vahi se vp ko bolte h

Kfd:- m to apna karya ker raha hu vp kunal ne aaj tak to bhi bure karm kiye h aaj usko uske karmfal milne wala h. Or usko uske bure karmo ka dand milega or is mahan karya k bich m kisi ko badha ni dalne ni dunga , isliye uchit hoga ki aap vyarth hi apni urza nasht kerne se acha shanti se beth ker aatma manthan kare or uchit marg ko apna le.

Kfd ne esa isliye bola tha kyunki kunal bahut hi ghatiya nich or ek no ka ayash ladka tha , shetan ki shaktiyon k milne se pahale bhi usne kayi ladkiyo ki jindagi barbaad ki thi. Or ab to wo darinda ban chuka tha usne kayi masum logo ko raat k andhere m maar ker unka khun pi chuka tha.or kayi bechari ladkiyo ka balatkar kerke unko berahami se mar diya tha

Vp kfd ki baat sun bas apne dato ko bichte hue rah jata h.

Wahi dusri or khandar m bethe un charo ki chandal chokdi aaj rat ki teyariyo m lagi hui thi ki tabhi commissioner bol uthta h .

Commissioner :- beta kya tumhe ni lagta ki hame grahan ki raat ka intezaar kerna chahiye tha.

Kunal :- ni m us kute ko aaj hi buri mot marunga , mujhse or intezaar ni hota pahale hi m do hafte se chup betha tha per ab ni

Commissioner :- ni mujhe ni lagta ki aaj ye sab sahi rahega.

Kunal :- ek baar bola naa jo hoga aaj hoga tujhe ek baar m samjh me ni aata kya budhe .

Kyunki kunal ek darinda ban chuka tha to ab uske liye rishte nate mahatva ni rakhte the.

Commissioner :- teri ye himmat tune mujhse ye baat ki or usko ek chanta maar ker tu abhi mere sath chal raha h ghar wapas or is ladki ko bhi chod do.

Commissioner ne shivani ki baat ki thi, jo usi khandar k ek kone me behosh padhi thi .

Kunal sirf abhi chup chap khada tha jo ki ek tufan se aane k pahale ki shanti thi .

Commissioner :- suna ni mane kya kaha chal yaha........ Aaaaaaaahjhhh

Commissioner abhi apni baat puri hi ni ker paya tha ki.kunal ne apne ek hath jor se commissioner k sine me ghop ker uska dil nikal ker kha gaya.

Or is tarah kunal ne apne hi baap ko maar diya jise dekh waha mojud aghora or mla ki ruh kamp gayi. Commissioner ko apne kiye bure karmo ki saja mil chuki thi ,jis bete k liye aaj tak usne itna kuch kiya itne bure kam kiye the, jin ladkiyo ka rape kunal ne kiya unke case ko rafa dafa kiya , uske har galat kaam me sath diya , yaha tak ki ek masoom bache ki bali tak di , aj usi bete ne usko berahmi se maar diya.

Satya hi kaha h kisi ne jab boya bij babul ka h to gulab kaha se milenge, milenge to kate hi , jese sanskar commissioner ne kunal ko diye aaj usika natija bhugta aaj commissioner ne.

Kunal (apne baap k dil ko khane k baad ) sala bhuda bahut uchal raha tha . Or kisi ko dikkat h kya mere fesle se .

Aghora or mla to ye bhayankar drishya dekhker hi mut diye the or bas apni gardan na me hila di.

Fir wo 3no 9 baje ka intezaar kerne lage.

Wahi karib 7.30 baje k karib karan bhi nikalne lagta h .

Jyoti :- bhai please mujhe bhi apne sath le ker chalo na , mujhe bilkul bhi sahi ni lag raha h.

Karan :- choti tu chinta mat ker mujhe kuch ni hoga . Tujhe mere per bharosa h na .


Jyoti :- kesi baat ker rahe ho bhai aap to meri jaan ho ,aapse jyada bharosa aapki ye gudiya to mahadev p bhi naa kare.



Karan fir kuch ni bolta or jyoti ko ek baar gale laga ker nikal jata h kunal k diye pate ki or nikal jata h,

Lekin yaha ek gadbad ho chuki thi uske gale ka locket nikal ker wahi gir gaya tha.

1.30 ghante ka safar karan ne aadhe 45 min m hi pura ker liya tha .


Or jese hi karan us medan m pahunchta h to dekhta h ki waha 10 hate kate gundo k sath kunal khada h. Kunal ne bas 10 hi gunde isliye bulaye the kyunki usko laga tha ki itne kafi honge ager koi or bhi uske sath aaye to or wo gunde koi mamuli gunde ni the wo fully trained the.

or ek side m shivani behosh padhi h.

Kunal :- wah manna padega tu apni bAt ka pakka to h bilkul time pe Aya h or wo bhi bilkul akele .

Karan:- abe kute bhokna band ker or bata kyu kiya h meri bahan ki aghwa.

Kunal :- badle k liye aaj tak jo bhi tere kaaran meri bejiti hui college m uska ,us din bhare college m teri bahan ne mere ko mara tha uska badle k liye , aaj pahale tere ko yaha tadfa tadfa k marunga fir us jyoti ka

Karan:- (bich me hi bol utha) bhos#**e teri himat kese hui apni gandi juban se jyoti ka naam lene ki , aaja kamine m bhi dekhu kitna dam h tere me .

Kunal apne admiyo se

Kunal :- mera muh kya dekh rahe ho salo maro is haramjade ko

Ye sun ek gunda jo dikhne me professional fighter dikh rahe tha, Karan ki or doda per karan teyar tha .

Jese hi ek ne uske pass pahunch ker usko mukkA marne ki koshish ki karan ne uska hath pakad k itni jor se mod diya ki uska hath ki hadi char char karte hue tut gayi.

Or do jabar dast mukke bahut tezi uske pet or sine pe de mare jisse vo udta hua thodi dur ja ke gira or dil ki dha dadhkan yamraaj ko pyara ho gaya tha .

Phir 4 gunde ek sath aate h karan karan ki or jinke hatho me talvar thi ,
To karan unme se ek k hath per lat marta h to uske hath se talvar chut jati or karan use catch ker leta h.

Or badi hi furti se usi bande ka sir dadh se alag ker deta h , fir do jane us per ek sath war kerte h talwar se lekin karan apni talwar se use bich me hi rok leta h or ek aadmi k jordar lat marta h jisse wo aadmi kuch dur jaker girta h .or isi chaker m dusre aadmi ka dhyan bhatak jata h or karan bhi is moke ka fayda utha ker us aadmi ka sir kat deta h.

