Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running

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Update no :- 31
Karan or jyoti apne kamre m bethe roye jaa rahe the.aaj unke dil ko bahut thes pahunchi thi kabya ki baato se. Itni taklif unhe aajtak apne soteli maa ki kisi baat se ni hui thi , jitni aaj hui thi. Kyunki aaj baat unki maa p aagayi thi.

Sabse jyada kasht m to karan tha , usne is baat ko bahut dil p leliya tha or wo bas roye ja raha tha jyoti k sine m muh chupa ker.

Ab jyoti kuch sambhal chuki thi,lekin karan ki halat ko dekh ker wo bahut ghabra gayi thi , or uske ander se uska karan ki badi bahan or maa ka roop jag gaya.

Jyoti :- (man me) bhai ko ye kya ho gaya h , bas roye hi ja rahe h, kahi unko kuch ho na jaye ,ager esa hi chalta raha to bhai kisi gahare sadme m na chale jaye.


Ni ni m mere bhaiya ko kuch ni hone dungi , mujhe apne bhai ko kese bhi kerke is pida se mukt kerna hoga.

Fir jyoti karan ko jo uske gale laga hua tha , uske balo ka sahalate hue boli.

Jyoti:- bhai ab shant bhi ho jaiye , aap to jante hi h ke choti maa bahut pareshan thi shivani ko leker , isliye gusse m bol diya esa , ab unki bhi baato ka kya bura manna.

Lekin karan shant hone ka naam hi ni le raha tha or rote hue bola.

Karan:- ni jyoti unhone sahi hi bola shayad m hi mummy ki mot ka jimedar hu , m hi manhoos hu , mere kaaran hi tujhe itni taklif or dukh jelne pad rahe , or tune apni mummy ko khoya h, kash usdin mummy ki jagah m mar jata to

Usne itna hi bola tha ki ek jordaar thappad uske galo p pada , or vo thappad kisi or ne ni jyoti ne mara tha .aaj pahali baar jyoti me karan per hath uthaya tha.

Jyoti(chillate hue) :- bhai aaj to esa bol diya , ager aage se bola na to m aapse kabhi baat ni karungi

(Rote hue)Kisne kaha ki m kasht jhel rahi hu or dukhi hu , mere liye mera sabse bada sukh aapka yani k meri jaan mere bhai ka sath h , or iske alawa kuch chahiye bhi ni,

Lekin itna dukh mujhe choti ma ki bato se ni hua jitna apki is baat se hua h.
Ager aage se aapne esi baat ki to apni gudiya ka mara muh dekhoge .

Jyoti k muh se ye sab sun ke karan ka dil dahal jata h or use apne gale se laga ke bolta.

Karan :- ni ni gudiya plz tu esa mat bol apne is nadan bhai ko maaf ker de gudiya ,ager tujhe kuch ho gaya th to m bhi kese jiyunga , tu janti h na m kuch bhi bardasht ker sakta hu per teri ankho m aansu ki ek boond bhi ni dekh sakta.

Jyoti:- sisakte hue :- to esi baate kerte hi kyu ho bhai jisse aapki gudiya roye.

Karan:- m kitna bura bhai hu na jo itna pyaar kerne wali bahan ko hamesha rulata hu.

Jyoti:- ji ni khabardar esa bola to , mere bhaiya duniya k best bhaiya h ,

Or itna bol k karan k dono galo ko chumti h, tabhi uski najar karan k gal p padhti h jo, uske thappad se laal ho gaya tha

Jyoti:- (gal ko sahalate hue) sorry bhaiya mane apke upper hath uthaya.
Itna bolte bolte bolte uski ankhe nam ho gayi thi.

Karan uske ansuo ko pite hue bola

Karan:- are gudiya tu sorry mat bol tune bilkul sahi kiya , mane harkat hi esi ki thi thi , jo meri pyari gudiya ko rulaya.
Chahe to ek or thappad mar le per aage se marne ki baat mat kerna .


Jyoti:- e mister ye baat aap bhi ache dhayan rakhna werna agli baar aapki ache se pitayi hogi aapki


Karan (jhut muth ka darte hue) :- ni ni m pagal ni hu jo tujhse panga lunga meri dadi amma , sala ek hi thappad m apna pura jabda hila dala bhidu.