Kfd or narad ji bhi ye sab dekh rahe the

Narad ji :- prabhu karan ne to kisi bhi prakar ki shastra vidhya li hi ni fir bhi vo itni kushalta se talvar kese chala raha h.

Kfd:- aap bhi kesi baat ker rahe h narad ji , bhala matsay(fish) k shishu ko bhi terna sikhata h , ashv k shishu ko koi dodna sikhata h ,aap bhul rahe h ki karan kon h to bhala usko kisi se sikhne ki koi avashyta h kya bhala .


Vahi dusri or jese hi jyoti ki najar karan k gire hue locket p padhti h to vo or bhi dar jati h or us locket ko le bina kisi ki parwah kiye ek car apne garage se nikal karan ki or nikal jati h kyunki usko dil hi dil m koi anhoni ka andesha ho raha tha or use us din wala sapna bar bar yaad aaraha tha.

Wahi karan ne apni bahatrin talvar baji se sare gundo ko nark me pahuncha diya tha.

Ab kunal ko bhi bahut gussa aagaya tha

Karan :- kyu sale bas itna hi dam h tere m

Kunal :- lagta h ab tujhe apni takat dikhani hi padegi

Or itna bol vo karan ki or dodta h karan bhi uski or dodta h or kunal jese hi karan k pas pahuch use ek muka marne ki koshis kerta h karan use block ker leta h or ek lat use chipka deta h , jisse kunal niche gir jata h per jaldi hi uth khada hotA h.
Or fir badi furti se ek flying kick marta h jise karan ko bhi chot lagti h or ese hi dono buri tarah bhid jate h , dono hi ek dusre ko baraber ki takker de rahe the , kunal to buri tarah se chok gaya tha ki ek mamuli sa insaan us jese darinde ps bhari pad raha h ,

Tabhi kunal ne ek galti ker di

Kunal :- sale pahale aaj tere ko kute ki mot marunga fir us jyoti ko maslunga sali kya mast mal h usko bhi uski okat dikhaunga .

Bas kunal ka itna hi kahana tha ki karan ne apna control kho diya or apni full speed se usper muko ki barsaat ker di jise kunal block ni ker paya or karan ne mukko k sath late bhi marna shuru ker di usko patak patak k marne laga .

Karan :- sale gandi nali k kide kaha tha na ki apni gandi juban se meri jyoti ka nam na le haramkhor per tu ni mana ,

Ab kunal bilkul adhmara ho chuka tha , jise karan vahi chod shivani ki or badh jata h or vaha pahuch use hosh m Lane ki koshis kerta h,

per yahi usse bhul ho gayi kunal ab samjh chuka tha ki isse yu hatho se marna asamabhav h, to usne ye soch apne ankhe band ki or uske hatho me ek shakti ka gola aagaya jo usne karan ki or chod diya , karan ka dhyan to shivani ko hosh lane me tha or jese hi vo gola karan k pass pahuncha tabhi vatavaran me ek chink gunj uthi



Bhaiiiiiiiii

Short flashback

Hua yu tha ki jab kunal ne wo gola karan ki or choda tha itne me jyoti bhi vaha pahunch gayi thi or esa hi seen usne sapne m dekha tha jab vo dekhti h ki uske bhai ka dhyan kahi or h to vo bhag ker jati h or karan kr us gole k bich aajati h.or wo gola jese hi jyoti se takraya uski chikh nikal gayi.

Karan jese hi jyoti ki awaj sunta h uska dhyan us taraf jata h to dekhta h ki jyoti piche ki or gir rahi h karan jaldi se jaker use girne se bacha ker apni baho m leker jamin m beth jata h ghutno k bal

Karan:- (rote hue) choti tu yaha kyu AYI mane tujhe mana kiya tha na

Jyoti :- jiski ankhe band ho rahi thi wo bolti h :- bhai m aapko ese kesa akela chod sakti hu aap meri jan ho aapko kuch ho jayega to mere jine ka bhi kya fayda or jyoti karan ko wo locket pahana ker behosh ho jati h.

Wahi aghora jo is ladayi ko dekh shock me tha uske kano m vp ki awaj gunjti h.

Vp :- aghora jitna shighra ho sake dushyant(mla) ko leker yaha se nikalo

Aghora :- parantu prabhu kunal

Vp :- guse m marne do us murkh ko jiske karan meri yojana barbad ho gayi h . Mere aagya ka palan ho

Aghora itna sun k mla k sath vaha se gayab ho jata h.

Or ab karan jyoti ko is hal me dekh ker bilkul pagal ho chuka tha or usne apni ankhe band ker li or jab usne ankhe kholi to uski aankhe bilkul lal rang ki ho chuki thi jese putliya ho hi na ankho ki .

Tabhi uske locket se ek tej roshni nikalti h or karan apna hath jo usne hawa m uthaya hua tha usper padi or jab roshni gayab hoti h to uske hatho m uska dand achuka tha jo vishvakarma ne banaya tha .

Karan ke sharir se maha bhayanak jwala nikal rahi thi or usne bas itna hi chilaya


Karan:- kunaaaaaaaal

Or itna bol usne wo dand kunal ki or ker diya jisse ek bahut hi tez se sampan nili roshni nikli or wo jaker kunal ko lagi , jisse uski chike nikalne lagi or kuch second m wo jal k rakh ho gaya.

Per karan ka krodh shant ni ho raha tha or wo aas pas ki jagaho ko tabah kerne laga , jise dekh sabhi dev dar ker kfd k pass pahunch gaye

Indra :- prabhu kuch kijiye karan k krodh ko shant kijiye anyatha anarth ho jayega bhagwan

Kfd apna hath aage kerte h or unke hatho se ek roshni nikalti h jo jaker jyoti pe padhti h jisse usko thoda hosh aajata h.

Or jese hi wo apne bhai ko itne krodh me dekhti h to pahale to wo khud dar jati h fir jaldi khud ko sambhal leti h or karan ko shant kerne k liye aage bad jati h or jaker karan ko gale laga leti h .

Jisse karan shant ho jata h or jyoti ko sahi salamat dekh uske muh se itna hi nikalta

Karan :- gudiya .

Or wo behosh ho jata h or sath me jyoti bhi.

Tabhi vaha rishi pippalad prakat hote h or un dono ko leker waha anter dhyan ho jate h.

Note :- friends is update ko likhne m mere ko 4 ghante lage h , halaki meri tabiyat kharab h per fir bhi aap logo intezaar ni laga , isliye tabiyat kharab hone k bavjood bhi ye update de raha hu to please jarur bataiyega aapko ye update kesa laga.

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Update no :- 27
Note :- sorry friends kal wale update k last m ek galti ho gayi thi, jise m is update m thik ker raha hu.

Jese hi jyoti ko hosh aata h to wo dekhti h ki uska bhai bahut jyada gusse m h to pahale to wo khud dar jati h per fir baad m khud ko sambhal kee karan k pasa jati h or karan ko gale laga leti h.

Jisse karan ka gusa shant ho jata h or jyoti ko sahi salamat dekh uska chahara khil jata h per

Karan:- gudiya .

Itna bol ker use kaske gale se laga leta h

Or fir behosh ho jata h or sath me hi jyoti bhi bhai bol behosh ho jati h.


Lekin koi or bhi tha yaha jisne ye sab kuch dekha tha , or wo koi or ni shivani thi.

Hua yu tha ki jab jyoti ko vo shakti ka gola laga tha or karan uski or doda tha , jab hi use hosh aachuka tha, per phir karan k gusse ko dekh ker wo buri tarah se saham gayi thi, akhir thi to ek 15 16 sal ki bachi hi na , or jab karan or jyoti behosh hue to dar or kamjori k maare vo bhi behosh ho gayi.

Tabhi vaha rishi pippalad prakat hue or unhone apne sath karan jyoti or shivani ko leker gayab ho gaye .

Chaliye ab thoda kailash ki or chalte h.

Bhagwan mahadev bhi ye sab drishya dekh rahe the or vo kafi prasann the.

Mahadev :- adbhoot putra karan tum apni pratham parksHa m safal rahe parantu ye ant ni ye to aarambh h tumhari parikshao ka jo nikat bhavishya m tumhare samakh aayegi or unme bhi tumhe uhi safalta se uttirn hona h .
Vijayi bhava

Or itna bol mahadev karan or jyoti ko ashirvaad dete h.

Aapne bilkul uchit kaha gurudev , or is awaj k sath vaha kfd prakat hote or mahadev ko pranam kerte h.

Kfd:- pranam gurudev

Mahadev :- aaiye kfd bahut samay paschat aapka aagman hua kalash pe , kyu apne gurudev ki yaad ni aayi.

Kfd:- prabhu yaad to unhe kiya jata h jise hum.bhul gaye ho , aapka ye daas , ye shishya to sadev hi aapka sumiran kerta rahata h.

Mahadev ye sun prasan hote h or apna ek hath aage kerte h jisme se ek roshni nikaker ek jagah padti h mahadev k samip hi or waha ek bethne k liye aasan aajata h.

Mahadev:- aao putra khade kyu ho betho.

Kfd bhi beth jate h.

Mahadev :- kahiye kfd aaj kailash ka marg kese bhul gaye .

Kfd :- prabhu aap to sarv shaktimAn antaryami h aapse bhala kya chupa h , aap to jante hi h m karan or jyoti k vishay m baat kerne aaya hu

Mahadev:- hum jaante h kfd aap kis vishay m baat kerne aaye h , or aapka sochna bhi uchit h , mana ki us dusht k paap ka ghada bhar chuka tha or uska ant bhi aavashyak tha parantu ye samay abhi uchit bhi ni tha karan m sthit shaktiyo ka yu ek sath jagrit hone ka.

Kfd :- apne bilkul uchit kaha prabhu m isi samsya k samadhan k liye aapke samaksh upasthit hua hu gurudev apne shishya ka marg darshan kijiye .

Mahadev kuch der mon rahate h fir bolte h

Mahadev:- iska to ek hi samadhan h kfd.
Kfd:- kya prabhu

Fir mahadev kfd ko samasya ka samadhan batate h or thodi der yuhi baate kerte h ki tabhi kfd ko kuch khatre ka andesha hota h

Kfd :- acha gurudev ab mujhe yaha se nikalnA chahiye .

Mahadev muskurate hue bole.

Mahadev :- chale jana putra abhi to aaye ho itni bhi kya shighrata kesi .

Abhi kfd aage kuch bolte isse pahale kuch bolte ki waha per ek awaj aati h kfd k pich

'M batati hu dev aapke priya shishya ko itni shighrata kyu h'

Kfd ye awaj sun thoda ghabra jate h or jese hi piche mud k dekhte h to unki halat wesi ho jati h jese kisi chote bache ki koi shararat pakdi gayi ho or ab use apni maa ki daat ka dar ho.

Kyunki saamne mata parvati khadi thi jo kfd ko ghur k dekh rahi thi or unke hath m ek chadi thi.

Kfd (man me) :- chalo beta kfd ab to tu gaya kam se

Mata parvati :- kyunki aapke param shishya ko apni guru maa ke aane ka andesha ho gaya tha swami isliye ye yaha se nikalne ki teyari m the.

Kfd:- are ni ni guru mata esi koi baat ni h wo to ek karya smaran ho gaya tha na isliye. M bhala kyu apni pyari guru maa ko dekh bhagne laga.

Mata parvati :- acha bachu , ye tumhari mithi mithi bate tumhare gurudev p chalti hogi per mujh pe ni chalegi, beta dand to tumhe milega ek to itne varsho se na apne guru dev se na hi apni guru maa se milne aaye , or aaj aaye bhi to akele akele apne guru se milker nikalne lage .

Ye bolte hue mata parvati thodi bhavuk ho gayi or unke ankho m ashru aagaye , ye dekh ker kfd ko acha ni laga or unke ankho m bhi ashru aagaye . Kyunki jab kfd mahadev se shiksha lene aaye the tab na to kartikey ji ka janm hua tha na hi ganesh ji ka to mata parvati ne kfd ko hi apna putra mana tha or jab tak kfd ne shiksha k liye kailash rahe the , tab tak mata parvati ne kfd ka dhayan apne putra ki tarah hi rakha tha.

Apni guru maa ki ankho m ankho m ansu dekh unki aankho m aansu aajate h or wo mata k ansu poochte hue bolte h

Kfd:- ye kya guru maa aapko dand dena h to be jhijhak apne putra ko de dijiye parantu kripya kerke roiye mat guru maa, itna bada dand to mat dijiye apne putra ko.

Mata parvati chadi ko phenk ker kfd k aansu poochti h or unhe ek chote bache ki tarah apne gale laga ke bolti h.