Ye baat karan ne bhaut hi funny way me apne gaal pe hath rakhte hue boli thi , jise sun jyoti khil khila k hasne lagi or karan bhi ,

Fir wo dono nashta kerke thodi der padhayi kerte h or fir thodi der k liye sone lag jaate h.

Dono bhai bahan ek dusre k liye khud ko uper uper se khush dikha rahe the ,per sach to ye tha ki un dono ko hi aaj apni maa ki kami mahasoos ho rahi thi . Jyoti to so bhi gayi thi

Per Karan ne ye baat jyoti k face se notice ker li thi , or wo jyoti ko khush kerne k liye kuch sochta h .


Tabhi uske chahate p ek muskan aajati h or wo sham ko jyoti ko ek chota sa surprise dene ki planning kerne lagta h.

Or kamre se jaker kisi ko phone ker ke kuch kaam bolta h.
Or wapas aaker jyoti ko gale lagake so jata h , per sone se pahale alarm laga deta h.

Kya surprise socha h karan ne jyoti k liye janne k liye sath bane rahiye .

Stay tuned

awesome update dono ne ek dusre ko samjha liye how cutr they are...

karan jyoti ko kya suprises dega bantai dekhna banta hai...

 

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Update no :- 32
Jab tak karan or jyoti so rahe h tab tak aaiye dekhte h ki Hm ne karan ki call aane k baad kya kiya.



Hm ne apne sabse bharosemand aadmio ko bhejha un gundo or commissioner ki lasho ko thikane lagane k liye.



Or jab uske aadmi waha pahunchte h to jo dekhte h un gundo ki lasho ko to shock rah jate h.

Kyunki ek to un lasho ki jakar bahut hi buri thi , dusra ye ki jo sare gunde mare pade the wo koi mamuli gunde ni the , sare k sare bahut hi khatarnak or most wanted the.

Or thoda hi aage hi ek ladke ki lash padhi thi jo kisi or ki ni kunal ki thi jiske hath per or gardan tuti hui thi.

Akhir esa kesa hua aapko agle update m pata chalega.

Haha majak ker raha hu bhai log jyada Heran hone ki jarurat ni h dosto kunal to kab ka karan k prahar se bhasm ho gaya tha.

Short flashback.

Karan ne jab Hm ko phone kerke sari baat bata di thi or shivani ko car m leta ker jyoti ko aage chalne ko bol diya.

Wo khud bhi apni bike p nikalne ko hua ki tabhi uske man m ek baat aayi.

Karan :- are ye kya mane uncle ko bata to diya ki kunal mara gaya lekin jab wo kunal ki lash k bare m puchenge to m kya jwab dunga , kyunki uski lash ko to mane bhasm ker diya h.

Ye soch ker karan ko tension hone lagti h ki rishi pippalad dobara waha aate h.

Karan :- baba aap bilkul sahi samay per aaye ek duvidha h.

Rishiwer :- m janta hu putra tumhari duvidha kya h putra , lekin ye koi badi samsya ni h tum apni shaktiyo ka istemal kero putra samsya ka samadhan mil jayega.

Karan :- per kese baba mujhe to ye bhi gyaat ni h mere pas abhi kon kon si shaktiya h .

Rishiwer :- unka gyaat m tumhe karwata hu putra.

Itna bol rishiwer ne apna ek hath karan k sir p rakh diya or aankhe band kerke kuch mantra padhne lage or unke hath se nikal k ek roshni karan m samane lagi.

Fir rishiwer bole

Ab m rishi pippalad ko baba hi likhunga dosto.

Baba:- beta ab apni aankhe band kerke apni shaktiyo k bare m socho

Karan wesa hi kerta h or dhire dhire uske chahare p muskaan aajati h .

Fir karan apni aankhe khol k apna hath aage kerta h or uske hatho se ek roshni nikalti h or kuch hi second m waha padi kunal ki rakh wapas lash m badal jati h .