Mata parvati :- to esa kaam kerte hi kyo ho putra jisse tumhari guru maa ki ankho m aansu aaye or ye kya putra tum kyu rone lage shant ho jao putra tumhari guru ma tumse bilk rusht ni h .

Fir mata kfd ko ek chote bache ki tarah chup karwati h.

Or bolti h

Mata parvati :- ab itne samay pashchat aaye ho to kuch din tumhe yaha rukna hi padega putra m kuch ni sunne wali, (mahadev se)
Kyu swami.

Mahadev:- ha putra tumhari guru maa ka kahana uchit h kuch din apne guru dev or guru ma k sath bhi vyatit kero.

Kfd:- jo Aagya guru maa,. Jo aagaya guru dev.

Or kfd wahi ruk jate h.

Wahi aghora mla ko leker uske ghar pahunchta h , lekin wo dono abhi bhi shok me the ki ek sadharan sa manushya ek itne shaktishali devil ko kese hara sakta h.

Tabhi waha vp pragat hota h

Aghora (use pranam kerke) :- prabhu ye kese sambhav h us sadharan se balak ne itne shaktishali shetan ko kese hara diya wo bhi itni saralta se .

Vp :-murkh kisne kaha wo ladka ek sadharan manushya h usme deviya shaktiya h , isliye to tum murkho ko kaha tha ki grahan tak pratiksha kero kyunki us din uski shaktiya grahan k andhere or ashubh kaal m jagrit ni ho pati or vo saralta se marra jata , per tum bevkoofo ne sari yojna barbad ker di.

Mla or aghora sharminda the

Aghora:- ab hamare liye kya aadesh h prabhu .

Vp :- abhi tum kuch ni karoge or shanti se mere agle aadesh ki pratisha karoge samjhe anyatha wo karan tumhe mare ya na mare ,lekin mere hatho tum jarur mare jaoge.

Or itna bol vo vaha se gayab ho gaya.

Stay tuned.

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Update no :- 28
Ab chalte h karan or jyoti k pass .

Karan or jyoti k behosh hone k baad rishi pippalad unhe or shivani ko apne ashram me le aaye the

Or abhi unhe ek atyant hi vishesh kaksh(room) m , is kaksh ki kya visheshata h vo abhi aap logo ko thodi der baad pata chal jayegi. Or shivani ok ek alag kaksh me rakha gaya h.

Rishi pippalad bhi usi chinta m the jis chinta m kfd the or jiske samadhan k liye wo mahadev k pass gaye the . Ki tabhi unhe ek awaj sunayi deti h.

Kfd:- maharishi pippalad ko kfd ka pranam.

Rishi pippalad:- pranam prabhu ankhe band ker dhyan m bolte h.

Kyunki kfd waha khud mojud ni the wo to unse dhyan k madhyam se sampark ker rahe the.

Rishi pippalad:- prabhu aapne bilkul uchit samay p mujhe darshan diye m ek dhuvidha m fasa hua hu.

Kfd:- hum jante h rishiwer aapki samaya k bare m or hum usi samasya ka samadhan aapko batane k liye sampark kiya.

Fir kfd rishi pippalad ko hal bata dete h. Rishiwer bhi samadhan sun santusht ho jate h or kfd se vida le karan or jyoti k kash ki or nikal jate h.

Waha per karan or jyoti behosh hi the , fir rishi pippalad karan or jyoti k sir per hath rakh dete h or unke dono hatho se ek roshni nikal ker karan or jyoti k sharir m jane lagti h


Or jese hi rishi pippalad apne dono hath karan or jyoti k sir p se hatate h to karan or jyoti k sharir bahut hi chamakne lagta h, or wo prakash itna badne lagta h ki kuch minuto k liye pure aashram k logo ko apni ankhe band kerni padti h, or dhire dhire karan or jyoti normal ho jate h.

Fir rishwer wapas unpe hath rakh karan or jyoti ko hosh m laate h.

Or pahale karan ko hosh aata h or jese hi karan ko hosh aata h uske muh se tez aawaj me bas itna hi nikalta h


Karan :- jyoti ...
Or uski tez awaj se jyoti bhi hosh m aajati h or k muh se bhi tez aawaj m
Bas itna nikalta h .

Jyoti :- bhai....

Or jese hi karan ki najar jyoti p padhti h to jyoti ko sahi salamat dekh uski khushi ki koi sima ni rahati or wo use kich ker use sine se laga leta h or fir thoda uske pure chare ko kisses ki jhadi laga desh

Karan :- jyoti meri gudiya meri jaan tu thik to h na .

Jyoti :- ha bhaiya m bilkul thik hu bas thoda sa sir dard ker raha h.

Karan bina kuch bole usko leta ker uska sir apni god m rakh leta h or halke halke hatho se dabane lagta h, kitna adbhut prem h in dono bhai bahan ka , karan khud bhi abhi tak puri tarah se thik ni tha usko abhi bhi kamzori thi , per fir bhi use khud se jyoti ki fikra thi.

Karan :- mane tujhe mana kiya tha na choti tu waha kyu aayi , pata h meri to jaan hi nikal gayi thi tab tuje wo gola laga, tujhe kuch ho jata to.

Jyoti :- bhai mane bhi to aapko kaha tha na ki aapki gudiya hamesha aapke sath apki dhal(shield) ban ker rahegi or aap tak aane wale kisi bhi prahar ko aap tak pahuchne se pahale mujhse takrana hoga.

Wese bhai wo sab tha kya ye sab kese possible h us kamine kunal ne ye megical power kese use ki or fir aap bhi or aapka to wo roop hi bahut hi bahut bhayanak lag raha tha bhai ye sab kya kyu or kese ho raha h.

Karan:- ye to m bhi ni janta choti ki achanak se mujhme itni shakti or itni power kese aayi .

Abhi tak ye dono aapas me hi lage hue the to inka dhyan na us jagah p gaya or na hi rishi pippalad per.

Tabhi rishiwer bol uthe

Rishiwer :- iska jwab m deta hu putra

Rishiwer ki baat sun un dono ka dhyan tutta h or vo rishiwer ko dekh pahachan jate h.

Karan:- rishiwer aap to vahi h na jinse hum usdin shiv ji k mandir m mile the or hum ye kaha h

Rishi pippalad :- ha putra m vahi hu or tum is samay mere ashram me ho , kyunki tumhara sharir abhi us asim shakti ko sahane yogya ni tha to is kaaran tum behosh ho gaye the to m tumhe yaha le aaya .

Karan(chonkte hue) :- rishiwer aapne wo sab dekha tha , to aapko ye bhi gyaat hoga ki ye sab kese or kyu hua , kripya ker ke hume bataiye baba ye sab kyu or kese hua.

Rishiwer:- putra abhi tumhara apni puri sachai janne ka samay ni h bas abhi tum itna jan lo ki tum or jyoti koi sadharan manushya ni ho swayam mahadev ne tumhe ek mahan karya or lok kalyan k liye chuna h.

Karan:- kya ye kese sambhav h baba hum to sadharan manushya hi h .

Jyoti :- ha baba bhai sahi kah rahe h ye kese sambhav h .

Rishwer :- putri jo karan ne sab kiya kya wo koi sadharan manushya ker sakta h kya swayam vichar kero or kya kunal jo ek shetan tha uske itne shaktishali prahar ko koi sadharan manushy sahan ker sakta h kya.

Or fir baba karan or jyoti ko kunal ki kahani or uski kartute sunate h jise sun dono bhai bahan ko pahale to bahut gussa aata h per fir baad m khushi bhi hoti h ki unhonne us haivan ka ant ker diya.

Karan :- baba aapne uchit kaha ye to hamara param sobhagya ki swayam mere prabhu mere mahadev ne mujhe is mahan karya k yogya samjha baba , ab aage aap hi humara marg darshan kijiye baba ki hume ab kya kerna chahiye.

Rishiwer:- putra tumhari sabhi jo tumhare gale m upasthit locket or tumhare krodh k kaaran samay se purv hui thi. Parantu tumhari deh abhi is yogya ni thi ki un sabhi shaktiyo ko vahan ker sake wo to uchit samay per jyoti ne wo locket tumhe wapas pahana diya werna ye shaktiya tumhe hi hani pahuncha deti .Isliye mane tumhari shaktiyo k kuch bhag ko chod shesh ko kuch samay k liye bandh diya h , jo tum dono k 21ve janmdivas per fir se jagrit ho jayegi ,tabtak tumhe apne sharir ko in shaktiyo k yogya banana hoga putra.


Karan:- or wo kese hoga baba .

Rishiwer :- dhayan(meditation) se putra ab se tumhe or jyoti ko roj subah braham muhurat m uth ker dhyan lagana hoga jisse tumhare sapta chakra or kundalini shakti jagrit hogi or tum shaktiyo per niyantran ker paoge.

Karan :- jo aagaya baba .

Rishi pippalad :- or ha putra meri pahale wali baat hamesha yaad rakhna ki har halato m tum dono ek dusre k sath rahana kyunki tum dono hi ek dusre ki shakti ho

Fir rishiwer unko kuch or nirdesh bhi dete h or tabhi jyoti bolti h .


Jyoti:- baba hum yaha kitne samay se besudh the .


Baba:- putri tum or tumhara bhai yaha 2 din se behosh the.

Karan:- kya 2 din tab to hume yaha se jald hi nikalna hoga baba kyunki waha sab chintit honge

Tabhi karan ko shivani ka dhyan aata h.
Karan:- baba meri dusri bahan kaha h usika apaharan us dusht ne kiya tha.

Rishiwer :- putra tum pahale shant ho javo pahali baat hum jis kaksh me h ye ek vishesh kakash h, jisme bitaya ek din bhi bahar k liye bas ek gharte k saman h to tumhe chintit hone ki koi avashyakta ni h

or rahi baat shivani ki to vo bhi surakshit h or dusre kaksh me h besudh avastha me usne kal tumhara vo bhayankar roop dekha tha , isliye wo sadme me thi , isliye uske swasth k liye mane uski smrati se vo sab mita diya , ab use keval itna dhyan rahega ki tumne use un gundo or kunal se bacha liya h.

Karan:- baba kya m shivani se mil sakta hu.

Rishiwer :- awashya kyu ni putra .

Phir karan jyoti k sath shivani k kaksh ki or bad jate h.

Ab dekhte h ki hosh m aane k baad kese react kerti h or kya h shivani ka karan or jyoti se yu rude behaviour ka kaaran ye sab apko next update m pata chalega

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Update no:- 29
Karan or jyoti jese hi shivani k kaksh m pravesh kerte h to dekhte h. H ki shivani ko ek bed p letaya hua h or wo abhi bhi behosh h.

Rishi pippalad ja ker shivani k sir p hath rakh use hosh m late h.

Shivani dhire dhire hosh m aati h or jese hi wo ankh khol ker apne aap ko anjaan logo k bich m pati h to wo bahut dar jati h or rote hue bolti h

Shivani :- aap kon ho or m kaha per hu, mujhe ghar jana h please mujhe chod dijiye.

Shivani ek bahut hi pyari masoom or saf dil ki ladki thi , isliye wo kuch jyada hi ghabra gayi thi, uski najar abhi karan or jyoti pe ni gayi thi.

Rishiwer:- daro mat beti tum ab bilkul surakshit ho tumhe yaha koi hani ni pahuchayega(karan or jyoti ki or ishara kerte hue ) dekho to beti tumhe ghar le jane kon aaya h , unse milogi ni .

Shivani ko ye baat sun thodi rahat pahunchti h or jese hi vo rishi pippalad k ishare ko samajh karan or jyoti ko dekhti h to pahale to wo in dono ko dekh chonk jati h. Per fir use wo sari ghatnaye yaad aajati h , or uski ankho m pani aajata h or wo jaldi se uth ker jati h karan k pass jaker uske pero m gir ke uske per pakad leti h or bolti h.

Shivani :- bhaiya please mujhe maaf ker do , mane aapke sath kitna bura vyavhaar kiya aapko andekha kiya ye jante hue bhi ki aap mujhse kitna pyaar kerte h or aapko meri is harkat se kitna dukh pahunchega phir bhi mane ese kiya, m to maafi k layak bhi ni hu bhaiya , per m kya kerti bhaiya mujhe mummy(kabya) ne saaf saaf bol diya tha ki m aap dono se dur rahu or bilkul bhi na bolu verna vo mujhe vapas aap logo se dur hostel bhej degi , or us raat m hi aapke room m aayi thi bhaiya or aapke per pakad ker mafi mang rahi thi or aapko jaga dekh m waha se bhag gayi per mummy ne mujhe aapke room se nikalte dekh liya or bahut data vo to mujhe wapas hostel bhejne hi wali thi per mane kese n kese unhe ek bar mana liya.m aapse vapas dur ni hona chahti bhaiya isliye mujhe ye drama kerna pada taki bhale hi meri in harkato se aap mujhse nafrat kerne lago lekin kam se kam aap mere ankho k samne to hoge .