Baba:- adhbhut putra kya adbhut pratibha h tumme , tumhe to apni shaktiyo ka prayog kerne k liye mantra bolne ki bhi avashyakata ni h .

Karan :- ye sab to mere bhole nath ki kripa or aapke ashirwad ki badolat hi sambhav hua h baba .

Fir baba waha se chale jate h or sath m karan bhi waha se nikal padta h.

Flashback ends.

Hm k aadmi un gundo ki lash ko tikhane laga dete h or kunal or commissioner ki lash ko unke ghar pahuncha dete h ye bol ker ki in dono ko gundo ne kidnapped kerke mar dala , humne un gundo ko to mar diya encounter me per in dono ko ni bacha paye.

Or fir wo sab waha se nikal lete h , unka leader jo Hm ka khas dost bhi tha.wo pahunch jata h hm k pass uska naam ram tha.

New introduction

Ram:- age :-49 ye ek hm or radha k pita k kafi acha dost h , iske maa baap bachpan m hi mar gaye the ek bimari k chalte jo ki Hm k maa bap k ghar kaam kerte the. To hm k pita ne inke maa bap k marne k baad hi inhe pala bilkul apne dusre bete ki tarah or padhaya likhaya bhi , or ye aaj aarmy ke head h .





Ram :- yaar ek baat bata k insab ko kisne mara or tu us aadmi ko bachana kyu chahata h.

Hm:- bhai wo ladka jise m bacha raha hu wo bahut hi nek dil or bahut hi sanskari ladka h , yaha tak ki usne hamari radha beti ki jan or ijjat 2 baar bachai h.

Radha k pita, hm or ram 3no bahut hi khas hi dost the .




Ram:- kya radha beti ki ijjat ko bachaya kese.

Hm use sari baate bata deta h dono incidents ki.

Ram:- yaar tu to bilkul sahi bol raha h fir to ese bache ka hum kuch bi bura bhala kese hone de sakte h , per bhai kuch to khas h us ladke me.

Hm:- tujhe esa kyu lagta h.

Ram:- bhai is bache ne jise mara h uska nam sunega to tu bhi yahi bolega.

Hm :- tu yaar paheliya mat bhuja or saaf bata baat kya h.

Ram:- bhai us ne "biman khan" ko mar diya h

Hm:- (chok ker apni kursi se khada hote hue) kya !

Ram :- ha bhai.

Biman khan is shahar to kya pure state k sabse khatarnak criminals m se ek tha jisko har tarah ki fight magarath hasil thi or police bhi us per hath dalne se katrati thi. Usper deshdroh or kayi ladkiyo k rape ka case bhi chal raha tha.

Hm:- yaar fir to tu sahi bol raha h mujhe shighra hi usse milna hoga.

Location :-patal lok .

Kaal bhanu abhi tap jane hi wala tha ki use kuch yaad aata h or wo ruk jata h

Vp:- kya hua mere bache ruk kyu gaye ,

Kaal bhanu:- pitaji tap k liye to baad m bhi ja sakta hu ek mahatvapoorn kam mujhe yaad aaya jisko kerne se m abhi hi or shaktishali ho jaunga or koi devta mere tap ko bhang kerne ka dussahas kerne ka prayas bhi ni karega

Haha haha ha

Vp :- or wo kya karya h mere bache.

Kaal bhanu:- aap bas dekhte jaiye pitaji

Or itna bol vo gayab ho pahunch jata h talatal lok

Talatal lok ek esi jagah h jaha har koi ni aasakta kuch khas ko chod k devta bhi ni , yaha per keval raaj h to keval kuch atyant hi mayavi rakshas or bhut preto ka.
Or ye lok bahut hi bahayank h har taraf aag hi aag h, jese nark yahi ho,

Kaal bhanu ko dekh vaha sabhi rakshas or bhut pret waha jhuk jate h uske aage .

Or unka leader kaalnemi bolta h.

Kaal nemi :- mahamahim aap yaha .
Aagya kijiye prabhu daas k liye kya aadesh h .