Shot flashback

Asha ki mot k kuch din baad hi ranbir ne dusri shadi ker li thi , jo ki sabhi aapas k or jan pahachan k logo k liye herani ki baat thi, kyunki ranbir or asha m bahut pyar tha to logo ko herani to hui k itni jaldi hi ranbir ne dusri shadi bhi ker li .

Kher kabya jab ghar aayi to usne ghar ko achi tarah sambhala jesi vo aaj h vo pahale bilkul ni thi .

Usne hi karan or jyoti ko sadme se bahar nikala.kyunki bhale hi soteli ho per rishte m to unki maa hi thi na.
Ek din wo karan se jaker boli

Karan:- beta kab tak ese hi gumsum rahoge beta ,m janti hu ki tumne kya khoya h , per beta kya tumhari mummy ki aatma tumhe ese is halat me dekh k unpe kya bitegi, kya tum chahate ho ki unko taklif ho or beta apna ni to kam se kam jyoti k baare m to socho usne pahale apni maa ko khoya fir apne bhai ko is halat m dekh uspe kya bit rahi hogi.

Karan ka kabya ki baato se kafi prabhav padta h or vo bolta h .

Karan:- aap thik kaha rahi ho m esa bilkul kuch ni karunga jisse mummy ki aatma ko taklif or jyoti to meri jimedari h uska khayal ab mujhe hi rakhna hoga na , thank u aunty aapne mujhe meri jimedari ka ahasas dilaya.

Kabya:- tumhare akele ki ni beta ab tum dono meri hi jimedari ho , or tum mujhe aunty mat bolo beta , aaj se tum mujhe choti maa bolna .

Karan :- ji choti maa.

Fir ese hi din gujarte gaye ab karan or jyoti bhi normal ho gaye the. Or school jane lage wapas se , kabya ne unka bahut ache se khyal rakha.lekin ranbir ab bilkul badal chuka tha. Use ab karan or jyoti se koi matlab ni raha tha, esa pratit hota ki bas vo apni formalities hi puri ker raha h majburi m.


Fir kuch salo baad shivani ka janm hua ,dono bhai bahan bahut khush the ki unko apni choti bahan k roop m ek pyara sa khilona mil gaya .

Per fir pata ni achanak pata ni inki khushiyon ki kiski najar lag gayi ki dhire dhire kabya ka ravaiya change hone laga or vo bhi dhire dhire karan or jyoti k sath dur vyavahar kerne lagi or shivani ko unke sath khelne tak na deti.

Dono bhai bahan kafi heran or dukhi the ki akhir unki choti maa ko achanak kya hogaya ,

Ek din 3no bhai bahan khel rahe the to khelte khelte shivani gir gayi or rone lagi or usi thodi chot bhi aayi ,

Karan:- ale ale chup hojao princess aap to meri achi bachi ho na , ache bache rote ni h
or use gale laga k chup karane lagta h.
Karan or jyoti shivani ko hamesha princess hi bolte pyare se , or shivani thi bhi bahut sunder bilkul rajkumari jesi.

Lekin tabhi kabya ki najar insab pe padti h or wo karan or jyoti p bahut chilati h or unhe thappad marke bolti h.

Kabya:- tumhari himmat kese hui meri beti k pass ane ki tumhari vajah se usko chot lagi , khabardar jo aage se uske aas paas bhi dikhe to.
Itna bol wo apne sath shivani ko room me lejati h.or unhe us din khana bhi ni deti

Bhichare dono bhai bahan bhuke hi rote rote ek dusre ko gale laga ker so jate h.

Lekin shivani ni maanti thi vo roj karan or jyoti k paas aahi jati khelne jisse kabya ka gusaa din b din badhne laga or usne shivani ko hostel bhejne ka fesla le liya

Jane vale din shivani bahut royi bahut gidgidayi but kabya p koi asar na pada or usne shivani ko hostel bhej diya.

Karan or jyoti ka bhi kuch esa halat tha per wo bichare to kuch kisi ko bol bhi ni sakte the .

Flashback end.


Shivani ki dard bhari daastan or baate sun waha mojud sabhi k ankho m pani aagaye the ki itne time se bechari nanhi si jan bechari kese halato m h , kis tarah na chahate hue bhi apne bhai bahan jinse vo behad pyaar kerti h unse baat tak ni ker pa rahi .

Karan fat se shivani ko uthata h or uske ansuo ko puchte hue sine se laga leta or bolta h.

Karan(rote hue):-gudiya meri bachi tu itna kuch sahati rahi or yu akele hi dukh or Akelapan k andhere m ghutati rahi aakhir kyu choti kyu, kya tune soch bhi kese liya k tere bhaiya or didi tujhse nafrat kerne lagenge, ek baar apne bhaiya or didi ko bol kee to dekhti hum jarur kuch kerte , kya tujhe apne bhaiyu pe itna bharosa bhi ni tha,

Shivani :- please bhaiya esa mat boliye mujhe aap pe khud se bhi jyada bharosa h per m dar gayi thi bhaiyu ,
Or fir chote bacho jesa face bana ker bolti h.
Esa bol karan apni narajgi dikhata h .


Shivani:- kya aap apni princess ko maaf ni karoge bhaiyu.

Karan uske masum chahre ko dekh apni sari narajgi bhul jata h.

Karan:- tumhe ek shart pe hi mafi milegi.

Shivani:- bhaiya mujhe aapki har shart manjur h aap to bas boliye .

Karan :- meri shart ye h ki mujhe apni pyari princess wapas chahiye or usse ek pyari puppi(kiss) bhi.

Or itna bol wo apne gal aage ker deta h . Ye sun shivani khushi se jhum uthati h .Or karan ke pure chahare ko chum chum k gila ker deti h ,

Tabhi jyoti jo itni der se chup chap sab sun rahi thi or uski bhi ankho me bhi aansu the wo bol uthi.


Jyoti:- are ye kya bhaiya ko itni sari kisses or hug or apni didi jo itni der se yaha khadi h use to bhul hi gayi .jao m tumse baat ni kerti ,katti.
Or jhut mut ka gussa dikhati h.


Shivani ko bhi apni galti ka aahasas hota h or wo jyoti k samne jaker apne kaan pakad k bas itna hi bolti h.

Shivani:- sollly didu.

Usne ye itni pyare or massom tarike se bola ki jyoti bhi rah na payi or usko gale se laga ker uske chahre pe kisses ki jhadi laga di.

Or fir karan ne apni dono bahe fela di or jyoti or shivani dono hi dod k karan k ek sath gale lag gayi teeno ki aankho m aaj khushi k aansu the ki aaj wo fir se ek ho gaye.

Kuch der baad jab sab normal hue to rishiwer bole .

Rishiwer:- putra ab ratri bahut ho gayi h filhal tum vishram kero ,kal subah tum apne ghar ki or nikalna .

Karan bhi ye baat man leta h or

Tabhi shivani bolti h

Shivani :- bhaiya ye baba kon h or hum yaha kese pahunche.

Karan ne pahale hi ye sab soch liya tha.

Karan:- chutki us ladayi k baad hum sab behosh ho gaye the to inka aashram us jagah k paas hi tha to inki najar hum per pad gayi or ye hume idher le aaye.

Shivani fir rishiwer ko dhanyawad bolti h.

bhai bahan ek sath hi ek normal kaksh m so jate h.


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Note :- sorry for late update friends m abhi tour p hu 3 dino se or aaj to pure din bahar hi tha bas thodi der pahale ghar aaker ye jaldi jaldi m update diya to koi galti hui ho to please ignore kerna .

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Update no :- 30
Location :- patal lok

Kfd se usdin mukable k baad kaal bhanu kafi ghayal hua tha, lekin ab vo swasth tha, lekin ab usne soch liya tha kfd se bhidne k bajaye sidha rakshak per hi hamla ker dega or usko maar dega .


Tabhi vaha vp aata h or bolta h

Vp :- kya soch rahe ho mere bache .

Kaal bhanu unhe saari baat bata deta

Vp:- murkhta mat kero mere bache tum fir se vesi hi murkhta kerne jaa rahe ho ab uski shaktiya jagrit ho chuki h , bhudhi se kaam lo mere bache bhudhi se kaam lo.


Vp :- tumhe apni shaktiyo ko or bhadhana hoga putra tap k madhyam se . Tumhe fir ek baar tap kerna hoga jisse tum or shaktishali ho jao.

Kaal bhanu ko bhi yah baat sahi lagti h or vo bola

Kaal bhanu :- jo aagya pitaji.

Or wo tap pe jane ki teyariyo m lag jata h.

Chaliye chalte h wapas hero ki or .

Aaj subah karan or jyoti rishiwer k kahe anusaar hi aaj se unhone 4 baje uth ker dhayan lagana shuru ker diya.lekin unse ye ho ni paraha tha .

Tab rishi pippalad aate h or unki sahayata kerte hue bolte h.

Rishiwer :- beta sabse pahale apne man ko bilkul khali kero or apne ko bilkul shant kerke prayas kero . Or maha mantra ॐ ka man hi man jaap kero.

Karan or jyoti bhi unki baat maan bilkul vesa hi kerti h . Pahale din to kuch khas asar ni hota per unko aaj apne ander mojud shaktiyon ki anubhuti avashya hoti h.

Fir rishi pippalad unhe kuch or nirdesh diye. Fir jyoti ja ker shivani ko uthati h.shivani jyoti k galo p kiss ker k

Shivani:- good morning didu

Jyoti :- good morning my lil princess.

Phir karan ko bhi vo ese hi wish kerti h .

Rishiwer ne apni shaktiyo se ek baar fir sula diya shivani ko

Karan:- baba ye apne kya kiya or kyu kiya.

Rishi pippalad:- beta jaha tumhara kunal se yudh hua tha wo jagah aashram se bahut dur h , tumhe m waha apni shaktiyon se pahuchunga , isliye mane shivani ko , verna shivani ko ye sab abhi tum kese samjhate .

Karan :- ji baba .

Fir maharishi unhe wahi usi jagah chod dete h or kuch or nirdesh deker vaha se chale jate h.

Jyoti:- chale bhai choti maa abhi bhi tension m hogi na unhonne kuch khaya bhi ni hoga.

Kitna saaf man tha jyoti ka itna sab kuch hone k baad bhi aaj bhi unke dil m kabya k liye wohi samman or wahi pyaar tha.

Karan:- ha gudiya bas ek min .

Fir karan apni jeb se phone nikal ker Hm ko phone milata h.

Karan :- hello namaste uncle m karan bol raha hu , radha ka dost, aapse usdin college m mulakat hui thi na.

Hm:- are haa beta tumhe kese bhul sakta hu beta , tum jese nek or sache dil ka insaan aajkal milta kaha h.
Bolo beta kese yaad kiya koi problem h kya .

Karan :- ha uncle
Fir karan hm ko saari baat bata deta h jo kal hua tha, bas kunal k devil hone or apni powers wali baat chod.

Hm:- us commissioner ki ye majal ruko beta abhi usko dekhta hu.

Karan :- uski jarurat ni h uncle commissioner bhi mar gaya uske apne hi bete ne use maar diya mane chupke se dekha tha ki unki koi baat pe bahas hui thi or kunal ne unke sine m chaku ghop diya.

Hm:- beta itna sab kuch ho gaya tum mujhe ab bata rahe ho raat ko phone ker dete , tumhe apni jaan khatre m dalne ki kya jarurat thi kher chodo tum aaram se ghar jao beta m sab sambhal lunga.

Karan :- thank you uncle
bol phone rakh deta h or karan shivani ko car m letata h or jyoti ko drive kerne ka bol ker khud bike p chal padta h .

Raste m hi shivani ki bhi jind khul gayi per usne koi swal jwab na kiye
Ye rishiwer ka hi kamal tha.

Fir jese hi ghar p wo pahuchte h to shivani dod k apni mummy k gale lag k rone lagti h.

Kabya ki najar jese hi karan or jyoti p padhti h to wo gusse m unke paas ja ker karan ko thappad mar ke bolti h.

Kabya:- teri vjah se hi meri beti ki jaan ko aaj khatra aaya , manhus pahale apni maa ko kha gaye dono or ab beti ko .

Tabhi shivani jor se gusse se chilati h .

Shivani :- bas mummy bahut ho gaya aapka , aapki himmat kese hui mere bhaiya didi ko esa bolne ki ,

Karan:- thoda jor se :- chutki ye kya tamiz h bado se baat kerne ki .