Kaal bhanu :- kaalnemi tum apne sabhi sathiyo or praja ko leker yaha se nikal jao kuch dino k liye or dhayan rahe jab tak m na bolu koi bhi is lok m kadam bhi na rakh paye . Yaha se nikal ker tum sab mere wapas aane tak patal lok me nivas kero

Kaal nemi :- jo aagya mahamahim.

Kaal nemi is sab ka kaaran puchna to chahata tha per uski itni himmat ni thi ki wo kaal bhanu se swal jawab ker sake .

Fir kaal nemi sabko leker talatal se gayab ho jata h or kaal bhanu aage badh ker apne kaam me lag jata h.

Wahi kfd kalash me bethe ye sab dekh rahe the or muskura rahe the , or mata parvati unhe bhojan kerwa rahi thi apne hatho se

Mata paravarti :- kya hua putra achanak itna muskurane kyu lage


Kfd:- guru maa satya hi kaha gaya h ki 'vinash kaale viprit budhi'. Murkh kaal bhanu ye soch raha h ki vo jo kerne ja raha h usse usko ek shaktishali kavach milega , parantu ye ni janta k uski yahi harkat uske vinash k mukhya kaarno me se ek hogi.

Mata parvati:- ha putra tum baat to sahi ker rahe ho , lekin khud bhi ek galat harkat ker rahe ho .

Kfd:- kya guru maa ?

Kfd k gaal khichte hue maata boli k

Mata parvati:- kyu bhul gaye , kya sikhaya tha mane bhojan kerte samay humara dhayan keval bhojan pe hona chahiye, chalo baki bate chodo or chup chap bhojan kero

Itna bol mata parwati phir se kfd ko khilane lagti h ,or jab tak kfd ko dakar ni aati unko waha se hilna bhi ni deti

Aaj k liye bas itna hi friends

Stay tuned.

Note :- kya hua friends last wale update per bahut hi kam review aaye h kya hua dosto update pasand ni aaya to please bataiye

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yeh Ram ka character kisa hota yeh baad me maloom.hoga wese special unka naam aya hai toh bande me kuch khas hoga jarur...

 

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BAHUT HI KHOOBSOORAT LIKH RAHE HO BHAI.
HM AUR USKA DOST RAM DONO MIL KAR LAGTA HAI KARAN AUR JYOTI KO AUR TRAINING KARWA KAR SECRET SERVICE JOIN KARAYENGE JO DONO KE LIY ACHCHHI BAAT SABIT HOGI.
KAALBHANU SHAKTI PAANE GAYA HAI AUR YAHA KFD MATA PARVATI KE HATHON BHOJAN KA AANAND LE RAHE HAIN.
DEKHATE HAIN AAGE KYA HOTA HAI.

 

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Super UPDATE bhai

Ye to achha hua jo guru piplad ne Karan ko Saktiyo ka upyog Karna sikha diya ..
Powers ka achha istemaal janta hai hero..

Hm ne bhi achha Kiya jo sab kuch saaf krwa diya jungle se .. Achhe khase gundo ko mar dala hai Karan ne to..

Ye kaal bhanu talatal lok me Jake kya karne wala hai.. Sayad tapasya karega or taqatwar hone ke liye .. Ya fir kisi kavach ko pane ke liye .. jiske bare me kfd ne zikra Kiya..

Dekhte H.M or Ye army wala Karan se milke kya karta hai.. mujhe to wait hai ki radha ke ghar me kya hoga jab Karan or jyoti jayenge iske(radha) ghar..

Kfd ne kaha ki jo kaal bhanu kar raha hai wo hi uske vinash ka ek Karan hoga.. ab kavach kaise marne ka Karan banega..

Sorry to say this but story ke main villains bahot hi kamjor dikh rahe hai.. ek to kfd ka baar baar interfair Karna..villain ko ekdam kamjor bana raha hai.. Or ise ke Kaaran karan bhi mv ke samne bahot zyada taqatwar lag raha ..

Ab dekhte Karan ki sauteli maa ka kya reaction hota hai.. kya uske behavior me koi change ata hai ya nahi .. Or ab shivani to darne wali to hai nahi apni maa se chahe wo kuch bhi bole..

Good ..
Keep rocking bhai

 

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