Shivani:- bhai aap itna sab kese sah lete ho , m ab chup ni bethungi bahut sah liya , inko bhi to pata chale ki ye jise manhoos kah ke kos rahi h , aaj unhi ki vajah se unki beti yaha sahi salamat h .

Or wo kal ki saari ghatna suna deti h or wo gusse m apne room m chali jati h.

Karan (hath jod ker) :- choti ki taraf se m maafi mangta hu choti maa ,wo to bachi h , aap badi ho aap chahe to hume kuch bhi bol sakte ho kyunki aap bhi humari maa ho . Aap hume jaan se bhi maar dogi to koi shikwa na hoga aapse choti maa.bas shivani ko mat kuch kahiyega

Or nam aankho se

Karan :- or aapne shayad sahi hi kaha h hum h hi manhoos shayad hamare kaaran hi mummy

Bol ker rone lagta h jor jor se jyoti use kese n kese sambhal k apne room m le jati h . Ro to wo bhi rahi thi per usne apne bhai ko sambhalna pahale jyada jaruri samjha.

Kabya to ye sab sun ker but ban gayi thi , or kuch der baad uski aanko m aansu aajate h or wo bhag ke apne kamre m chali jati h or rone lagti h.

Aaj k liye itna hi.
Stay tuned.

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Update no :- 31
Karan or jyoti apne kamre m bethe roye jaa rahe the.aaj unke dil ko bahut thes pahunchi thi kabya ki baato se. Itni taklif unhe aajtak apne soteli maa ki kisi baat se ni hui thi , jitni aaj hui thi. Kyunki aaj baat unki maa p aagayi thi.

Sabse jyada kasht m to karan tha , usne is baat ko bahut dil p leliya tha or wo bas roye ja raha tha jyoti k sine m muh chupa ker.

Ab jyoti kuch sambhal chuki thi,lekin karan ki halat ko dekh ker wo bahut ghabra gayi thi , or uske ander se uska karan ki badi bahan or maa ka roop jag gaya.

Jyoti :- (man me) bhai ko ye kya ho gaya h , bas roye hi ja rahe h, kahi unko kuch ho na jaye ,ager esa hi chalta raha to bhai kisi gahare sadme m na chale jaye.


Ni ni m mere bhaiya ko kuch ni hone dungi , mujhe apne bhai ko kese bhi kerke is pida se mukt kerna hoga.

Fir jyoti karan ko jo uske gale laga hua tha , uske balo ka sahalate hue boli.

Jyoti:- bhai ab shant bhi ho jaiye , aap to jante hi h ke choti maa bahut pareshan thi shivani ko leker , isliye gusse m bol diya esa , ab unki bhi baato ka kya bura manna.

Lekin karan shant hone ka naam hi ni le raha tha or rote hue bola.

Karan:- ni jyoti unhone sahi hi bola shayad m hi mummy ki mot ka jimedar hu , m hi manhoos hu , mere kaaran hi tujhe itni taklif or dukh jelne pad rahe , or tune apni mummy ko khoya h, kash usdin mummy ki jagah m mar jata to

Usne itna hi bola tha ki ek jordaar thappad uske galo p pada , or vo thappad kisi or ne ni jyoti ne mara tha .aaj pahali baar jyoti me karan per hath uthaya tha.

Jyoti(chillate hue) :- bhai aaj to esa bol diya , ager aage se bola na to m aapse kabhi baat ni karungi

(Rote hue)Kisne kaha ki m kasht jhel rahi hu or dukhi hu , mere liye mera sabse bada sukh aapka yani k meri jaan mere bhai ka sath h , or iske alawa kuch chahiye bhi ni,

Lekin itna dukh mujhe choti ma ki bato se ni hua jitna apki is baat se hua h.
Ager aage se aapne esi baat ki to apni gudiya ka mara muh dekhoge .

Jyoti k muh se ye sab sun ke karan ka dil dahal jata h or use apne gale se laga ke bolta.

Karan :- ni ni gudiya plz tu esa mat bol apne is nadan bhai ko maaf ker de gudiya ,ager tujhe kuch ho gaya th to m bhi kese jiyunga , tu janti h na m kuch bhi bardasht ker sakta hu per teri ankho m aansu ki ek boond bhi ni dekh sakta.

Jyoti:- sisakte hue :- to esi baate kerte hi kyu ho bhai jisse aapki gudiya roye.

Karan:- m kitna bura bhai hu na jo itna pyaar kerne wali bahan ko hamesha rulata hu.

Jyoti:- ji ni khabardar esa bola to , mere bhaiya duniya k best bhaiya h ,

Or itna bol k karan k dono galo ko chumti h, tabhi uski najar karan k gal p padhti h jo, uske thappad se laal ho gaya tha

Jyoti:- (gal ko sahalate hue) sorry bhaiya mane apke upper hath uthaya.
Itna bolte bolte bolte uski ankhe nam ho gayi thi.

Karan uske ansuo ko pite hue bola

Karan:- are gudiya tu sorry mat bol tune bilkul sahi kiya , mane harkat hi esi ki thi thi , jo meri pyari gudiya ko rulaya.
Chahe to ek or thappad mar le per aage se marne ki baat mat kerna .


Jyoti:- e mister ye baat aap bhi ache dhayan rakhna werna agli baar aapki ache se pitayi hogi aapki


Karan (jhut muth ka darte hue) :- ni ni m pagal ni hu jo tujhse panga lunga meri dadi amma , sala ek hi thappad m apna pura jabda hila dala bhidu.

Ye baat karan ne bhaut hi funny way me apne gaal pe hath rakhte hue boli thi , jise sun jyoti khil khila k hasne lagi or karan bhi ,

Fir wo dono nashta kerke thodi der padhayi kerte h or fir thodi der k liye sone lag jaate h.

Dono bhai bahan ek dusre k liye khud ko uper uper se khush dikha rahe the ,per sach to ye tha ki un dono ko hi aaj apni maa ki kami mahasoos ho rahi thi . Jyoti to so bhi gayi thi

Per Karan ne ye baat jyoti k face se notice ker li thi , or wo jyoti ko khush kerne k liye kuch sochta h .


Tabhi uske chahate p ek muskan aajati h or wo sham ko jyoti ko ek chota sa surprise dene ki planning kerne lagta h.

Or kamre se jaker kisi ko phone ker ke kuch kaam bolta h.
Or wapas aaker jyoti ko gale lagake so jata h , per sone se pahale alarm laga deta h.

Kya surprise socha h karan ne jyoti k liye janne k liye sath bane rahiye .

Stay tuned

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